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She wasbusy on her working desk,when a sound on her phone interrupted her.
A smile came to her face after seeing the reason of the sound
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Jindagi ke khel mein. Har mile ya jeet jarruri nhi.
Jarruri ye hai ki koshish ki thi ya nhi
Manjil mile ya na mile.
Jarruri ye hai ki safar pe chle the ya nhi.
Khushi mile ya na mile.
Jarruri ye hai ki kisi or ke gum mitaye the ya nhi
Ye koshish bhi ek jeet hi hai harne walo ko, bhot kuch sikha jati hai.
Raste bhi to khud ek manjil hai, safar mein hi aashiyane basa jati hai
Kha aata hai sbko, dusro ke liye jeena, jo jeete hai ase, unhe har haal mein mushkurana sikha deti hai,
Ha ye jindagi hme insan bna deti hai,
Ye jindagi.,@brave heart.
When she was totally zoned out, a voice from behind, again interrupted her,bt this time it came from a human.
To aa gya janab ka sandesh, said ali naina, s friend and colleague too.
Hmm replied naina,with a deep smile
Hme to samajh nhi aata naina ki aap pta kyu nhi kr leti, ki akhir hai ye kaun, akhir hm reporters hai, said ali with a little bit hint of proud.
Naina-Ha jaise ki,wo to mera hi intezar kr rha hoga,ki aiye aiye naina ji, ek reply to aaj tk diya nhi,or tujhe kya lgta hai maine koshish nhi ki, pr koi info mili hi nhi.
Ali-are to aap udass kyu ho rhi hai. Ho skta hai dekha hi na ho.
Naina-acha sb ke to dikh jate hai mere hi nhi dikhte na comments, or mana ek bar nhi dekha hoga bt ab tk 315 kr chuki hu to kya ek bhi nhi dekha hoga kya.
Ali-pr ho skta hai.
Naina-rehne de na ali, ab wo chahe mere comments dekhe na dekhe, reply kre na kre sach to yhi hai, ki wo jo bhi hai mujhe uski soch se bhot pyar hai.
Ali-aap bilkul pagal hai naina.
Naina in a naughty way-hu pr teri jitni nhi,jitna tu tha heer ke peeche, or aaj bhi hai.
Smiling on her Friend comments he said.
Ali-kya naina aap bhi,are heer se yad aya, hmne aaj unse milne ke liye kha tha to wo hmara wait kr rhi hongi.
Naina -aye haye date shate ha, kya din aa gye hai log bahar ja rhe or hme pucha tk nhi, ha bhai kabbab mein haddi kisko pasand hogi bhla.
Ali-are asi koi bat nhi hai aap chlengi to hme or heer dono ko acha lgega.
Naina-thnk u so much ali,pr tu to janta hai boss ne mujhe kitna kam de rkha hai, hm teeno phir kbhi sath chlenge aaj tm dono jao.
Ali-thik hai pr apka kam kb tk khtm ho jayega.
Naina-8 bje tk kyu???
Ali-nhi wo heer ne kha tha, main bad mein usey apke ghar drop kr du, to isliye.
Naina-ha tb tk to main pahoch jaungi,
Ali-phir main chlta hu.
Naina-ok, jldi free mt kriyo us, tufan ko wrna mera sir kha jayegi.
Pass a smile to her and left the office.
Naina to herself-dost bhi kamal hote hai, choti choti bato mein pareshaniya yu khtm kr dete hai,.
,at night naina place-
Aa gyi madam pta hai kbse wait kr rhi hu, said a angry heer to her friend,
,tu itni jldi kaise aa gyi maine to ali ko kha tha ki tujhe phasaye rkhe, mujhe kuch der or rahat mil jati na is aafat se said naina,
Acha to ab mein tere liye aafat bn gyi ha naina, said heer with fake tears
Naina--Bs kr nautanki,main to ye soch kr pareshan ho jati hu ki bechara hmara seedha sadha ali tujhe jhelega kaise.
Heer -uski fikr tu abhi mt kr. Abhi jo tufan aane wala hai to uski fikr kr.
Kya mtlb asked naina.
Mtlb ye ki,(bt before she completes her word,her mother came to the room.
Heer get silent, after naina mother come.
Naina mujhe tujhse bat krni thi said her mother in a serious tone.
Abhi nhi maa,said naina with a tired and a bored look on her face.
Ab nhi to kb naina,bta mujhe, haa kb, heer ko dekh uski to engagement bhi ho gyi, or jldi hi shadi bhi kr legi or ek tu hai ki,tu samjahti kyu nhi isey heer said her mother now in full anger mode.
Naina-Maa plz heer or ali,clg time se jante the ek dusre ko.
Naina, mother -ha or tujhse to wo bhi nhi hua ki, kisi ko pasand kre or apna maa papa ki tension km kre.
Naina,mother-main jan skti hu kyu nhi krna chahti tu shadi.
Naina door ki taraf dekhte hue kehti hai jaha uske papa ji khde hote hai,
Naina-kyuki main abhi kuch bnna chahti hu. Aage jana chahti hu
Naina,s mother-or kitna aage jana hai tujhe,dekh naina hmne tujhe kbhi force nhi kia. Tune padhayi krne ko kha hmne krne dia. Tujhe jo krna tha hmne krne dia, pr kya tu hmari ek bat nhi man skti.
Naina -man skti hu na maa pr apki ye bat meri puri jindagi se judi hue hai,ase kaise main kisise shadi kr lu
Naina,s mother-ha to hmne kb kha ki tu kisi se bhi shadi kr le. Tu jan le usko, or na pasand aaye to na kehde, ab tk 8 rishte aa chuke hai or tune kya kia. Kuch na kuch krke bhga dia un ldko ko is wajah se koi rishtedar, tere liye rishta lekar aane se bhi darta hai. Ye ek rishta bhot mushkil se aya hai or main chahti hu ki tu is bar, is rishte pr dhyan de,
Naina, -papa ji plz aap to kuch bolo.
Naina,s father -naina is bar main bhi tmhari maa se sehmat hu. Tm soch lo beta,ache se hm koi tmhe force thodi na kr rhe hai.
Itna kehkr dono chle jate hai,
Seeing her frnd condition heer said to naina
Naina problem kya hai akhir asked heer.
Naina----Problem ye hai heer ki mujhe nhi krni shadi abhi,koi samajhta kyu nhi, asa kyu hai ki ldki badi hue nhi or lg jate log uski shadi karane mein.
Or upar se rishtedar,hm agar mushkil mein ho to koi nhi aayega dekhne pr ha, majak udane ko or mushkile badhane ko, ye har jagah maujud kyu rehte hai,
Ye society asi kyu hai heer jha ldki agar 25 ki hue nhi ki shadi kra do,wrna,usey acha ldka nhi milega or ek ldka wo chahe 40 ka hi kyu na ho jaye ldki usey 20 ki mil skti hai.
,heer-naina dekh is society ka yha ke niyamo ka to main kuch nhi kr skti bs itna keh skti hu ki isme uncle aunty ki khushi hai to ek bar chance lekar dekh le or, jaise ki unhone kha agar na bat bne to tu ajad hai na kehne ke liye, or phir phir kbhi kbhi apno ki khusi, ke liye thoda adjust krna padta hai right.
A smile came to her face after listening her frnd little speech. And that speech remind her the same word of the, stranger, she follows and admire so much.
Naina-tu bilkul shi keh rhi hai,heer Mujhe nhi pta tha tu itna hoshiyar hai.
Heer-jani tmne hme abhi jana hi kha Hai.
Naina-janna bhi nhi hai madam itna kafi hai waise bhi samajhdari wali batein tujh pr suit nhi krti.
Heer -achaaa''huh. Chl phir main ja rhi hu.
Naina-are yar tu to naraj ho gyi.
Heer-naraj hoye meri jutti,tujhse naraj ho skti hu kya main,wo to maa ne kha tha ghar jldi aane ko or dekh kitna late ho gya.
Naina-acha, chl phir main tujhe drop kr deti hu.
Heer-Thik hai and she mArched toward the door. Bt naina stopped her in middle.
Naina-oye jate jate ek jhappi to diye ja janti hai na,aakar kitna mushkil kam krna hai.
Heer-oye yar rulayegi kya pgli,(and both hugged each other)or ha tu chinta na kri. Main or ali hai na tere sath ldka agar acha na hua to hm khud usey rasta dikha denge.
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Next day naina take a leave bcoz her mother said to stay back at home and made some,snacks for the guest.
Evening time -
Naina kya kr rhi hai tu sidhe baith na said a totally irritated heer.
Mujhe samajh nhi aa rha itni decoration ki jarrurat kya hai. Said naina to her frnd, who give a look like she's going to eat her any second
Heer-jarrurat kyu nhi hai,ab chahe tu us ldke ko reject kre ya na kre. Wo tujhe reject nhi krna chahiye,
Ase, chehre pe duniya bhar ki kalakari krke or khud ko circus ke joker jasie feel krke said naina indicating toward her face and attire.
Isey sajana sawarna kehte hai madam,jo ki sirf ldkio ko samajh aata hai, zoo ke janwaro ko nhi said heer throwing her harsh comment back at her.
Tera mtlb kya hai main ldki nhi hu asked naina with a annoyed face
Heer looked in all direction bt not at her.
She, s totally pissed of now,first bcoz of her mother instructions like ase chlna. Waise mushkurana. Najre mt uthana,or jyada batein mt krna and second her friend who completely tried to make her appearance like a clown
.Finally the guest arrived.
Oye naina aa gye guest.
Said a excited heer.
Naina-Tu to ase excited ho rhi jaise mujhe nhi tujhe dekhne aye ho.
Oye chup kr aunty ne bola na abhi jyada bat nhi krna bs haa mein sir hilana or ha na mein bhi ok, said heer with naughty smile.
Nainaaa chlo sb tmhe bula rhe heer bete leke aao isey said naina mother from the door.
Heer-Ji aunty
Hatho mein chai ki tray liye or face pe ek face muskaan liye naina heer ke sath wha aa jati hai.
Are yar yha to sirf do log hai, ldka kha hai asked heer slowly that only naina can hear her voice.
Mujhe kya pta, acha hi hai na nahi aya replied naina with same level of voice.
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Behan ji ye hai meri beti naina,said naina father with a proud look on his face.
Bhot pyari hai apki beti, aao beta hmare pass akar baitho said the lady.
Heer take the tray on her hand and put it on the table infront of them.
Naina get sitted near the lady.
Kya krti ho beta tm. Asked the man,.
Are ji aap bhi kya krte ho pehle hi pucne lge pehle bta to do ki hm hai kaun said the lady again
Hanji hanji,.,bhai sahab aap to hmare bare mein jante hi honge. Hm yha apne ek dost ke ghar usse milne aye the, unhi se suna ki apki ldki bdi pyari hai, to bs socha ki kyu na apne bete ke liye ye rishta mang le aapse. Said the man.
Ji waise to hmara beta bhi aata pr kuch kam se abhi usey bahar jana pada to jasie hi wo ayega na hm usey lekar ayenge said the lady.
Naina,s mother-Are behan ji to aapko kuch puchna ho to puch lijiye naina se.
Are nhi nhi hme apki ldki bhot pasand hai or hmare bete ko to bhot. Said the,
At this sentence of naina give a confused look to them.
Mere kehne ka mtlb tha bhot pasand ayegi akhir hmari pasand jo hai. Kyu ji, asked the lady to her husband.
Man-acha ji to hm ab chlte hai jldi hi phone krenge apko btane ke liye,
Ji shurkiya, hme bhi intezar rhega said naina father.
Heer kept on of his hand on naina shoulder and said. Maine to khamkha mein itni mehnat ki, jiske liye ki wo to aya hi nhi.
.after that day,almost one month passed bt not any phone call or not them come to their home.
Kya bat ho gyi,pura ek mahina ho gya or koi call nhi ayi,bhul to nhi gye na wo log said naina mother with a worried look on her face.
Are pr kha to tha ki call krengr maine pta lgaya tha. Harjeet se bola ki ache log hai. Phir ase krne ki kya wajah ho skti hai.
Papaji plz ab aap dono sochna bnd krengr, agar unhone krna hota to kr dia hota. Said an angry naina.
Naina,s father -Pr bete koi bat to hogi na tbhi to,
Naina -Bat to hai na ki unhe li pasand nhi hogi, aap dono ko itna bhi nhi samajh aata, or ab hm is bare mein or bat nhi krenge,
Naina,s mother-Tu chup kr naina maine tujhse kha tha ki unke samne kuch asa waisa mt krna,tune hi kuch bola hoga,
Naina-maine kya kia,apne jasie kha maine waise hi kia ab agar unka call nhi aya to isme bhi meri galti hai.
Nain,s father -shi keh rhi hai wo isme uski kya galti hai, hmhi the jo is rishtey ko lekar serious ho gye the, tmhari bato mein akar main bhi, lekin ab jb wl khegi tbhi uski shadi hogi. S
Nain,s mother-pr suniye to
Naina,s father -maine keh dia na ab is bat pe koi behas nhi hogi,
Unlogo ke call na krne se kisi ko koi fayda hua tha to wo naina thi us din ke bad se, uske papa ne shadi ki bat hi nhi ki,.
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Eight month passed and no change in my life,whi sb kuch,ek bina akl ka boss, ek jiddi maa, ek, stranger jo ki apna sa lgta hai. Do dost jo har wqt mere sath hote hai or or or,before she completes her sentence ali completed it on her behalf.
Or ek naya project said an happy ali from behind.
Not again, said naina with a sad look.
Ali-Are hm yha apko itni achi khuskhbri suna rhe or ap hai ki dukhi ho rhi hai.
Naina-wo isliye kyuki main janti hu na ki tu kaun si khushkhabri laya hoga,yha na ki hmare beakl boss ne ek naya project dia hai. Jo jarrur kisi politician ka interview lena ke hoga nhi to jyada se jyada kisi businessman ke ghar jakar, uski biwi ki lifestyle kaise hai wo log kaise rehte hai bla bla ye sb dekhne ka ha
Ali didn't replied just give her a amused look.
Kya ase kya dekh rha hai. Main shi bol rhi hu na asked naina.
Ali-Waise acha to nhi lgta,apni dost ko galat sabit krna. Pr naina aap is bar galat hai,
Kya mtlb asked naina
Mtlb ye ki na to is bar hme kisi politician ke chkkar katne hai na hi kisi businessman ki wife ke nkhre uthane hai, is bar jo case hai wo ye hai ki.
Ki, said naina with an impatient tone.
Ki hme ek. Martyr ke upar report taiyar krni hai. Said ali.
Naina-Whattt
Ali-ji ha lga n shock, or usse bhi badi bat ye hai ki ye report hme yaha nhi wha jakar taiyar krni hogi.
Naina-ek minute ek minute main kuch samjhi nhi, tu shuruwat se bta, martyr report,.
Ali-yha nhi chliye cafe chlte hai whi discuss krlenge. Afterall hm dono partner jo hai.
Naina replied with a grin-yes partner in every crime
At cafe--------##
Naina-Ha to ab bta or sb detail mein, ek ek detail chahiye mujhe
Ali-batata hu btata hu,to bat ye hai ki, koi captain hai army mein, captain Shekhawat,
Naina-ha to
Ali-to wo, kuch mahine pehle. Hyderabad mein jo blast hua tha yad hai,
Naina-ofcorse yad hai kya kam kia tha hmari army ne, wrna to na jane kitne logo ki jan chli jati.
Ali-ha to usi blast mein. Logo ko bachate samay, kuch army officers ki jan chli gyi thi.
Naina-to hme us par report bnani hai.
Ali-are aap hmari puri bat to suniye pehle.
Naina-acha ab tu bol
Ali-to usi blast mein, ye i mean captain Shekhawat bhi mare gye the, pr
Naina-pr kya.
Ali-pr desh ke liye jan gawane ke bad bhi unhe koi samman nhi mila, government ne unki body bhej di unke ghar bs.
Naina-to unki family ye chahti hai ki hm ye report bnakr apne channel pr dikhaye right.
Ali-ha pr ye unki family nhi chahti.
Naina-mtlb
Ali-mtlb, captain ko koi dost hai usine sir ko letter likha tha yhi nhi us letter mein mein sare Ambala walo ke signatures bhi shamil the.
Naina-or unki family.
Ali-unka to pta nhi, isliye to sir chhahte hai ki hm wha jaye. Or sb kuch pta lgaye.
Naina-kamal hai, unki family ne kuch bhi nhi kia or yha pura ambala unke liye insaf chahta hai,kamal ke hoga ye insan. Acha mujhe uski photo to dikha.
Ali-yha ek problem ye bhi hai ki hmare pass unki photo bhi nhi hai,maine pura Google check kia bt ek bhi picture nhi thi jo thi wo clear nhi thi yha tk ki sare records bhi nahi hai.
Naina-pr asa kyu. Ek soldier jo shaheed hua uske records kyu hateyenge, khi ye captain Shekhawat koi galat insan to nhi tha.
Ali-ye to pta nhi. Iske liye hme ambala jana hoga.
Naina-good to phir der kis bat ki hai kb jana hai.
Ali-kl hi.
Naina-thik hai to phir main, ghar pe bta dungi aaj hi, or phir kl nikal jate hai.
Naina apne ghar pr bta deti hai or jane ki permission bhi le leti hai.
Naina or ali dono bus station pahochte hai heer bhi unhe see of krne aati hai.
Mujhe asa lg rha hai jaise kuch change hone wala hai, said heer in totally dramatic way.
Naina---Lo phir shuru ho gyi ye. Ab kya lg rha hai tujhe.
Sun na naina, mujhe asa lg rha ki wha na tujhe wo milne wala hai said heer.
Ali with a confused look -wo wo kaun.
Are whi said heer.
Naina-Kaun whi dekh tu sidhe sidhe bta rhi hai ki tujhe ulta latka du
Are whi yar tera prince charming, and started laughing like a maniac.
Ali and naina both, give a look to each other.
Where as naina look define the statement to ali, I told u beta musibat hai ye.
While ali,s look define the statement, janta hu " pr ab kya ho skta hai.
And now time to bid bye to my love and my lovely frnd or tm dono isharo mein batein krna bnd kro or chlo jldi se jadu wali jhappi do mujhe said heer looking at both
Trio,s hugged each other
, and two of them start their journey to ambala.
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Pyar hai to ikrar bhi hoga.
Pr ikrar se pehle intezar bhi hoga.
Intezar hai to etbar bhi hoga.
Aur agar etbar hai to yakeen rkho, MOHABBAT se shama gulzar bhi hoga.
She was constantly looking these sentence of her,mr stranger when ali asked her.
Kya bat hai naina itne dhyan se kya dekh rhi hai aap
Naina-dekh nhi rhi hu soch rhi hu
Ali-kya soch rhi
Naina-yhi ki, kb ayenge. mr. brave heart dekh na, kitna time ho gya,.
Ali-aa jayenge naina aap pareshan na ho wo bhi kha aap ke bina reh skte hai.
Naina-uda le tu bhi mera majak uda le ek teri wo heer km thi kya.
Ali-ab hm kya kre naina aap bhi,kha ek ajnabee ke peeche padi hai usey to ye khabar bhi nhi hogi ki koi yha uske na aane se pareshan hai..
With some teasing talking and all they reach to their destination.
And after that captain frnd house.
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Aiye aiye main aplog ka hi wait kr rha tha, said a man to naina and ali.
Ji aap, asked ali.
Main abhimanyu,maine hi wo letter likha tha.
Naina-ohhh to aap hai, well thnk u mr. abhimanyu,ek ache kam ke liye.
Abhimanyu-thnk u. Kaisa... wo hmara dost tha apne dost ke sath nainsafi kaise hone de skte hai.
Ali-bhot acha lga ye jan kr, ki aaj kl bhi ase log hai duniya mein jo dosto ki rishto ki itni fikr krte hai
Abhimanyu-aap keh skte hai pr yha jis insan ki bat hm kr rhe hai wo tha hi asa ki, jo bhi usse jud jaye kbhi bhul hi nhi skta tha.
Jii??? said naina,
Haha aap nhi samjhengi i mean aap janti nhi thi na usey,aiye mere sath main apko dikhata hu ki kyu, yha ke log or main uski itni fikr krte hai.
Abhimanyu unhe,ambala ke har, ghar mein le jata hai
Namastey, kaki ji said abhimanyu
Are abhimanyu beta tm yha,hmne jo bhijwaya tha wo letter pahocha ki nhi,,
Ji ha pahoch gya, wha se hi ye log aye hai to socha aap logo se milwa du said abhimanyu.
Bhot axha kia beta,(to naina and ali)hmara veer bhot acha bacha tha, pta nhi kyu. Uske sath asa kia sbne,wo to kbhi kisi ka bura nhi krta pr dekho sbke liye acha sochne wala hmara baccha aaj jaise khi kho gya hai,
,acha kaki main inhe, sbse milwa kr aata hu. Said abhimanyu.
,is tarah abhimanyu unhe bhot se logo se milwata hai har koi veer ki achai hi batata hai.
Or kuch janna hai apko. Asked abhimanyu.
Ali-nhi
Naina-ha.
Ali-pr naina itna kafi hoga mera mtlb.
Naina replied instantly to him-nhi hoga kafi,nhi hoga ali,(to abhimanyu) ha to abhimanyu,maine sbse sun liya. Pr ab main apse kuch sunna chaungi, u know dost the wo apke to apse better kaun janta hoga unhe.
Abhimanyu-phir to apko ye bat jankr bhot hairani hogi ki veer ke dost hone ka dawa krne wala ye insan kbhi uska sbse bada dushman hua krta tha.
'naina-Jii???
Abhimanyu-ji haa,yhi sach hai main or wo hmesha se dost nhi the, or iski wajah thi meri usse jalan,sb pyar krte the usse, yha tk ki mere maa baba bhi, ek baccha tha main sbkuch to chlta pr apne maa baba ka pyar batne kaise dete, bachpan ki ye jalan na jane kb dushmani mein badal gyi. Main hmesha usey harane ki koshish krta, or wo har bhi jata, main sochta tha ki main, usse jyada kabil hu,pr logo ne sach dekhe jo maine nhi dekha,apne isi ahem mein ki main ek kabil insan hu, maine ek fight mein hissa liya tha jha, pr ladai mein meri maut bhi ho skti thi,or ho jati agar us din veer ne meri jan nhi bachayi hoti to us din mujhe pta chla ki, qabil wo nhi jo jeet jaye, qabil wo hai jo harne ke bhi taqat rkhte ho. Wo taqat mujhme nhi thi wo veer mein thi,us din ke bad maine apne apko sudhar, or har kadam pr usne mera sath dia,sbne mera sath chhor dia, pr usne kbhi nhi or uski hi wajah se log shayad mujhse bhi pyar krte hai. Ab aap btaiye kya aise insan ke sath galat hona chahhiye jisne sari jindagi lga di dusro ke liye jine mein kya uske marne ke bad usey samman na milna ye galat nhi hai.
Naina and ali both have tears in their eyes.
Apne shi kaha, hm apko yakeen dilate hai, ek asi report btayenge ki government majbur ho jayegi unhe unka haq dene mein, pr sawal ye hai ki unki family ne kuch kyu nhi kia.
Abhimanyu -kyuki veer hmesha kehta tha ki kya fark padta hai uniform ho na ho,kya fark padta hai saheed koi khe na khe,main or mera zameer jante hai ki main ek sipahi hu or apni akhri sans tk ek sipahi rhunga.
,ye bat to shayad abhimanyu ne boli thi pr shabd to rajveer ke the or uske shabd naina ke dil mein kuch is tarah ghar kr gye ki wo khud hi nhi samajh payi,
Naina with a smile-itni achi soch wale insan se kash main ek bar mil pati pr koi bat nhi kya mujhe unki ek tasveer mil skti hai.
Abhimanyu-tasveer???
Ali-ha photo hme uski jarrurat padegi na,
Abhimanyu -pr mere pass to veer ki koi tasveer nhi hai.
Naina-kisi ke pass to hogi.
Abhimanyu-ha hogi na, uski family ke pass,,
Naina-or unki family kha milegi.
Abhimanyu -wo to yha nhi hai.
Ali-pr photo to jarruri hai asa kaise ho skta hai ki kisi ke pass na ho aap pta kijiye.
Abhimanyu-ek minute yad aya, pichli bar jb veer wapas aaya tha tb,usi samay yha, pe school ke innogration tha,tb wha photo,s bhi liye gye the hmd wha jarrur mil jayengi.
Naina-that,s good., to plz aap jldi se jldi unki photo, nikalwaiye.
Abhimanyu-main bs abhi jata hu tb tk aap dono thoda rest kr lijiyr.
Abhimanyu called ramdeen, a worker on his house.
Ji sahab said ramdeen
Abhimany-main jara bahar ja rha hu,(pointing to ali and naina)ye hmare khas mehman hai inke rehne ka intezam kro and he left after saying this to his worker.
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Waise aap photo ke liye itni, excited hue ja rhi thi masla kya hai. Said ali.
Naina -Hmmm bs dekhna chahti thi jo insan itna acha tha, jisse sb itna pyar krte hai dikhta kaisa hoga wo,
Ali-naina aap thik to hai na.
Naina-mujhe kya hoga ali.
Ali-whi to problem hai ki hmari dost ko kuch bhi ho jata hai.
Aliii said naina
Ali-Acha acha thik hai chle thoda rest kr le jb se aya hua chl chl kr thk gya hu,
After sometime,
Ye abhimanyu, ji kha reh gye abhi tk nhi aye asked ali to ramdeen.
Before ramdeen replied, a exhausted abhimanyu bt with a smile on his face enter to the house.
Maff kijiyega hme aane mein thodi der ho gyi, darasal, photo ki album yha thi nhi to hme usey lane ke liye kisi ko bhjena pada.
Naina-photo mili,
First abhimanyu looked at her and then noded and passed the photo.
When naina finally saw the pic of captain,get freezed for sometime bt then regain her senses.
Ali feels the difference in her facial expressions
Ali -kya hua naina.
Naina, -kuch nhi ali.
Ali-pakka.
Naina-ha bs thoda thk gyi hu na, jakar rest kr leti hu,.
Naina left the place with the photo on her hand, leaving a exhausted Abhimanyu and a shocked ali behind.
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Bhaiya kya kr rhe hai thoda aaram se chlaiye na, uff ye taxi wale bhi, isliye maine tujhse kha tha ki hm teri car se aate hai said heer in a complaining tone to her friend,who is busy looking on her phone.
Tu sun bhi rhi hai main kyu keh rhi hu said heer again.
Sun rhi hu, said naina in a Plain tone.
Heer-Ha wo to mujhe dikh hi rha hai jb se hm wha se nikle hai nhi nhi, jb se hm wha gye the tb se hi tere muh ltka hua tha.
Naina-asa kuch nhi hai heer main bs thoda thk gyi hu
Heer-acha phir to tu jakar so liyo pehle.
Hmmm said a totally tired naina.
Are naina wo dekh, na ye log itni rat ko yha kya kr rhe hai. Said heer pointing outside the taxi glass,window.
Kya hua ab asked naina.
Are wo dekh naina ye ldke sb kya kr rhe hai lgta hai party kr rhe hai road wali party Hehe said heer with amusement
Tujhe kya hai ki wo log kya kr rhe hai or waise bhi ase logo ko nhi dekhna chahiye,acha hoga hm jldj se yha se nikale said naina.
Itna kha hi tha naina ne ki taxi thoda aage jakar ruk gyi.
Kya hua bhaiya taxi kyu rok di apne asked naina to the taxi driver.
Are madam ji lgta hai taxi khrab ho gyi replied driver.
Lo ji ho gya siyappa bs yhi bacha tha said heer in a dramatic way.
Naina-Bhaiya aap jara dekhiye.
Driver checked the taxi and said lo ji madam ji ye to sach mein siyappa ho gya, taxi to khrab pad gyi.
Patting on her forehead slightly heer said- haye abba ab kya hoga, ek to sunsan sadak upar se andheri raat upar se do do khibsurat ldkiya, baba ji kya kiya apne
Naina, to heer -tu thoda chup kregi agar kuch na bhi hona to bhi teri bak bak sun ke ho jayega.
Naina to taxi driver-kuch ho nhi skta bhaiya.
Taxi driver-hanji yha se thodi hi dur pr, garage hai main wha jake mechanic le aata hu, tb tk aplog yhi wait kr lijiyega.
Akeleee said heer again in her dramatic way bt, naina stopped her.
Naina-Thik hai aap jaiye, hm wait krenge lekin ye aap apne pasie le jaiye ho sktahai hmara koi, aa jaye to hm chle jayenge
Thik hai madam ji, main jldi aane ki koshish krunga. Itna kehkar wo chla jata hai.
Or naina heer ko ali ko call krke ane ko kehti hai or ali kuch time mein wha aane ko kehta hai
Naina and heer both silently stand on the road bt when heer can't bear the silence so she said excitedly.
Heer-waise shadi achi thi na naina.
Naina-khak achi thi,mujhe to samajh nhi aata sir ne ye news channel kyu khol rkha hai,
Heer-kya keh rhi hai tu
Naina-to or kya kahu acha khasa news channel hai,chahe to hm no.1 pr ho skte hai bt nhi hmare boss ko,faltu kk news itni achi lgti hai ko pucho mt, bhgwan ne pasie to de diye akl dena bhul gye. Mujhe to ye samajh nhi aata, ki boss ko boss bnaya kisne ek minute, unhe pehle degree hi kisne di, mera bs chle to sb pr case kr du news ka majak bna dala hai, naina aaj inki shadi hai jao telecast kro. Aaj inka birthday hai jao telecast kro, birthday shadi my foot, said naina all in one breath.
Heer-breath naina breath,take a deep breath. soch tere boss ne sun liya to
,boss ne suna ya nhi pr koi tha wha jisne unki batein sun li.
Tere chakkar mein dekh shayad un ldko ka dhyan, hm par aa gya said heer.
Naina-Ha to tujhe puchna hi nhi chahiye tha
Heer-Haye rabba kitna handsome ldka hai
Naina -acha ali ko bata du ki tera dil kisi or pe aa gya hai
Heer-are yar main to bs dekh rhi thi ek minute. Agar main galat nhi hu to wo three no. pe jo handsome wala ldka hai wo hmari taraf dekh rha hai.
Naina-ha to tu udhar mt dekh.
Heer-or agar main galat nhi hu to wo hme dekh kr smile bhi kr rha hai.
Naina-kha na maine mt dekh.
Heer-or agar main galat nhihu to nainaaa wo hmari hi taraf aa rha hai.
Naina-maine kha na tujhse ignore kr tujhe samajh nhi aa rha.
Heer-or agar main galt nhi hu to, to to wo.
Naina-wo wo kya.
Peeche khda hai right came a voice from behind.
Heer with largely opened eyes noded her head in yes.
At that moment naina turned and then (no not eyelock here the scene is different) give him an angry look.
Apki tarrif, asked naina.
,meri koi tarrif to nhi Hai. Ha pr aap chahe to krde, i don't mind said the boy.
Waise tarrif ke liye to Puri jindagi padi hai, said the boy looking at naina pr abhi mujhe lgta hai ki apko kuch help ki jarrurat hai.
Hmne apse mangi, apki so called help said naina in a rude manner.
Ignoring her harsh words. He said again- apki taxi bnd pad gyi hai, aap chahe to main apko drop kr du.
Heer -thnx
Naina-no thnx.
Naina pushed, heer aside and said -dimag khrab ho gya hai tera.
Heer-mera nhi tera. Dekh kitna handsome ldka hai or kitni achi batein krta hai,kya problem hai le lete hai na lift.
Naina-tujhe kuch nhi pta, ye ldke ase hi hote hai pehle mithi mithi batein krenge or phir.
Heer-are pr
Before she completes her sentence man said
Apki frnd bilkul shi keh rhi hai,
Both girl looked at him.
Ase kya dekh rhi hai sach keh rha hu apki frnd bilkul shi keh rhi, achi skl or mithi bato pr kbhi nhi jana chahiye, i respect ur thoughts miss naina and u should have to be carefull miss heer.
His words, left naina speechless for sometime and heer awkwardly said.
Heer-hehe next time se no achi shk only naina wali akl thnk u.
Waise main drop nhi kr skta atleast yha, khda reh skta hu,jb tk koi nhi aa jata. M sure u ok with it.
Naina noded, in yes and they remain in the same silent for sometime when, ali came and pick them and said some thnkfull words to him.
Wha se ase kyu aa gyi nainasaid ali breaking her chain of memories.
Naina didn't said something just passed him the photo.
Ali also give the same reaction, after seeing the pic.
Hme yakeen nhi hota naina,sb kehte hai duniya choti hoti hai log milte hai pr ase ye kbhi na socha tha said ali with a shocking tone in her voice.
Maine bhi nhi socha tha, hm jante to nhi the unhe pr aaj lgta hai kash thoda or jan liya hota us din, ali meri wish puri hue thi, us insan se mili bhi thi main or maine usey kya kya nhi suna dia tha.
Ali-or apki un bato pr unhe proud tha.
A weak smile came to her face-ab main smjhi ki kyu tha. Ali hme unki family se milna chahiye tujhe kya lgta hai.
Ali-hme bhi yhi lgta hai akhir bete to wo unke hi hai unka haq hai ki wo is bat ko jane "
Next day, ali or naina dono abhimanyu se rajveer ki family se milne ko bat krte hai wo unhe unka address de deta hai. Jo ki delhi ka hota hai, address milte hi bina time waste kiye dono delhi ke liye nikal jate hai.
,dono abhimanyu ke btaye address pr jate hai or bell bjate hai door open hota hai,or ek ldka, unki hi age ka door kholta hai bt wo pta nhi kyu naina ko dekh kr shocked ho jata hai.
Naina-(awkwardly after seeing his reaction,) waved her hand
Naina-hiii,mera nam,
Kaun aya hai beta, came a voice from the house,. and a lady at her, mid 50 came there.
Ab time tha naina ke shock hone ka.
Aap. Said naina with a totally shock look.
Naina bete, said the lady with a happy bt shocked face.
Are tune usey bahar kyu khda kr rkha hai, ander aane de, said the lady to the young boy.
Lady-Maff krna beta ye thoda pagal hai yudi kya kr rha hai ander aane de unko
Ali or naina dono ander aate hai. Jaha naina shocked thi unhe dekhkr ali shocked tha ye dekhkar ki naina unhe janti thi or wo ldka wo kyu shocked tha wo to koi nhi samajh rha tha.
Aap captain Shekhawat ki maa hai, asked naina, immediately not wanting to waste her time while she, was dieing to know the truth behind all these connection,.
Haa. Main uski maa haa or, ye uska bhai, yudi...(pointing toward the boy)
Tm janti ho mere veer ko. Now rajveer mom turn to asked questions.
Naina-Jyada to nhi ek bar mili thi unse, pr bat yha wo nhi hai, apke shehar ke logo ne captain ke, liye letter bheja tha wo chahte haii ki unko samman mile.
Rajveer mom-janti hu sb bhot pyar krte hai. Or yhi chahte hai
Naina -aap nhi chahti.
Slightly laughing on her questions rajveer mom said -agar tm ambala se hokar ayi ho to tmhe is sawal ka jawab pta hoga, kyu??
Naina noded in yes.
Rajveer mom-mujhe pta hai tmhare sath galat kia maine pr ab tm samajh skti ho ki kya reason thA mere call na krne ka
Naina noded-mujhe apse kbhi koi shikayat nhi thi.
Rajveer mom-tmne kha na ek bar mili thi usse. Tm shayd us ek mulakat ko bhul gyi ho beta,pr mera raj nhi bhul paya. Us din ke bad., hmesha tmhare bare mein sochte rehta tha,pehli najar mein dil de baitha tha tmhe shayad usne kbhi hmse koi bat nhi chupayi, or ye to phir hmare bacche ke dil ki bat thi chup kaise jati to bs hme pta chl gya phir kya.
Hm bhi usey bina btaye tmhare ghar pahoch gye, sb kuch acha tha rajveer wapas aata or hm, tm dono ke riste ki bat kr lete, mere bete ki khushi, usey dete pr us hadse ne sb chinn liya.
So much truth. So much shocked bt finally day is going to end for naina,
,bhot kuch hota bhot kuch na ho paya,.
,naina or ali raj ke ghar hi ruk jate hai, is beech bhot kuch janne ko milta hai naina ko rajveer ke bare mein, or wo sb kuch ase sun rhi thi mano, isse acha or koi waqt nhi isse achi or koi kahani nhi. Sb bato se anjann naina ko ali, yu hi dekhe ja rha tha shayad wo kuch samajh rha tha.
Night at raj place-
Naina ko kuch documents send kren hote hai pr uska laptop bnd pad jata hai to wo yudi se puchne jati hai,bt yudi wha nhi hota. Khi bahar gya hota hai, raj ki mom usey room mein jakar usey krne ko kehti hai naina yudi ke room mein jati hai, or documents send kr deti hai bt jb wo usey close krne lgti hai,to galti se ek foldier khul jata hai, wo foldier padhn
A smile came to her face after seeing the reason of the sound
Notification-@braveheart updated his blog.,
Jindagi ke khel mein. Har mile ya jeet jarruri nhi.
Jarruri ye hai ki koshish ki thi ya nhi
Manjil mile ya na mile.
Jarruri ye hai ki safar pe chle the ya nhi.
Khushi mile ya na mile.
Jarruri ye hai ki kisi or ke gum mitaye the ya nhi
Ye koshish bhi ek jeet hi hai harne walo ko, bhot kuch sikha jati hai.
Raste bhi to khud ek manjil hai, safar mein hi aashiyane basa jati hai
Kha aata hai sbko, dusro ke liye jeena, jo jeete hai ase, unhe har haal mein mushkurana sikha deti hai,
Ha ye jindagi hme insan bna deti hai,
Ye jindagi.,@brave heart.
When she was totally zoned out, a voice from behind, again interrupted her,bt this time it came from a human.
To aa gya janab ka sandesh, said ali naina, s friend and colleague too.
Hmm replied naina,with a deep smile
Hme to samajh nhi aata naina ki aap pta kyu nhi kr leti, ki akhir hai ye kaun, akhir hm reporters hai, said ali with a little bit hint of proud.
Naina-Ha jaise ki,wo to mera hi intezar kr rha hoga,ki aiye aiye naina ji, ek reply to aaj tk diya nhi,or tujhe kya lgta hai maine koshish nhi ki, pr koi info mili hi nhi.
Ali-are to aap udass kyu ho rhi hai. Ho skta hai dekha hi na ho.
Naina-acha sb ke to dikh jate hai mere hi nhi dikhte na comments, or mana ek bar nhi dekha hoga bt ab tk 315 kr chuki hu to kya ek bhi nhi dekha hoga kya.
Ali-pr ho skta hai.
Naina-rehne de na ali, ab wo chahe mere comments dekhe na dekhe, reply kre na kre sach to yhi hai, ki wo jo bhi hai mujhe uski soch se bhot pyar hai.
Ali-aap bilkul pagal hai naina.
Naina in a naughty way-hu pr teri jitni nhi,jitna tu tha heer ke peeche, or aaj bhi hai.
Smiling on her Friend comments he said.
Ali-kya naina aap bhi,are heer se yad aya, hmne aaj unse milne ke liye kha tha to wo hmara wait kr rhi hongi.
Naina -aye haye date shate ha, kya din aa gye hai log bahar ja rhe or hme pucha tk nhi, ha bhai kabbab mein haddi kisko pasand hogi bhla.
Ali-are asi koi bat nhi hai aap chlengi to hme or heer dono ko acha lgega.
Naina-thnk u so much ali,pr tu to janta hai boss ne mujhe kitna kam de rkha hai, hm teeno phir kbhi sath chlenge aaj tm dono jao.
Ali-thik hai pr apka kam kb tk khtm ho jayega.
Naina-8 bje tk kyu???
Ali-nhi wo heer ne kha tha, main bad mein usey apke ghar drop kr du, to isliye.
Naina-ha tb tk to main pahoch jaungi,
Ali-phir main chlta hu.
Naina-ok, jldi free mt kriyo us, tufan ko wrna mera sir kha jayegi.
Pass a smile to her and left the office.
Naina to herself-dost bhi kamal hote hai, choti choti bato mein pareshaniya yu khtm kr dete hai,.
,at night naina place-
Aa gyi madam pta hai kbse wait kr rhi hu, said a angry heer to her friend,
,tu itni jldi kaise aa gyi maine to ali ko kha tha ki tujhe phasaye rkhe, mujhe kuch der or rahat mil jati na is aafat se said naina,
Acha to ab mein tere liye aafat bn gyi ha naina, said heer with fake tears
Naina--Bs kr nautanki,main to ye soch kr pareshan ho jati hu ki bechara hmara seedha sadha ali tujhe jhelega kaise.
Heer -uski fikr tu abhi mt kr. Abhi jo tufan aane wala hai to uski fikr kr.
Kya mtlb asked naina.
Mtlb ye ki,(bt before she completes her word,her mother came to the room.
Heer get silent, after naina mother come.
Naina mujhe tujhse bat krni thi said her mother in a serious tone.
Abhi nhi maa,said naina with a tired and a bored look on her face.
Ab nhi to kb naina,bta mujhe, haa kb, heer ko dekh uski to engagement bhi ho gyi, or jldi hi shadi bhi kr legi or ek tu hai ki,tu samjahti kyu nhi isey heer said her mother now in full anger mode.
Naina-Maa plz heer or ali,clg time se jante the ek dusre ko.
Naina, mother -ha or tujhse to wo bhi nhi hua ki, kisi ko pasand kre or apna maa papa ki tension km kre.
Naina,mother-main jan skti hu kyu nhi krna chahti tu shadi.
Naina door ki taraf dekhte hue kehti hai jaha uske papa ji khde hote hai,
Naina-kyuki main abhi kuch bnna chahti hu. Aage jana chahti hu
Naina,s mother-or kitna aage jana hai tujhe,dekh naina hmne tujhe kbhi force nhi kia. Tune padhayi krne ko kha hmne krne dia. Tujhe jo krna tha hmne krne dia, pr kya tu hmari ek bat nhi man skti.
Naina -man skti hu na maa pr apki ye bat meri puri jindagi se judi hue hai,ase kaise main kisise shadi kr lu
Naina,s mother-ha to hmne kb kha ki tu kisi se bhi shadi kr le. Tu jan le usko, or na pasand aaye to na kehde, ab tk 8 rishte aa chuke hai or tune kya kia. Kuch na kuch krke bhga dia un ldko ko is wajah se koi rishtedar, tere liye rishta lekar aane se bhi darta hai. Ye ek rishta bhot mushkil se aya hai or main chahti hu ki tu is bar, is rishte pr dhyan de,
Naina, -papa ji plz aap to kuch bolo.
Naina,s father -naina is bar main bhi tmhari maa se sehmat hu. Tm soch lo beta,ache se hm koi tmhe force thodi na kr rhe hai.
Itna kehkr dono chle jate hai,
Seeing her frnd condition heer said to naina
Naina problem kya hai akhir asked heer.
Naina----Problem ye hai heer ki mujhe nhi krni shadi abhi,koi samajhta kyu nhi, asa kyu hai ki ldki badi hue nhi or lg jate log uski shadi karane mein.
Or upar se rishtedar,hm agar mushkil mein ho to koi nhi aayega dekhne pr ha, majak udane ko or mushkile badhane ko, ye har jagah maujud kyu rehte hai,
Ye society asi kyu hai heer jha ldki agar 25 ki hue nhi ki shadi kra do,wrna,usey acha ldka nhi milega or ek ldka wo chahe 40 ka hi kyu na ho jaye ldki usey 20 ki mil skti hai.
,heer-naina dekh is society ka yha ke niyamo ka to main kuch nhi kr skti bs itna keh skti hu ki isme uncle aunty ki khushi hai to ek bar chance lekar dekh le or, jaise ki unhone kha agar na bat bne to tu ajad hai na kehne ke liye, or phir phir kbhi kbhi apno ki khusi, ke liye thoda adjust krna padta hai right.
A smile came to her face after listening her frnd little speech. And that speech remind her the same word of the, stranger, she follows and admire so much.
Naina-tu bilkul shi keh rhi hai,heer Mujhe nhi pta tha tu itna hoshiyar hai.
Heer-jani tmne hme abhi jana hi kha Hai.
Naina-janna bhi nhi hai madam itna kafi hai waise bhi samajhdari wali batein tujh pr suit nhi krti.
Heer -achaaa''huh. Chl phir main ja rhi hu.
Naina-are yar tu to naraj ho gyi.
Heer-naraj hoye meri jutti,tujhse naraj ho skti hu kya main,wo to maa ne kha tha ghar jldi aane ko or dekh kitna late ho gya.
Naina-acha, chl phir main tujhe drop kr deti hu.
Heer-Thik hai and she mArched toward the door. Bt naina stopped her in middle.
Naina-oye jate jate ek jhappi to diye ja janti hai na,aakar kitna mushkil kam krna hai.
Heer-oye yar rulayegi kya pgli,(and both hugged each other)or ha tu chinta na kri. Main or ali hai na tere sath ldka agar acha na hua to hm khud usey rasta dikha denge.
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Next day naina take a leave bcoz her mother said to stay back at home and made some,snacks for the guest.
Evening time -
Naina kya kr rhi hai tu sidhe baith na said a totally irritated heer.
Mujhe samajh nhi aa rha itni decoration ki jarrurat kya hai. Said naina to her frnd, who give a look like she's going to eat her any second
Heer-jarrurat kyu nhi hai,ab chahe tu us ldke ko reject kre ya na kre. Wo tujhe reject nhi krna chahiye,
Ase, chehre pe duniya bhar ki kalakari krke or khud ko circus ke joker jasie feel krke said naina indicating toward her face and attire.
Isey sajana sawarna kehte hai madam,jo ki sirf ldkio ko samajh aata hai, zoo ke janwaro ko nhi said heer throwing her harsh comment back at her.
Tera mtlb kya hai main ldki nhi hu asked naina with a annoyed face
Heer looked in all direction bt not at her.
She, s totally pissed of now,first bcoz of her mother instructions like ase chlna. Waise mushkurana. Najre mt uthana,or jyada batein mt krna and second her friend who completely tried to make her appearance like a clown
.Finally the guest arrived.
Oye naina aa gye guest.
Said a excited heer.
Naina-Tu to ase excited ho rhi jaise mujhe nhi tujhe dekhne aye ho.
Oye chup kr aunty ne bola na abhi jyada bat nhi krna bs haa mein sir hilana or ha na mein bhi ok, said heer with naughty smile.
Nainaaa chlo sb tmhe bula rhe heer bete leke aao isey said naina mother from the door.
Heer-Ji aunty
Hatho mein chai ki tray liye or face pe ek face muskaan liye naina heer ke sath wha aa jati hai.
Are yar yha to sirf do log hai, ldka kha hai asked heer slowly that only naina can hear her voice.
Mujhe kya pta, acha hi hai na nahi aya replied naina with same level of voice.
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Behan ji ye hai meri beti naina,said naina father with a proud look on his face.
Bhot pyari hai apki beti, aao beta hmare pass akar baitho said the lady.
Heer take the tray on her hand and put it on the table infront of them.
Naina get sitted near the lady.
Kya krti ho beta tm. Asked the man,.
Are ji aap bhi kya krte ho pehle hi pucne lge pehle bta to do ki hm hai kaun said the lady again
Hanji hanji,.,bhai sahab aap to hmare bare mein jante hi honge. Hm yha apne ek dost ke ghar usse milne aye the, unhi se suna ki apki ldki bdi pyari hai, to bs socha ki kyu na apne bete ke liye ye rishta mang le aapse. Said the man.
Ji waise to hmara beta bhi aata pr kuch kam se abhi usey bahar jana pada to jasie hi wo ayega na hm usey lekar ayenge said the lady.
Naina,s mother-Are behan ji to aapko kuch puchna ho to puch lijiye naina se.
Are nhi nhi hme apki ldki bhot pasand hai or hmare bete ko to bhot. Said the,
At this sentence of naina give a confused look to them.
Mere kehne ka mtlb tha bhot pasand ayegi akhir hmari pasand jo hai. Kyu ji, asked the lady to her husband.
Man-acha ji to hm ab chlte hai jldi hi phone krenge apko btane ke liye,
Ji shurkiya, hme bhi intezar rhega said naina father.
Heer kept on of his hand on naina shoulder and said. Maine to khamkha mein itni mehnat ki, jiske liye ki wo to aya hi nhi.
.after that day,almost one month passed bt not any phone call or not them come to their home.
Kya bat ho gyi,pura ek mahina ho gya or koi call nhi ayi,bhul to nhi gye na wo log said naina mother with a worried look on her face.
Are pr kha to tha ki call krengr maine pta lgaya tha. Harjeet se bola ki ache log hai. Phir ase krne ki kya wajah ho skti hai.
Papaji plz ab aap dono sochna bnd krengr, agar unhone krna hota to kr dia hota. Said an angry naina.
Naina,s father -Pr bete koi bat to hogi na tbhi to,
Naina -Bat to hai na ki unhe li pasand nhi hogi, aap dono ko itna bhi nhi samajh aata, or ab hm is bare mein or bat nhi krenge,
Naina,s mother-Tu chup kr naina maine tujhse kha tha ki unke samne kuch asa waisa mt krna,tune hi kuch bola hoga,
Naina-maine kya kia,apne jasie kha maine waise hi kia ab agar unka call nhi aya to isme bhi meri galti hai.
Nain,s father -shi keh rhi hai wo isme uski kya galti hai, hmhi the jo is rishtey ko lekar serious ho gye the, tmhari bato mein akar main bhi, lekin ab jb wl khegi tbhi uski shadi hogi. S
Nain,s mother-pr suniye to
Naina,s father -maine keh dia na ab is bat pe koi behas nhi hogi,
Unlogo ke call na krne se kisi ko koi fayda hua tha to wo naina thi us din ke bad se, uske papa ne shadi ki bat hi nhi ki,.
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Eight month passed and no change in my life,whi sb kuch,ek bina akl ka boss, ek jiddi maa, ek, stranger jo ki apna sa lgta hai. Do dost jo har wqt mere sath hote hai or or or,before she completes her sentence ali completed it on her behalf.
Or ek naya project said an happy ali from behind.
Not again, said naina with a sad look.
Ali-Are hm yha apko itni achi khuskhbri suna rhe or ap hai ki dukhi ho rhi hai.
Naina-wo isliye kyuki main janti hu na ki tu kaun si khushkhabri laya hoga,yha na ki hmare beakl boss ne ek naya project dia hai. Jo jarrur kisi politician ka interview lena ke hoga nhi to jyada se jyada kisi businessman ke ghar jakar, uski biwi ki lifestyle kaise hai wo log kaise rehte hai bla bla ye sb dekhne ka ha
Ali didn't replied just give her a amused look.
Kya ase kya dekh rha hai. Main shi bol rhi hu na asked naina.
Ali-Waise acha to nhi lgta,apni dost ko galat sabit krna. Pr naina aap is bar galat hai,
Kya mtlb asked naina
Mtlb ye ki na to is bar hme kisi politician ke chkkar katne hai na hi kisi businessman ki wife ke nkhre uthane hai, is bar jo case hai wo ye hai ki.
Ki, said naina with an impatient tone.
Ki hme ek. Martyr ke upar report taiyar krni hai. Said ali.
Naina-Whattt
Ali-ji ha lga n shock, or usse bhi badi bat ye hai ki ye report hme yaha nhi wha jakar taiyar krni hogi.
Naina-ek minute ek minute main kuch samjhi nhi, tu shuruwat se bta, martyr report,.
Ali-yha nhi chliye cafe chlte hai whi discuss krlenge. Afterall hm dono partner jo hai.
Naina replied with a grin-yes partner in every crime
At cafe--------##
Naina-Ha to ab bta or sb detail mein, ek ek detail chahiye mujhe
Ali-batata hu btata hu,to bat ye hai ki, koi captain hai army mein, captain Shekhawat,
Naina-ha to
Ali-to wo, kuch mahine pehle. Hyderabad mein jo blast hua tha yad hai,
Naina-ofcorse yad hai kya kam kia tha hmari army ne, wrna to na jane kitne logo ki jan chli jati.
Ali-ha to usi blast mein. Logo ko bachate samay, kuch army officers ki jan chli gyi thi.
Naina-to hme us par report bnani hai.
Ali-are aap hmari puri bat to suniye pehle.
Naina-acha ab tu bol
Ali-to usi blast mein, ye i mean captain Shekhawat bhi mare gye the, pr
Naina-pr kya.
Ali-pr desh ke liye jan gawane ke bad bhi unhe koi samman nhi mila, government ne unki body bhej di unke ghar bs.
Naina-to unki family ye chahti hai ki hm ye report bnakr apne channel pr dikhaye right.
Ali-ha pr ye unki family nhi chahti.
Naina-mtlb
Ali-mtlb, captain ko koi dost hai usine sir ko letter likha tha yhi nhi us letter mein mein sare Ambala walo ke signatures bhi shamil the.
Naina-or unki family.
Ali-unka to pta nhi, isliye to sir chhahte hai ki hm wha jaye. Or sb kuch pta lgaye.
Naina-kamal hai, unki family ne kuch bhi nhi kia or yha pura ambala unke liye insaf chahta hai,kamal ke hoga ye insan. Acha mujhe uski photo to dikha.
Ali-yha ek problem ye bhi hai ki hmare pass unki photo bhi nhi hai,maine pura Google check kia bt ek bhi picture nhi thi jo thi wo clear nhi thi yha tk ki sare records bhi nahi hai.
Naina-pr asa kyu. Ek soldier jo shaheed hua uske records kyu hateyenge, khi ye captain Shekhawat koi galat insan to nhi tha.
Ali-ye to pta nhi. Iske liye hme ambala jana hoga.
Naina-good to phir der kis bat ki hai kb jana hai.
Ali-kl hi.
Naina-thik hai to phir main, ghar pe bta dungi aaj hi, or phir kl nikal jate hai.
Naina apne ghar pr bta deti hai or jane ki permission bhi le leti hai.
Naina or ali dono bus station pahochte hai heer bhi unhe see of krne aati hai.
Mujhe asa lg rha hai jaise kuch change hone wala hai, said heer in totally dramatic way.
Naina---Lo phir shuru ho gyi ye. Ab kya lg rha hai tujhe.
Sun na naina, mujhe asa lg rha ki wha na tujhe wo milne wala hai said heer.
Ali with a confused look -wo wo kaun.
Are whi said heer.
Naina-Kaun whi dekh tu sidhe sidhe bta rhi hai ki tujhe ulta latka du
Are whi yar tera prince charming, and started laughing like a maniac.
Ali and naina both, give a look to each other.
Where as naina look define the statement to ali, I told u beta musibat hai ye.
While ali,s look define the statement, janta hu " pr ab kya ho skta hai.
And now time to bid bye to my love and my lovely frnd or tm dono isharo mein batein krna bnd kro or chlo jldi se jadu wali jhappi do mujhe said heer looking at both
Trio,s hugged each other
, and two of them start their journey to ambala.
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Pyar hai to ikrar bhi hoga.
Pr ikrar se pehle intezar bhi hoga.
Intezar hai to etbar bhi hoga.
Aur agar etbar hai to yakeen rkho, MOHABBAT se shama gulzar bhi hoga.
She was constantly looking these sentence of her,mr stranger when ali asked her.
Kya bat hai naina itne dhyan se kya dekh rhi hai aap
Naina-dekh nhi rhi hu soch rhi hu
Ali-kya soch rhi
Naina-yhi ki, kb ayenge. mr. brave heart dekh na, kitna time ho gya,.
Ali-aa jayenge naina aap pareshan na ho wo bhi kha aap ke bina reh skte hai.
Naina-uda le tu bhi mera majak uda le ek teri wo heer km thi kya.
Ali-ab hm kya kre naina aap bhi,kha ek ajnabee ke peeche padi hai usey to ye khabar bhi nhi hogi ki koi yha uske na aane se pareshan hai..
With some teasing talking and all they reach to their destination.
And after that captain frnd house.
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Aiye aiye main aplog ka hi wait kr rha tha, said a man to naina and ali.
Ji aap, asked ali.
Main abhimanyu,maine hi wo letter likha tha.
Naina-ohhh to aap hai, well thnk u mr. abhimanyu,ek ache kam ke liye.
Abhimanyu-thnk u. Kaisa... wo hmara dost tha apne dost ke sath nainsafi kaise hone de skte hai.
Ali-bhot acha lga ye jan kr, ki aaj kl bhi ase log hai duniya mein jo dosto ki rishto ki itni fikr krte hai
Abhimanyu-aap keh skte hai pr yha jis insan ki bat hm kr rhe hai wo tha hi asa ki, jo bhi usse jud jaye kbhi bhul hi nhi skta tha.
Jii??? said naina,
Haha aap nhi samjhengi i mean aap janti nhi thi na usey,aiye mere sath main apko dikhata hu ki kyu, yha ke log or main uski itni fikr krte hai.
Abhimanyu unhe,ambala ke har, ghar mein le jata hai
Namastey, kaki ji said abhimanyu
Are abhimanyu beta tm yha,hmne jo bhijwaya tha wo letter pahocha ki nhi,,
Ji ha pahoch gya, wha se hi ye log aye hai to socha aap logo se milwa du said abhimanyu.
Bhot axha kia beta,(to naina and ali)hmara veer bhot acha bacha tha, pta nhi kyu. Uske sath asa kia sbne,wo to kbhi kisi ka bura nhi krta pr dekho sbke liye acha sochne wala hmara baccha aaj jaise khi kho gya hai,
,acha kaki main inhe, sbse milwa kr aata hu. Said abhimanyu.
,is tarah abhimanyu unhe bhot se logo se milwata hai har koi veer ki achai hi batata hai.
Or kuch janna hai apko. Asked abhimanyu.
Ali-nhi
Naina-ha.
Ali-pr naina itna kafi hoga mera mtlb.
Naina replied instantly to him-nhi hoga kafi,nhi hoga ali,(to abhimanyu) ha to abhimanyu,maine sbse sun liya. Pr ab main apse kuch sunna chaungi, u know dost the wo apke to apse better kaun janta hoga unhe.
Abhimanyu-phir to apko ye bat jankr bhot hairani hogi ki veer ke dost hone ka dawa krne wala ye insan kbhi uska sbse bada dushman hua krta tha.
'naina-Jii???
Abhimanyu-ji haa,yhi sach hai main or wo hmesha se dost nhi the, or iski wajah thi meri usse jalan,sb pyar krte the usse, yha tk ki mere maa baba bhi, ek baccha tha main sbkuch to chlta pr apne maa baba ka pyar batne kaise dete, bachpan ki ye jalan na jane kb dushmani mein badal gyi. Main hmesha usey harane ki koshish krta, or wo har bhi jata, main sochta tha ki main, usse jyada kabil hu,pr logo ne sach dekhe jo maine nhi dekha,apne isi ahem mein ki main ek kabil insan hu, maine ek fight mein hissa liya tha jha, pr ladai mein meri maut bhi ho skti thi,or ho jati agar us din veer ne meri jan nhi bachayi hoti to us din mujhe pta chla ki, qabil wo nhi jo jeet jaye, qabil wo hai jo harne ke bhi taqat rkhte ho. Wo taqat mujhme nhi thi wo veer mein thi,us din ke bad maine apne apko sudhar, or har kadam pr usne mera sath dia,sbne mera sath chhor dia, pr usne kbhi nhi or uski hi wajah se log shayad mujhse bhi pyar krte hai. Ab aap btaiye kya aise insan ke sath galat hona chahhiye jisne sari jindagi lga di dusro ke liye jine mein kya uske marne ke bad usey samman na milna ye galat nhi hai.
Naina and ali both have tears in their eyes.
Apne shi kaha, hm apko yakeen dilate hai, ek asi report btayenge ki government majbur ho jayegi unhe unka haq dene mein, pr sawal ye hai ki unki family ne kuch kyu nhi kia.
Abhimanyu -kyuki veer hmesha kehta tha ki kya fark padta hai uniform ho na ho,kya fark padta hai saheed koi khe na khe,main or mera zameer jante hai ki main ek sipahi hu or apni akhri sans tk ek sipahi rhunga.
,ye bat to shayad abhimanyu ne boli thi pr shabd to rajveer ke the or uske shabd naina ke dil mein kuch is tarah ghar kr gye ki wo khud hi nhi samajh payi,
Naina with a smile-itni achi soch wale insan se kash main ek bar mil pati pr koi bat nhi kya mujhe unki ek tasveer mil skti hai.
Abhimanyu-tasveer???
Ali-ha photo hme uski jarrurat padegi na,
Abhimanyu -pr mere pass to veer ki koi tasveer nhi hai.
Naina-kisi ke pass to hogi.
Abhimanyu-ha hogi na, uski family ke pass,,
Naina-or unki family kha milegi.
Abhimanyu -wo to yha nhi hai.
Ali-pr photo to jarruri hai asa kaise ho skta hai ki kisi ke pass na ho aap pta kijiye.
Abhimanyu-ek minute yad aya, pichli bar jb veer wapas aaya tha tb,usi samay yha, pe school ke innogration tha,tb wha photo,s bhi liye gye the hmd wha jarrur mil jayengi.
Naina-that,s good., to plz aap jldi se jldi unki photo, nikalwaiye.
Abhimanyu-main bs abhi jata hu tb tk aap dono thoda rest kr lijiyr.
Abhimanyu called ramdeen, a worker on his house.
Ji sahab said ramdeen
Abhimany-main jara bahar ja rha hu,(pointing to ali and naina)ye hmare khas mehman hai inke rehne ka intezam kro and he left after saying this to his worker.
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Waise aap photo ke liye itni, excited hue ja rhi thi masla kya hai. Said ali.
Naina -Hmmm bs dekhna chahti thi jo insan itna acha tha, jisse sb itna pyar krte hai dikhta kaisa hoga wo,
Ali-naina aap thik to hai na.
Naina-mujhe kya hoga ali.
Ali-whi to problem hai ki hmari dost ko kuch bhi ho jata hai.
Aliii said naina
Ali-Acha acha thik hai chle thoda rest kr le jb se aya hua chl chl kr thk gya hu,
After sometime,
Ye abhimanyu, ji kha reh gye abhi tk nhi aye asked ali to ramdeen.
Before ramdeen replied, a exhausted abhimanyu bt with a smile on his face enter to the house.
Maff kijiyega hme aane mein thodi der ho gyi, darasal, photo ki album yha thi nhi to hme usey lane ke liye kisi ko bhjena pada.
Naina-photo mili,
First abhimanyu looked at her and then noded and passed the photo.
When naina finally saw the pic of captain,get freezed for sometime bt then regain her senses.
Ali feels the difference in her facial expressions
Ali -kya hua naina.
Naina, -kuch nhi ali.
Ali-pakka.
Naina-ha bs thoda thk gyi hu na, jakar rest kr leti hu,.
Naina left the place with the photo on her hand, leaving a exhausted Abhimanyu and a shocked ali behind.
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Bhaiya kya kr rhe hai thoda aaram se chlaiye na, uff ye taxi wale bhi, isliye maine tujhse kha tha ki hm teri car se aate hai said heer in a complaining tone to her friend,who is busy looking on her phone.
Tu sun bhi rhi hai main kyu keh rhi hu said heer again.
Sun rhi hu, said naina in a Plain tone.
Heer-Ha wo to mujhe dikh hi rha hai jb se hm wha se nikle hai nhi nhi, jb se hm wha gye the tb se hi tere muh ltka hua tha.
Naina-asa kuch nhi hai heer main bs thoda thk gyi hu
Heer-acha phir to tu jakar so liyo pehle.
Hmmm said a totally tired naina.
Are naina wo dekh, na ye log itni rat ko yha kya kr rhe hai. Said heer pointing outside the taxi glass,window.
Kya hua ab asked naina.
Are wo dekh naina ye ldke sb kya kr rhe hai lgta hai party kr rhe hai road wali party Hehe said heer with amusement
Tujhe kya hai ki wo log kya kr rhe hai or waise bhi ase logo ko nhi dekhna chahiye,acha hoga hm jldj se yha se nikale said naina.
Itna kha hi tha naina ne ki taxi thoda aage jakar ruk gyi.
Kya hua bhaiya taxi kyu rok di apne asked naina to the taxi driver.
Are madam ji lgta hai taxi khrab ho gyi replied driver.
Lo ji ho gya siyappa bs yhi bacha tha said heer in a dramatic way.
Naina-Bhaiya aap jara dekhiye.
Driver checked the taxi and said lo ji madam ji ye to sach mein siyappa ho gya, taxi to khrab pad gyi.
Patting on her forehead slightly heer said- haye abba ab kya hoga, ek to sunsan sadak upar se andheri raat upar se do do khibsurat ldkiya, baba ji kya kiya apne
Naina, to heer -tu thoda chup kregi agar kuch na bhi hona to bhi teri bak bak sun ke ho jayega.
Naina to taxi driver-kuch ho nhi skta bhaiya.
Taxi driver-hanji yha se thodi hi dur pr, garage hai main wha jake mechanic le aata hu, tb tk aplog yhi wait kr lijiyega.
Akeleee said heer again in her dramatic way bt, naina stopped her.
Naina-Thik hai aap jaiye, hm wait krenge lekin ye aap apne pasie le jaiye ho sktahai hmara koi, aa jaye to hm chle jayenge
Thik hai madam ji, main jldi aane ki koshish krunga. Itna kehkar wo chla jata hai.
Or naina heer ko ali ko call krke ane ko kehti hai or ali kuch time mein wha aane ko kehta hai
Naina and heer both silently stand on the road bt when heer can't bear the silence so she said excitedly.
Heer-waise shadi achi thi na naina.
Naina-khak achi thi,mujhe to samajh nhi aata sir ne ye news channel kyu khol rkha hai,
Heer-kya keh rhi hai tu
Naina-to or kya kahu acha khasa news channel hai,chahe to hm no.1 pr ho skte hai bt nhi hmare boss ko,faltu kk news itni achi lgti hai ko pucho mt, bhgwan ne pasie to de diye akl dena bhul gye. Mujhe to ye samajh nhi aata, ki boss ko boss bnaya kisne ek minute, unhe pehle degree hi kisne di, mera bs chle to sb pr case kr du news ka majak bna dala hai, naina aaj inki shadi hai jao telecast kro. Aaj inka birthday hai jao telecast kro, birthday shadi my foot, said naina all in one breath.
Heer-breath naina breath,take a deep breath. soch tere boss ne sun liya to
,boss ne suna ya nhi pr koi tha wha jisne unki batein sun li.
Tere chakkar mein dekh shayad un ldko ka dhyan, hm par aa gya said heer.
Naina-Ha to tujhe puchna hi nhi chahiye tha
Heer-Haye rabba kitna handsome ldka hai
Naina -acha ali ko bata du ki tera dil kisi or pe aa gya hai
Heer-are yar main to bs dekh rhi thi ek minute. Agar main galat nhi hu to wo three no. pe jo handsome wala ldka hai wo hmari taraf dekh rha hai.
Naina-ha to tu udhar mt dekh.
Heer-or agar main galat nhi hu to wo hme dekh kr smile bhi kr rha hai.
Naina-kha na maine mt dekh.
Heer-or agar main galat nhihu to nainaaa wo hmari hi taraf aa rha hai.
Naina-maine kha na tujhse ignore kr tujhe samajh nhi aa rha.
Heer-or agar main galt nhi hu to, to to wo.
Naina-wo wo kya.
Peeche khda hai right came a voice from behind.
Heer with largely opened eyes noded her head in yes.
At that moment naina turned and then (no not eyelock here the scene is different) give him an angry look.
Apki tarrif, asked naina.
,meri koi tarrif to nhi Hai. Ha pr aap chahe to krde, i don't mind said the boy.
Waise tarrif ke liye to Puri jindagi padi hai, said the boy looking at naina pr abhi mujhe lgta hai ki apko kuch help ki jarrurat hai.
Hmne apse mangi, apki so called help said naina in a rude manner.
Ignoring her harsh words. He said again- apki taxi bnd pad gyi hai, aap chahe to main apko drop kr du.
Heer -thnx
Naina-no thnx.
Naina pushed, heer aside and said -dimag khrab ho gya hai tera.
Heer-mera nhi tera. Dekh kitna handsome ldka hai or kitni achi batein krta hai,kya problem hai le lete hai na lift.
Naina-tujhe kuch nhi pta, ye ldke ase hi hote hai pehle mithi mithi batein krenge or phir.
Heer-are pr
Before she completes her sentence man said
Apki frnd bilkul shi keh rhi hai,
Both girl looked at him.
Ase kya dekh rhi hai sach keh rha hu apki frnd bilkul shi keh rhi, achi skl or mithi bato pr kbhi nhi jana chahiye, i respect ur thoughts miss naina and u should have to be carefull miss heer.
His words, left naina speechless for sometime and heer awkwardly said.
Heer-hehe next time se no achi shk only naina wali akl thnk u.
Waise main drop nhi kr skta atleast yha, khda reh skta hu,jb tk koi nhi aa jata. M sure u ok with it.
Naina noded, in yes and they remain in the same silent for sometime when, ali came and pick them and said some thnkfull words to him.
Wha se ase kyu aa gyi nainasaid ali breaking her chain of memories.
Naina didn't said something just passed him the photo.
Ali also give the same reaction, after seeing the pic.
Hme yakeen nhi hota naina,sb kehte hai duniya choti hoti hai log milte hai pr ase ye kbhi na socha tha said ali with a shocking tone in her voice.
Maine bhi nhi socha tha, hm jante to nhi the unhe pr aaj lgta hai kash thoda or jan liya hota us din, ali meri wish puri hue thi, us insan se mili bhi thi main or maine usey kya kya nhi suna dia tha.
Ali-or apki un bato pr unhe proud tha.
A weak smile came to her face-ab main smjhi ki kyu tha. Ali hme unki family se milna chahiye tujhe kya lgta hai.
Ali-hme bhi yhi lgta hai akhir bete to wo unke hi hai unka haq hai ki wo is bat ko jane "
Next day, ali or naina dono abhimanyu se rajveer ki family se milne ko bat krte hai wo unhe unka address de deta hai. Jo ki delhi ka hota hai, address milte hi bina time waste kiye dono delhi ke liye nikal jate hai.
,dono abhimanyu ke btaye address pr jate hai or bell bjate hai door open hota hai,or ek ldka, unki hi age ka door kholta hai bt wo pta nhi kyu naina ko dekh kr shocked ho jata hai.
Naina-(awkwardly after seeing his reaction,) waved her hand
Naina-hiii,mera nam,
Kaun aya hai beta, came a voice from the house,. and a lady at her, mid 50 came there.
Ab time tha naina ke shock hone ka.
Aap. Said naina with a totally shock look.
Naina bete, said the lady with a happy bt shocked face.
Are tune usey bahar kyu khda kr rkha hai, ander aane de, said the lady to the young boy.
Lady-Maff krna beta ye thoda pagal hai yudi kya kr rha hai ander aane de unko
Ali or naina dono ander aate hai. Jaha naina shocked thi unhe dekhkr ali shocked tha ye dekhkar ki naina unhe janti thi or wo ldka wo kyu shocked tha wo to koi nhi samajh rha tha.
Aap captain Shekhawat ki maa hai, asked naina, immediately not wanting to waste her time while she, was dieing to know the truth behind all these connection,.
Haa. Main uski maa haa or, ye uska bhai, yudi...(pointing toward the boy)
Tm janti ho mere veer ko. Now rajveer mom turn to asked questions.
Naina-Jyada to nhi ek bar mili thi unse, pr bat yha wo nhi hai, apke shehar ke logo ne captain ke, liye letter bheja tha wo chahte haii ki unko samman mile.
Rajveer mom-janti hu sb bhot pyar krte hai. Or yhi chahte hai
Naina -aap nhi chahti.
Slightly laughing on her questions rajveer mom said -agar tm ambala se hokar ayi ho to tmhe is sawal ka jawab pta hoga, kyu??
Naina noded in yes.
Rajveer mom-mujhe pta hai tmhare sath galat kia maine pr ab tm samajh skti ho ki kya reason thA mere call na krne ka
Naina noded-mujhe apse kbhi koi shikayat nhi thi.
Rajveer mom-tmne kha na ek bar mili thi usse. Tm shayd us ek mulakat ko bhul gyi ho beta,pr mera raj nhi bhul paya. Us din ke bad., hmesha tmhare bare mein sochte rehta tha,pehli najar mein dil de baitha tha tmhe shayad usne kbhi hmse koi bat nhi chupayi, or ye to phir hmare bacche ke dil ki bat thi chup kaise jati to bs hme pta chl gya phir kya.
Hm bhi usey bina btaye tmhare ghar pahoch gye, sb kuch acha tha rajveer wapas aata or hm, tm dono ke riste ki bat kr lete, mere bete ki khushi, usey dete pr us hadse ne sb chinn liya.
So much truth. So much shocked bt finally day is going to end for naina,
,bhot kuch hota bhot kuch na ho paya,.
,naina or ali raj ke ghar hi ruk jate hai, is beech bhot kuch janne ko milta hai naina ko rajveer ke bare mein, or wo sb kuch ase sun rhi thi mano, isse acha or koi waqt nhi isse achi or koi kahani nhi. Sb bato se anjann naina ko ali, yu hi dekhe ja rha tha shayad wo kuch samajh rha tha.
Night at raj place-
Naina ko kuch documents send kren hote hai pr uska laptop bnd pad jata hai to wo yudi se puchne jati hai,bt yudi wha nhi hota. Khi bahar gya hota hai, raj ki mom usey room mein jakar usey krne ko kehti hai naina yudi ke room mein jati hai, or documents send kr deti hai bt jb wo usey close krne lgti hai,to galti se ek foldier khul jata hai, wo foldier padhn
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