Twinj FF || YeH MeRi DeeWaNaGee !!! part 4 page 15 - Page 3

Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by crazyfan9_sanju


  awesome teaser sonal...continue soonπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Thanks Sanju..πŸ˜‰
Posted: 8 years ago
This is amazing start Sonal. Loved it <3
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by Sherni_Jerry


This is amazing start Sonal. Loved it <3

Thanks JERRY. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
Posted: 8 years ago
Part 1 

                 " Helloo Control Room.. , we need more back up over here, They r More thn wat we have predicted .. Send Kunj Sarna.  Asap...", said Aman who ws incharge of this raid.. They wer raiding a area near  Lokhandawala... Some Most wanted notoruois goons wer hiding... and according to information recieved thy wer.suppose to b 4...but to their disappointment thr wer 10 and with Guns... And Aman and this team wer finding it difficult to defeat thm.. With limited Ammunition and force... Aman had to call Kunj coz he can handle this very well... 
                   Siren Roarred,, !!! ..as  the jeep arrived in the location...with 5 sub inspectors and 3 havaldarrs a Man sparkling in Aviators, white shirt with sleeves folded upto the elbow, Shirt Prefectly tucked into  his jeans...tracing his well chiseled abbs..and a Badge proudly attached to his belt...walked towards Aman.. Inspector Kunj Sarna, IPS, Encounter Specialist, trained in Dehradun... A Man In his Twenties but the Work Experience of a man in Fifties.. With His Braveness and Strong will power.. He had handled most nasty cases.. Earning hell lot of  accolades frm the seniors... He is man of Terms.. Doesn't give shit,..neither take shit frm anyone...  He prefer dressing casually on duty since he doesn't like flaunting his stars on his shoulders.. Seniors allowed this condition only because his presence ws.very important to thm... 
                  Aman and Kunj salute each other..." Kunj, there are 10 of thm inside.. According to the movements recorded...we hav a rough idea of wer exactly thy r hiding in this building.. They r only having pistols...and no high end guns like AK47 or snipper..."  Showing the Sketch to Kunj ", Wat do u think Kunj ", asked Aman... Kunj took the sketch and Marked some crosses on he sheet.. " Aman, i will go frm West side of the building and U go frm East side ... According to me 5 are on 6th floor and 5 on 3rd... Is the Building evacuated..?  We need to Attack... ", Kunj said... " Yes, it is.." Added Aman... " Lets get moving.. ", Kunj said and Loaded his Gun...  Thy stormed into to building making their way silently upwards... Aman and team rached.3rd floor and.Kunj.with his team reached 6th... " Lets attack.. ", Kunj ordered on the walkie... Soon the building was filled with loud sounds of Gunshots... 
                   Kunj ws ferociously taking down the.goons... One of the 4 on 6th floor managed to run... Kunj ran behind him... Bullets in both of their pistols wer over... The goon ran outside the building in.full speed... And Kunj Chasing him with the same speed.. The Goon entered.the Bar to hide himself frm Kunj..but Kunj saw him entering the bar... He Ws Chasing him in the crowd..  whn he dashed with a Grl running in opposite direction and the bundle of 100 rupee Notes which she ws holding  flew in the air falling down like a shower of money... She immediately droped down frantically collecting those... Kunj looked at her and for a second he ws zoned out... She collected the money and without looking at him stromed out of the bar..  Kunj looked her walking away whn he noticed her anklet leave her feet and swung behind on the carpet... He immediately went and placed it in his pocket... He had no idea y he did tht in such a tense situation... He ws snapped back whn.Aman called him.. " Hey bro, good Chase... We caught tht bas***d.. ", Aman said placing his hand on Kunj shoulder... .. Kunj brushed his stubbles with his finger looking at the Bar Gate.. " Lets get him Talking... ", Kunj said.. 
                      " Twinkle, did u manged the money to deposit. ", Jyoti Tai asked. ..  Twinkle nodded her head in yes..  " Okay now go and deposit the money on counter.. I'll wait outside ", Jyoti tai Said and sat on the porch outside the hospital... At the counter with shivering hands she handed the money to the accountant... " This is the first installment ",.Twinkle said with cold voice... The Accountant looked up and nodded her head in Ok...  " Come on Saturday, with 2nd installment ", the accountant said... Twinkle's eyes widened.. " Madam, hw will i manage 10k in 4 days.. ? Please giv me more tym.. ",she pleaded... " No, sorry rules are rules ..Go now ", accountant handed her the receipt... Twinkle swollowed the lump of her throat... She remembered wat happened at the Bar today... 
                        " Yo Baby... Wat voice u hav Baby... Come to me i'll make u A Star..  ", A drunkard said to Twinkle whn she ws Singing on the stage... Twinkle ws use to this bullshit Commets frm the customers of the bar.., but no one ws allowed to come on stage and go near her.. The owner had taken all the precautions, but this drunkard managed to come on stage and touch her waist... And Twinkle had slapped him hard on his face breaking few teeth... The owner threw the coustomer out.. But Twinkle asked her boss tht she wants to quit this job... Shabbir Patel owner of the Bar...wss a considerate man..for him Twinkle ws like his own daughter.. But he ws also a Hand to mouth man..with lots of depth on himself... . Willing to help this grl but himself cudn't get over his problems..  He agreed but ws.disappointed...coz Twinkle had such beautiful voice to gather customers... " Twinkle, U can go ..but Whenever u feel tht u require me or my assistance.. Dnt hesitate ", he kept his hand on her head,  blessing her..and handed the bundle of 10000 rs. ... 
                          " Jyoti Tai.. They asked fr the 2nd installment in 4 days ... Frm wer i'll get the money ", she cried crashing into Jyoti Tai's arms... " Dnt worry My Grl,. God is der ..He is watching...He'll help..Dnt worry ", Jyoti Tai said cearsing her hair... " Come we'll go home ", she said and stopped the passing by auto... Twinkle stys in a Datta Chawl in Sion...there r three , Two storay buildings attach to one another... And a Open play ground in the middle.. The rooms are Attached to one another and separated only by one wall... . The passage outside the rooms ws common fr evryone..  Twinkle stays on 2nd .floor.. On the left side of her room stys Jyoti Tai and  her little 5 year old Grand daughter... The room on right side ws empty... Twinkle has a very loving relation with everyone..since she is living here past 3 years..  ... She went into her room after thanking Jyoti tai fr coming with her... Her room ws small ..A living room and a Kitchen... " Frm wer will i Get the money, hw will i pay the 2nd installment ", she said sitting down holding her head.. Jus thn she remembered and hastily went to the cupboard.. ANd took out the gold chain... of her Mother ..her last Momento she had... But this ws the only thing which will help her at this dire hour... She wore the chain in her neck to feel the presence of het mom till she sell it fr money... 




Stay.Tuned to unveil hw these souls cross paths with each other... ..
Posted: 8 years ago
Sonal what a piece.. update d next part soonish.. i cant wait.. hats off girl.. long way to go.. dentist ji.. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘
Posted: 8 years ago
sonal...amazing start... usually things abt cops attract me...but...yaar...the way u described kunj...*sigh!!*...loved it...please continue soon..πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 8 years ago
Hw could I missed it..
Sry for peeping in late buddy..
But wait did I hear IPS Officer kunj sarna..
Wowiee.. Man in mission..
Loved the start..

The whole shooting and chasing part made me remember just one thing.. Huddh huddh dabbang dabbang.. Lol..

I imagined salman's body with plastered kunj's face..lol..

Do continue soon.. M already waiting..
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by fangirl1012


So good
Thanks dear😳
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by .FlightOfEagle.


Amazing sona!
Thanks Hridey😳
Posted: 8 years ago
This is intriguing. Please continue soon  :)

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