sue's poetry pocket
a poetry thread where you can find a mess of unfinished and confused thoughts😆😆😆
u'll find my all poems posted there
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4451763
Seeking
solace in solitude is mainly your favorite theme ,--" I with myself "
is always a fascinating theme to almost all the poets . The churning
thoughts in one's mind which brings out the strong emotions in to
forefront, is the beautiful process every writer goes through ,
resultant of some beautiful poems
- snehamadhuri
sparks of attractionwritten with a pov of zoya, this poem drabble brings out the lonely rainy night where she's weak and remembring the times she crushed on asad and how that turned into love! read on to see how death gave the two souls a life together!!!https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4478990This brought tears into my eyes. Very well emoted Sue :)
The best part...You left something untouched, Only Zoe's emotions were portrayed and they were done excellently :)
hats off Sue...This was an amazing piece of writing. The best of you, seriously :)
- Annie
I blushed with Zoya and I cried with her. It even felt like breathing my
last with her. You my dear need to take a bow for this exceptionally
well written piece. - ChocoBerry
Simply loved it
No words described how u feel when ur other half gone forever. It was sad but beautifully written. - asifiqbalsh
AR version
sparks of attractionwritten
with a pov of ridhimaa, this poem drabble brings out the lonely rainy night
where she's weak and remembring the times she crushed on armaan and how
that turned into love! read on to see how death gave the two souls a
life together!!!https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4478954
It was Heart-Touching.😭
The Emotions were so Nicely explained. - PriyaCherry
KAYA version
sparks of attractionwritten
with a pov of ananya, this poem drabble brings out the lonely rainy night
where she's weak and remembring the times she crushed on her boss,kabir and how
that turned into love! read on to see how death gave the two souls a
life together!!! https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4478963
Now
coming to this Drabble it was super awesome, and beautifully written by
you. I loved it sooo much. I really loved the flow of the poem 😳
- zakter
Amazing how u blended it according to this plot
though i'm not watching the show but it was just so good to read
very well done - miniTHEnomad
maafi nahi tumhara dil chaiyee
a song drabble on bin tere where armaan is angry on ridhimaa to play a ridiculous prank. read on to see how one rainy night their heart speaks!!!
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4439902Your drabble made me miss DMG...Youtube here I come!😆 -Annie
I liked the song selection n the incident around which this is based was one of my favorite tracks. - sweet_tehs
Unexpected Auto Ride
zoya's messy thoughts about her loving asad when gets clearer in young summer love. read on to know how an unexpected auto ride can make asad and zoya come together as asya.
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4583379
Well it was very good and Well written...😆😆😆
But
U know AsYa ko harr jagah baithe padha hai ...boat pe , tonga pe ,
train mein aur pata nhi kaha kahan...but kisi ne bhi ASYA ko AUTO mein
nhi bithaya,...🤪 you know...you made them feel like one among us and also it was a real good touch of realty to this part..
-Mayur
it was very well written and conveyed the pain that they both were
going through so well. But I was happy that it ended on a happy note. -ChocoBerrymission hunting nana
a fun post where dmg gang is on a mission to find nana! how they find nana will set u wide eyed and rofling 😉
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4481356YAAR mein has has ke paagal ho gayi
Its soo funny dear
- aseelasha
RM were hilarious n AR cute...
I always loved the gang masti n u did a perfect job..miss them so much.. - sweet_tehs
Haahheee...its funny...tooo much.Loved it.
M rolling on my bed. - --MinOch--
NOT "just friends"
a naughty and innocent asad sees a mummy!!! read on to know how zoya's adventure of wearing a sariee turns asya into NOT "just friends"😉
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4426675
it was superb amazing n hilarious os... asya r too much CUTE
- asyaarshilover
Well not just friends...is a not just o.s but a lovely beginning of a beautiful relationship...loved it 😊
- swapno
the half kiss
zoya stands out of a stubborn asad's room door.lion is angry and u have to read on to see asya HALF kissing!!😆
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4512096Such a beautiful peace of work sue
I loved it totally .Well written 👏
Fighting scene was dashing😆
Half kiss was mashaallah -azsumay
Wowww!!!
This was cute and beautiful, Sue...I loved it!!!!
AsYa are adorable.. <3 <3..
-Infatuation
It was funny cute sweet and suspense filled os at one point
Beautifully written - sanah12
Oye ye os tha
muje laga QH dekh rahi hu
its very lovely
Very well written
gud job yaar 👏 - enthusiastic
friends with benefits?
an 18+ two shot of asya addicted to each other! read on to know where they goes with the young passion!
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4481540
Awww love it Hot passion egnite and erupted
Leading to soft beautiful confessions
And slow soft lovemaking
Love it - anopama
Completely adorable and lovable asya were!
New in the genre but I like ur courage to write on every aspect..
Well done
- Gulaabo
the night call of the dogs
asya are reunited and the family comes together!! the reason are dogs!! read on to hear the night call😉
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4379686
Really liked it.
Where all the good things happened and were brought to life and the evil things and beings like Tanveer were out of picture.
Liked the ending. it was so cute and what a surprise to have Dilshad and Najma back 😃
Also, What an unique title! 😆
All in all , a lovely read! ⭐️
-Chandnii.
I loved the story to the core and it is a very cute story with a lovely ending. - asya7
The Brewer's Girl
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4625092
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Edited by suearmaniac - 7 years ago