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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nihar seems to be so fond of adhya
Great
Nice kid
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Posted: 7 years ago
He has to go to drop her. Taab unke beech kya baat hogi.
How will these to react after this.

What will suvi think and / or tell. What would be Nee;s reply? 


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Posted: 7 years ago
Ok was there flirtation : yes
Covert glances. .. Yes check
Feeling the flutter ... Sure
Conscious signaling ... Check
Unconscious signals ... Yes

The conflict between growing desire and carefulness to avoid that feeling itself creates a tension I think that looks for an outlet .

There's mystery followed by discovery that led Neel to plant one on her but is Suv going to step back thinking she gave too much space for Neel to take that as available ...?

The interaction between Suv and Nihar was spontaneous ... What started as an effort to placate his disappointment of not finding Adhya there turned in to laughter and fun for them.

Was Neel himself feeling overwhelmed watching that tender moment that had him ?


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Posted: 7 years ago
Kalpana, you think so deep.
I guess what you pointed out could be so true.

I don't know if mere attraction would make Neel kiss Suvi. She actually might have tucked his heart when he saw her with Nihar. Nihar being happy might have tickled him more than anything. 

Attraction has been there from Neels's side since he first saw Suvi.

Suvi to now is getting attracted. Now its going to be all the more interesting to read how Nisha takes the story forward. 

Don't let them hurt mor eNisha.

I don't want either of them to be hurt by other. No misunderstandings please. But then I know those add fun to the story. 


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Posted: 7 years ago
This content was originally posted by: PriteeMisra

He has to go to drop her. Taab unke beech kya baat hogi.

How will these to react after this.

What will suvi think and / or tell. What would be Nee;s reply?




Wht I see of suvi
She will back out
She is over conscious bout Neel being his boss

But then we hav our Cupid 'Nisha '
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Posted: 7 years ago
Planes & Trains

Completely unexpected for her, and for him too
He hadnt planned any seduction either, he never involved himself with people that worked on his team
EVER!
He was smitten with Nupur, she was his first love... and his... ummm...

And here he was kissing Suvechha Dhabolkar

The lower lip was sweeter than strawberry, and tart, firm, and plump.
Exactly like he had fantasized

She smelled like lavender, and smooth as butter, where he held her on her waist
With just one hand

He took her lower lip in his mouth and felt the shape with his tongue and lips
Redrawing its contour, feeling the smooth sensation of the inside of the lip

And withdrew, startled

She was gripping the back wall... she was stunned
She felt like being flung from an air plane, soaring, floating, dizzy, and then landing with a thud
A deep intense churn completely over taking her lower belly

She looked afraid and shocked, all at the same time

He took another step back to survey her expression, yep!! It was fear!!

He felt like a douche bag

But his heart rate was too high for him to get a word out of his mouth
It felt like he was running alongside a bullet train, gasping for oxygen
He felt his chin to make sure he had shaved, like he had wanted to

"Phew!!" he exhaled

Finding enough oxygen to groan loudly

Her chin was bruised nerevrtheless, her lip redder
"Mere ko late ho raha hai" "Rickshaw nahi milega" she said softly

Starting to walk, confused towards the kitchen first, and then turning around in panic passing him and heading to the family room

Two media buyer directors and their girl friends  walked down the terrace using the back wrought iron stair case, on to the back verandah and then towards the family room

"Great party man!" one guy said
"Thanks" Neel nodded

"U might have to peel people off the floor on the terrace, in the morning" the other chuckled

Suvechha was GONE!!

She hoped to summon a call taxi, afraid if it was even safe
Cursing herself as to how stupid she could be to go off to a party at night in Delhi
People that drove their own cars were accosted and ambushed on the Gurgaon highway and kidnaped and raped
A cab around midnight? was not the brightest idea

She gently felt her lower lip, still bruised
She could taste kesar on her tongue... like Neel had stolen a bite from Nihar's gulab jamun and transfered it to her
Her face was red hot, and her finger tips were numb, she tried to check on the call taxi and she cudnt even dial

Gomez "Suvi, tere ko kis side jaane ka hai?"
He asked for the 100th time
"NOIDA More Gomez" she said finding her voice

"Kyon dareli hai? Beti kidhar hai?" he asked, as if she brought Aadhya with her

"Play school Gomez" Suvi answered irritated

"Hum nikal rahe hai tere ko drop kar de?" he asked
His wife smiled warmly

"Thanks" Suvi nodded her voice quivering with relief

"Ruk, Pandit ko bataake aata hai main" he said

Her heart hammered violently in her rib cage at the mention of the name


She touched her chin...

Neel came out any way

"Boss main nikal rahela hai, isko drop kar dega main" he said

"Thanks Man!" Neel shook hands with Gomez, and did a man hug they chatted for 5 mins

"Chal main gaadi laata hai" he told his wife

"Thank you" Suvechha said without looking into his eyes

"I am glad you came" he said politely

"Nihar is still working on the comic strip" he said

"Barobar" she whispered, and started walking out the wide steel gates to stand on teh side walk, over 50 cars were 
parked on both sides she didnt know which was gomez's

His wife was using the rest room
Neel stood by her

"Suvechha?" he began

"Andar aapke aur guest hai... main chali jaayegi" she said
He cudnt smile any more at the Hindi



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Posted: 7 years ago
Ayyooo
Why motu dropping
Why not neel????
Ayyo do some karishma make Neel drop nooo
Pleeej

Ek aurrr
One last for the night
Pakka promise wont ask more
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Posted: 7 years ago
All right ...she is in a state of shock and going through the motions now... Loosing their bearing after a crash kind of feeling ..
He a little less but equally unsure of what just happenned.
There was something that felt so right for me to read ... Like this is how it should be

And the last sentence wiped his smile away.

There's going to be two people not sleeping well tonight
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Posted: 7 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Ashu25

Ayyooo

Why motu dropping
Why not neel????
Ayyo do some karishma make Neel drop nooo
Pleeej

Ek aurrr
One last for the night
Pakka promise wont ask more



They need time to gather themselves Ashu... It feels right the way she has given it...