Those small detailing reflects now and then in every piece you write like kalpana said you imprint on sth and lay it out straight, the parachute oil is that general commodity of every household, ponds powder too(you mentioned it somewhere some days ago)
You cannot take sosy out of you two times you have wrote RnB and II instead of Neel and Suvi that happens when you live a tale for more than a year, well sosy is life a day without is intolerable, plz ek woh bhi likh do, plz Sunday hai Aaj
I loved Suvi's indifference to Taai, but people like her can only tend to be indifferent they can't actually implement it, her laying out a separate cot shows it, like you cannot be inhuman even to the rudest of persons, her indifference is just a reaction but not her nature.
neel is not tall
it's good, till today I can't get over dude, had he been tall or of a decent height I could have fantasised atleast but not when he is shorter
coz men you describe are of a different planet and irresistible
P.s. I checked he is 5'10" that's not short.sorry that's normal height.Edited by Kjolovesbabies - 5 years ago