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Posted: 7 years ago
Tall men & Firm resolves


May be she was right it was quite impossible to have a professional relationship 
Two people that were physically attracted to each other SAW the elephant in the room constantly

She left meetings early, and came in after every one, frustrating him that he could not get any alone time with her


"He is a happy kid" she had texted about Nihar on Friday night

He took it as a compliment about himself

"Nupur was like that?" she asked next

Reminding him of Nupur's invisible yet conspicuous presence between them

"I am the more noble, kind person in our marriage" he spoke of Nupur in present tense

He couldnt hear it but she had laughed out loud upon reading that

"Do u have any brother or sister?" she asked

"I have a brother, and a sister... let me tell you, my brother is shorter than you are" Neel said bluntly

"Tall men are hard to" she stopped cautiously before the word "kiss"


He asked her instead 
"Kiss?"


"Sorry bad joke" she said

"Suvechha... I was over joyed to see you earlier in the evening" he said firmly

Using her cue and bringing the conversation back to the attraction

"Mujhe laga" she said meaningfully, based on how he had kissed and fondled her

"Lucky you... you dont get carried away in emotion" he mocked her

"Maine aisa nai kaha" she went on the defensive

"It was intended at making me feel awful about how  I may have been a lil rough with you"

"Haan shave nai kiya" she said pointedly

"I KNOW... I sorry... I had no idea I wud return home from a lousy trip and find you at my front door"

"With samosa and jalebis?" she asked

"That too" he admitted sending a wink

He had gone in to grab a squirly set of the orange delicacy and had not shared a even a small twig with her, when he came back out to the drive way to start the car

She wanted to ask why his trip was lousy but did not

"Still not biting my bait huh?" he asked

"Kis baare?" she asked

the trip Suvechha"

"neel" she said

"Will u let me call u now and then?" he begged

"Raat ko?" she asked

"Sure" he agreed

He will take it... if thats what was on offer

"Nihar so gaya?"

"He had a fight with Maneet" Neel said

"Oh no!!  kya hua?" she asked

"Kid stuff... I may not be the best parent" Neel said

"He must have a different opinion"

"Are u actually defending me?" he asked

She didnt respond...

She wondered how she was going to pull her foot out of her mouth

"Did Gurpreet ask anything?" Suvi asked

"They dont care" he said casually, indicating she has nothing to worry about

"Do u worry about what people think?" he asked after a pause

"Shaayad nai" she said...

The shaayad had come to her spontaneously
She wasnt firm in her resolve...

If she did she wouldnt have married a much married man, secretly
She wouldnt have gone seeking sex with a coworker
But then she did?
Because she moved out of Mumbai and shunned Rutwik and said no to the threesome?
She truly didnt know...


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Posted: 7 years ago
Sudhi
Dont give up hope

For some of us thats the only thing we have.
I cant bring someone you love back... I would do it for me and do it for everyone else
But I can write a chapter

Charlie
I am not noble... not by a long shot
A $20 spa card wont kill me
It wont make the baby come alive again.
The girl needs serious help, because she has been told it might be impossible for her to carry a baby full term
Steve (the check out clerk) probably makes $15 an hour... this was a set back he did not need.

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Posted: 7 years ago
"She didnt have the big city art of making pointless conversations

He thought if she were in charge Mumbai would be bar less
Nobody would get picked up, no drinkis would be bought "for that man in the black tee" "that lady in the orange saree"
No wasteful conversations about cricket or Shiv Sena politics"


The lines I specifically enjoyed and savored reading the most.
On one end we have him pleading suvechha please please to pick something out of the topics he offered to keep some convo going when he is with her and when he is alone he goes bk to rebelling to hold on to his
Bereavement. It's been interesting to get an insight in to his brain, as it's going through the pain cycle of grief. His anger, his plea bargaining with his wife to come back for atleast some time, of his wanting to go back to how things originally were in his life, his frustration of suvi occupying his mind to get his libido kicking bk, his resentment to accepting his and his son's loss ...

What if... If only ... the thoughts we cling on to keep the past close to our hearts...

Death makes us remember the good of the person we lost, to look over their failings and kind of immortalizes the person by only wanting to hold on to good memories.

Suvi has enough battles already , bk of the mind she will not be wanting to add fight another battle , one with that of a person's memories , it's like fighting a ghost...

Loved the updates . Thank you


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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Sudhi

Dont give up hope

For some of us thats the only thing we have.
I cant bring someone you love back... I would do it for me and do it for everyone else
But I can write a chapter

Charlie
I am not noble... not by a long shot
A $20 spa card wont kill me
It wont make the baby come alive again.
The girl needs serious help, because she has been told it might be impossible for her to carry a baby full term
Steve (the check out clerk) probably makes $15 an hour... this was a set back he did not need.

Nisha spa card never crossed my mind
Its ur sympathy and empathy and suffering of other u feel
Thats makes u unique 
Thats what I meant
As far as IF we could turn time back or bring some one bak
ALWAYS STAYS IF

Lovely update as always
Neel is making it difficult for suvi to say no and to act upon what they feel
Stand tall and firm girl.guys don't have to get everything let this time be what u want
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Posted: 7 years ago

FROM RUINS TO EMANCIPATION

INSPIRED BY THE POST OF KALPANA...lines embedded

Death makes us remember the good of the person we lost,

The good times we had together the lovely memories we made together

We willingly look over their failings and the fall outs we had

We look back on promises not kept and kind deadlines not adhered

The special dates forgotten then are now the ones to moisten the eyes and burden the heart

Our memory immortalizes the person selective amnesia takes over

Its gracious  to hold on to memories that evoke a smile

The loss has burdened the heart and dampened the consciousness

Set fetters to the feet, clipped the wings, entangled the thoughts

To be free, set free the soul, realizing the futility of dwelling in ruins

To soar again, break free fuel your heart with love, make a U turn and hit the expressway called Present.

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Posted: 7 years ago
"Do u worry about what people think?" he asked after a pause

"Shaayad nai" she said...


Even in every day ordinary aspects of our life like our dress we wear, the way we look, something about physical appearance , what others think or will think infiltrates us... We care ...

And when it comes to certain life choices even more so, I feel.
I find myself rebelling on a few days... Thinking Why should I care... The end result or the consequence of my action is mine, I'm going to be the one stuck with it... So why should I care what others think...

I can only put this to one thing I think, it's the human Need for approval.

Cos When we blunder there's always a baggage of someone like suv's sister varsha reminding us for life on the choices we make... 💔
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Posted: 7 years ago
Where was your leave letter Sri.?Unwritten rule in this world right?When someone goes on a break here. Don't remember anyone of us sanctioning you a break . Shruthi notifies her presence hopping between flights amidst updates. I thought I was joking here asking Jas where she was ...that joke turned out to be a sick one at that..Jas's loss popped a bubble for me yday.

I have a problem . Cannot keep anything to a single line.
In short MISSED YOU. Idha naan pm la solla poradhilla ungalukku.
Great to see you back in form, that I'm most familiar with. Thank you for the mention .

And a good morning to you.


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Posted: 7 years ago
Kala, ID is giving you insomnia . Love reading your posts .
You write here more often ...I noticed that... Makes for a good reading. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks Kalpana--I can't seem to stop writing comments for ID.!!😆  
I had insomnia for Sosy too!!!🤣  

I can happily say that I am addicted to whatever Nisha writes!!!  ðŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
innama Kalpana...imma neram summa dabaichutta irundha  Tirunelvelike Alva kuthutta paathiya...Meyallume vella irundhuchu kannu,,,vellai vella vella...adhuku mela indha suriyan paduthuran vera...inna seyardhu enga pordhu onnume purilima...
Kannu indha dabba excuse me pleej...marandhuten...iskulluku kuda naan mattam pottadilla...meyalluma...ongagaprannai...🤔  mannicuko kannu. danks