RAYA NEW SS : Dilwale "PART 1" 03/01/16 - Page 2

Posted: 8 years ago
very interesting.
Thnxs 4 pm.
Continue soon.
Posted: 8 years ago

"Ohh God "

 She slips and falls on ground

"Are you blind ????" Ram too falls on ground when he collides with Priya...both falls on ground...

He gets up from ground and dusting his hands and clothes without looking at her he says to priya " Andhi ho kya Dekh ke chala karo, mere Sab kapde kharab kar diya Mujhe ab ese Class attend Karni padegi "

 

(Are you blind please see and walk you have screwed  my clothes Now i have to attend class like this )

 

Still on ground She hesitantly replies him " Haa Andhi hoon aur mujhe maaf kar dena meri wajah se Apke Kapde Kharab ho gaye " ( yes i am blind and i am sorry because of  me your clothes screwed )

 

Ram with open mouth looks at her Still on ground she is searching Something his eyes falls on the Stick behind her...ohh God She is actually  BLIND  and what fool i am...he walks to her to help her but before he reaches She somehow find her stick and gets up on her feet her face still behind her hair...She is struggling with them tugging them (her face still invisible to Ram because of hair )

 

Cold wind strikes her face her hairs blow in Air She turns her face in other direction

Ram looks at her with open mouth  A divine beauty with with her dark black hair that looked like night's sky her innocent face showing the lil disappointment her White lagging and Blue Kurti fitted to her perfect with White stall around her neck flowing in Air with her hairs how can God be so cruel He gave an angelic face to this woman but she dont have eyes to see own beauty he thinks

khuda ne jab tujhe banaya hoga,
to ek nasha sa chaya hoga,
jannat mein tujhe dalne se pehle,
mera khayal to aaya hoga

he thinks and in his thoughts he automatically find himself in front of her saying "may i " and next he finds himself tugging her hairs behind her eyes and her reply "thanks"

Next he finds himself apologising on his behaviour...She is saying "its ok"

Next  he is escorting her upto library...

"Library"  "But you" He blurts and bite his tongue

There is language invented Called "Brail" She replies innocently

"Ohh Yes And i am sorry Again" he says

"No its okay no need to apologies Its not your fault " She says he feels sadness in her voice

"it is actually i have ruined your mood what can i do for you " he says and before She reply He adds " Please don't say No at least this will reduce my guilt please "

"okay ...hmmm Today is Auto strike So can you please Drop me near Zaveri Bazar ???? She replies

"Anytime Ma'am" he replies back

and both laughs

They reach Library

Here we are at the Library  He says And She bid bye to him...okay will meet you here after 1 hour says he turns and walk ...suddenly he turns and calls her

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PART 1

Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it n plsss update soon
Posted: 8 years ago
Ok... I am still not sure that I understand...
But I like it...
Please continue soon...

Posted: 8 years ago
kuch to gadbad hai. Priya sach me blind hai na. I haven't seen dilwale movie. so I don't know the movie concept.

nice story. pl continue.
and pl update and finish ur other stories also.
Posted: 8 years ago
I am unable to understand the story. 
But anything on Raya will do. 
Thanks for pm aman and looking forward to the story. 
Posted: 8 years ago
RaYa first meeting was so filmy but interesting. Now they became friends but seems Priya is helping someone who is behind Ram.
Posted: 7 years ago

it's really interesting into let's see what happen next... hope all r fine there...
too good awesome update moving for next...
Posted: 7 years ago

Part 1
the opning part was very filmy yet I felt fishy there something not going well with story but liked the way they meet but who could be with Priya in the end... god... let's see what is waiting for us in next do post next soon... plz continue this story it's really good in terms of story line so plz complete it at least in shorts parts too as Priya is going to be mean in this I feel in future so plz continue...
too good awesome update moving for next...
Posted: 7 years ago


Plz Aman bhai continue this soon...

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