OS : Paas Aaye Hum Tum Part 10(last) on pg 40 ( on 29 Jan 16)

Posted: 2015-12-10T06:36:25Z
Hello every1...
Here I m back with a new one shot...
Thank u for giving soo much appreciation to my 1st write up nd motivated by those appreciation I m back with a new one.. Actually just now I can't commit myself to FFs becoz of my studies..
So here I m with a new story.
Its just the intro of the story (a short one ) . I hope u guys will like it. The future updates will depends on Ur liking.
Here u go ...

Priya: Papa I luv u na.. Plz don't cry like this. You know na I hate 2 see tears in Ur eyes. Plz papa stop this now. Aap jante ho na ki this is my dream job.Nd if u will cry like this I will never be able 2 go. Fine u will nt stop crying so I will nt go. She turned to leave. Sudhir held her hand stopping her.

Sudhir: Beta tum jaanti ho na ki mein tumse kitna jaada pyar karta huin na. Bas ye aansu isiliye hain kyunki tu pheli baar mujhe se dur ja rahi ho na.

Priya: Papa aap jaante hain na Neha hai wahan par aur upar se apne khud saare arrangements ki hain mere rahane ke tu phir aap kyun itni chinnta kar rahe hain.

"It is the last call 4 the passengers of flight no 1203 going to Mumbai " announced the airport authority. The daughter-father duo bid each other adieu.

[ Priya Sharma : A 28 year old bubbly girl. The only daughter of the biggest industrialist in merchandize ,Sudhir Sharma. Priya had lost her mother during the age when she was just 12. Her father was only her support system. Neha priya's childhood bf who had shifted to Mumbai with her parents when they were just 10. She had only one dream i.e 2 get a job in the kapoor industries . She considered Amarnath Kapoor as her mentor in achieving her goal of become the world's biggest architect. ]

Flight landed the airport of Mumbai. Priya stood on the airport with crossed arms aspiring to achieve her aspirations nd unaware of the change in the phase of her life with the development of a new relation. Neha was standing outside 2 meet her old bestie. Priya came out of the airport nd ran to Neha. Both hugged each other with teary eyes after 18 years.
Both dropped at priya's apartment helping her in setting her things. In fact there was no need to set as any things bcoz being an overpossessive father sudhir had done all the arrangements.
It was a 2 BHK house.Priya said 2 neha.

Priya: Neha yr when will making me meet with Ur husband. I have often seen his photos with u nd even heard a lottt from u bt now I want 2 meet him face 2 face nd ask him how he jhelofiyes (bears ) u.
Neha frowned nd moved out of apartment nd said 2 Priya.

Neha: We will meet 2morrow at my apartment nd u can even meet my husband as well as my another best frnd. Priya mimed a good bye to Neha . Priya lazily laid on her bed excited yet nervous for her new phase in life.

Precap: Next would be a masaledar meet of ram nd Priya...

Plz do comment..
Sorry for the mistakes...
Thnq u every1..

Edited by RishikaRashi - 2016-01-29T09:56:51Z
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Posted: 2015-12-10T07:01:08Z
Very nice n waiting for raya meeting n face off n pls update bada karna
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Posted: 2015-12-10T07:23:58Z
nice start of story
awesome update
eagerly waiting for raya meeting
continue soon
jaldi update Karna
do write more
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Posted: 2015-12-10T07:24:59Z
next time plzz pm send krna mujhe
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Posted: 2015-12-10T07:37:23Z
Nice one
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 2015-12-10T07:53:34Z
Interesting start
please continue soon
PM me if possible.
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Posted: 2015-12-10T07:59:06Z
Originally posted by Rayaland

Very nice n waiting for raya meeting n face off n pls update bada karna

I m sure would definitely like Raya's meet . Its worth the wait..
I will try 2 update longer .
Thnxs 4 commenting :))
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Posted: 2015-12-10T08:16:48Z
Originally posted by Mitwaa

nice start of story
awesome update
eagerly waiting for raya meeting
continue soon
jaldi update Karna
do write more

Thnxs u 4 Ur comment...
Nd I m sure u all will definitely like Raya meet ...
I will definitely try to update asap. :)
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