Mythological Masti

Atkheliyaan - A Krishna-Bhama and Draupadi SS(Update Pg 12)

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Hey all!
This is Mahishee aka Mahi and I am very much new to writing Mythology. Presenting an SS full of Fun,Masti and Naughtiness... Hope you all enjoy it!
This is written by me and Srutha😃

Thank you DEAR SRUTHA🤗❤️
You are an amazing writer and I am very lucky to write this with you, in collaboration. Hope we have a blast doing this!



                             Atkheliyaan -- The Naughty Times


                             
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Chapter One

Sakhi!!!", called out Madhav as he strolled in the Garden at Indraprastha.

Pandavas had recently turned a barren piece of land into their most beautiful and extraordinary kingdom of Indraprastha. Indraprastha- Symbolising seven prosperities, namely- Happiness, Justice, Wealth, Health, Peace, Wisdom and Truth had become the coveted state in whole of Aryavarta. People from near and far longed to visit it. It was covered with lush green gardens, beautiful enormous fountains... Amidst chirping of birds and flutter of butterflies, the Palace Of Indraprastha stood magnificently, surrounded by Seven Gardens.

Krishna was looking for his Sakhi, Maharani Draupadi. It had become his routine ever since his stay here, with Pandavas. These two friends would stroll in these Gardens, talking of anything and everything. But today, He couldn't find her.

" Where are you Panchali?!", he cried, famished in the sun. He had taken a whole round of the Palace and also peeked into the Gardens. But she was no where.

Tired and exhausted, Krishna sat down on a bench, in the cool shade. With soft breeze blowing, he felt relaxed. But soon, the sweet, melting, and buttery smell of Maakhan tingled his senses.

"Ah! Makkhan!", he sprang up at once. Tiredness long gone, he looked around for his delicacy.

A few steps here and there, he found little Abhimanyu hiding behind a pillar and licking his fingers immersed in a pot full of Butter.

Krishna tip toed to him from behind, and grasped his small ears and lifted him up.
" Caught you!", he turned his face to Him.

"Aaahh, Mama Shree, it's hurting!", he cried.
" Butter, huh? Priya Bhaanje!", Krishna naughtily taunted him.
Abhimanyu's eyes glistened at once. "Ummm", he noisily kicked his fingers.

" Like Mama, Like Bhanja", came Subhadra, giggling.
"Bhrata Shree, I wonder if it's you incarnated as Abhimanyu. Look at him!", she laughed.
Butter drooped from the mouth of Abhimanyu and he was trying to lick it through his tongue.

" Where's Draupadi?", Krishna asked Subhadra, after sometime.
"Badi Maa is in her Room, seems she is a little sad today", said Abhimanyu. He was a little spy, looking out for news from here and there.

Naughtiness sparkled in Madhav's eyes. Masti Time!
Even his Mor Pankha tickled on head, wanting to do some mischief.

He silently entered her Room. Panchali was sitting, with her legs folded, on the floor, with her hand dipped in the little pool at the centre of her room. She looked beautiful that way... The reflection of sun rays from the pool enlightened the room,creating rippples on the ceiling. But within this illuminated atmosphere, sat a sad Panchali.
Krishna, at once forgot his mischief. Something was different today.

He softly went and sat beside her.
Panchali still had her eyes grounded, though she knew His presence.

" Sakhi?", he asked.
"Yes Madhav", she said softly.
" You didn't come for the walk", He complained.
"I didn't feel like"
"Okay, so how about cooking something for Parth and me?"
"No, I don't feel like"
"Panchaali!! What's wrong dear?"
"I don't know Madhav, but I don't feel like doing anything."
"I think you need a change", he said after some thought.
"And I just know the right place to take you"

He winked to himself as a soft, naughty smile came on his lips.




Far Away, In Other Land
"Bhama!!!", shrieked Rukmini. 
" Stop it at once, will you? Come here!"

"Ohho Didi! I...munch... Am...grumb..."

"Talk later now before you get...", said Rukmini but...

"Cough!! Cough!! Cough!!", went Satya. Yet again, she had choked her throat with those unripe mangoes. 
" Look at you Bhama! Today you climbed trees for the mangoes, didn't you?", scolded Rukmini.

"I am sorry Didi, Kshama, Kshama!", screeched Bhama. " Now please let go of my ear Didi"
Rukmini couldn't help but laugh at her antics. How adorable she was!






Love,
Srutha and Mahi❤️
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Chapter One - Pg 1

Chapter Two - Pg 3

Chapter Three - Pg 9
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Mahii 🤗❤️ You are an amazing writer :)
I love your style of writing.
Madhav-Panchali And my little Abhi ❤️ Like Uncle, like nephew, haina? 😉😉
I don't know if I will be able to write as well as you, and I don't know how I will match up to you 😳
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Loved it , Awesome
Well done both of you


Specially the abhimanyu and makhan part was too good , how with the smell of butter , krishna followed it to its origin😆
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Fantastic  chapter Srutha and Mahishee😃
Loved Abhimanyu and Krishna conversation❤️
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Hi Srutha and Mahi ! Both of you are good writers and story by you two means we can look forward for a beautiful journey .
Aww the best trio 🤗  I love you both for this . You know I have heard and read a lot that Krishna-Satyambha-Parth-Krishnaa were god friends but never read on them . 
And the three trio of the group would be a treat to read .
Loved the start with Krishna and Draupadi 's relation . You highlighted it very well . Btw I loved your description of Indraprasth . Though short but rather sweet . 
And the Makhan wala part . Aww Kanha 
The Krishna and Krishnaa conversation was written very well . 
And Krishna is taking his friend somewhere . I can guess where 😉 . 
The Satya and Rukmani relation was rather a surprise . A something like two sister relation. I liked it very much . The way Rukmani was acting like an elder sister and Satya the young mischievous one . 😳 I love Satya so much . 
Please update soon . Looking forward for a journey filled with fun .
Love 
Sam 
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Wow, this is truly good one. btw What is the connection between Krishna taking Draupadi to a place where she will be cheered up and Bhama climbing the mango tree to pick raw mangoes? Did these friends wandered to the mango groove? Is Panchali expecting first one of her 5 sons?
 
But really loved the mother figure rukmini & naughty Bhama.
 
Shrutha write your part soon. 😊
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@Srutha & @Mahi: Beautifully written.
I liked Krish and Subhadra part.
An unique relation portrayal of Krish-draupadi. 👏
Waiting to know about her sorrow.

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Srutha and mahi, will unres in sometime. And kal wala ts bhi srutha. 😉
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Wow, this is truly good one. btw What is the connection between Krishna taking Draupadi to a place where she will be cheered up and Bhama climbing the mango tree to pick raw mangoes? Did these friends wandered to the mango groove? Is Panchali expecting first one of her 5 sons?

 
But really loved the mother figure rukmini & naughty Bhama.
 
Shrutha write your part soon. 😊


It's just our idea. This is a bonding story, after all. Everyone knows of the loving relation of Krishna-Bhama and Draupadi. So, yeah :)
What makes you think Panchali is expecting?

I am writing it now :P