Fan Fiction Part 10

Posted: 18 years ago

Ok guys this is gonna be a short one!

Here it goes...

 

Everone is waiting 4 jassi.. armaan is back down now tooo...

 

Jassi is comming down with her mom, babe n friends... armaan n jassi just cant take their eyes off each other... and in the next second they are standing rite in front of each other.. ready to exchange rings!!!!

Armaan's mom: Hamara jaha hamasha ladka pehla angooti penata hai...

Billu: tho phir teek hai armaan bata.. angooti panaaho!

Armaan takes jassi hand n slips in the ring.. and jassi does the same!

Everyone is enjoying them selves.. including jassi n armaan they dance with each other n are insepratable!

Next morning....  there are 2 weeks till the wedding left everyone is in a hurry... and the mendhi is tonight.... evryone is getting ready.. but armaan IS SAD and MAD

ON THE PHONE

A: Jassi yhe kasa reevaz hai ka mendi ke din ladko ka puro paariwaar jato hai ek ladko coorka.. kyun???

J: laughing.. armaan bas 14 din.. aur phir main hamasha appka pass ho gi!

A: JASSI 14 DIN... 2 hafta....

J: cant stop laughing seeing armaan like this..

A: Jassi tum impossible hoo..

J: Really!

A: grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr and puts the phone down....

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Jassi: Mama main appna ek dost ko milna jaarhi ho 2 ganto main wapis... ok..

Amrit: ok beta par jaldi aana!

J: Teek hai

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Armaan is sitting on his bed starring at jassi's picture, when the door bell rings.. groning he goes to open the door...

When he opens the door he finds jassi standing infront of him

A: TUM yaha???

J: Ha main soocha ka main ajj aapko surprise dati hoo

A: Accha! armaan takes jassi's hand n brings her in.... and they both sit on the sofa... Armaan on one and jassi on the one across her..

A: Jassi ek baat patao tum tum mujhes itna door kyun bathi hoo..

J: Wo waisi hai! Kyun?

A: Woo.......

 armaan gets up and moves in next to jassi putting his head on her

sholder....

A: mujhe tumko kuch dekhana hai

J: Kya?

A: Mera saath aao he grabs jassi's hand n takes her to his room...

he picks up a box and gives it to her....

jassi opens the box and find a bright red sari with jewelry, and stuff...

A: Main tumhe ess main dekna chata hoo....

 

Ok guys the really romantic part is stilll to come keep waiting!!!!!!!!!! i will try to put it up by evening!!!!!!!!!! Please comment!

 

 

 

 

Posted: 18 years ago
Absolutely Positively Fabulous!!!  I definitely can't wait!!!  So cute..."Main tumhe isme dekh na chatha hoon"...aww....too cute!!! 

Armaans4ever, tussi great ho!!!!

AbsπŸ˜‰
Posted: 18 years ago

amazing yaar naha. can't wait for next part. I told you i'll be coming on JJKN forum to read your fan-fic, so here I am.

continue fast. πŸ‘

Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by Aabha


Absolutely Positively Fabulous!!!  I definitely can't wait!!!  So cute..."Main tumhe isme dekh na chatha hoon"...aww....too cute!!! 

Armaans4ever, tussi great ho!!!!

AbsπŸ˜‰

thanks a bunch!

Posted: 18 years ago
Originally posted by happe


amazing yaar naha. can't wait for next part. I told you i'll be coming on JJKN forum to read your fan-fic, so here I am.

continue fast. πŸ‘

thanks happy u are awesoem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by Shining_Star


Sooooooo sweeeeet!!!!!!!!😳

 

thanks!πŸ˜›

Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by jassi4armaan


that was sooo sweet! πŸ˜‰

thanks alot sis!

Posted: 18 years ago
Wow!  I am eagrly waiting for the next romantic part!πŸ˜›
Posted: 18 years ago
thanks it will be up tommorow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep waiting n guys tell me if u want a patricular sitution in the story so i can write abt it! anything cute n gushy bwt a-j!πŸ˜³πŸ˜›

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