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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: putti77


Pritee
Why sorry da...

Nisha can create the thread and anyone of us can update...   Not necessarily me or Jyo.. Whoever has the bandwidth can do๐Ÿ˜Š

Nammu

Many future updates are mixed with regular updates... And some people were confused that leap has happened.. So thought of having the new thread...

OK da you guys decided ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
School jail & "Authentic"

Well... I blame YOU guys... you love the foochar ones so much here is another one
Someone asked for R&B and Nivi conversation


He tossed and turned unable to sleep, woke up startled thinking he was hearing a baby cry and boys fightin

"Sigh" he sat up, he was in his Paris bed, he looked out, it wasnt even 5 AM yet.. he kicked his blanket off and let his leg trace the spot where II would be

"Poda!! its not even 5 AM... geez... toonga vidu da" she would whine

He would pull her closer and let his hands do the talking, after much coaxing, he would get laid...
Sahana slept by them in a crib they bought 9 years ago when Nivi was just born, the twins in the office and Nivi and Dad in the living room
Or the twin would switch place with Nivi if he wanted to be by thatha

"Sigh" he groaned loudly, school was open, there was no way II would send even one kid with him, he begged for her to send Sahana, but she had laughed hysterically
"HOW WILL U NURSE HER?" she demanded

"Umm... ya... I guess... hey pump and give me a dozen bottles"

"enna velayadreya?" she cuddled with him and the fat lumpy thing

"Nursing is just your excuse to keep the babies to urself" he sulked

"Umm... maybe"  "But anyway..." she changed the topic, guilty of the crime

The house was quiet, it rained outside, gentle and freezing like it was afraid to wake the sleeping Paris

He turned to his phone, there were pictures from the boys even after he had slept
They were beating him in the game of "I can stay up later than you"

He wondered how II managed to make them sleep

She disciplined them more, but by night she was usually drained and weary... she worked like a machine all day long, not resting for a minute

There was pictures of eyeballs, hair, back of the head, belly button faces, elbow creature, funny faces...
one wore a green lizard motif jammie the other wore a red robot one

Nivi sat in the back with her long silky hair open waiting for "bedtime braid" in a pink shorts and a shimmering tee she was always hot

Delhi must be cold but she was never bundled up

The boys had hair like him, silky curls, unruly all over the face, from the back there was no way to tell

There was even videos...

"Dey WHAT IS GOING ON? Did u do ur reading home work?" II was heard screaming

"amma he skipped from page 3 to 8" one tattled on the other

"I am going to ask questions as usual, and who ever hasnt read, goes to the fenced jail behind the school"
The boys turned mesmerized

Nivi was shooting the video with a chuckle

"How do u know have they sent u to the same jail?" one asked

"Poda!!" "I helped them build it" II THE FIBBER confidently lied

"WRONGGG AMMMA... U are a computer engineer" "U are not a construction worker" one yelled

"NOOO... Amma is a Accountant... she COUNTS money" the other one said smugly

"I am on page 4 now, tell me what did Cat in the Hat say to the boy?" she quizzed the one that skipped pages

"Amma... I DONT WANT TO DO IT"
They all cuddled on the 1st floor lounge... Ranjan read a book in the far corner.. adjusting his glasses ever few seconds

R&B wondered if he needed new glasses

"Thatha is READING SHHH" II warned

"Koi nai puttarjee... kitaab kya padhoonga... main aidar vaitha inki gallan... maje le raha hoon betaji" he smiled warmly

"Dad, will u get the boys ready please? I will braid her hair and pack her field trip bag?" she begged

"Arey ay ki gall poochi.. aaja mere bache" he opened his arms as the boys flew

Sahana rolled on to her belly and reached for the Cat in the Hat book

"Dad HER TOO?" II smiled sheepishly

Ranjan smiled generously  "La mainnu pakdaa gudiya"

"Main gudiya ya yeh gudiya?" II challenged

"DONO JEE DONO" Ranjan reassured

II picked up the FAT ball of drooping flesh "Paathukko di, Thatha's FIRST gudiya is ME" II sank her lips into the cheek folds

Sahana cooed and drooled... and grabbed II's nose ring with wet hands

"Appa ku ponnu naa daan nu enna di eppo paar mukuthi?" (like dad like daughter why do u need my nose ring all the time?)

She handed the wet slobbery mess to Ranjan just as the two boys climbed over him warring with each other

"Nee va kanna" II gathered Nivi and kissed her head

The video ended...

His phone rang...

He answered immediately

"Hey" he said

"Daddy this is NIVI" she said softly

He smiled

"Hey love" he whispered

There was chaos in the back... shower sounds, bath things falling the baby yelling in her play pen

"Are the boys in the shower?" he asked longingly

"Umm... ya, like everyday... they will be late even today" Nivi chuckled secretly

"Are u ready?" he asked softly

"I have a field trip to  RoboticKids Camp Daddeee" she said

"Thats GREAT" he smiled it was a IIT Roorkee alumnus initiative he had read about frequently

"where is it?" he asked curiously

"NOIDA?" the lil girl spoke softly

"So Amma packed u a bunch of snack?" he chuckled

"A LOTTT" the girl laughed embarrassed  "She says "U will be hungry kanna"

"She is right" he said his thoughts wandering fondly to his Iyer warrior

"Are u awake so soon?" Nivi asked perceptively

"I thought u guys were here" he chuckled

"We have school" Nivi said innocently

"I think there should be a traveling school and u shud be able to go wherever u want" he said softly

"That would be nice Dadddee, except how will we make friends" Nivi said logically

"Ouch! u are right" he nodded

"Did u go to paattu class?" he asked

"I went to shabad" she said softly

"That means a No?" he asked


"I had to finish reading the book" she said sadly

She was a voracious reader, the Zambian diplomat was now a younger lady, she had a daughter 11 years old, that was close to Nivi, the guard  intercommed most evening

Masuzyo was the name, they called her "Macy" the guard Hari Prakash addressed her as "MAUSI"

Years ago...
"Bhabhiji mausi ke ghar se phone aaya" thats how he said it the first time

II IS a mausi, she didnt know WHICH mausi was here, and WHY she called the guards...then later learned it was the lil 4 year old that wanted to visit


"How is Macy?" he asked

"Umm well... she said we can do bead bags but she never called" Nivi said sadly

"Oh! no... u should ask Amma to buy u a box of  beads from the Saket Mall" he informed

"No dadddee those are authentic Zambian beads with natural dye" Nivi said proudly

He smiled his 9 year old used words like "authentic"

"NIVIII pick up the baby kanna" II screamed

Sahan wailed now

"Dadddeee are u coming back tomorrow?" Nivi asked

"I will try" he groaned

She was closer he could tell the boys were fighting he heard wet smacks as they kicked each other

"Amma he poured shampoo FIRST" one screamed

"WHO are u talking with?" Ii asked

"Daddeee" Nivi said

Ii grabbed the phone and said "VAAA DAA please I am doing YOUR job, its been over 14 days" "they are monsters" she hugged the boys tightly
Getting kids ready was R&B's job, they troubled him MUCH less๐Ÿ˜†

"U counted?" he chuckled huskily

"I COUNT THE HOURS" she declared passionately

"I do too" he said groaning
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Edited by Nisha0604 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey shud I create a new topic for various indexes?
Let me know
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: Kjolovesbabies



That would be a great help if there would be a separate thread for future ones

Yes you are right.
I will try.
If couldn't will tell any one of you have to do from my account
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Hey shud I create a new topic for various indexes?
Let me know



Yes nisha please create a thread for future updates which will be updated by Putti and me 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update nisha I just loved the way the dude was missing his kids Nivi taking the video was.super cute and the conversation showed how Nivi was almost a photocopy of her dad in her nature 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love you Nisha, you are angel.
You be blessed with best in this world. You bring smile to my face like no one on regular basis.
Lovely lovely update.Edited by PriteeMisra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
School jail and Authentic

I am floored . This Foochar is sooo very special. And to the person who pitched in with this request and to Nisha who obliged this request, THANK YOU.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Im not so sure..but lagta hai..it was me who was wondering how much the kids call papa at paries
thanks if its for that

thanks anyway

before the pervious update i wondered if dude will still remain no.1 for II after the kids...ur future update before this one answered it

and this one answered me when i was wondering how many times the kids call him 

loved how dude wonders if dad needs new glasses when he saw him in the video 

if its been 14 days is in paris..seems like he moved to india and visits paris..is it so??
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Posted: 8 years ago
Pritee , was this your request ?. If so thanks a ton girl.
Special update it is.