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MG FF: Phir Mohabbat | Part 6 - Pg 15

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Hey guys!!! 
I hope you guys remember me if not let me remind you of an old friend and writer by the name of Hinal πŸ˜³

Well as all know I had completely disappeared from here and left all my writings incomplete but now that I'm back I'm really hoping to get back to writing... So with that I would like to let you all know that I'm reworking on Phir Mohabbat and hope you guys like it.  About my other ffs I still haven't decided which I'm going to continue nor do I have any new stories in mind so if anything comes up in the future will surely let you know. 

So kindly please lend your support and let me know your views.

Love,
Hinal 

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Dua

Hazrat Nizamuddin Railway Station,

As the Rajdhani Express stopped at the platform a lot of hustle bustle started with people getting down as well as trying to get their luggage... Koolie's trying to get customers... Family and friends greeting each other etc. In this a young girl wearing a white salwar kameez with the dupatta wrapped around her head got down with a small duffle bag. She sighed as she looked at the happy faces of people around her and clenched her fists tight and slowly breathed out and tried to walk out of the station.

After coming out of the busy station she looked around and wondered how would she be able to handle herself in this familiar yet unknown city. Shaking off the disturbing thoughts she took an auto and reached Chandini Chowk after a long struggle through Delhi's busy traffic. After paying of the fare she carried her bag and walked a bit and finally reached her destination and knocked. As the door didn't open for minutes she started getting nervous and wondered if she would have to go somewhere else when finally the door opened and a lady in her early 40s looked at Geet and smiled a bit and said, "Sorry Puttar. I was getting some work done so got late in opening the door"

Geet smiled sadly and said, "Koi baat nahi Maasi. Aapne mujhe yaha aane diya wohi bohut hai"

Simran (Geet's Maasi) walked in and said, "Come in. Did you have any trouble while travelling?"

Geet walked behind her and said, "No Maasi" and looked around. This house was still the same as it was when she visited it 5 years back with her family. Remembering her family she felt a knife pierce her heart and closed her eyes to not let the tears fall. She opened her eyes to see Simran looking at her with pity. She just hated that look but what can she do when people around her just wanted to pity, sympathise or empathise with her.

Geet, "Maasi where is Mausaji? Are Amar and Sheetal also not at home?"

Simran sat on the charpai in the courtyard and gestured Geet to take a seat too. After Geet settled down she continued, "Woh Tere Mausaji Amristar gaye hai kuch dino ke liye kaam ke wajhe se. Aur Amar aur Sheetal bhi unke saath hi gaye hai. Main bhi jaane wali thi lekin phir khabar aayi ki Didi aur Jijaji ke baare main toh main yahi rukh gayi todhe din ke liye aur phir tub hi akeli thi waha. Acha Puttar tu kuch khayegi?"

Geet breathed out slowly and nodded no and said, "If you don't mind Maasi I would like to rest for some time."

Simran, "Yeah yeah Puttar. Go get some rest. You must be tired"

Geet just nodded and went to the guest room they always used whenever they visited this house.
 

After freshening up Geet took out a photo frame of her family and sighed as tears rolled out of her eyes. It seemed that pain was never to leave her. One after the other God just kept pushing more pain into her life. She wondered how much more pain could she suffer before she gave up? With all these thoughts she never realised when she dozed off.
 

Few Hours Later,
Simran had come and woke Geet to have dinner. Geet didn't want to have anything but she couldn't hurt her Maasi's hospitality as well and had a little. After she was done she went and cleared the dishes. As she finished she saw Simran hesitating to speak and so said, "Maasi do you want to tell something?"

Simran sighed sadly and said, "Yes Puttar. When I heard from Didi about what happened I couldn't believe that something like this would happen in your life but what can we do it's all fate."

Geet looked down and said, "Why are you telling this Maasi?"

Simran, "Dekh Puttar ab tujhse kya chupana. Dekh teri zindagi main kitne toofan achuke hai lekin main nahi chahti yeh toofan ka asar mere bacho pe pade. Unki ab umar hogai hai ke who apna ghar basaye aur agar kisi ko tumhare baare main pata chala toh koi bhi unke saath rishta jodne ke liye manega nahi. Puttar bura mat mann par tujhse bas yahi kehna chahti hu ke tu please apne liye koi alag jaga dekh le aur tune toh padhai bhi puri ki hai toh tujhe toh achi naukri bhi mil jayegi. Do hafte baad Sheetal ko dekhne ke liye ladke wale arahe hai. Tu bhi toh nahi chahegi na ke tu jis dor se guzar rahi hai use kisi ki khushi cheen jaye. Isiliye Puttar tu khud ka rehna ka intezaam kahi aur kar. Fikar mat kar abhi do hafte hai tab tak tu yaha rukh sakti hai lekin uske baad main ya tere Mausaji tumhe yaha rehne ki izazaat nahi de sakte" and walked away to her room.

Geet looked at her walking away and went to her room and sat numbly. She couldn't believe that her own Maasi was telling her to get away from them just when she went through such a tragic incident in life. Maasi whom she expected to treat her with love and care as daughter of her own sister but instead got betrayal. She closed her eyes and wished Babaji would have taken her away instead of her family. She was the cause for their sorrows then why were they punished for her sins?

Remembering all the painful memories Geet cried herself to sleep but even sleep wasn't meant for her as whenever she relaxed the nightmares began. She sat in a corner of the room with the picture of her family and rocked herself to not fall asleep. The dark night was as painful and long as the nights have been since a year.
 

Next Morning,
Simran called Geet to the courtyard and gave her the newspaper and said, "Isme kuch PG, Hostel aur Job Openings hai. Tum dekho aur jaake apply karo. Main nahi chahti ke do hafto baad tum kahi bhataki raho"

Geet's heart pierced at her words but she took the newspaper and just meekly said yes and taking her handbag left the house. The whole day she kept on applying for jobs and went through different PGs and Hostels but nothing was going right. Sometimes the owners didn't agree while sometimes the price was too high.
 

Two Weeks Later,
Geet sighed in defeat as she realised that today she would have to spend night as a homeless person in Delhi or go back to Mumbai. Her Maasi didn't even say a word to her to console her or even tell her to come back when she missed her family. She realised she was once again left alone to fight against the world.

As she walked she came across a small park and just sighed and went and sat there tiredly. She never realised when her eyes closed due to tiredness. She felt someone shaking her and got up hurriedly to look at a slightly aged woman who looked at her curiously. Geet looked around and realised that it was getting dark. She looked back at the lady who asked, "What are you doing here? It's getting dark and it's not safe to be here alone"

Geet looked down and said, "Umm I actually don't have any place to go so I was just sitting here but I don't know when I dozed off"

The lady realised that the young girl might be in some trouble and said, "If you don't mind can I suggest something?"

Geet nodded and the lady continued, "There is a Haveli just 10 min from here.You can go there and if anyone asks just let them know that Mrs. Sharma has sent you. They will surely help you"

Geet felt it a bit odd and said, "But how can I go to the Haveli?"

Lady, "See don't be afraid. That Haveli is actually under Khurana Foundation. There a lot of other girls and women stay who have some problems and don't have any place to stay. I am Mrs. Sharma and Im a trustee there so you don't need to worry. If you want I can drop you there"

Geet finally felt hopeful and smiled a bit and said, "No no you don't to take any more trouble. I'll go by myself. Can you please provide some card or something for identification that you have sent me there"

Mrs. Sharma was impressed seeing that the young girl had asked for her card so that they wouldn't think her to be fake or anything. Looking at her she felt as if she was well educated but physically she looked really weak. She immediately took out her card and on back scribbled something and gave it to Geet and said, "You just show them this card and there will be no problem there. By the way may I know your name?"

Geet took the card and said, "Ji my name is Geet and Thank You for the help. I will never forget this help from you ever"

Mrs. Sharma smiled and gave her the directions again and after making sure that Geet left she called at the foundation and let them know that she had sent a young girl named Geet and to help her settle in. After that she called the owner of the foundation Mrs. Savitri Singh Khurana and informed her about Geet. Savitri thanked her for letting her know and assured her that she would make sure that help would be provided to Geet.
Meanwhile Geet walked for another 10 mins and finally came in front of the Haveli and as she showed the card to the guards she was let in and escorted to the reception area. After filling in her basic data she was led to a cabin and was told to wait for a few mins as the Owner wanted to talk to her personally.

Geet waited patiently and was glad that Babaji had sent someone to help her out. The faith that she was losing on her Babaji after all the troubles she went through was slowly being gained back.

After about 10 mins an aged woman clad in an off white saree with golden border and a pearl necklace adorned with small pearl earrings and 2 gold bangles in the name of jewellery entered the cabin. As she came in Geet stood up and looked in awe at the aura of this elegant lady. Savitri smiled and asked Geet to sit and offered her some refreshments. Geet just took a glass of water.

While Geet was drinking water Savitri looked at Geet and felt like she had seen her somewhere but where exactly she couldn't pinpoint. After Geet finished she looked at Savitri nervously.
Savitri realising that she was making her nervous softly but calmly said, "Geet my name is Savitri Singh Khurana and Im the owner of Khurana Foundation. Can you please tell me something about yourself?"

Geet smiled sadly and said, "Hello Ma'am. You do know my name. Umm actually Im from Mumbai but I had to leave Mumbai and came to Delhi two weeks back. I stayed at my Maasi's place but due to some personal problem I can't stay there anymore. I tried a lot to get a job and some place for myself but it isn't possible to get a job in two weeks and because of that I got problems in finding a living accommodation as well"

Savitri felt bad looking at the young girl whose shoulders were slouched because of sadness. She smiled and asked, "What have you studied? Maybe I can help you in finding a job and don't worry about accommodation. You can stay here without any problems and when you find a better place you can leave from here."

Geet smiled gratefully and said, "Thank you Ma'am. I have done B.Arch from Pune College of Architecture and did my internship in DSP Associates"

Savitri smiled and said, "You don't need to worry about job. We have our own company called Khurana Constructions and recently there have been job openings so you can apply"

Geet shook her head and said, "No Ma'am I don't want any recommendation. I want a job but not like this"

Savitri was getting impressed by every word that Geet spoke and said, "Don't worry Geet I won't provide any recommendation. I'm just providing you a suggestion to apply there and I assure you my grandson as in the MD of the company will not offer any job based on recommendations so you will have to go through all rounds of interviews."

Geet smiled and said, "Thank You Ma'am. You have helped a lot first by letting me stay here and then by providing suggestion for job"

Savitri patted her hand which was on the table and said, "You don't need to say thank you. I'm happy that through this foundation I'm able to help others. Ok now let's go and you can see your room and once your settle in we can continue our talks."

Geet smiled and nodded and left while Savitri felt happy that she could bring a smile on this sweet girl's face.

After sometime Geet met a few ladies who stayed at the Haveli and was shown around. Here anyone could do anything until they followed certain rules. All the ladies helped each other in their works and Geet felt happy being surrounded by such people. The pain she felt since a year was forgotten for some time when she was amongst these people.
 

3 Days Later,
Geet woke up early and rushed to get ready. After having some bread for breakfast she went to cabin she had met Savitri on her first day. Seeing Savitri she knocked the door. Savitri seeing Geet told her to come in.
Geet, "Umm Ma'am I came to get your blessings. Today I have an interview at Khurana Constructions. It's possible because of you only" and bent to touch her feet.

Savitri immediately pulled her and said, "Nahi nahi Geet. Humare yaha Beti Bahu pair nahi chooti. Aur humara ashirwad aapke saath hai. Khush rahe aur all the best. Sab acha hoga"

Geet smiled and left while Savitri smiled at her sweet gesture. Slowly but surely Geet was making her place in Savitri's heart.
 

Khurana Constructions Main Office,
Geet entered the cabin to see a few more candidates already seated. She sent a small prayer to her Babaji and went and took her seat. The first round was Basic Assessment Round and they were given a few questions to solve. After finishing it they were taken to the above floor where a section was left empty. They were asked to each occupy a computer and were given a small practical test to check their software and technicality skills.

The third round was to work on a Project and come up with a concept and basic plan. They were given 3 hours to work on it. By the time all finished it was evening and all were requested to leave for the day and the selected candidates would be informed to return the next day for the final rounds.
Geet sighed and felt good working on something she really liked and prayed to Babaji that her project gets selected.

As Geet reached Khurana Foundation she got a call from KC confirming her return tomorrow for the final rounds. Geet was overjoyed and rushed to Savitri and hugged her impulsively.

Geet, "Ma'am my project has been selected! I have to go tomorrow for the final rounds"

Savitri smiled looking at Geet's joyous face and said, "Well Done Beta"

Geet realised what she did and pulled out of the hug and said, "Sorry Ma'am. In excitement I.."

Savitri patted her cheeks and said, "Hume bura nahi laga Geet. Bohut khushi huvi ke aapne hume apna samjh ke aapki khushi baati"

Geet had tears in her eyes hearing it but controlled herself and said, "Thank You Ma'am" and after chatting with her for few more minutes left for her room.
 

Khurana Constructions,
After all the candidates had left their projects the files were taken to the MD Mr Maan Singh Khurana's cabin where he personally reviewed each project. He liked 5 out of the 15 projects and called Adi and informed him about the files he had selected and let him know that he would like to personally interview the 5 candidates tomorrow.

After letting his PA know about his next day's plan he left the office and went home to spend some time with his Dadi whom he had been ignoring a bit due to office works.
 

Next Day,
Geet dressed in formals with a nice pressed shirt and trousers looking really smart. She again took Savitri's blessings and left for Khurana Constructions Office. After reaching they were told to be seated while each candidate was called individually for the final round. Each candidate seemed to take at least half an hour and by the time Geet entered she was a bit nervous. Before she entered she closed her eyes and sent a small prayer to Babaji and remembered her family and entered with a small smile.

Maan who had been looking through the project looked up when the next candidate entered and for a minute was mesmerised as he saw her enter. She looked really elegant and beautiful even in the formal attire and the small smile seemed to enhance her beauty. Maan immediately snapped out of his trance and told her to be seated.

He first asked a few questions about herself, her studies, internship etc. After that he gave her the project files they had all worked on and asked her to point out the positive aspects and flaws in each project.

Geet smiled and opened the file and studied it for a few minutes and looked up to see if he was ready and then started telling about the positive aspects. What really impressed Maan was that she never let the flaws seem to be flaws but turned them into areas which they could improve and work on. The most impressive thing was that she presented her project the last and pointed out her own flaws and areas of improvement. This showed that she wasn't arrogant or too proud that since it was her project it was perfect.

After the interview was over Maan asked her to wait for a few mins and after the final candidate was done the results were announced.

                                                             Next: Part 2


Edited by hinal_maaneet - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome part!

nice start

poor geet

looking forward to read more

cont soon

thnku 4 the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago

AWESOME UPDATE πŸ‘
poor geet have to suffer so much 
even her maasi betrayed her 
mrs sharma help her in her acc. in khurana trust where she met daadi ma 
maaneet's first meet 
maan totally impressed with her 
its yes for job no doubt on that πŸ˜‰
Edited by preetymaaneet - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
hi wonderful banner! Superb update! well written! Feeling 4 Geet! her maasi so is bad! Geet has to leave bt gets helpos frm a stranger! She is nw at KF! She meets SD! Geet applies 4 job at KC! She does well! Maan admires her! update soon! do pm! pls post this in GHSP thread! thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
asome start of the ff,loved it
waiting 4 nxt updates
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Posted: 7 years ago
I actually have forgotten the story of it
Well in that case I'll find more interested in it :v 

Liked the 1st update 
Geet became orphan coz of some circumstances 
I'm guessing there r more to come how she's became orphan.
N dadima also had some doubt seeing her

Now job interview done
Well obviously she'll get the job ;)

N yeah welcome back .. update soon n please do pm me :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey welcome back
Really nice beginning ...thanks for the pm
Looking fwd to this one
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Congos woman! You finally did it! Keep updating ;)