Indradhanush - Page 13

Posted: 8 years ago
It was so wonderful Nisha...
Their daily routine from getting up to getting ready to lunch to waving an auto
All seems so real just like any of us..

U tend to remember ur spouse in ur kids and it keeps u close to the person whether u want or not!!

Eyes met ๐Ÿ˜ณ
But aage kya hua Nisha ??
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by Nisha0604



SERIOUSLY?
ITS YOU?

SOOO SOOO HAPPY TO SEE U
Hope all is well Sudhi

Yep, I am very excited about this one๐Ÿ˜ƒ

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR LOVING IT


HUGS

I have never met anyone who gets that happy to see me. It ups my self esteem every time, especially during my lowest points in life
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by Nisha0604


Ashu as per my promise made to you

Since its a weekend its Indradhanush time

I COMPLETELY FORGOT !!!
Thank you sooo much ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

The last part of the update !! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I want MOREEE
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by modernfamily



I have never met anyone who gets that happy to see me. It ups my self esteem every time, especially during my lowest points in life

Tujhe kya hua ?!?!
Meena kumari kyon bani huyi hai ๐Ÿ˜•
Posted: 8 years ago
NISHA

This is beautiful! Hats off to your creativity. You make everything come alive somehow. I can visualize your scenes so so well. A taste of Tamil in SOSY and now Marathi in Indradhanush. Loving it! Keep the updates coming. I'm so hooked.
Posted: 8 years ago
Helical Spring๐Ÿ˜ณ

"hello" Neel said politely tipping his head over, Suvi smiled nervously not expecting her boss at the school waiting room

If he wore a hat it would be a "Howdy Ma'am" with the tipping of the edge

He tried not to notice her, but he did, the Paithani kurta and the chudidar, he wondered how curly her hair was, tighly wound like a helical or coil spring
He channeled his Physics class from his Mechanical Engg undergrad

He went back to his phone as Gomez sent him a text



Nihar looked at Aadhya chuckled  seeing her gauzy sparkly snowwhite blouse. He was dressed in formals in navy pants and a blue shirt
He went back to his hand held PS3? some device

Aaradhya crept up to him and peeked

He moved his device away

"Nihar!" admonished Neel

Suvi didnt linger she found a chair, also on the last row, a handful of seats from Neel and sat down and caught her bearing

"Wife must be busy" Suvi thought
"Tai didnt care to accompany?" Neel wondered


"What a good father" Suvi appreciated Neel

Her thoughts sliding back to Rutwik, he must have gone to his son and daughter's school admissions

She sighed and looked out at the corridor

Eager parents wandered, trying to find the "interview rooms"

This was worse than job interviews

Suvi agnoized if missing her first appointment was going to ruin Aadhya's chances

"Aai tyachya ajjee ghare aahe"Aadhya hollered, after quizzing Nihar (his grandmother is at home)

Nihar turned sideways to look at Suvi and gazed for a minute or two, a longing? in his eyes?
Suvi couldnt tell

Neel turned sideways, and looked at her again

Suvi smiled nervously

"Sorry" she said ina  thick Marathi accent
 "Aadhya, tyala trasa nakko" (dont bother him)


Neel understood Marathi, he Nihar did too, they even spoke well
It wasnt heard to learn, they haggled with cabbies and hawkers... he had lived in Mumbai 20 years

Aadhya was extremely curious, she sat by the boy and picked up his ipad from the seat by him

Suvi ran over to the chair and grabbed it from her hand

"Sorry beta... she is only little" Suvi explained

"Adhya chala jauya" she held her wrist tight

Aadhya began to cry softly

Neel looked up from his phone  "Its fine" he said quietly

"Chhoti hai na.. samajhich nahi isko" Suvi was embarrassed

"She can use my ipad, I only have BOY games" Nihar said politely

"She does not know, how to play only" Suvi smiled wide, she had a crooked canine, she flashed it briefly


"Mee khelah shakatey" Aadhya was offended

"Aadhya' Suvi scolded in the kid's ear

An employee tapped her on the shoulder  "Maam, ur turn"


"Aapka ho gaya interview?" Suvi asked

He smiled  "Nahi" he said politely, wondering WHY anyone would choose to spend their Saturday willingly in a room filled with parents wearing cheap cologne and gaudy biz outfits

"Good luck" Suvi said politely to Nihar

"Tujhha naav kaay aahe?" (whats ur name) Aadhya asked softly 
Finaly when they were about to leave


"Nihaar Pandit" the boy said softly

"Mee Aadhya Dhabolkar" Aadhya said softly

The father and mother glanced at each other one time

"good luck" said Neel

Suvi smiled
The interview was "OK"
The coming in late, waiting, and having a WRIITEN TEST for a 5 year old, delayed her for the Vanasthali interview

They met Neel outside as he walked towards his car, three blocks from the school, all the  road edges were taken by eager prospects, 
Suvi had to walk three blocks to find an auto that was willing to go to the back end of housing society in Patparganj to Vanasthali Public School

Some wanted Rs.150...

Their paths crossed again

"Aaai Nihaaar" Aadhya pulled Suvi's hand jumping up and down like a helical spring device

Suvi was pulling her away from traffic, cars honked, they got on the extra steep side walk
Suvi stubbed her big toe on the edge, the pain instantaneously traveled to the center of her head

"Aadhya, tumhee kuthe jaat aahat pahu" (watch where u are going) she scolded her daughter loudly

As her daughter walked mindless towards the 10 year old boy atleast 10 steps ahead of them on the sidewalk... dragging her Aai towards the boy's Dad

"Interview ho gaya?" Suvi asked politely

"Test bhi liya isne"

"5 saal ke bache ko koi test deta hai? Zoology aur Biology mein faraq poocha" Suvi was annoyed

Neel smiled politely

"Aapka beta intayligant hai usko milega jaroor" Suvi said graciously

"Pata nahi, kuch keh nahi sakte" he said

"Aap yahi rehti hain?" Neel asked in perfect Hindi

"Aage Society hai, taxi waale se magaj maari" Suvi said smiling sheepishly

Neel understood that she implied "auto'

"Auto" she hollered and ran up to talk

Aadhya watched Nihar play his game for that extra two seconds

Aadhya came back, as Neel's driver unlocked the car, a Toyota Corolla...

He held Aadhya's hand until Suvi returned

"Chala jauta  sakhara" (lets go sugar) Suvi came up and held the other wrist

Nihar looked up from his device

"Jeetey?" Suvi asked politely about the game he was playing

"Abhi nahi" Nihar said honestly

"Monday ko milte hain?" Neel said

"Jee... umm.." Suvi nodded

"Aai mee jau shakatey, somawari?" Aadhya asked eagerly

"Nakko" Suvi muttered seating her disappointed daughter the little kid looked through the Shahrukh Khan window covering on the auto to catch a glimpse of the 10 year old boy still on the sidewalk... as the auto released a puff of smoke from the exhaust as it noisily pulled away

"Chalen Nihar??" Neel asked patiently waiting with the back door open

He smiled at his Dad, and nodded


Posted: 8 years ago
Sudhi: I am very very happy to have made your day, you make me very happy by posting. Kindred spirit...


Dristi: SO SO GOOD TO SEE YOU. I am thrilled you love this story

I see so many people I have known over the years, in Neel and Suvi
They are so so easy to write.

I am overjoyed you are hooked
I will have a good Saturday I know...
Posted: 8 years ago
Sweet...simple..nice
Aadhya is tooo cuteee
Nihar is a suljha hua bacha...like Nandu!

Posted: 8 years ago
Agla kab hai Author Sahiba ??
Posted: 8 years ago
The innocence of Aadhya and Nihaar tug at my heart.
Aadhya just wanting to go to suvi's office on a Monday tells you something about Tai.
Aadhya's disappointment and Nihaar's maternal longing ...
Why do children also hv to suffer?

Suvi struggling to even see the genetic similarities of Rutwik in Aadhya ... How difficult it must be for her...

The scene on the road where suvi hits her toe, the resultant pain shooting straight to the centre of her head,her scampering to get the auto, the traffic, the children's hands held by Neel, the imagery tugs at your heart.

But this masaledhar Mirchi is one tough cookie . There's so much inherent inner strength in suvechha Dhabolkar.


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