I typed out a really long post and my net crashed and I lost it all. Sigh. I hope I capture all my feelings that I had written before.
I really look up to the way you write. The way you seem to find exactly the write words to express such complex emotions is really beautiful. All the feelings so eloquently described. That effortless flow, I guess.
I loved the descriptions in the beginning. And at first, I didn't really realise I was reading fanfiction because I rarely come across any that are so laden with emotions as yours. You play with the words, the feelings. They really touch me.
Anjali was without a doubt, a strong character. Her initial denial of Shyam's betrayal was not a sign of her weakness. Anyone who loves someone the way she loved her husband would have gone through the same, I think. But when she did accept the truth... You have described that situations and her feelings so wonderfully there.
And your two strangers really warmed my heart. So strange, that where some people are so heartless, so ruthless. Some can be so kind.
Thank you so very much for the PM. I really enjoyed this a lot. I hope I get to read more of your writing very soon. :)
Oh, and do you have a blog? Or ever thought of making one? The things you write really do deserve a blog, you know. ;)
Edited by PhoenixKhushi - 8 years ago