The Inseparables | ArHi OS

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Posted: 5 years ago


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Posted: 5 years ago
*sigh*
That was terribly beautiful and almost in equal measures, sad. Like I said before, friendship and love are often confused and things don't always go the way we want them to. But the way you have written this, especially the ending, there's such simplicity and also a tiny glimpse of hope. Hope for strengthening their friendship once again, gaining back the normalcy between them, when they were just that - inseparable. My two favourite characters front he story would be Susie & the trolley at the end. They both had such wonderful roles to play in their story. Such symbolism, such significance.
And like always, I could imagine the car, the winding roads, the airport, the embrace - your writing has always been able to do that. The story really struck a chord. Thanks for this beautiful story! :)
Edited by mistyrains - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Oh my !
But where is heart-wrenchingly-awesome button.

Loved it !


Posted: 5 years ago
Ruladiya tune yaar.. Loved it..
Posted: 5 years ago
So emotional friendship of true love...story... ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome  OS

Love
AnnaSmile
Posted: 5 years ago
An absolutely brilliant piece !
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Posted: 5 years ago
Okay, I'll confess, I was waiting for that moment when Arnav would stop her, realize that he reciprocates her feelings in equal and just bloody stop her and that's that. A happy ending. But it was never to be and as saddening as it was, this was the best end this OS could have.

Unrequited, sigh, it hurts. But inseparables, oh yes. This is the first ever story I have read on ArHi where the writer has allowed them to be just that. Inseparable friends. And it was beautiful. Clap
Edited by Lumos_Solem - 5 years ago

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