O$- Cr@zy Priy@

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Posted: 2015-11-25T22:48:52Z

This OS I'm dedicated to Bday girl JO. Well isse OS toh nahi keh sakte..simple random scenes...ek comedy update keh sakte hai. Muje nahi pata whether u people will like it or not but Im damn sure Jo will like it.

 

Jo this is for uWink

 

After completing B.tech in computers Priya is looking for a job in a good company. She was very bright student and finally she managed to grab one job with 3 years bond. Priya happiness knew no bounds but later Sudhir strictly said no and without any choice, she decided to do some good computer course in Mumbai.

Priya managed to convince her parents and shift to Mumbai with her friend Neha. They rented a double bedroom flat. Priya was happy as she always dreamed to visit (sapno ki nagri) Mumbai.

Priya:- Neha can't tell you how happy Iam...!!! Mein isse achhe se jeena chahti hoon.

Priya then got busy in the laptop, the so called networking site facebook. Neha got irritated.

Neha:- Tu abhi aayi hai aur abhi se hi laptop ke saamne baith gayi hai.

Priya:- Arre mein apna status update kar rahi hoon. Pata hai mere na bahut saare friends yahi Mumbai mein hai. Aur muje bahut mann hai ki koi na koi online friend se milu.

Neha:- Priya online friends dur se hi achhe lagte hai aur meri mane toh jaise tere papa kehte hai don't put urself in any trouble mein bhi yahi kahungi.  

Priya ignored and updated her status "In Mumbai, ready to meet u guys". 

 

In the evening,

Neha:- Priya bore ho raha hai kahi ghumne chalte hai. Yahi paas mein hi ek park hai. Kya pata kisi hot ladke se mulaqat bhi ho jaaye.

Priya:- Nehaaa..tu sachhi na pagal hai

Neha:- Ohh Madam, kya pata tere liye bhi wahan koi mill jaaye and winks

Priya:- Nehaa...tu janti hai...Im strictly not into love marriage. Maa papa maanenge nahi issliye mein love-shav ke chakkar mein padne nahi wali.

Neha:- Priya sach bata agar tuje kisise sachhi pyar ho gaya toh tu kya karegi.

Priya:- Neha pehli baat eisa hone nahi wala. Mein eisa hone nahi dungi. Toh muje aage sochne ki zaroorat nahi hai.

On other side of the city,

Vikram:- Ram tuje eisa kyun lagta hai ki ladkiyaan tere paise ki wajah se tere peeche aati hai. 

Ram:- Kyunki ladkiyaan eisi hi hai. I can read it from their eyes. Unhe mujse pyar kam mere paiso mein jyada interest hota hai.

Vikram:- Achha toh tu aankhien dekhkar pehchaan jaata hai ki ladkiyaan tere paise ke peeche hai ya nahi. Toh agar koi eisi ladki se mile jisse dekhkar eisa lage ki she is not behind ur money toh kya karega.

Ram:- Mein seedhe uski aankhon mein aankhen daalkar bolunga ki Hey I love you.

Vikram(in his mind):- Pitega.

Vikram:- Chal aaj teri aankho ki testing kar lete hai. Tujhe seedhe ladki ke aankhon mein dekhkar pata karna ki ladki tere paise ke peeche hogi ki pyar ke. Aaj se teri pechaan badal dete hai. Aage se tu jisse bhi milega toh Ram Kapoor bankar nahi balki Raj Malhotra bankar. A simple guy, ek medium kamane wala ladka bankar aur phir dekhte hai kitni ladkiyaan tuj par marti hai. Yahi paas mein ek park hai aaj wahi se shuruwat karte hai.

Ram:- Kya bakwaas kar raha hai. Aaye din mera article aata rehta hai.

Vikram:- Ram business article bahut kam log padte hai. Abhi yeh sab chod aur chal mere saat park mein.

 

At Park,

Priya:- Chal na Neha wahan see-saw par jaate hai.

Neha:- R u mad???. Tuje see-saw par baithna hai...really. Tu yahan Mumbai see-saw par baithne aayi hai.

Priya:- common yaar bass baithne ka mann kar raha hai. Yahan koi security bhi nahi hai. Chal na yaar. Masti karne aaye hai masti karte na.

Vikram and Ram also reached at the same time and they saw Neha and Priya sitting on the see-saw and they look at them amusedly.

Vikram:- Yeh dekh inn dono ko dekh pointing it to (neha and priya). Muje lagta tha sirf tu hi ajeeb harqate karta hai but see Im wrong. Inn dono ko dekhkar yahi lagta hai ki tere jaise namune bahut hai iss duniya mein.

Ram:- Kahi bhi raho muje taana maarna nahi chodega na. Mein itna bhi bachha nahi hoon OK.

Priya:- Neha chal na abb bass karte hai. Woh dekh na woh dono (pointing it to Ram and Vikram) hame hi dekh rahe hai.

Neha:- Haan toh kya hua. Dekhne de. Waise dono bade smart aur handsome lag rahe hai.

Priya:- Neha please chalte hai.

Neha:- Abb kya hua madam ladko ko dekhte hi pasine chutt rahe hai. Achha chal unhi se jaakar puchte hai.

Priya:- Neha please rehne de na. But Neha drag hers to them .

Vikram:- Dekh dono yahi aa rahe hai...

Ram:- Vikram mein keh raha hoon chal yahan se warna hum dono pitenge.

Neha:- ohh hello kya...

Vikram:- Kya...!!! kya hua...???

Neha:- Tum dono tab se hame kyun dekh rahe hai. Pehle kabhi ladki dekhi nahi kya.

Vikram:- Yahan kahi likha hai kya ki hum ladkiyon ko nahi dekh sakte hai. Mere dosth ne toh aaj tak koi ladki hi dekhi nahi.

Neha:- Hey u ???? But Ram held his hand and said "mera dosth pagal ho gaya hai. Mein uski taraf se bhi aue meri taraf se bhi maafi maangta hoon...Sorry and he took vikram from there.

 

After they left,  Neha started laughing.

Neha:- Priya dekh tere jaisa namuna hai woh. Ladki ko dekhkar kitna darr gaya. Sorry bolkar bhaag gaya.

Priya:- Neha u r mad. Abb chale yahan se.

Neha:- Seriously Priya. Dono bade cute aur handsome hai. Especially woh little plump guy.

Priya:- Toh jaa jaakar pyar kar le.

Neha:- Mein apne liye thodi bol rahi...woh toh tumhare liye bol rahi hoon.

Priya(irritatingly):- Very funny abb chale.

Ram:- Kya bake jaa raha tha wahan. Apne saat saat muje bhi pitwayega kya. Woh ladki ko dekha baap re kaise ladne aa gayi thi.

Vikram:- Ohh common Ram...Kuch nahi hota. Yeh saari ladkiyaan eisi hi hoti hai.

In the park Priya and Ram crossed each other three to four times. Every time they look into each other whereas Neha and vikram stares angrily to each other. 

 

Next day Priya checks her mail and saw two of her online friends respond to her status. Priya jump in excitement and calls Neha...Neha. Neha becomes scared and came running to her.

Neha:- Kya hua Priya tu itna chilla kyun rahi hai.

Priya(very excitedly):- Nehaa...Meine tuje apne online friends ke baare mein kaha tha na usme se do log abhi Mumbai mein hi hai aur paas hi rehte hai. Usne invite kiya hai uske room mein. She is a doctor. Usne kaha ki kal ka schedule dekhkar woh call karegi aur milegi bhi.

Neha tap her hand on forehead and said "uff Priya tuje chillate hue dekhkar mein darr hi gayi thi pata nahi abb kya hua. Priya congrats abb please muje chod de. Waise bhi mera kal job ka pehla din hai so u enjoy with ur online friend.

 

Next morning,

Priya called her online friend. They fixed the schedule and Priya left to meet her friend. On the way she purchased a box of chocolates to gift her. She reached to her friends' place and both have a dearly hug. This is the first time Priya is meeting any online friend. She was very excited. They chat on many things. They clicked pictures and uploaded them in the tube. Then both went to the KFC where they clicked many pics mostly with the funky expressions.

At the same time Ram also came to KFC. He looks at Priya clicking pics. Raya ignored each other.

After KFC the dear friends went to a mall and entered into the Archies gallery. They held teddies and again started clicking pictures. Ram who was roaming inside the mall saw them. He felt strange seeing their childish act.

 After spending and enjoying its time to say goodbye. Both girls come out from the mall and both have a dearly hug again. They kissed each other goodbye, and  this time Ram shocked seeing them.

Ram(thinking):- Yeh ladki ajeeb hai. Sabke saamne eise hug aur kiss...but then he ignored and left the place

 

Priya is enjoying her time in Mumbai. She joins a course.

In the mean while she met one more online friend and while they had a chat, Priya ordered sandwiches. It was more grilled than usual and Priya did not like the taste. She calls the person and started shouting at him.

People present in the food court looked at her including Ram who was then present in the food court.

Ram:- Yeh itna chilla kon raha hai. He saw Priya fighting with the manager for the sandwiches.

Ram(thinking):- Gosh this girl is mad.

Priya saw Ram and thinks "Grrr...Yeh yahan bhi aa gaya".

Priya friend:- Chod na Priya...kya sandwiches ke liye jagda kar rahi hai. Chal yahan se chalte hai.

Priya becomes happy that she met two of her online friends.

 

One day Priya and Neha drives to nightclub. Priya is not used to but because of Neha insistence she agreed to go along with her. The moment she entered into the club she started feeling Claustrophobic.

Priya:- Neha muje kuch teek nahi lag raha. Chalo yahan se.

Neha:- Priya relax...tum first time aa rahi ho na issliye eisa lag raha hai.

 Priya then saw Ram with his friend Vikram.

Neha:- Hey Priya woh dekh...yeh dono wahi hai na park wale.

Vikram:- Ram woh dekh yeh dono wahi hai na park wali.

Ram eyes met Priya. They stare at each other for some time and then Priya looked away.

Priya:- Neha yahan se chalte hai

Neha:- wait Priya dekh sab kitna enjoy kar rahe hai. Muje toh dance karne ka mann kar raha hai.

Priya:- Neha muje toh sirdard ho raha hai.

Neha:- Ek kaam kar yahan baithkar juice pee mein ek bakre ko pakadti hoon mere saat dance karne ke liye. 

Neha ordered juice for Priya and mixed vodka in it.

Neha finished her drink and goes near to Ram and Vikram and asked Vikram for a dance. Vikram becomes thrilled and agrees to go with her.

Neha to Ram:- Meri dosth ka khayal rakna...saying this she winks. Priya got irritated and closed her eyes.

 

Priya is drinking her juice and watches Neha and Vikram are enjoying. At the same time a group of boys entered and sit beside her and pass comments on her. Initially she ignored but then they started misbehaving with her. One of them held her hand. Priya's anger hit the point.

She jerked his hand and said "Just stay in ur limit...u moron". When again he held her hand and pulled her to him, Priya moved back and slapped him hard

Ram who was watching is becomes shocked. They get angered and circle her.

 Priya did not give up and she starts bashing each of them but her drink starts affecting her. It felt as if her surroundings started spinning, she started losing control on herself. One of them held her from waist and pulled her towards him. She is not in state of defense and he again tries to kiss her but before his lips touch her, a strong hand pulled him and he falls to ground. Before the boy understands anything Ram held him and punches him hard on his face. As another guy approaches Ram, he holds the guy and hits him hard on his lower abdomen. He also falls on the ground. Other two boys moved back and left the place. Priya was out of her senses and trips but Ram holds her strongly. He looks for her friend but Neha and Vikram are nowhere to be seen.

 

Priya is fully talli. She circles her hand around his neck and moves forward. Ram tries to moves his face sideways. He takes her out of the club. He leaves her but she keeps tripping and so he holds her tight preventing her from falling. Priya feels uneasy and she starts vomiting. He calms her down and massages her back. He gave her water to drink and cleans her face. He then takes her to a nearby hotel.

Ram kept Priya under the shower for a while and after that he dries her hair with a towel. Priya is still unconscious. He then takes her to the room and lays her on the bed. Her clothes are wet and she started shivering. First he decided to change her clothes but then he stepped back from his decision. He knew it will put him in trouble. He covers her with blanket and sit on the couch waiting for her to wake up.

 

Ram is watching her closely and remembers how she circled her hand around him. This is the first time someone was so close to him. He still feel her aroma. He smiles and walked up to her and sat at the edge of the bed staring her. She looked divine. Her wet hair and clean face and a mole above her upper lips is captivating him. The epitome of beauty. Unknown to him, he bent  towards her face and caresses her cheeks with the back of his palm. He was so close that he could hear her breathing. Ram who is nonchalant with the word girl is now with a girl very close in their first meet and that too in a single bed.

Suddenly reality struck him and he moved back. He then checked her bag and found her mobile but it had a pattern lock. Ram tried all types of pattern to unlock the mobile. After many trial and errors he finally succeeded

Ram becomes super excited. His one more first, checking any girl's mobile. He notices her name. He murmurs "PRIYA". He then checks her gallery and stunned, his eyes pop out seeing more than 3000 selfies of her and her gang. He murmurs "SELFIE FREAK".

After some time he also felt sleepy and slept at the edge in the sitting position. 

 

Morning,

Priya woke up first. She looks around. Nothing looks familiar to her, she wakes up in jerk and realizes she is not in her home. She looks to other side and saw a man is sleeping with her.  Priya shouts and Ram wakes up with a noise.

Ram(sleepy voice):- Subah subah itna chilla kyun rahi ho

Priya(shockingly):- Aap??? Aap yahan kya kar rahe hai. Aur mein yahan kaise aayi.

Ram:- Kal jo hua tumhe kuch bhi yaad nahi hai.

Priya:- Kal kya hua tha. Ahhh...mera sar...She held her head in pain. Ram understood she doesn't remember anything. He decided to play with her for some time.

Ram:- Hawww...tumhe sach mein nahi pata kal kya hua tha. Common hum dono yahan iss hotel ke kamre mein akele. Mein aur tum bed par ek saat. Aur tum keh rahi ho tumhe kuch nahi pata.

Priya:- What???? Aap jhoot bol rahe hai. Mein janti hoon kuch nahi hua hai.

Ram bends towards her and Priya moves back. He kept his both hand on either side of her "tum itne daawe ke saat kaise keh sakti ho ki kuch nahi hua. Mere paas proof bhi hai yeh ki kal hamare beech kya kya hua tha".

 

Priya eyes brim with tears. She pushes him "Mein nahi janti mein yahan aapke saat kaise aayi. Muje bass itna yaad hai club mein meine juice piya tha. Her voice chocked and said "dekiye muje please yahan se jaane dijiye". Mein eisi ladki nahi hoon jiasa ki aap samaj rahe hai. Mein abb bhi manti hoon hamare beech kuch nahi hua" and Priya started crying.

Ram gets scared seeing her cry.

Ram:- Achha ruko please rona nahi...Please tum rona nahi. Mein tumhare saat mazak kar raha tha. Dekho mein tumhe sab batata hoon. Mera naam Ra...He stops and said Raj hai. Raj Malhotra. Mein Kapoor Industries mein job karta hoon aur kal raat and he said everything.

Priya looked very innocently at him and asked "toh phir aap bed par kya kar rahe the".

 Ram grins and said SORRY...Abb jaakar fresh ho jaao. Nashta karne ke baad mein tumhe ghar chod dunga.

Priya:- Muje ghar jaana hai. Mein breakfast wahi karungi.

Ram:- Arre baba itni subah subah niklogi koi dekega toh galat samaj baithega. Issliye thode waqt ke baad nikalte hai. Priya trust him and she nodded and went to freshen up.

Other side Neha is worried about Priya. She is continuously calling Priya but she is not picking up her call.

Neha:- Priya where r u??? Kahan chali gayi ho??? Vikram ke chakkar mein mein Priya ko bhool hi gayi upar se usse pila bhi diya tha. Priya call utha warna tere dad muje kachha chaba jaayenge. Please pick up the phone Priya. Please god.

 

Here Priya freshen up. She wore the same dress.

Ram:- Breakfast ready hai chalo aa jaao. Jaldi se finish kar lo uske baad mein tumhe ghar chod deta hoon. Ram took one bite of paranthe...Wow it's so yummy...Priya waise tumne bataya nahi ki tum itna yakin ke saat keh sakti ho ki mein tumhare saat kuch nahi karunga.

Priya:- Woh aapko yaad hai hamari pehli mulaqat. Jab Neha aapse aur aapke dosth se ladd rahi thi meine aapka chehra dekha tha aap kitna dare hue the. Priya looks down and beams.

Ram smiles naughtily:- Hmm...very smart. Lekin uss din muje toh laga tha ki aaj Vikram pitega.

Raya finished their breakfast and left.

Ram takes his bike. First time Priya is out with boy and that too on bike. She becomes nervous. She held the handle tightly but Ram drove very fast and Priya becomes scared and she circles her hand around his waist. Ram smiles and drove faster.

 

In the office,

Ram is thinking hard. His mind is revolving around Priya and her sweet antics. Vikram notices this and asked "Kya baat hai kahi tuje koi ladki toh nahi mill gayi"

Ram:- I love her.

Vikram shockingly Kyaaa!!!! Kisse????.

Ram:- Priya.!!!! Vikram:- kon Priya

Ram:- Arre wahi jisse hum park mein mile the aur jiske dosth ke saat kal tu naach raha tha.BTW kal raat tu kahan tha.

Vikram(shyly):- Kal mein Neha ke saat hi tha aur uske flat mein hi so gaya.

Ram:- What????? Is ka matlab tum dono ke beech...????. Vikram looks at him sheepishly.

Ram:- Aur tu muje abb bata raha hai.Kamine...

Vikram:- Wait tu bhi toh uski dosth ke saat tha na kal raat...toh tum dono bhi???

Ram(timidly):- Nahi hamare beech eisa kuch bhi nahi hua. Haan but she is sweet and I love her.

Vikram:- Toh phir ek kaam karte hai. Aaj sham ko Neha ke ghar chalte hai. Mein Neha se mill lunga aur tera bhi Priya se milna ho jaayega.

Priya:- Ohh god Neha...r u mad. Tum aur Vikram. Shit.

 

Evening,

Ram and Vikram came for dinner. Neha takes Vikram to room. Ram and Priya were sitting alone in the room. Both are feeling awkward. Ram initiates. He clears his throat and said "Muje nahi lagta Vikram aur Neha ka itne jaldi khatam hoga". Priya is alarmed and widen her eyes.

Ram:- Sorry...and looks down.

Priya:- Agar aapko bhook lagi hai toh dinner kar le.

Ram:- Yaa sure. Muje toh bahut bhook lagi hai. Priya smiles.

Dinner went smoothly and after some time Ram and Vikram left. Soon foursome becomes very good friends. All four spend time together during weekend.

One day,

Neha:- Priya tu kab Raj ko batane wali ho ki tu usse pyar karti hai

Priya:- Neha shut up Ok...mein Raj se pyar vyar nahi karti.

Neha:- Ohh really Priya... jhoot kyun bol rahi ho yaar. Tumhari aankhon mein dhikta hai that u love him.

Priya:- Nehaaa...U r mad

Neha:- Mein aur Vikram soch rahe hai ki hum dono shaadi kar le.

Priya:- Good decision. Waise bhi tum dono jiss speed se bhaag rahe ho muje bhi lagta hai tum dono ko shaadi kar leni chahiye.

 

Other side,

Vikram:- Ram tu kab bolne wala hai ki tum Priya se pyar karta hai.

Ram:- Muje toh yeh bhi nahi pata ki Priya bhi mujse pyar karti hai ya nahi.

Vikram:- Yeh bhi toh tabhi hoga na jab tu usse kahega.

Ram:- Wahan bhi toh problem hai Vikram. Meine usse bataya hi nahi hai ki mein Ram hoon Raj nahi hoon. Yeh sab teri wajah se ho raha hai. Tere gande gande ideas...He gets irritated.

Vikram:- Tu itna gussa kyun ho raha hai... bata dena na.

Ram:- Agar woh nahi maani toh...I cannot afford to lose her.

Vikram:- Eisa kuch nahi hoga...OK. 

 

Next day,

Ram calls  Priya

Ram:- Hii Priya abhi kahan ho

Priya:- Itni subah subah kahan ho sakti hoon Raj...obviously ghar par.

Ram:- Toh phir teek hai aaj tumhe mere office mein aana hoga...aavogi

Priya:- Mein tumhare office mein aakar kya karungi.

Ram:- Woh sab tumhe wahan pata chal jaayega...Aaj subah 10 baje...mein tumhara wait karunga.

Priya:- Arre lekin...but he hang up the call.

Priya is waiting for Raj in front of Kapoor Industries. Security came and guided her into office. She is little surprised and entered into the office and looks for Raj but he is nowhere. She calls him on his mobile but he is not picking up call. Just then one girl appear  "Ma'am aap Miss Priya sharma hai...Priya nodded...aapko Sir apne cabin mein bula rahe hai. Go straight and then turn right.

Priya(confusedly):- Muje bula rahe hai?????

 Priya said thank u and headed towards the cabin. She is nervous, scared and confused too. She stands in front of cabin and read MR. RAM KAPOOR. She checks herself and knocked the door.

Ram:- Come in...

Priya enters into the cabin. She saw Ram is standing near the window showing his back to her. Ram turns. Priya becomes shocked Raj tum????. He covers the distance and goes near her.

Priya:- Raj yeh sab kya hai. Aap Ram Kapoor ke cabin mein kya kar rahe hai???

Ram:- Im not Raj...Im Ram...Ram Kapoor and Im the owner of Kapoor groups of Industries.

Priya:- Phir aapne mujse jhoot kyun bola.

Ram:- Priya Im sorry. Mein tumhe sab batata hoon meine eisa kyun kiya. He tells her the whole story.

 

Priya:- Aur bhi kuch hai jo aapne mujse chupaya hai

Ram:- Haan. Priya baffled.

Priya:- Kya

Ram:- Priya Im dating one girl. Priya felt as somebody pierced her heart. 

Ram continue...

Yess I love her aur meine shaadi karne ka bhi faisla kar liya hai. Priya stays clam and tries to look strong.

Ram:- Tum usse milna nahi chahogi. Priya face sulks and tries to control her emotions. Ram steps near her and Priya moves back till she hit the cabin door. She is trapped between Ram and door. Ram raises his hand and Priya closed her eyes. He locks the door and put his hand on her waist and pulls towards him strongly. Priya falls on his chest.

Priya:- Raj...Ram. Her breathe is jammed in her throat.

Ram:- Look into my eyes Priya.

Priya gasped and said "Ram...Ram press more into her. Their bodies met. She is getting weak with Ram's intimacy.

 

Ram(huskily and romantically):- I love you Priya. I love you very very much. I want to spend my whole life with u Priya. Saying this he kept strands of hair at back of her ear. Priya gaze at him widely and hugs him tightly and cries. Ram happiness knew no bounds. He held her tightly and kisses on her head.

After some time Priya broke the hug and looks at him who is intently looking at her desirably. His eyes fix on her pink rosy lips and moves towards her. Priya knew his intentions and closed her eyes. His lip lightly brushes her lips and Priya shivered with a touch. He is waiting for this moment from a long time. He presses his lip with her. Priya shuddered with the touch. Ram held her strongly and kisses with more pressure. She opens her lips and let him explore her mouth. He sucks and nibbles her lips, his tongue circling around her. He pulled away and saw her flushed cheeks.   

 

Marriage night,

Raya is sitting on the bed. Priya head on his shoulder and Ram held her securely.

Ram:- Achha Yeh batao honeymoon mein kahan jaane ka plan hai.

Priya(excitedly):- GOA

Ram:- Yes Goa is a beautiful place lekin mein tumhe India se bahar ki koi place ki baat kar raha hoon.

 Priya(happily):- Nahi muje Goa hi jaana hai wahan meri ek di rehti hai.

Ram:- Dii!!! Kon di

Priya:- hai ek dii. Meri unse mulaqat online hui aur pata hai meri aur bhi online friends hai jinse mein mili bhi hoon. Uss din aapne muje ek ladki ke saat dekha tha na KFC mein woh meri online friend hai. Aur ek baar aapne muje food court mein dekha tha na woh bhi meri online friend hai.

Ram(scarily):- Tum teek toh ho na

Priya:- haan kyun muje kya hua hai

Ram:- Priya aaj hamari first night hai aur tum pyar ki baate chodkar apne online friends ki baate kar rahi ho...achha yeh sab chodo yeh lo...

Ram then gave her one gift. Priya becomes excited "isme kya hai" and unwrapped the packet.

Ram:- Khud hi dekh lo. Priya open the gift and stunned. He gave 50 shades of grey book to her. Priya becomes coy and looks down.

Ram:- Don't look down Priya. I will try all this with you. Priya jaws dropped. Ram came closer to her. Priya voice hitched to her throat. He closes the gap but before he seal the lips Priya pushes him.

Ram:- Abb kya hua

Priya:- Ram muje na hum dono ki eise pose mein selfie leni hai.

Ram:- What???? R u crazy??? Tum eise hamare first night mein photo click karna chahti ho.

Priya:- haan toh usme kya problem kya hai. Pata hai aapko muje selfie lene ka bahut shouk hai. Meine ek baar na ek din mein 500 pictures click kiye hai. Isn't it exciting?

Ram murmurs "Hein bagwaan Priya se shaadi karke meine koi galti toh nahi kar di. Beta Ram bahut mehnat karni padegi isse apne line mein lane mein". Ram smile and seal the moment.

Raya begin their journey of love as a husband and wife.

Edited by sandhyasn - 2015-11-25T22:43:48Z
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Posted: 2015-11-25T22:56:53Z
Wowww Wowww... what an os...  


(frock...LOLLOL)

this is the mazedaar os that I have ever read till now...   




I just loved it...di
diii... love u so much.. muaahhh...



thanks for this beautiful story..

hahaha... neha n priya k bonding is so cuteee..
priya is so much into social networking sites WinkWink
wowww she met her online friends too...
mai bhi mili hu online friends se it feels so good yaarWink

eagerly wanna meet u ... hugs to u...Hug
hahaha neha k suggestions...n her warnings abt online frnds... lol roflssROFL
neha kabhi nhi sudhregiLOL
vikram aankhon k test karega...lol...LOLLOL
lol neha n priya see saw parROFL
priya kahi bhi jaati ram waha pahunch jaata hai..LOL
yeh neha bhi na vodka milane k jaroorat kya haiLOL
lol... priya is a selfie freak...WinkEmbarrassedLOL


naughty ram... 
aww that bike ride... lovely...Wink
nevik r like super fast express...LOL

wowww di... i really really enjoyed this os yaar...
superb proposal by ram...


Wedding Night par ram ko bht shock kr rhi priya...
she wanna go HM to Goa... to meet her online frnd...LOL
priya FN mai online frnds k baat kar rhi instead of other thingsLOL

Ram's gift is 50 shades of grey LOLROFL
lol... ram should have much patience...LOL
LOL... selfies in the FN
but I wanna say one thing ram should stop trying to bring priya in his line... he should also bcm crazy like priya.. then they will be crazy RAYA...WinkEmbarrassed



di u can't imagine how much i love this story...
this is the bestest os... love u yaar...
thank u for the wonderful OS.


muaah    

ddiii yeh lo award  for this amazing story...Wink

Edited by jodude - 2015-11-26T03:15:09Z
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Posted: 2015-11-25T23:38:02Z
sooo sweeet. Priya is so innocent. loved this is so much.
ram KO sach me bahot mehnat karni padegi Priya KO uske line me laane ki.. ha ha ha . wonderfully written.
do write more.
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Madhuri Dixit and Sakshi Tanwar....FOREVER FAVOURITES
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Posted: 2015-11-25T23:54:51Z
Awww superb n amazing di plsss keep.writing n best os as bday n i just it diff concept n raya love story in unique way pls keep writing
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Posted: 2015-11-25T23:55:25Z
Wow.. Superb story..
Apt title for the story..
Poor ram. Will take time to bring Priya in his line..
Please do write more
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Posted: 2015-11-26T00:29:55Z
Clap

A standing oviation to u sandy...

Such a good work...I'm rofling all thru the story...In the first and last part couldnt get sakshi in place of Priya...but somebody else...LOL

Jo...Now I would say...  may be this is the best gift u had today...

Selfie in First night...LOLLOLLOL  Ram would be likeShocked Ermm Sleepy

Super FN gift...Tongue Cool

Thanks for ur attempt sandy.
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Posted: 2015-11-26T00:59:36Z
Superb story...
A new and totally different Priya.
Keep writing more...

Edited by Sakshiashu - 2016-04-21T04:35:23Z
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Posted: 2015-11-26T02:46:37Z
Di You r awesome writer yaar..!




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