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kalavathi5 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow...she handled that really well...amazingly written Nisha.👏  
Suvi was matter of fact, mature, and to the point.  She also made it clear that Nihar was very important to her.  I think that is so touching that she has so much compassion and empathy for this kid who has lost his mother.  😭

Neel--hopefully what she told him regarding her experience gives him something to think about.  She is not a flighty, light hearted girl-she has baggage, a kid, and a Witch to boot.  He needs to tread very carefully.  

Thank you Nisha--can we get one more??  Pls?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Your titles always hav so much deep meaning to it which is reviled after the update
Truly amazing

Nice that they talked out
Communication is always good it's better to talk rather then drafting someone's image in your head due to some happening

Nihar missing home cooked food...by mom
😭
Entering house to the smell of food is always so relaxing
It's like heaven
Poor kid

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Posted: 8 years ago
Phew! At least they talked. She seemed listless, sad, unhappy , indifferent and a loser all at the same time. Hope Neel is able to boost her self esteem. But at least  they do realize that they are joined in pain and this might move things along although slowly and steadily. 
And Neel, rich and still poor! What a conundrum he faces as he trudges along without the most precious thing of this life. 
I guess before any more action it will be just adhya and nihaar  and daily updates and a rare meeting here and there. But who knows, the master story teller might have something dramatic up her sleeve. 

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Posted: 8 years ago
iyooo :(

But the kind of situation they are in, no wonder it's gonna take time for the defences to crumble down and them to finally act on their impulses
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's not about being foolish or being reckless with one's heart anymore for her, she is just not willing to risk that again. It's not even about her confidence or her inner strength. It's her female pride, that's taken a beating.

Suv has been vulnerable enough in love the first time when she married a married man and and on rebound too it was a different kind of vulnerability . Her fling on the rebound was more a show of confused strength to boost her female pride ... To show ... Look I can move on and I'm impenetrable.
But both were disasters / poor experiences that has made her insulate herself, sort of build a wall to protect herself from not getting hurt.
She just gave a glimpse of her wounded soul to Neel . That's COURAGEOUS, I feel to bear her heart to Neel and not shut him off.

Neel and Suv have built two different walls each of their own, hope they can build Bridges together to gap these defences and take the risk of being vulnerable in love again.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Arshi''s post effectively conveyed in brief four lines what I tried to convey in four paragraphs , I think 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
This is a slow torment like when reading a book, the thrill , mystery and excitement build too much around it to a point that you break the resolve that you started with of not turning or flipping over to the last page of the book to know the end.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Containers...

A month passed by, they met at work, extremely polite to each other, professional and pleasant
They saw each other in the hallways, and nodded, addressed emails to each other.
Outwardly they were the perfect coworkers, placing emotions and shutting it off in clean containers in their minds

At home... in the evenings, it was an altogether different story

He finished up dinner, he had a lady come in to fix meals daily
Nihar wasnt thrilled, but Neel arranged "food to be cooking" as Nihar entered the house around 6:30 with Neel in tow, being picked up from afterschool program

Neel actively researched after school stuff closer to home that had the ability to drop him off at home, so he doesnt have to spend nearly 12 hours at school every day
Single parenting was not a picnic

Neel chatted with the lady cook explaining the kind of food Nihar loved to eat, and even requested Gurpreet 
to let the lady know in Punjabi, he forwarded Nupur's food blog to Gurpreet with the hope some magic would happen

Gurpreet and Gagan were godsent to him, a neighbor everyone would love to have

She insisted, Nihar should take the bus home and he can hang with her son Maneet, who was two years older, and went to DPS NOIDA

When dinner was done and Nihar was in bed, Neel wandered the tiny front lawn, checking his phone, his friends called daily, so did Amma

The last text conversation he looked at daily

He shared what happened with naved, only to be told to "move on"

He was frustrated at the advice he was receiving

Amma for her share was pestering him to meet people in Delhi, since it was close to UP Delhi had higher "supply"

He laughed out loud at his Amma's smugness

"Zyaada hongi to iska yeh matlab nahi mujhse milna chahengi" he said

"Iska matlab aapko milne mein koi aitraaz nahi?" his Mom stumped him

He squirmed

"Ma... Nupur ko gaye bus ek saal hua hai" he stressed

"Aur woh tumhe akele aise stress karte bilqul dekhna pasand nahi karti"

"To is liye hum keh rahe hain aapse aap yaha aa jaayiye"

"Aur meri naukri?" Amma demanded

"Hamey yeh mehsoos ho raha ki aap zabardasti school laut rahi hain" he argued

His Mom smiled at her son's shrewdness

"Theek hai na hamari baat?" he asked her for approval

"Nihar ki sochen aap beta" Amma urged

His smile was wiped out

He now had a room full of Naren Noodle comic strips on the walls...

~~~~~~~~~~~
She sat in the balcony, staring out at the concrete jungle, on occasional clear nights she could see some stars

Varsha had not called her back

Tai continued to be a pain.

She did not offer once to watch Aadhya after school, Apeeja NOIDA bus actually had a 
bus stop right outside her society, yet the child got dropped off at the play school at 12:30 and ate leftovers and napped ona  strange bed

She had two friends, both mothers stayed home, one offered to take Aadhya to her house if Suvi was in a bind (not otherwise, ofcourse)

Despite it being 5 years since, the anger she felt for Rutwik was not diminished

She wanted to check on Nihar, he hadnt returned her containers yet.

She had seen him in the car three days in a row with Payal

She had stayed up the first night she saw him with Payal

Gomez later mentioned he was helping her buy a new car

Payal was her usual smug self, ignoring everyone except Neel

She got up to go to bed, and Googled Payal... there were pictures of endorsements she had done

For some odd reason she wanted to know what car Payal bought

Or were they still looking


She had a restless night...

On the Friday, 8.5 weeks after she told him, not to talk or chat any more, one week after noticing him ride with Payal every evening
 she showed up at his house
Aadhya was at a KG friend's house.

Nihar opened the door, the house smelled like fresh food, she heard the cooker, and a sizzle in the far back
Neel was startled to see her he was watching cricket

He dropped the remote

"Did Aadhya come?" Nihar asked

"Mera khaane ka dabba" she squeaked... as she approached her
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG!!!!!!  She went there!!!!!   Weeeh!!!!!🥳
I had a really stressful call just now--your update is the pickup the Doctor ordered Nisha!!!😆

Too cute-going back to ask for Dabbas.  
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Posted: 8 years ago
I pinch of jealousy had her landed to his house
Woww
Good going lady
😉