fan fiction (my version)

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Posted: 2005-06-20T12:02:47Z

Anywayz, well i like kareena kareena but you have to admit it is kinda dragging. I decided to write my own version and in here i will make kareena and prem love each other becuase it would be awesome.

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Prem was walking in the store when  someone slammed into him from the side.

Prem: sorry atucally that was my fault.

Karu (kareena): atucally I wasn't watching i am sorry.

Prem couldn't say anything more, he was dazzled by her beauty the way she smiled melted him.

Kareena: hi my name is kareena and i am from chandigarh. Atucally i am looking for a job.

Prem still staring

Kareena: hello? waving her hand in front of his face.

Prem: well, don't worry you will find a job.

KAreena: thnx well, i gotta go my friend is calling me excuse me.

Prem couldn't say anything, so he nodded. This was love at first sight. When kareena tryed to go they hit each other again.

KAreena (smiling): sorry again.

Prem: it's ok.

Kareena left and prem kept looking at her. When finally he reliezed his senses he noticed a card on the ground, it must have fallen from kareenas purse.

Prem: Kareena , you dropped....

Kareena was too far ahead to hear him.

Prem thinking: when will i see her again theres something about her that makes me want to know her. makes me want to talk to her, but atleast i can use this card as an excuse to talk to her yep awesome.

Kareena in the car: hey did you see my card, i think dropped it in the  store priya. it's really important. Then she sees prem, she gets out of the car and again they run into each other but this time they topple down and prem on the ground and kareena on top of him smiling with dimple.

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Posted: 2005-06-20T12:07:15Z

wow....its so cool....and very romantic.

Anjali

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Posted: 2005-06-20T12:31:54Z
Ejaz4eva thats an interesting effort.

**PD**
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Posted: 2005-06-20T12:32:00Z
wow its too good plz continue i would love to read the next partClap
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Posted: 2005-06-20T15:15:04Z
Wow! impresive! tht wud in the begginin of the show!Smile
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Posted: 2005-06-20T15:25:36Z

i'll continue

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last episode: Kareena in the car: hey did you see my card, i think dropped it in the  store priya. it's really important. Then she sees prem, she gets out of the car and again they run into each other but this time they topple down and prem on the ground and kareena on top of him smiling with dimple.

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Kareena gets up from top of prem.

Kareena:sorry again, it is wierd how we keep hitting into each other don't you think so too?

Prem: yes, i have to admit it is.

Kareena: did you find my card. Atucally it is very important.

Prem hands her, the card: good thing i found it then because i got a chance to talk to you.

Kareena (blushing): atucally the card, has the company which i am gonna apply to.

prem looks at the card, and notices that it was a radio curry card. How could he have missed it. Well, should he tell her he owns radio curry? i guess not yet, let it be a suprise to kareena.

Prem: well can i have your phone #?

Kareena: well, i don't know.

Prem: wow, protective and outgoing, i like that in a girl.

Kareena (blushing awwww): thanx, well i'll cu later maybe.

Prem: You will defentily.

Kareena:what, how do you know?

Prem: oh i meant we will cause i have a feeling we will.

KAreena smiles and gets in the cars and they drive away. Prem stands there smiling to himself, he knew she will get the job. Suddenly he remebers he had to get to radio curry for a meeting at 4:00. Just then he looked at his watch , it was 3:59 ALREADY. Prem got in the car and drove towards the building.

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Edited by Ejaz4eva - 2005-06-20T15:26:31Z
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Posted: 2005-06-20T19:19:46Z
well can you tellz me wht u think. yep awesome.
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Posted: 2005-06-20T20:38:56Z
that was chooooooooo chweet!
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