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Posted: 7 years ago
Kalpana, I agree he isn't looking for gratification.
But to suvi he exactly made it feel like he was only interested in gratification.
Edited by PriteeMisra - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
We are all creatures of habit. Don't like to change things too much . You experience a loss that knocks your world. But what defines a man is not the hit, but what he does of the loss
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

Kalpana, I agree he isn't looking for gratification.
But to suvi he exactly make it feel like he was only interested in gratification.



Yes pritee, because he was pig headed to show only that outlook.
But what he is not acknowledging is his internal metamorphosis after his interaction with Suv.
So it's only going to come out so wrong in front of Suv.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Airport par hoon flying to SFO, just found wifi, pehla kaam ID update checkmkarna  and yayyy! There was one. I believe it's going to be a marathon night, I will be travelling but be rest assured, will check for an update at any available hot spot or wifi...cellular data band hai across the border they charge like crazy.
Neel is turning out to be quite the guy. Nupur ka Najaf se Suvi was naukar bane mein samajh lagega but ban jaayegi,mhe can't get out of his head! Super. 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Over & Begin

Ofcourse there was no meeting up during the weekend
Aadhya begged her a 100 times, she called that other lil girl Kanika's Mom

She didnt have her number, so she had to call the play school

The play school owners were a focused money minded couple that would stay up 365 days a year if they could

What began as a one location enterprise was now n three locations in Trans Yamuna
The husband answered and he tok exactly 17 minutes to share Kanika's mother's phone number

Suvi had written it down some place the night she went looking for her dabbas at Neel's and forgotten completely

She endured the man Narender Singh's "bakwas" as Mumbaiyas said for 17 minutes and got the number

"Aap yaha aa jao, hamare location se sirf paach minat hai, main chhod deta hoon aapko" he said boldly

She refused and called Kanika's Mom and set up a play date at her house, Kanika and Aadhya played quietly in the AC bedroom
It was too hot to go any where or do anything

She was in no mood to either she sat on the chair in the far corner of the bedroom and dozed all Sunday afternoon

Evening ish she took the girls and got them mehandi at the nearby beauty parlor on their left hand and she got mehandi on both hers

Bought the girls burger, while  she ate chowmein since she had mehandi

She had made aloo curry and rice for Tai
She ordered chow mein, in a moment of weakness and took for Tai

Dropped the girl off and returned at around 9:30

The weather was considerably tolerable


Tai sat watching TV

Aadhya ran to her to show her her mehandi  "Aai got in both hands" she gushed

Suvi's was half way up her arm, a few inches down from her elbow

"I am happy you got it doll, why did your mother get one, for her everything is over no?" Tai asked softly


Suvi picked up the chow mein she had placed on a plate, filled up a bowl and set in the frig

And cursed herself for not being able to take a shower on  such a hot night

Did anyway around 11:30 unmindful of the mehandi

And went to bed at midnight... staring out the window at the street lights down below
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Instabreakfast was again visiting with no breakfast this time, when she went to get her coffee
She wore a white chikan suit and a orange gurjari dupatta
Her two friends loved her mehandi

Thanks to new age chemicals and additives it had turned crimson

She fille dup her coffee the sales guy from Insta waited for his coffee

"Like the story board" he said

"Its too preliminary... family theme gets everyone sentimental" Suvi chuckled cynically

He cudnt get coffee to come out

Suvi smacked the machine, as Neel walked in

He noticed her mehandi just when the Insta guy did

"Congrats" Insta guy said

"Kyon?" she asked, as the coffee machine sputtered and came back to life

"Are u engaged?" he asked

"arey nahi, meri paas 5 saal ki beti hai" "Why shud henna always mean wedding?" she asked miffed

"Paas?" he chuckled, nitpicking on her Hindi

"I dont speak Hindi, I am a Maharashtrian" she said offended

Neel felt smug... he had mocked her multiple times, and she had never once looked hurt
So she liked it?


"Sorry, yaha aisi baat nahi karte na Dilli mein" Insta said

"I took my daughter and her friend to get some on her hand, I got on both of mine" she said

"Hello Neel" she said smiling politely, trying not to be uncomfortable

"Suvechha" he said blandly, and watched the slow color rise up her face

He hoped she was thinking about how he tormented her to say his name and how he said hers like that when he kissed her

"Aaj hai inka final?" she asked, making polite conversation

"Inka final to tab hoga jab yeh chahenge" he said looking at the Insta guy

"Boss ur Hindi is to die for" the guy gushed

"thanks" he said carelessly

Suvi squirmed at the statement and looked away

"U signed not one but all three copies, u had to leave the pink insert alone"
Payal cooed handing him a pen that was in her mouth

Suvi couldnt watch it she left for her desk

"Whats the occasion for the henna?" Neel asked her in his deep voice, when they sat around for a meeting
"Shaadi mein gaya hoyega rey yeh" Gomez spoke over confidently

She shook her head

"Time pass" she said like a mumbaiya quickly hiding her hands from his view, taking them under the table

The other men around the desk noticing that rapid concealment
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: taramira

Airport par hoon flying to SFO, just found wifi, pehla kaam ID update checkmkarna and yayyy! There was one. I believe it's going to be a marathon night, I will be travelling but be rest assured, will check for an update at any available hot spot or wifi...cellular data band hai across the border they charge like crazy.

Neel is turning out to be quite the guy. Nupur ka Najaf se Suvi was naukar bane mein samajh lagega but ban jaayegi,mhe can't get out of his head! Super.




There's no redemption even for us... We are goners big time.
Push things out of the way and get to the wifi zone 😆 .

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Posted: 7 years ago
Ladies ... Marathon it is... Don't miss the laps.. Second lap already.
Thank you very much Nisha. This is just amazing , that you turn out updates at the snap of a hand... Clap and extend ... It miraculously gets gifted in your hand
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Posted: 7 years ago
Common Neel.
Maan le boss. its nt merely about your testosterones. 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: Errantnomad

Ladies ... Marathon it is... Don't miss the laps.. Second lap already.
Thank you very much Nisha. This is just amazing , that you turn out updates at the snap of a hand... Clap and extend ... It miraculously gets gifted in your hand


Very true.
You are amazing Nisha. 
Thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Over & Begin...
So is it the beginning?