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SS-Zindagi Tum hi ho Part 5 on pg 20 updated on 16/07/16

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Posted: 8 years ago
hi guys after long time i m back sorry ki i didnt wrote anything so i here with os/ss for u all hope aap sab ko pasand aaye...


And title mein i m confused 2 i hv decided

1)zindagi tum hi ho...

2)O re Piya...


after reading the intro n prologue tell me ki kya suit karega...


chalo time now for intro n prologue

Introduction...

Ram Kapoor-The most handsome guy of Coperate world he is 32 years old successful n love is family a lot n his love priya...


Priya Sharma-The most beautiful woman on this planet she is also a business woman n loves his papa a lot he has been her hero n all she is here cos of him loves his papa n love Ram alot...


Sudhir Sharma -Priya's Dad want Priya to get settle with whom she want.. that is Ram...


Neha-Raya's best friend n married to vikram one year back...

Vikram-partner with Ram in his business n best friend of Raya n married to neha 


Krishna n Dadi -Same as the show ...

Nuts -Rams sister...

So here is the intro hope u like it...
n comment on the story...



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Posted: 8 years ago
Prologue


here is the small prologue of my os /ss


Ram-Priya I love u really I love you...
ram was on his knees n proposed to her on their 4th date...


Priya-Ram I also love you i love u too Ram...

Ram stand on his legs n both were standing very close to each other now both want to kiss eachother...

Priya came forward n kissed him...

Ram was shocked ki Priya would take the 1st stept now he was responding to her kiss both were enjoying their 1st kiss n ram hand on priyas back n neck...n Priyas hand inside Ram hair n neck...both broke the kiss n were breathing hard...


Now both tillted their forehead n were smiling now Ram hands were on her face...


Ram-Marry me Priya...plss marry me...


Priya was shocked that Ram was would ask her to marry her so soon...


Priya-Ram i m sorry but main tumse shaadi nahi kar sakti i m really sorry...


Ram was shocked after here this...

So here is the small promo i mean prologue...


plss click on like button n comment on it n silent readers plss do comment...if u like my story
Edited by dhristikpd - 8 years ago
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Index
Intro and prologue-pg 1

Part 1 pg 7

Part 2 pg 9

Part 3 pg 14

Part 4 pg 17

Part 5 pg 20
Edited by Rayaland - 7 years ago
krunalidivecha thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice start
Interesting intro
Waiting for next one
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice ..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: krunalidivecha

Nice start
Interesting intro
Waiting for next one



Kru title tho de which is suitable
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: youandme272000

Nice ..

Continue soon..


Gv the title plss i hv mention 2 title which will suit
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice start... continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: akanshac

nice start... continue soon..


Pls gv the title
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: krunalidivecha

1)zindagi tumhi ho



Ok thanks😛