ON HOLD MG ff : Aansoon Part 21 Updated on Page no 55 on 28th November

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INDEX

Prologue

Part 1

Part 2
Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11

Part 12

Part 13

Part 14

Part 15

Part 16

Part 17

Part 18

Part 19

PART 20

Part 21

 PROLOGUE


A girl was getting ready for her marriage... With the gr8 business man MAAN SINGH KHURANA who was his boss earlier but now going to be her husband. Yes BOSS byt they are getting married not because of love but because of the aansoon of someone close to there heart yes maan is getting married for the sake of his dadima and girl was getting married for the sake of her papaji...

But lets see what future has store for them... Will they wipe each others aansoon or will they give each other aansoon..


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Posted: 8 years ago

MG FF Aansoon


Guyss this is the first part of my first ff Aansoon... So here goes the first part...

                              

  Part 1


Geet geet puttar uth ja subha ho gyi hai... Tenu mandir jaana hai mere naal tenu pta hai na... Uth ja puttar meri pyari soni kudi tu meri acchi bacchi hai na uth ja puttar nhi th teri tayi ji ne bada hi gussa krna hai..

Geet: muummy ji bs 5 min or mai pakkaa 5 mon me uth jaaoungi... Plzzz she makes a puppy face nd who will not melt after seeing her this face... Rano melted... Nd said. Thik hai lekin menu 15 mins vich tu niche chaidi bilkul tayyar or haa koi changa sa suit pahen liyo aaj mandir jaana hai or aaj tera interview bhi th hai vo bhi itni badi company me KC (Khurana Constructions) So be ready ok... Chal mai niche ja rhi hoo pooja di thali vi tayyar krni hegi... Nd she goes from there...

After 5 mins

Geet wakes up and prays to her babaji... Babaji aaj mera interview hai plzzz meri help krna mujhe ye job chahiye taki mai darji ko proove kr saku ki mai bhi kuch kr skti hoon..

She goes to take bath...

She wears a typical punjabi suit of red colour... She is looking very beautiful without any make up... She goes down... Rano and tayi ji was waiting for her... 

Tayi ji said- arey wah aaj th tu badi hi soni lag rhi hai is lal suit wich... Geet comes and takes her blessings and said- soni kyun nhi lagoongi aakhir meri tayi ji ne jo diya hai... Vo bhi mere pahle interview ke liye... Thank you tayi ji... Waise aaj mujhse jyaada bhi koi sundar lag rha hai lagta hai taya ji ki th aaj chutti hone wali hai..

Tayi ji blushes and said- chal apni tayi ji naal mazak krti hai tera vyah hone de phir bataaongi tujhe..

Geet said- kya tayi ji aaj mera interview hai or aap ho ki phir se vyaah ki baat leke baith gi ho itni mushkil se th darji ko manaya tha... Or ab aap shuru ho gaye... Chadooo..

Tayi ji said- chid kyoon rhi abhi th mujhe bada ched rhi thi or ab dekho.. Haha.. Mai te mazak kr rhi si..

Geet smiles..

Rano said- ab aap dono ki baate shaate khatam ho gyi ho th kya hum mandir ja skte hai pooja ki thali tayyar hai chalo..

Geet and tayji said hanji chalo. .

And they left for the mandir...

In KM

Maan was getting ready for office when daadi ma came in she said - Maan bete aaj hume mandir jaana hai...

Maan said- ji dadi ma jaiye mai driver se kahe doonga vo aapko lejayega...

Daadi ma said- Maan hume mandir aapke saath jaana hai 

Maan said- Dadi ma aaj meri ek bahut important meeting hai..

Dadi ma said- Oh God Maan meeting meeting bs apko apni meetings se hi pyaar hai na humari th koi parwah hi nhi hai agar aaj aap humaare saath mandir nahi gaye th hum aapse kabhi baat nhi karenge jab dekho bas kaam kaam are thoda tym humaare liye bhi nikaal lijiya kariye.. Hum aapki dadi hai koi door ki rishte daar nhi... Dadi started her emotional attyachaar nd maan melted 

Maan said - Dadi maa aap jo krne ki koshish kr rhi hai na vo mujhe samajh me aa rha hai apna ye emotinal draama band kriye.. Mai chaloonga aapke saath khush...

Dadi happily said - Sach

Maan said- ji daadi sach bt i want u to get ready in 10 mins meri meeting hai or mai nhi chahta ki mai late ho jau so plzz get ready fast..

Dadi ma said - As you wish Mr Maan Singh Khurana... Bilkul apne dadaji pe gaya hai mera pota .. 

Daadi ma left from there to get ready.


Precap- Maaneet meet or first fight let's See .


So guyss here is the first part tell me how iss it...

Plzz like and do comment...

Edited by himani02 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
hi congrats on the FF! awesome update! superbly written! Geet n Maan r forced 2 get married! Geet gng2 the temple! Dadi forces Maan 2 take her to the temple! please post character sketch! hope they wipe each other's aansoon! update soon n do pm, thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
Congratulations !!!!!
 
Prologue and Part 1
 
Interesting
 
Geet needs to go to Mandir before going for her job interview at KC
while Daadima emotional blackmails Maan to take to the Mandir
 
Waiting For Next Update
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Posted: 8 years ago
heyy dear ..!!!
porolg is superb ...I liked the concept ...
superb start ...geet is going to mandir n dadi also going to mandir with maan...hmm...let's see what happen next...continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome interesting
maan geet at mandir definitely geet maan first fight
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Congos on new story :)
Superb start!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice start. Geet's  mother is awaking her to get ready to go to mandir. After mandir she has to go for interview. Geet and her taiji are teasing each other. 
Maan's Dadima is asking Maan to come to mandir with her. After Dadima's emotional drama  he agreed.
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congo on the new story but itna saddy title dear anyways great prologue geets mom waking her up par madam neend mein hai geet is a bubbly goils her family loves though they want her to get married but geet wants to work and gets ready for pooja here dadi coaxing maan to go mandir with her maan agrees as he has no choice lets see how maaneet meet 
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Posted: 8 years ago
interesting starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...