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Ashu25

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Posted: 8 years ago

Kalpana make that 3 😆

Theek hi hai

Lekin I wnat ek aur update

I am too greedy to let go easily

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Posted: 8 years ago

First kiss between the couple

and butterflies we r feeling 😳

Barobar ashu neel should drop his suvi home

Not this gomez

Neel doesn't know suvi history that's why girl got

shocked and afraid .she will relish it later in her mind

over and over again once she comes out of the shock

OR perhaps she never had such a earth shattering kiss

b4 that's why she is shock

Jo bhi hai story toh abb start hui hai

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Errantnomad
All right ...she is in a state of shock and going through the motions now... Loosing their bearing after a crash kind of feeling ..
He a little less but equally unsure of what just happenned.
There was something that felt so right for me to read ... Like this is how it should be

And the last sentence wiped his smile away.

There's going to be two people not sleeping well tonight

Some of us too not going to sleep well if there r no more updates tonight

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PriteeMisra

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Posted: 8 years ago

"Suvechha?" he began

"Andar aapke aur guest hai... main chali jaayegi" she said

He cudnt smile any more at the Hindi

OHH NO

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PriteeMisra

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Posted: 8 years ago

Reaaly loving this ride with these two with their kids.

Would wait to see how they arrive at common ground. Admit to themselves whatever is going on.

Awesome Nisha. Really great writing.

We will have high BP anticipating whats next.

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PriteeMisra

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Errantnomad
All right ...she is in a state of shock and going through the motions now... Loosing their bearing after a crash kind of feeling ..
He a little less but equally unsure of what just happenned.
There was something that felt so right for me to read ... Like this is how it should be

And the last sentence wiped his smile away.

There's going to be two people not sleeping well tonight

Two? Are you kidding me. All the people in west reading this before heading to sleep wont sleep well.

And we in India are going to be up till late in the night to know what happens next.

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PriteeMisra

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Posted: 8 years ago

Title: Planes & Trains.

Wow.