arsh ss: mein deewana Teri dhoon mein CS on pg 2

Posted: 7 years ago
Prologue

Place: In chennai
Their in a open area,a grand weeding is going on... The couple who is getting married is taking squared vows, which ties them together with each other... Those vows tells them how to stand for their better half in their bad times...  Those vows tells that, they are not with each other only in their good time but also in their bad time...  They will not share each other happiness but also their sorrow with each other...   They will stand by each other side in every situation...
 
    They  complete  their vows and again sit...  Priest told groom to tie  "magalsutar" ... He ties it in his wife neck... Who is looking down in her lap...
Then he fill her hair partial with "sindoor", when he is filling her partial, bride close his eyes and a lone tear come into her eyes... Some sindoor fell on her nose... 
Seeing this, a lady from hall said...
Lady:WAH!!!! Ladka ladki ko bahut pyaar krega... Dekho maang mein sindoor dalte samay kaise ladki ki nose pr sindoor gira,  es ka matlab dono humesha saath rahege or khush bhi...
Priest: vivah sampan hua...
Aap Sab ka aashirvad le lijiye...
Sab ka aashirvad le kr sab ghar aate hai or "bidaai" hoti hain... 
(Guys mein detail nahi doogi... Marriage ki rasam and riwaz)
So, bidaai me baad sab ladke me ghar mein rasme hoti hain...

In night time...
Ek decorated room mein... Room dekh kr lagta hain ki, room ko special day k liye decorate kiya gya hain... Bride bed pr baithi hoti hain, or uske pass San ladkiyaan usko tease kr rahi hoti hai, fer Sab chali jaati hain...
Kuch der mein room door click hota hai or ladka andar aata hain... Voh Nina much kahe washroom mein jaata hain, jaise room mein koi na ho... Yeah dekh kr ladki bed se niche aati hai or vahi khadi ho kr sochti hai... Ki ladka change kr ke room mein aata gain or bed set krne lagta hain, tab voh ladka uss ladki ko es tarah dekh kr notice krta hain or kehta hain ki...
Ladka: dekho es shaadi se ya mujse kuch bhi expect mat krna, yeh meine apni family k liye ki hain... Hum es room k bahar happy married couple ki tarah behave krege PR akele mein hamare bich kuch nahi hoga... Tum apni life mein joh bhi kro mujhe koi farak nahi partha, or na hi merit life mein tum interfer krogi or vaise bhi much dino mei mein  yaha she chala jaoga so Sab theek ho jaye ga ... Samji yaa samjao. ... Yeah keh kr voh bed pr sota hain... Na hi ladki ko kuch kehne deta hain or na hi khud kehta hain... Jaise us ke liye yeah shaadi mazak hop, koi bacho ka khel ...   Pr ladki uss k liye toh " INTEZAAR " hain ...  


Index
Prologue pg 1
CS on pg 2



Kaisa laga...
Boring hain... Pr ek thought aaya or socha ki likho... 
Ignore mistakes

Edited by shdiksha - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
nice start
starting mai hi shadi or intzar bhi
let see ye intzar kaise khatam hoga
n arsh ki life kya mod legi
update soon
thanks for pm
Posted: 7 years ago
nice start dear
continue soon
n thanks 4 pm
Posted: 7 years ago
nice concept
do continue soon
Posted: 7 years ago
Nice starting 
Thanks for PM

Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by sammy4u


nice concept
do continue soon
Thanku
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by T.Peru


Nice starting 
Thanks for PM

Thanku
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by sur1911


nice start
starting mai hi shadi or intzar bhi
let see ye intzar kaise khatam hoga
n arsh ki life kya mod legi
update soon
thanks for pm
Thanku...
Nd ,, I have changed the story title name...
Hopefully,, will update this weekend...
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by urvi-taarey


nic start
Thanku...
Posted: 7 years ago
Nice start...pls cont soon.

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