RAYA SS "Dear Jindagi " Part 2 Page 3 update 23/11/16

Posted: 2016-11-05T12:47:29Z

Hello This is My 1st POST AND I MADE ACCOUNT FOR PUBLISHING MY FRIEND's STORY HE is Busy But He wrote this for me 

NOTE : Not a Prof read So Avoid mistake and errors

Dear Zindagi

Ek Tu hai Jo meri Humsafar Hai...

Ek tu hi Jispe Meri Manzil Shuru aur Khatam Hai...

Love You Zindagi


3rd Person Narration :

She writes in her diary and Jump From Helicopter flying 20000

Feet above from Sea Level...

She spread her arms and welcome the Cold wind to hug...then she swift turn round and

Round shouting...Awww ohhh yupiii I am top of the world...

She opened her parachute and grip the rope tight...lading is harder she herself experienced before  and Then Bang...What happen To My Parachute...


Diver 1 : What the Hell She was Writing in Her diary before the Jump

Diver 2 : I don't know and I don't know Her and More I don't CARE

Diver 3 to Diver 2 : One min Are You are Same Person Who Break Last time Record and Landed in 10 min and You are here for making another Record ??? I dnt remember your Name

Diver 1 :  oh Look That Girl (He pointed to below the Helicopter in the Sky) I Think Her Parachute is stuck She is gonna die...OMG I am not Going (He looks at candidate 2  Who jumped before his turn came)

Diver 2 : My name Is RAM KAPOOR he Shouted and jumped from Helicopter


Diver 3 to Diver 1 : And I know he will break all the records Today


Ram Folded his hands in downward he pushed his legs in backward that will Give him Speed in half min he reached the Girl and Signaled her to Caught his Both Hands

What the Hell she is doing why she is try to Shoo away him Oh God is she wanna suicide like this


Ram opened his Parachute and A round Motion caught her between in his Arms


Ram's POV


Ohh God That Two Divers Were Asking me Weird question And They Don't know My name and What was that Girl writing in her diary What the hell She was Writing  in this time at this place she supposed to take long breath before Jump...Finally She jumped and now My turns on 3rd

Why this Two stupid asking me Same question again and Again Yes I broke last record and now I ll break my own record

"oh Look That Girl I Think Her Parachute is stuck She is gonna die...OMG I am not Going "

What I looked Yes defiantly something is Wrong with Her Parachute I have to save her and then I jumped When I reached there that Stupid Girl was not cooperating with me so I caught her in between my arms and YES I SAVED HER and MADE A RECORD LANDED IN 8.3min And SAVED ONE LIFE TOO


3rd Person Narration


"What the hell you were Doing when I signaled you to catch my hand " Ram asked in Fury

"Why did you caught me on your Parachute  " Girl  replied in same Fury

"What the..I saved your Life" Ram almost barked on her

"Who told you to do this" Girl replied "And FOR YOUR KIND INFORMATION MY PARACHUTE WAS ABSOULTY OKAY "



Edited by Tvfreaktion - 2016-11-23T10:48:52Z
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Posted: 2016-11-05T13:10:34Z

yes I m the first... kahi toh first ho gayi lol...
I just loved the intro lol completely new story loved the way writer carried off the story do I guess girl is non other then Priya b'coz yeah dono hi kahi pe bhi shuru ho jate hai...aaas paas dekte hi nahi bas argue karna shuru kar dete hai lol... but it was great ending dear waiting for more do update soon...

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Posted: 2016-11-05T14:49:32Z
Awww love u zindagi wahh n loved it ram saved the girl n i m damn sure she is priya now cant wait for part 2
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Posted: 2016-11-06T01:54:03Z
Interesting update... Raya intro on a different atmosphere...
The girl for sure wuld be priya...
Waiting to read whts next...
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Posted: 2016-11-06T02:15:27Z
Nice intro continue soon...
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Posted: 2016-11-06T02:30:21Z
welcome to forum. RaYa ka jaadu hai jo aap ye story yaha post kar rahe ho.
loved the intro. RaYa started fighting in the air itself. the girl has to be priya.
waiting for next. totally a fresh n new concept.
plz regularly update Karna. pl continue
Madhuri Dixit and Sakshi Tanwar....FOREVER FAVOURITES
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Posted: 2016-11-06T05:47:55Z
interesting intro...
waiting for next... update sooon
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Posted: 2016-11-06T10:01:34Z
first welcome to d forum ...
awwe interesting...n different concept..
like all assuming that girl has to be priya only...
waiting for d next part ..
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