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SW Symphony 62 -- Faith & Faux Fur - Page 64

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Posted: 8 years ago

CHANGE THE SCRIPT

Why her? Why us? Why thus? Why then? My heart clamors for responses

Hankers at the great injustice and restrains my movement forword.

A companion journeyed forth with me prodding the voices in the head

What do you seek to control? Where does your search end? I want what I lost restored

What did you lose my alter ego probed...I lost my childhood...I lost my innocence...I lost my blissful state

I lost her i loved most dearly back i lost the pivot on which my life revolved

You lost her you loved...did you lose love? You lost her that bore you with tender loving care ...did you lose care with her?

She taught me to speak...yes she taught you to express your self in words and actions...did you lose that as well?

She cooked for me...haven't the number of those willing to cook for you not swelled?

She taught me to celebrate little things...did you celebrate the life she lived i was asked

She was the reason for my smile i persisted...aren't you able to smile and incapable of be the reason for the smiles of others? I was goaded

I was insistent to restart topics which are long since defunct...remember if you want  the clock turned back,

An unhappy marriage arrives too, You'd miss the  shine in your kid brother's eyes...You'd miss the ball of butter

You'd miss the officer that draws you to your home town

 Who is the plaintiff who the defendant?

There are memories that time does not erase... Forever you have it to cherish and savor

It  does not make loss forgettable but bearable...change the script...begin anew

 

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nisha, both Vani and diva are well.
Svm, loved the last two poems.
Change the script was apt to follow memories.
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Posted: 8 years ago
thoughts mostly on II mind
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Posted: 8 years ago
Missing all the oracles. ...SR...PUTTI...? Hope all the missing SOSYians come back😊
Will we get an update?
Waiting for a whole lot of celebrations...godh bharai...anniversary...

What about II's birthday?
Dude will you give her 366 roses...?
Edited by shidin0117 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Destiny's turn😳

Appa greeted him sternly at the door😆

"Her mother has been waiting to take her to the temple, its an auspicious day tomorrow, we will be busy, she is coming very late?" Appa challenged him hands on his hips
II had snuck through on the side

R&B tried not to smile

He was amused today,  for some reason tonight he wasnt pissed at Mr Iyer

He was elated to see II this evening, Manya was a bonus, umm.. ya... he didnt mind Mr Iyer today

"I agree, we got a bit late" he murmured

Amma and Ii were in Periappa's room with Janaki Athai and lakshmi and her kids

Appa held the dude hostage outside the door

"She was taking a nap" R&B claimed

"HOW is that possible I say? Her mother spoke to her two hours ago, she was awake" Appa challenged

"I got home then, and she" R&B swallowed, self consciously

Appa was a wise man, he didnt care for the lip smacking his son in law was doing
Well he didnt lip smack but Appa could sense he was MENTALLY...

II walked out and found him outside the  front door

"He made me late Appa" II cooed

Appa turned around startled, his daughter had never so brazenly asked for his assistance

"Umm... kekaren badile solla maatengran" (I am asking him he wont reply) Appa accused

II smiled fondly at dude, as she watched him lounge on the door frame, carelessly, he wore cargos and flip flops and a check cotton shirt shaped in a U at the bottom, one sleeve was more rolled up

"Do u need coffee?" II asked softly

He nodded

Amma was inside

Appa reluctantly stepped back, "Can I come in then?" R&B asked

"Yes... I cannot stop you" Appa mumbled

R&B chuckled audibly

II was making coffee.. he wandered into the kitchen

"Ayyo take off the flip flops da" Ii panicked

He walked out casually and did

"Its SO COLD outside, and he is wearing hawai chappal and nikkar?" Appa demanded

"Umm" II squirmed

"He does not shave, he doesnt take care of his health"

"I agree pa, he doesnt shave" II nodded

"Huh" R&B chuckled

II poured coffee out...in a davara tumbler and handed him, a lady chef washed dishes,
Amma had told her some of her bhajan mandli was going to stop by tonight as
they couldnt make it tomorrow for the ceremony, so were going to stop by to "bless the girl"
The kitchen was a big mess, there were pots and pans lined up  filled with food, and idli batter for tomorrow's breakfast
the lady turned to look at R&B, and paused near II...

"Nee daan kalyana ponna?" (are u the girl who is having the ceremony?)
II nodded shyly

"Paiyan daan maplayo" (Is he your husband?)

II nodded

R&B sipped his coffee
"Paarungo kulurave kuluraadu avanukku" (He is never cold) "Last year like this only he walked in and asked for her hand in marriage, tomorrow is ONE year" Appa explained the whole thing in Tamil to the cook lady

"Radha Mami paiyan kalyanathla paathen onna" (I saw u in Radha's son's marriage)
II nodded
"I was in Bangalore" II recalled

"Radha Mami's samdhan wanted her for her younger son, he was a doctor" the lady chef reminded Appa

Appa promptly translated it for R&B

He nodded uncaringly

The lady chef went on "But this boy looks like a cinema star" (in Tamil)
Appa carefully pretended to be busy lifting his veshti edge up to knot it midway

II bit down a smile
The lady waited for Appa to translate

When he didnt, she nudged II's arm

"Umm... she is saying u are very tall"

"Like a "cinema star?" R&B smiled wickedly
He was GETTING Tamil

PAAVI
RAKSHASAN!!
U WILL UNDERSTAND
EVERYTHING U ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO
BUT NEVER ANYTHING
I SAY IN BED
BEGGING U TO STOP
PAAVI!!
ARGHHH!!!

I FEARED MENOPAUSE LAST YEAR
WHEN U TOUCHED ME

She felt her insides begin to melt, slowly
Like chocolate chips in a double boiler
They looked the same at first and then a squirt of ecstasy from every chip, until they all hugged and melded
And formed a perfect smooth river

Amma and Athai walked out

"Ishitaaa" "Why cudnt u tell me he is here?" Amma was ashamed

R&B handed his cup back to his wife

He stood at the spot he stood at the first time he came, when she didnt speak and he came in to apologize

"It doesnt matter Mrs Iyer" he smiled cheerfully

Janaki Athai whispered is he not cold

Amma told him that

"No I am not" he smiled amused

"She told me she drove up here while u were sleeping" Amma smacked II not so gently


"Avan varave ille nu poi sonna" Amma explained to the lady chef
(She lied to me)

"Avan pesave maatano?" (does he never talk?) the lady asked shocked

"Except when he has to ask me for my daughter's hand in marriage" Appa grumbled

R&B threw his head back and laughed huskily

"March 8th,  tomorrow, I cant believe its been a year" Amma gushed  "She is married and pregnant and almost ready to deliver"
"When we saw you with Samyukta returning from the concert outside Karnataka Sangha near Moti Bagh?" Amma asked

He nodded

"Mr Iyer and I talked about you when we got home"

Appa shot daggers at Amma

AYYYO!!! AMMA

DONT U DARE SAY ANY FURTHER
STOP STOP STOP RIGHT THERE!!

"Mr Iyer was lamenting how our Iyer boys dont dress as smartly as you" Amma SAID
IT "We must find a boy thats self confident and handsome as you" Amma laughed, amused and delighted at the turn nature? destiny made

R&B looked at his wife, she blushed a dark red...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohh
So so sweet.
Had smile through out. First appa's antics.
Then Amma's going down the memory lane which defiantly has pleased dude.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you Nisha.
It's so amazing last January we were eager when will they admit their feeling and be together.
Now they soon will move to next level post marriage be parents to angel Nivi.
You are taking us through an amazing journey.
Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chooow sweet update Nisha...was chuckling throughout Appa  and Dudes conversation...Dude is in a fine mood...really a very sweet feel good update. ...loved amma mentioning the first time they saw him and their thoughts.👏
Thanks for the update and request for weekend...lots of long updates detailed descriptions of the ceremony...and a beautiful mushy update about their first marriage anniversary😳...pleeeaaassseee

I am not able to write how happy I am after reading the update. Thanks for the big smile on my face...thanks for writing SOSY...🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago


Appa throughout the update 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kajal

I give it to you
10/10 for finding JUST THE RIGHT pic each time