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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

Should Neel discuss suvi with his friends?
They just want to know if got laid and not interested in him having a companion
If Neel tells about suvi to such friends won't these guys assume that she goes around with unknown men.
Won't they talk about her like Gomez does?
Is it right for any man to do anything like that ?


Arey his friends are nikamma, they will say zyada senti hone ka nahi, just score KARNE ka...you know boy talk. Women will mull over everything, analyze it to death  till th wise becomes completely something else - result - super duper confusion back to sqUre one. 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Love the wife

"Kya matlab?" he asked stunned
The look on his face seemed like Nupur had cheated on him

"Gomez ko main Mumbai se jaanti hai" she whispered

"And?" he coaxed

"Neel I dont want marriage I dont want an affair... I dont want to make out" she whispered hoarsely, she hoped she sounded more convincing than she felt

"Gomez?" he repeated angrily

"I know he is very good at his job... but woh bakwas bahut karta hai" she said matter of factly


He refused to repeat the line she said Gomez used

He bend down, she turned away just as his face was approaching

"What happened to what we feel for each other then?" he asked sulking

"Aisa kuch spiritual to apan feel nahi karte, to make it last" she whispered

He bit her ear for the first time, she quivered

"Oh so u tell me u dont like sex?" he mocked

"Oh! No! I LOVE sex Neel" she said smugly

He HATED that declaration like some how she was banned from loving it if he wasnt involved?

"But mere waaste sahi nai hai" she whispered

"Aur haan main shaadi ke liye angle nai kar rahi hai... haan" she whispered clarfying


Payal knocked on the door

He continued to trap her before stepping back

Meetings happened, people met, things happened

On her Metro ride home that night she realized the two men that had approached her for a relationship, BOTH loved their wife
Oh! What irony

Like she was only destined to be involved with married men

The one time she had approached a man for a relationship, he had wanted a threesome

She congratulated herself for not giving in to her carnal urge and be led by her boss

The implications of being involved with a boss... especially in the already suspect moral adtvg world
Gomez would tell all that her reputation seems to have followed her to Delhi

The look in Neel's eyes when he said "I dont want marriage, why would I marry YOU?"
She looked out the window at the smoggy Delhi evening

He must love Nupur a lot, to pine so much for her

He assumed by assuaging his physical hunger, he wasnt cheating on her, but by marrying Suvi he would be?

She found an auto within seconds of getting off at Akshardham station, she got off at Aadhya's playschool

The wife wasnt home the kids played in the covered terrace
The lady's husband followed her up, behind her on the stairs

"When u get late, aap mujhe call karenge I can drop her"

"Saare bachon ka kya?" she chuckled

She turned to find the man's eyes all over her

Does he know I am a single parent? she wondered and concluded he must since he must have read the forms and found no father's name

She was used to such slimy attention, cities were modern in name only.

Aadhya didnt want to go home as usual

She asked the other friend if she would like to come over to Aadhya's over the weekend

"I am going to Nihar's house" Aadhya declared with a smug look

"With who?" Suvi asked in Marathi suspicious

"With YOU Aai" Suvi responded equally confidently in Marathi

"We are busy" Suvi mumbled

"Nihar kaun hai?" The husband asked

"Friend" Suvi responded a lil coldly


"Neel Pandit and nihar Pandit" Aadhya jumped up and down breathlessly her hair bobbing like a doll's


"Oh! jo us roz isko lene aaye?" the guy asked

Suvi nodded and dragged Aadhya and walked down the steps

"Where does he live?"

Suvi glared at the man

"Kya hai na... hamare paas bade bache ka bhi after school program hai... we do karate, we do badminton, we do, sorf yeh ek facility nahi hai hum log all over Delhi"


"They have their own" Suvi said bluntly

Her rickshawwala showed up with a smile

"Mujhe laga aap dikhe nahi" he said smiling

She smiled at him exhausted

They rode home and she gave him an extra Rs 5 for making her smile

He wiped the sweat off his brow with his soiled ganji and waved ringing his bell turning away from the society gate

"Aai are we going no?" Aadhya spoke incorrect English

"Aadhya nakko" she stopped her from nagging

The ladies that ganged up with Tai stood at the entrance to her bldg and gossiped

Some younger women gossiped at a distance about something or the other

She went up, quickly set khichri after washing up, and took a nice long shower and they ate

Tai sulked and didnt eat with them

She sat in the balcony and stared out...
The doorbell rang

It was close to 9:30 PM

She had no friends or acquaintances, she wondered who it was

It was the play school lady's husband

She was startled, she didnt open the steel gate

"sorry aapko disturb kiya?" he asked

She wore her fave home outfit

Salwar and a skinny tee

"Koi baat nahi" she said refusing to open the door

"Woh Aadhya ka payal" he said pulling it out of his pocket "Hamari Mrs bahut careful hain is maamle mein. Kisi bache ka samaan khota nahi play school mein"
"Woh har baat ka khayal rakhti hain"

She opened the door smiling  very surprised, that it was found...

And took it from the man squashing his hopes that she wud let him in

All men love their wife she concluded

She shut the door and bolted it  "Thank you, woh khush ho jayegi" Suvi said politely
And shut the wood door afterwards

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Posted: 7 years ago
Poor Suvi.  But at least she is honest to herself and to Neel-there is a sexual attraction but that is it at this time.  He is not looking for a wife and she is still trying to preserve her dignity that was lost in her earlier relationships.  
Amazing update Nisha๐Ÿ‘...It is lovely to see that she is not down on herself because of the mistakes and decided to become a nun, she is aware that men think she is easy because of her history and she has to act to make sure she is not taken for a ride.  

I am not sure how she does it.  It must be really difficult to live in India with such baggage. Hell, it is hard enough within the Indian community abroad because the same attitudes and judgments follow us wherever we go.  I am sure i have been guilty of it myself๐Ÿ˜’


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Posted: 7 years ago
Slimy creatures all over.I love SUVI
So bold and confident she is!!
Not a streak of fright in her eyes!
Life teaches us lessons...innumerable!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Poor suvi... U r ryt cities are modern only in name . so much is assumed and everyone wants to interfere in everyones life. Can suvi get rid of Tai plz atleast one tension kam. 
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Posted: 7 years ago
India not a safe place for girls /women at any age
No these men don't love their wives they just love 
themselves PIGS

Felt really bad for suvi๐Ÿ’” 
Most of Indians tends to miss their noses as its found 
in everyone's personal lives 

Found out last night reaction of indians for something that happened 14-15 yrs ago in my life not theirs.i don't give a hoot but it was quite amusing brought smiles chuckles and laughter out of me.


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Posted: 7 years ago
... That play school husband guy... He belongs to a breed ... That of swines...Love the wifey but doesn't stop them from having lecherous eyes looking out for pseudo- relationships... What a cover ...Something that doesn't get too uncomfortable for them because they are not ready to leave their wives yet.
Moron is coming over under the pretext of giving the anklet and on top of it is praising his wife's attention to detail ๐Ÿฅฑ Hope the wifey soon starts paying attention to details on her territory...
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Posted: 7 years ago
"What happened to what we feel for each other then?" he asked sulking

"Aisa kuch spiritual to apan feel nahi karte, to make it last" she whispered


Suv has a sense of humor even when she is looking at the bottom. Bought out a wry smile reading that.
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Posted: 7 years ago
You have created a master piece. Raised the bar for yourself. Marvelous Nisha.
This is a complicated relationship. 
My Heart goes out for Suvi. She makes me cry.
Why are single women so vulnerable?
Why are they considered available?
Why are they looked down upon? And this ain't about Suvi but every single women trying to mind her business and carry on. Not sure if abroad things are better. In movie it does seem. 
I wish Suvi does get her share of happiness.
As Charlie put these men don't love their wife. If they did their wouldn't be suvi in their life. That's the reason I am not liking Neel at all as of now since past two updates wherein he is Ok having sex with suvi but wont marry her as it would amount to cheating.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: Ashu25

Agla kab Nisha



This kostin is banned Ashu ๐Ÿ˜† . Reverse effect it has on her. ๐Ÿ˜† . I read post of agla kab ... She goes off followed by your post of author sahiba chali gayin, an bhukto sab!!
๐Ÿ˜† . Today I'm not ready to bhugto yet. ๐Ÿ˜ณ