RAYA TS : TUM SAATH HO Last part on pg 5 update 24 dec 2015

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Posted: 3 years ago

 

"There's something about childhood friends that you just can't replace "

He is sitting near the lake's shore No one love him his cousin makes fun of his tone his mom says when he ll grow up his speaking tone will automatically become like others but why not Now ???he thinks and his thought moves to his next a girl standing her arms crosses over her chest looking angry  ...

Tumala Naam tya hai (what is you name ) 4 years old Ram ask her in his stammering tone (baby tone) not able to make sentence in clear hindi  ...

She looks down at him "Mela naam Pliya hai (My name is Priya ) same age priya replies in same stammering tone yet angry tone..

Ale tum bhi meli talah totla bolti ho..tome sit with me (hey you also stammer like me...come sit with me ) Ram replies with Joy because he finds someone like him...

All her anger towards her friends and cousin who teased her over her stammers ( baby tone ) vanishes when she heard ram's voice someone like her...she sits next to him...

Tum taha lehti ho...(where do you live )..Ram asks her while take a stone and throws in lake...

Main...Wo...totaity ( society ) me Nelw Ghal hai Naa wo mela hai...(Me..i live that new house in society)  priya replies him...

Ohh To Tum  ho DO mele ghal ke baju wae ghal me lahne aaye the 4 din pele (so you ppl came to live next my house 4 days ago ) Ram asks her again

She nods her head...

Tum itnne dusse me kyu thi (why were u so angry )...ram asks innocently...

Wo mele ilitataing coutins and  tuch frienls aaye the unhone mude chilaya (wo mere irritating friends aaye the unhone mujhe chidya (some of my irritating cousin and friends came they teased me )

Ohh to tumko bhi tab tidate hai (so you are also teased by all ) Ram ask her again...

She nods tears brimming in her eyes Ram looks at her dont know what to do...

then His mother's face comes in front of him when Some teased him and he cried his mother cups his face and wipes his tears and takes him in hugs console him ...Hmm mute bhi yahi talna chahiye (hmm i should do this )

He cups her face and wipes her tears and takes her in his small hug She hugs him back

her cousin sister's face comes in front of her eyes when her cousin was hugging any boy at School she asked her cousin she said My boyfriend

both separated and Priya with the same innocence " Hum Gl-friend Boy friend " hai kya...(are we girlfriend boyfriend )

Ram looks at her thinksof his favourite Tv Advertisement of Mcdownland and mimics  in same tone

" No gl-friends Bahut demanding hoti hai Mude ye chahiye wo chahiye "(No girlfriends are so demanding i want this i want that )

priya laughs over his mimicry and she mimics too " But Mujhe to bus ek Mc aloo tikki chahiye "

(But i just want Mc aloo tikki )

Ram laughs too and continues his mimicry "ESA KYa then tik hai (Oh like this ok then ) then he shows her his cheeks he is thinking that like TV ad Girl kisses the boy on cheeks So priya ll kiss to

Priya laughs more on this...

He again points on his cheeks ...Priya shows him tongue and runs away towards  her house Ram too runs behind her...shouting her name

Pliya ...Pliya luto main bhi aa laha ru...(priya...priya wait for me i am coming too )

 

"Childhood is a journey not Race "

12 year later

"What the hell" i just taught you and you duffer forget it in seconds where the hell were you mind you brainless jerk" priya shouts on ram and throws his notebook on his face stands up and takes water and gulps in one go puts back the glass with huge thud sound and comes again on the bed where both ram and priya practising thier Maths Sums tomorrow their Maths Exam and Ram forget formula of (a+b)2= a2+b2+ab

Ram who hides his face behind the book pops his head like a scared kitten when he sees priya's Red Angry face and hides again

From last 12 year Priya and he is best buddy They went to same school and same class ram protected her from bullies and Priya did all his homework and school stuff to save him from his parents and teacher

Time passed like this but Both are inseparable Ram is far away from study but he is creative he wants to became an architect like this father but his biggest problem is Study upto class 9th Only priya saved him otherwise he ddnt even pass his 5th class exams Priya taught him one night before exams and he passed on boundaries but Apart from her best buddy Priya is so intelligent and Caring She wants to become Astronaut Ram teased her always that She ddnt even carry herself how she ll carry A Spaceship ...

Back to present

Priya comes seat in front of him catches his book and puts on bed  Ram looks at her...

"Give me your mobile " Priya extends her hand...

Ram knows what comes next  he puts his mobile in her hand without asking anything

She sees 4 message from sanjana and looks at him again "So here were your mind "

Ohh Ram how many times i told you she is 2 years older and dumbo failed 2 times in class 10 and still with us"

"She is Hot" Ram blurts out and bites his tongue...

Priya throws his phone on bed and says "then please go to her and she ll surly help you to pass this board exam " and winks

No No i swear  to our friendship i will concentrate on study now lets start again Ram tells her

How many times i told you not to take fake Swear of our friendship what If its break Priya yells him

Ohh that ll never happens thats why i he stops and looks at priya who is all red in anger

" Ram you are Pig" says this she hits him with pillow he yells in pain

2 hour later

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PART 1

 

TBC

 

Edited by Janilover - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
Superb start...
Ram and Priya are always friends and Priya bossing him around..
Very funny..
Please continue soonTongue
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Posted: 3 years ago
Young n child Raya awww so sweet n cute
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Posted: 3 years ago
In childhood two pure soul come closed to each other which made them so inseparable in their teenage.
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Posted: 3 years ago
awww. so sweet n cute. loved this RaYa very much.

pl continue
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Posted: 3 years ago
This is something most cute i've ever imagined Smile just loved the way lil Raya talked in baby tone Tongue Last scene ended so beautifully with very sweet lyrics of song Heart
And now u lazy + duffer + Ghajni writer Angry complete this one or die somewhere Angry don't keep us waiting and for God sake dont forget your own story you startedAngry Got it   Angry kill u Angry
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Posted: 3 years ago
Originally posted by bubbleneetu


This is something most cute i've ever imagined Smile just loved the way lil Raya talked in baby tone Tongue Last scene ended so beautifully with very sweet lyrics of song Heart
And now u lazy + duffer + Ghajni writer Angry complete this one or die somewhere Angry don't keep us waiting and for God sake dont forget your own story you startedAngry Got it   Angry kill u Angry


you thinks same as mine he hanged up so many stories i dont want to comment but this last lines ghajni and lazy attracts me as u r very right he forgets so many stories Angry
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Posted: 3 years ago
Originally posted by Dhinchank


Originally posted by bubbleneetu


This is something most cute i've ever imagined Smile just loved the way lil Raya talked in baby tone Tongue Last scene ended so beautifully with very sweet lyrics of song Heart
And now u lazy + duffer + Ghajni writer Angry complete this one or die somewhere Angry don't keep us waiting and for God sake dont forget your own story you startedAngry Got it   Angry kill u Angry



you thinks same as mine he hanged up so many stories i dont want to comment but this last lines ghajni and lazy attracts me as u r very right he forgets so many storiesAngry


Exactly he is so duffer and lazy writer who don't care about his readers at all Angry he is so annoying,starts every good story and leaves it incomplete Angry if he is going to do same with this one( he'll surely do Ouch ) then i will definitely kill him Angry
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