Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG FF - JAAL VERY IMPORTANT NOTE - Pg 32 - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow lovely omg scary pro..so geet was struck in lion's den omg te way she try to escap but before she does khuranas came..omg..i love te pro

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Posted: 7 years ago
Congrats for new ff.
 Fabulous prologue.
Waiting for update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
ok you seriously had me scared here!!  

Geet's fear is so real!  And from the sounds of it, she is stuck in a very bad situation - but what is the situation?  the reality? is Maan really evil?? :(  
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Posted: 7 years ago
Congrats...

Prologue
Interesting...
Geet is married to Maan but he betrayed her...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Congrats On New Story

Prologue is so Intriguing and Captivating
it seems the Khurana's
 are not very kind or good people Geet married to Maan but she has a horrible life with him it seems her marriage benefited him in some way
waiting for this to unfold
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Posted: 7 years ago
Emotional yaar... No need to even start story. Just the lines before the start that is ur introduction and the poster for the story itself told a Lott... U are one amazing writer dear. Will wait for allured and also jaal...
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Posted: 7 years ago



very very interesting...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks so much for your lovely comments
It really means a lot to me!!!

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Posted: 7 years ago
she is entrapped into the maze of lies and deceits around her.
is it for real or just her perception.

even if it is real, hope he intelligently spins the web around her and she even more intelligently finds a way out.. and amidst all this, hope they still succeed to build a world of love.

interesting prologue..waiting for the start.

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Posted: 7 years ago
interesting.. maan is a villain destroying geets life...