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Indradhanush 2 "Itta Sa"

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Posted: 7 years ago
"Itta Sa"
Her expression indicated she was going to cry?

"We are talking about a split or merger between commercial and  political campaigns" he said slowly

"Siraf do hafte ka time off ja rahi hai main" she argued

That Hindi aroused him as much as her body did

"Suvechha" he said softly trying to reel in his carnal feeling

The way he said it could be seen in her gaze

She sensed how he said it and quickly lowered her gaze hiding her emotion

"Story board dekhna hai Neel?" she asked politely

She spread out her wares
He asked her a million question, she didnt sit down just took the Qs down on her ipad

He noticed her wrist was singed

She quickly pulled her hand away "I was making fish in the front burner, I had rice on the back" she explained sincerely

"Does it hurt?" he asked

"Abhi to nahi" she said quietly

"Can you go for less than two weeks?" he asked

Her heart did a dizzying spin making her nauseated

"Itna door hai Delhi se... ek hafte mein kya hoyega?" she asked

"U can go back after the reorg?" he offered

She didnt look up at him
She didnt want to, she just HOPED there was a sparkle of joy when she agreed

"Barobar" she nodded

"Will u change your ticket?" he asked, with disbelief, not sure it was actually so easy

"Summer end se pehle apne ko maloom chalega?" she asked

A sly thot occured to him as he wished the reorg went on for years and she couldnt go

"Wo kya hai na... waapas book karne ka hai" she said

"U shud bill the company for late or change fee" he ordered

"Woh koi baat nai" she nodded

Their gaze locked

"When are you leaving?" he asked

School khatam hoyega to" "When we book tickets school khatam nai hoyega" she giggled like a child
He was overjoyed

He leaned back

"Chhote me, Baba ticket laate the  Kolhapur ke  roj school se aake main unko dekhti hai" she said with child like enthusiasm

"Does Aadhya know?" he asked

"Abhi usko maloom nai... Mrs Singh ko kehna hoyega mere ko" she made a face

"They wont let you leave?" He wanted to have this mundane conversation with her

She sat down trying to explain

"Unka policy book... devaaa... 100 pages" she laughed again

"She will be so excited" he said
"Naiii... waha koi hai nai... full bore... garmi... haan bas shaam ko village fair rehta hai na?" she asked

He nodded mesmerized 

"Udhar jaane ka" she smiled

"That shud be fun?" he asked

"Bas itta" she showed a few phalanges marking with her pink nail colored thumb

"I just sat down only" she said smiling wide, getting up grinning

And just left...

Gurpreet  put his secret unspoken desire into action without his asking or telling

She called Suvechha and asked her to come for dinner On Sat evening, 

"pehle yaha aane ka na? for pao bhaji"

"Bulaya maine pehle hai... is liye yaha aa jao yaar" she begged

"Main kya laayegi?"

"Bus apni beti ko laayegi." Gurpreet ordered

She wore a orange Chanderi cotton saree with a simple orange sleeveless blouse, pinning the saree like a teacher

"Aadhya mee teacher" she said picking up her ruler

"Pretty teacher" Aadhya hugged her

She asked Tai if she wanted to go
Tai made a face and said it was her "upvaas"

"Just give me money" she said

"I give you money for cell phone every month" Suvi argued

"And u starve me half the month as u dress up to go to your man's house" Tai reminded

"This money is tainted... I probably shudnt give you" Suvi said and walked out

"Tai is angry?" Aadhya asked fearfully

"tai is Tai" Suvi explained

They arrived at 8 ish with mangoes and leechis and some cake

Gurpreet texted her the address and she discovered the house was NEXT DOOR

Her heart rate sped like a NASCAR vehicle on the speedway

But Preet had promised  "Bas Punjabis aur Punjabi khana"

That was ofcourse a lie

Not the last part, but the first part
Neel opened the front door to the massive bungalow

"Waapis ek aur ghar mein move ho gaye?" she squeaked

He didnt let her in... just stood in the way

"Hamey laga aap bina bataye waha daava bolti rehti hai to hamey kahin aur chaley jaana chahiye" he said grimly

Watched with satisfaction as heat rose all over her face

"Well u  did not move far enough" she mocked
They basically stood rubbing on each other unintentionally


"Aage se batakar aa yegi main?" she whispered (NOW CAN U LET ME IN? tone)

"Wrong answer" he said softly

"Aage se kabhi nahi aayegi?" she asked her face somber

He just looked, his eyes furious

"Neel"

"Can u come every Friday?" he asked

Just when she bloomed like a rose Aadhya pushed the door and let herself in
Gagan walked up to the door too

"Neel kisi ko Kuch pakka bech raha hoga. these marketers I tell u" he opened the door to greet her

He joked that the people that knocked to sell something, usually got sold something by Neel


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Posted: 7 years ago


CURRENT THREAD

56 -Itta Sa (page no 1 )

57-Meetings Of The Mothers (page no - 5)

58-Shatranj Ke Khilari (page no- 9)




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84-Curiosity and Coughing  (page no 92)
















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Edited by sonalgupta2004 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Congrats on Thread 2 for ID!!!!!πŸ₯³
Yaaay--lovely plan Gurpreet!!!!  πŸ‘

Lovely update Nisha--thank you!!! 

We were all waiting with baited breath as to what will happen next!!! 

Neel resolved the 2 week situation-now what next??  I cannot wait!!!!

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Posted: 7 years ago
The creative leap of crazy gargantuan proportions that you took is creatively paying off for you tdy. Well, IMO there wasn't any need for reiteration/ reinforcement, but if you needed one... then you have it on record now with new thread .
Congratulations. To many more threads of creative satisfaction.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Congrats Nisha...
So the journey begins for many many more to come

πŸ‘

Gurpreet is a darling!!!
Very rare to find such friends...
Lovely Nisha
Waiting for next as usual..
😊 Edited by sonalgupta2004 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Congos, thread 2. Lekin yeh itti se nahi bahut is khushi hai. Although we hope that for both Neel and Suvi these itti itti ki khushiyan will bloom into full blown happiness. 

Itti si hansi
Itti si khushi
Itna sa tukda chand ka
Khwaabon ke, tinkon se
Chal banaaye aashiyan

Dabe dabe paaon se
Aaye haule haule zindagi
Honthon pe ungli chadha ke
Hum taale laga ke chal 
Gumsum tarane chupke chupke gaaye
Aadhi aadhi baat le
Aaja dil ki yeh zameen
Thoda sa tera sa hoga
Thoda mera bhi hoga apna yeh aashiyan


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Posted: 7 years ago
Bhakwas while doing upvas is going to send Tai on vanvas, me thinks πŸ˜†

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Posted: 7 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Errantnomad

Bhakwas while doing upvas is going to send Tai on vanvas, me thinks πŸ˜†


Too funny Kalpana🀣
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Posted: 7 years ago
"Neel kisi ko Kuch pakka bech raha hoga. these marketers I tell u" he opened the door to greet her
He joked that the people that knocked to sell something, usually got sold something by Neel"

Fact of the matter is Neel does negotiate well. Let's see if he clinches the deal with this one
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Posted: 7 years ago
Woohoo it's ID 2! Nisha aur is Kahani ke mere sah- Pathako ko dher sari badhayian.!!
😊 again a cliff hanger? 😭 author sahiba ye cliff hanger aap abhi kuch ghanto main clear Karenge ya fir hum sabko pure din tadpane ka Iraada hai aapka πŸ˜‰ Pushpa oops Nisha I hate cliff hangers πŸ˜†Edited by Neha07 - 7 years ago