Arshi SS :I Perfectly Flawed I Pg 83 IMP Note *Complete* - Page 11

U r a great writer,nothing more to say...

Brilliant updates 

I usually dnt do comments...bt i simply had to...wen i read dis story.

so nice and so beautifully written..u have brilliantly handled the emotional part..arnav is moody and introvert that gave him freedom to think only about him and not beyond him..he needed kushi..he needed her attention and love but inturn what he did to her. no emotional sharing and heart to heart talks had happened between them..he was again living his life with only added responsibility as husband just for namesake..so far he had lived on his own,for his ownself by writing his own fate..he had lived as machine but now he must understand that he is a human being,being loved by someone and he is in love with that someone who happened to be more vocal and emotional human being..it was him who is behaving childish instead of blaming her..a husband she needed not to pamper or be passionate but to understand and give companionship as well as commitment to this relation in his spare time(only)..here as a lover or husband he must have thought to enjoy his successful deal with his wife instead he preferred pompous and fancy event..is he a teenager or a kid being adamant that what I am doing is right and I know everything like that... he like most husbands who wud blame wife for everything and also hurt them like being insecured and jealous,does the same..mistakes are with him but blaming..if she try to show the mirror of them he defend her or brag about the past..he behaved like immatured man with no stability and patience..coz he has fear in him that fear of getting pointed for his mistakes where he was in illusion that he was always right..this attitude he should change otherwise his useless blaming and careless words would haunt kushi as well him in particular where there would be no hope in forgetting them or survive with regretting them..sooner he understands it would cement the cracks in their marriage..otherwise in this modern era as we all coming to know that soon after one marriage is cracked the ppl in it would jump for any other convenient partner due to rash decisions and later they realize about the absence of their soulmate who happened to be the first one..marriage is not a game and not about convenience.. it's about sharing each other shredding egos,stupidity,childishness, selfishness, loneliness, self enjoyment...this is what I have learnt from this story..from this arnav...he should be lucky that he has got kushi...she is beautiful internally.. I don't comment on external beauty..coz most of the stories so far I have read had description about her milky skin,soft skin,flawless skin etc etc from arnav's POV..I wonder if kushi had flawed skin or brown skin would he have had entertained about her fights with him right from the fashion show?!he was looking for external things before that helped him no knowledge with the internal emotions and hurts of the others except his sister..waiting eagerly for the next..Edited by ipktouch - 8 years ago

wonderful update 

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

wonderful update 

I like that Arnav spill out everything he felt and i like that Khushi is leaving and didn't give into his blackmail. They need this break and if Arnav really loves her, he will grow in their love, rather than being change. 

I hope Arnav will realize that Khushi is not his habit, but a true necessity of his life. And i hope Khushi will go back to herself. 

I wonder where she will go. 

Can't wait to read more. 

Awesome update. ..

Amazing! 

Absolutely loved the updates! So much angst and pent up feelings... Explosive! When the update ended I was left grasping for more! Actually considering that once this is finished I read the whole thing in one go... Which I know is not possible because as soon as there is one I'll be submerged reading!!!

This is soo awesome ...The story is gripping