That was terribly beautiful and almost in equal measures, sad. Like I said before, friendship and love are often confused and things don't always go the way we want them to. But the way you have written this, especially the ending, there's such simplicity and also a tiny glimpse of hope. Hope for strengthening their friendship once again, gaining back the normalcy between them, when they were just that - inseparable. My two favourite characters front he story would be Susie & the trolley at the end. They both had such wonderful roles to play in their story. Such symbolism, such significance.
And like always, I could imagine the car, the winding roads, the airport, the embrace - your writing has always been able to do that. The story really struck a chord. Thanks for this beautiful story! :)Edited by mistyrains - 5 years ago