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T.Peru

@T.Peru

IF-Stunnerz

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

Nice updates

Mini insult Geet as she ruined project file

But Maan got angry on her

& said Geet is his wife she can doo what she wanted to do

Geet hug and kiss Maan

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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746657

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

Apart from the different concept

I love geets character in this story... The way she gives names to everyone... And her way of looking at things...

U have shaped her character so well that she has literally got me hooked to this story!!❤️

And maan on the other hand lives with tons of insecurities!!

He is good in his place but i just wish u could give a little more depth to his feelings and emotions too it would help us connect with him more😃

Now that's just my opinion... U can always ignore...😉😳

Dadi is good and MM too...😆

U know the USP of this one is the simplest fact that a small talk between the leads could end the story at any point but yet we expect for more😆😉

Do keep writing

Waiting for the next!

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Sindhu

@sree10

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

Loved the updates. Chudail is put in her place. Geet is Right.

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hira2010

@hira2010

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Kya bath hai ok
Who going to bash geet but I love geet
You know I remember the geet who filled over maan in the serial
You made it here too
Please let her be like this
It not harm to get what your
Maan is her only
Love maan shouting to that mm

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Nice parts.

Mini got earfull from Maan and later Geet too.

liked their cute moment together.

seems Mini is going to create problems.

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crazyfriends007

@crazyfriends007

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Hoo maan scolds mm...
Geet Liked maan take her side
Loved maaneet moments

Waiting

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

beautiful chapters update nest chapter soon pm me plzzz

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

Fabulous updates. I am liking this Geet very much. Geet spoiled file and wanted to say sorry to Maan. But before she could say anything MM came with spoiled file. Geet accepted her mistake. MM scolded her. Dadima and Maan both scolded MM. Maan scolded her badly and forced her to say sorry to Geet. MM is too high headed to speak like this to Geet.

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

amazing update...lets see how geet will teach MM...waiting eagerly :)

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

IF-Stunnerz

+ 12

Posted: 7 years ago

Awesme update
lovd it
dat mini deserve it
lovd maaneet moments

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