Suraj hua madham Parud FF Last part-pt16

Posted: 2016-11-07T00:31:45Z





Suraj hua madham...The sun has dimmed...Part1 and Part2

It is based on the tamil movie Kalaba Kadhalan.This is my 1st Parud story.plz support me.

Part 1 Paro who is looking at the mirror is shy. 
                          Laila cums near her:didi,u luk very happy & pretty 
                          Paro smiles.
PARO:but I'm tensed.he's from a big city like 
                          mumbai.but I'm from a wil he like me? 
                          LAILA:no doubt.who cant like my didi? 
                          Paro smiles. 

                         Paro is sitting alone in her room:how wil b the guy luk 
                          I cums inside:di,the guy has cum 
                          Paro is excited:did u c him? 
                          LAILA:ya,he luks cute.cum di,maa is calling 

                          The guy is talking 2 Paro 's parents:can u plz call Paro? 

                         Laila brings Paro.he smiles at her. Paro luks at him & smiles. 
                          He:hi Paro 
                         Paro does'nt know what 2 say.Laila whispers:di,tell hi 
He:my name is Rudra. 
                          Paro smiles:my name...   
RUDRA:I know..Paro.why r u standing?sit 

                          Paro sits slowly.
 RUDRA:relax & sit.this is ur home.So be cool.
                         Paro sits properly. 
                          RUDRA:ur parents told everything abt u want 2 know
                          anything abt me?ask 
                          PARO:who is ur fav film actor? 
                          Laila thinks:Oh!didi did a big blunder by asking such silly 
                         Rudra  laughs:very nice question.usually no girl asks such a 
                          question wen a guy cums 2 see.u r very different 
                 fav actor is Amitab Bachan 
                          PARO:really?mine is also him.but my sister Laila prefers 
                          shahrukh.who is ur fav film actress? 
PARO:mine too 
                          RUDRA:so our tastes r same.well,Paro..i think filmi 
                          questions r enuf now.we'l talk sumthing else 
 RUDRA:what food u like? 
                          PARO:home made  
 RUDRA:even I prefer that.did u like 
                          Paro is nervous. RUDRA:tell straightly 
                          Paro luks at her parents. 
Her dad suryaban:tell beti 
                          Paro is shy & smiles:yes 
                         Laila is thrilled.   
Surya:did u like our daughter Rudra? 

Part 2:

Paro & Laila r tensed. Rudra smiles:yes,I 
                          liked Paro 
                          All r happy. 

                          Rudra is having lunch there.RUDRA:the lunch is gud 
                          Paro 's mom Gayatri:this is prepared by Paro 
                          RUDRA:really?very nice 
                          Paro smiles. 
                          Rudra is washing his hands after lunch.Laila goes near 
                          him:Hi Rudra,I'm ... 
                          RUDRA:Paro's dearest sister Laila 
                          LAILA:yes.actually I wanted 2 ask u sumthing 
LAILA:plz don't misunderstand'l b very 
                          nice if u giv the report of ur blood test 
                          RUDRA:but why? 
                          LAILA:bcoz...I mean...I'm not suspecting u.but since u had a 
                          bachelor's life in a big city like mumbai..even I've 
                          studied in mumbai.there was no problem with me.i know that all 
                          the Mumbai walas r not like that.but still..plz don't 
                          misunderstand me 
                          RUDRA:its ok.i understand.u care 4 ur sister very 
                          much.Paro is so lucky 2 hav a protective sister like 
                         Laila is relieved. 

                          2 days later.Laila is waiting at a lonely place.s 
                          cums there with the report:here is my report,open it & 
                         Laila opens it & read & smiles. 
                          RUDRA:now how do u feel? 
                          LAILA:I'm very happy that my sister is going 2 catch a nice 
                          man's hand.plz take care of my sister.She is very 
                          innocent & sweet 

                         Rudra  smiles:I promise 
Laila smiles.

Paro's mehendi becomes very dark.Laila teases her:Guess jeejaji is madly in love with you.
Paro blushes.
Rudra comes and holds her hands.Paro blushes.
P:Can you find your name in this?
He looks at it and fails to find his name in the mehendi design.She giggles:You failed.
He caresses her palm and looks at her:Though I could'nt find my name in your mehendi I can see my name in your heart.
She blushes.They share a sweet eye lock.


Paro and Laila dance together.

Pinga ga pori
Pinga ga pori
Pinga ga pori pinga
Maala pingyani malla
Bholavali raat
Ghalavali pori pinga
Ho Ooh Ooo..
Latpat latpat kamar daamini adhar ragini ho oo..
Hey latpat latpat kamar daamini adhar ragini
Nirdhar aayi kaise saji dhaji
Dekho mere pia ki sanwri jiya se banwri
Mere angna mein dekho aaj khila hai chand
Ke baje dhun jham jham jhamaak jha
To naache man cham cham chamak cha..(2x)

Inga ga pori, pinga ga pori
Pinga ga pori Pinga
Inga ga pori, pinga ga pori
Pinga ga pori Pinga- - BAJIRAO MASTANI

Gayatri ,Paro and Laila become emotional.
Gayatri sings for her: Chanda Meri Chanda Tujhe Kaise Mein Yeh Samjaoon
Mujhe Lagti Hai Tu Kitni Pyaari Re
Khusiyan Jitni Hai Sab Dhoondh Ke Laoon
Teri Doli Ke Sang Kar Do Sari Re 
Laila:Maa..didi..enough of sentiments.
She wiped their tears.Then they all dance.Rudra too joined them.
Maahi Ve Maahi Ve 
That's The Way Maahi Ve
Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke 
Tere Kanno Baali Chamke Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke
Tere Pairo Payal Chanke Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba
Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba
Amrit Ghole Rabba Rabba
Tu Soniye - KHNH
Rudra-Paro start swaying to music romantically.

Dhire-Dhire, Dhire-Dhire, Dhire Jalna

Zindagi Ki Lau Par Jalna

Kaanch Ka Sapna Gal Hi Na Jaaye

Soch-Samjh Ke Aanch Par Rakhna

Dhire Jalna, Dhire Jalna, Dhire Jalna... - Paheli.
Rudra:Paro..I will come during haldi function see you.
She becomes happy:I will wait.
He smiles.

Everybody puts Haldi on Paro.But Paro was missing Rudra badly.
She thinks:Why did'nt Rudra come yet?
Laila teases her:Are you expecting your fianc to come and put haldi on you?That's not going to happen.
P:But he had told me during sangeet that he will come.
L:He must have been joking.You fool believed it.
Paro is upset.Laila walks away. 
Suddenly Rudra appears.Paro is very happy and surprised:I thought you won't come.
R:How can I not come?I had promised you.
She smiles.He takes haldi from the pot.
R:I have the right to put haldi on you.
She blushes.He puts haldi on her skin passionately.She felt a magical sensation passing through her body.
Laila who comes there sees it.She finds it weird.She thinks:Why I envy my sister seeing her getting closer to Rudra?
Laila walks away.

R:Only some time more.Then will be together forever.
Paro blushes.
She waves her hand at him.He goes.

                          Rudra-Paro's wedding takes place.

                          1st nite...The room is covered with flowers.Paro is 
RUDRA:how is the decoration? 
                          PARO:very nice 
                          RUDRA:is'nt beautiful like u? 
                          Paro blushes.Rudra puts flower petals on her.She closes her eyes.He comes closer to her and starts pampering her sensitive skin with passionate love.She too responds with the same passion.

Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai (x2)
Toote toh toote teri baahon mein aise
Jaise shaakhon se patte be-haya
Bikhre tujhi se aur simte tujhi mein
Tu hi mera sab le gaya
Na fiqar, na sharam, na lihaaj, ek baar aaya
Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai
Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai

-Hate story2
Edited by jasminerahul - 2016-12-25T03:59:45Z
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Posted: 2016-11-07T01:08:23Z
Wowowowo kalaba kadahalan.. pne of my fav movie... arya omg his acting was just cool... 
Cmng to story... its awesoeme ... and in film... the siser.. wpnt have any feeling for arya at beginning... but you expressed her uneasiness in the very first part... 

Even though i liked that scene... as laila though protective abt her sister .. cannot help herself from falling for rudr... even though. its just attraction...

Rudr paro convo is soo cute... liked the pics u have used for all.. simply superb ...
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Posted: 2016-11-07T03:02:57Z
aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hain is from dayavaan movie in which Vinod khanna & Madhuri had acted. But you wrote hate story. Rudra paro scene was romantic & passionate. Laila told Paro that Rudra wont come but to paro's surprise, he came & put haldi on her body. y laila found it weird? Edited by katrinasalman - 2016-11-07T03:10:20Z
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Posted: 2016-11-07T03:08:37Z
Aaj phir is there in Hate story2 too.
watch this song-

Originally posted by katrinasalman

aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hain is from dayavaan movie in whick Vinod khanna 7 Madhuri had acted. But you wrote hate story. Rudra paro scene was romantic & passionate. Laila told Paro that Rudra wont come but to paro's surprise, he came & put haldi on her body. y laila found it weird?
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Posted: 2016-11-07T04:20:32Z
Nice start. This Rudra is more social and well behaved. Laila was nice in the beginning but then later started to have feelings for Rudra. Not good. 
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Posted: 2016-11-07T04:34:27Z
Extremely engaging,Jasmine. You have put in great effort and it shows. Loved the way you have sketched the characters.
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Posted: 2016-11-07T06:10:23Z
Love the startClap
Eager for the next partBig smile
Thank you for the pmBig smile
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Posted: 2016-11-07T08:32:57Z
I Loved Ur Story..
I like Kalaba kadhalan & Aray too..
I loved PaRud Sangeet & Mehandi&Haldi scenes..
Finally PaRud became together forever,..
Personally I love your story..
P.S. Slow down ur speed...
otherwise its amazing start..
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