Bade Acche Laggte Hai

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2nd year, First day at clg, priya enter in clg compound, n found all r shouting name of RK, mostly girls are madly shouting. Neha exciting, told priya tha RK the new student of our clg n he is rockstar, love theme singer, all young r mad for him n his singing.
He got admission in same class room of priya. He is celebrity of our clg, he is student cum celebrity most, that's why his admission in top clg otherwise, in that clg no one can admission the cut off list is 80%, he is not capable to the clg, coz his % was only 65%, how can principle gave admission.
At class room.
Priya was seating her bench reading her book, she wear white & pink combination anarkali dress. Neha came with excitement.
Neha- priya i can't believe these RK is our clg most important he is our classroom jis ko aaj sirf Maine TV par dekha tha uss aaj Maine aapne samne, humre classroom dekhungi.
Priya saw her excitement without any expression- so what? Uss me konsi badi baat hai wo rockstar, usske fans k liye hoga lekin clg me wo student hai, only one student.
Shru- priya tujhe koi excitement nahi hai, he is a famous celebrity and most important he is hero.
Priya- hero kis angle se, wo rockstar bhi nahi lagta, phati hui jeans, with blue t-shirt n black jacket, haath me watch ki jagah 6 bracelet, gale me chain, ye konsa fashion, mujhe na ye sab pagalpn lagta hai, aur tum sab isske piche pagal ho, jisye thoda sa bhi fashion sense nahi hai.
Shru- tu naa kabhi nahi samjhegi.
Neha- haan shruti u r right, tu sirf books padh aapne, aur kuch mat kar.
Priya- a neha iss baar notes nahi dungi yaad rakhna n she show her index figure.
Sametime rajat enter in class.
Raj- hi priya how r you?
Neha to shruti's ear- aa gaya majnu.
Priya listen n she staring to neha, neha sorry to her.
Priya- hi rajat.
Raj- bahar dekha RK aaya hai aaj se wo humre saath padhega humri hi class me.
Priya- haan i saw him.
Raj- clg k compound ko ussne concert ground banna diya hai.
Neha- tujhe koi problem hai.
Raj- mujhe! Mujhe konsi problem hogi.
Shru- nahi hai na then go n seat ur bench otherwise some other seat.
Raj- ohh god! What is wrong with u both.
Shru- coz we both r his truly n sincere fans.
Priya- neha shruti relax both, rajat plz go, rajat go from there.
Priya- kya tum dono usske saath aise behave karte ho.
Neha- we both are right, wo tujhe kis nazar se dekhta hai, tujhe pata hai, usske dil me kya hai tujhe nahi pata hai, iss liye tu usske saath baat karti hai, tujhe jab pata chalega na to tu bhi aise behave karegi.
Priya- aisa kuch nahi usske Mann me, neha go to say something.
RK enter in classroom with flood of girls. Neha n shruti saw him n they both seat there bench. RK looked here n there n saw priya's side seat is empty. He go there and seat without asking her.
Priya looked at him confused. Bell ring n lectured started.
Priya concentrate on lectured.
RK's phn vibrate, his phn on bench desk, he looked at his phn priya gave him angry looked.
RK looked and say sorry to her, again she focus on lecture, again his phn vibrate, she looked at hi angry n snatched his mobi and swichoff it and put near her, lecture over.
Priya- next time don't seat by my side, i don't like disturbance n she gave his phn to him n getup from there n go to canteen.
Ram only looked at her in disbelief, coz all girls r fan of his and she is not his fan, even she not interested for him, its horrible for him.
Vikram came there- kya hua, aisa kya hua Jo tere face aisa hua hai.
Ram looked at her- she is not interested in me, she was snatched my mobi and swichoff it, and she said me don't seat here again, i mean har ek ladki mere saath ek selfi k liye maarti hai aur ye sidha mujhe boli don't seat here again.
Vik- shayad wo RK ko janta nahi hai, yaa phir wo music ko nahi jaanti hai.
Vik looked at neha n asked.
Vik- hey, hi lady.
Neha turned- me.
Vik- yupe, hi, i m vikram.
Neha- hi, i m neha, she is shruti.
Shru smile- hi.
Ram- hi, i m ram.
Shru- plz sir don't introduce ur self plz
ram- plz called me RK or ram, i like it, coz i m here came for complit my studies mai bhi ek student hu, so plz.
Neha- ok, then ram is better.
Ram- can i asked you, who is she.
Shru- tum ussi se puch lena.
Ram- r u sure? I mean wo jis tarah se mera phn dekar gayi hai iss liye.
Neha- actually she is very nice girl, but she to much introvert.
Ram n vik- introvert??
Vik- kis bhi taraf se nahi lagti.
Shru- wo kisi k saath jaad baatein nahi karti usski baat ka bura mat manan.
Ram- no i don't feel bad, but she is so rude.
Neha- no ram she is not rude person belive me.
Ram- ok chalo coffee peete hai.
Shru- sorry ram but we both r go to canteen not in cafe.
Vik- we both also said in canteen not in cafe.
Neha- ok chalo, but tum tumhare sath itni and she look here n there at girls flood r clicking pics of ram.
Ram- ahh, don't worry mai sambhal lunga.
At canteen priya seat on chair of the chair of four, waiting for neha n shruti, she busy in reading her book ITooHadALoveStory
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Priya reading her book, I Too Had A Love Story. Neha came and seat opposite to priya, she is busy in her book. Shruti also came n seat beside neha, there table was side by wall n priya was seating by wall n ram came seat beside her n block her way. Vikram take other chair n seat with them.
Neha- madam we are here, plz book thoda sa side kar aur dekh humne.
Priya busy in book- 2mins last line hai, tu order de na.
Ram signal to neha that order same to him and vikram. Priya stop her reading n looked side, RK is seat there.
Priya with little angry- you again seat beside me.
Ram- just a moment, neha n shruti mere aur viky k new frnds baane hai and most important mujhe nahi pata tha wo aap se milne aaye hai, i am sorry.
Priya- its ok, its fine, and i am sorry for my behavior.
Ram- its ok.
Priya- next time plz swichoff ur phn.
Ram- ok.
Priya- neha order.
Neha- aa raha hai, meri maa.
Priya open her bag n took tifin infront on them n open it.
Shruti excited- aahhh! Gajar ka halwa.
Priya- don't shouted yaar.
Neha- kis khushi me.
Priya- aise hi Mann kiya.
Shruti take a spoon n eat- its awsome.
Ram saw and tempestuous.
Ram asking to priya- kya mujhe ek spoon mil sakta hai, gajar k halwe ka plz.
Priya looked at him- ya sure and she forword to him, he take one spoon n eat.
Ram eat- just fabulous, mindbowling, bahot saalon baad khaaya hai, hmmm, yummy.
Vik also eat- its awsome same taste hai ram.
Ram- haan, miss ur gajar ka halwa super, iss ke liye me aapko kabhi bhi lecture k time disturbed nahi karunga, i promise.
Priya- priya.
Ram- haan.
Priya- my name priya.
Ram- ohhh, hi RK, ram.
Vik- vikram, his besti and now ur also.
Rajat came there and saw gajar halwa.
Rajat- world best gajar halwa n he go for the on spoon, neha hit on his hand n said.
Neha- sorry wo mera hai, better luck next time n she eat.
Rajat was dispointed.
Priya- sorry rajat but tum yaha par.
Rajat- haan wo tumhare paas Jo shekspeer ka book hai na wo mujhe mil sakta hai kuch dino ke liye.
Shruti take over- sorry wo mai padh rahi hun aur mujhe kuch 2-3 months aur lag jaayege.
Rajat- ok tumhara hone ke baad mujhe dena and he go from there.
Priya's phn ring, she excuses herself.
Ram- tum dono aise kiu behave karte ho usske saath.
Shruti- dheere dheere sab pata chal jaayega.
Vik- BF se baat kar rahi hai.
Neha- kon! Priya.
Vik- haan.
Shruti- usski jaan ka call aaya hai, usse baat kar rahi hai.
Ram- ok.
Next 15days ram, neha, vik, shruti n priya become good frnds, ram always seat beside priya but she not talking with him n vikram like neha n shruti, ram always memorizing her beauty and everyday he try to talk her, but she busy in her book or busy in making notes.
Half terms are came, ram is came after 7 days in clg.
Ram- hello guys.
Vik- hi buddy how was ur concert.
Ram- its good, Maine abhi sunna bahar exam hai humre, next week se.
Vik- yaa usski tyari chalu hai.
Neha- tu yaha par 7days nahi tha na, tu kaise study karega.
Ram- kisi ke paas notes to milenge na mujhe.
Shruti- ek hi insan hai Jo tujhe notes de sakta hai.
Ram- who?
Neha, vik n shruti- priya.
Ram- tum sab ke paas.
Neha- sorry but we are also same category of urs.
Ram- madam kaha par milegi.
Neha- ek toh classroom, 2nd canteen ya fir library.
Ram- 100% library me hogi, exams Jo hai, ek mins call karta hun.
He called her but she cut the call.
Ram- hwww mera call cut kiya, how can she do that.
They all go in library, ram enter all are stand entrance, he saw priya he go there.
Ram knocked on priya's table, priya saw him.
Ram- i need ur help.
Priya- ok and she smile n come with him out.
In canteen all are seat.
Priya- ye rahe saare notes iss copy karo and plz study karo.
Neha- thankyou.
Priya- kuch bhi, aur kidhar bhi, ram tum bolo kya baat hai aur 7days kaha par the.
Ram- out of station for concert.
Priya- ohhh! Okk.
Ram- i need ur help in study can u help me.
Priya- ofcourse why not, bolo kya padhna hai.
Ram- anything u teach me.
Priya started teach to ram, after college they both for 3hours study. One fine Sunday ram called priya at morning.
Ram- hi priya, are u free today?
Priya- haan lekin kiu?
Ram- actually i wanted spend sometime with u, i mean little topics are not clarify to me, so can u.
Priya- ok, where we meet.
Ram- mere ghar.
Priya- but address.
Ram- mai aata hun tumhe lene.
Priya- ok come after 9:30.
Ram- ok.
At sharp 9:30 ram reached priya's home, she saw him, she is on her Bluetooth talking with some one.
Priya- hi ram sorry mai tumse baad me baat karu, abhi issey baat karu, she signal on Bluetooth.
Ram- ok, but tum bike.
Priya- ok with it.
She is on her call, ram listen convo oneside. Ram stared bike.
Priya- haan jaan, i am sorry na baba, i know aap mera wait kar rahe the lekin, (pause) no baba, haan Sunday sirf aapke hote hai, lekin exams to ek hi baar aati hai, (pau) na baba wo mere dost hai aur unnko thodi problem hai, (pau) i miss you too baba, (pau) nahi aap bilkul aise nahi karoge.
Edited by Arpipatil - 8 years ago
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(Pau) next Sunday apke sath, pakka promise (Pau) ok apke fav.Restaurant me lunch n dinner on my fav.place, (pause) kulfi, (pause) i love you 2,3,4 lots of, bye and miss me (pause) kiss on ur cheek muuuhhh. And she cut the call, ram n priya reached ram's home.
Priya- sorry ram wo call important tha.
Ram- no i am sorry wo tum Sunday.
Priya cut him middle- study important hai and i will handle him afterall he is my jaan, and he is to much understand person.
Ram- ok chale.
Priya noded.
Ram in heart- ram she already love with someone else how can you proposed her, pyar bhi aisi ladki se kiya Jo kisi aur se pyar karti hai, priya ko ek baar bolu that i love... No no ram wo tujhe tera dost manti hai tu ye baat usse boli toh wo naraz ho kar dosti bhi tod degi.
Exams are over ram is in misunderstood that priya love's someone.
Neha- priya exam khatam ab aaj film.
Shruti- haan yaar.
Vik- ruko mai ticket karta hun sab ke.
Ram- oye balcony.
Priya- ek minute vikram.
Ram- kya hua tumhe.
Priya- i am sorry to all mai nahi aa sakti.
Shruti- don't be a spoil sport yaar.
Vik n neha- yaa priya don't be a spoil sport.
Priya- sorry guys but plz understand me.
Ram- kya yaar.
Priya- try to understand ram wo jaan se milne jaana hai, 2 Sunday se nahi mili hun exams ki wajah se aaj nahi mili toh , bahot naraz hoga.
Neha- guys usse jaane doo, she not go with us.
Ram with rude- bye and all are went from there.
Priya feel bad and she go her way.
At park all four are seat there.
Shruti- so ram when u told her.
Ram- what? N whom?
Neha n vikram looked at eachother n vik said.
Vik- you love priya.
Ram- she is only my frnd, ok.
Neha- yaar hum tere fan k saath saath tere dost bhi hai aur tu tere fans se ye baat chupa sakte hai, lekin doston se nahi.
Ram- she love her jaan, tum sab ko kaise pata chala.
Vik- tere new fashion se.
Ram- what do you mean.
Vik- tu kab se shirts pehen laga aur wo tere jaan se bhi pyare bracelet aur wo teri lucky chain pehna chod diya hai.
Neha- jab se pata chala hai priya ko pasand nahi hai tab se new fashion create ki hai.
Ram- arrye yaar fashion hai, more over i am rockstar log mujhe follow lagte hai, toh fashion change karni padhti hai.
Shruti- ab jhooth bolna band kar, aur sach bolo.
Ram- yes i like her n love her but she love her jaan and i can't came between them.
Neha- but seriously who's jaan, we both don't know, pichle 3 years wo usske jaan se milne jaanti hai, wo kaise dikhata hai ye bhi humne pata nahi.
Ram n vik- hmmm.
Next day in clg, on notice board, RK's music concert on Saturday DJ night.
Priya read n she came in classroom n saw ram is busy in girls and there selfies. She came her bench gave angry look to ram.
Ram- girls plz go to ur class, we will meet after break.
Priya- thankyou, all girls went from there.
Ram- good morning.
Priya- morning, neha n vik nahi aaye.
Ram- they both go for date.
Priya looked at him in shocked- what? No.
Ram noded in yes.
Priya- kab hua ye sab.
Ram- wo uss din movie se ghar jaa rahe the tab.
Priya- awsome, but i miss that moment.
Ram- haan you are.
Priya give him tifin box- for you.
Ram- kya hai iss me.
Priya- ur fav.gajar ka halwa.
Ram- kis khushi me.
Priya- ummm, DJ wali raat ko tumhare song ke baad baataungi.
Ram- ok.
Priya- tumhe ye sab pasand hai.
Ram- kya pasand hai.
Priya- inn ladkiyon ka aass paas hona.
Ram- ye pasand toh nahi hai, but they are fans and i can't regret them.
Priya- ok.
Ram- kuch puch sakta hun.
Priya- ofcourse bolo.
Ram- tum kisi se pyar karti ho.
Priya go to answer him, rajat came there.
Rajat- hi priya, ram n priya looked athletes him.
Priya- hii.
Rajat- wo tumse kuch baat karni hai.
Priya- bolo.
Rajat give her one red rose- i like you.
Ram shocked n in mind- ye chuha priya ko propose kaise.
Rajat continue- i like u 1st day of our clg n i want my whole life spend with you, will u?
Priya shocked n said- sorry rajat mai tumhe uss nazar se kabhi dekha nahi hai, and most important i love someone else tum mere sirf dost ho aur kuch nahi, keep it in ur mind, forever.
Rajat dispointed and go from there.
Ram- u said him no, i mean he is nice guy.
Priya- so what mai kya karu mere dil me usske liye koi feelings nahi jaise ke tu... She stop.
Ram- kya hua bich me kiu ruki.
Priya- ummm kuch nahi.
Ram- ok.
Saturday DJ night, priya came in black jeans with red, white n black flower on that.
She wait for neha, shruti n vik.
Neha n vik came together.
Priya- hello vikram, she ignoring neha.
Vik- hi priya.
Priya- you look handsome, neha looked at her shocked.
Vik- u look also superb.
Neha- aur mai kaise lag rahi hun.
Priya- am i know you madam?
Neha- oh hello, its me neha ur frnd.
Priya- my frnd, i think my frnd forgot me.
Neha- kab bhuli mai tujhe.
Priya- rehne de.
Neha- ok ab samjhi, i am sorry n she hold her ear.
Priya- mujhe baat nahi larni hai tujhse.
Neha- nahi karni hai, pakka nahi karni hai.

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priya- mujhe baat nahi karni hai tujhse.
Neha- nahi karni hai, pakka nahi karni hai.
Priya- haan pakka nahi karni hai, bye u stay with ur boyfriend n she go from there.
Neha to vik- ye sab tumhari wajah Se hua hai.
Vik- arrey Maine kya kiya ab, they both started fighting.
Ram came n saw vik & neha fighting, he not go between them, he looking for priya and she stand near by tree, smiling with someone.
He go to see and saw that rajat is stand on his one knee with rose n priya acceptance his rose with smile. He hurt saw that n he go back to the stage.
Next moment, ram on stage.
Ram- hello doston, priya listen the voice of ram and she looked on stage, ram on Mic.
Ram continue- ye song hai mere uss mehbooba ke liye, only for her, usse ye baat pata nahi k mai usse bahot jaada pyar karta hun. This song only for u my...
He started song 'tere bin nahi lage' from ' ek peheli leela'.
Song end vik, neha, shruti, priya also go to meet ram, the three go towards ram, ram saw that.
One girl and gave tight huged to ram, and ram also gave tight huged to her with to much love.
Priya saw and she feel, knife stabbed inside her heart.
Vik saw and he also happy to see her and go fast towards them.
Priya saw these n went to clg background, which there her n all frnds fav.place, she go with angry.
Here ram brocked the huged.
Ram- tu yaha par kya kar rahi hai aur bina baatye kaise aayi.
Nuts- bhai its surprise for you, exams khatam hue hai holidays chalu hai iss liye aayi.
Ram- good to see you, you here, i love you, missed you so much.
Nuts- me also missed you so much, and she gave him side huged.
Vik- choti kaise hai.
Nuts- viky bhai i am fine, where is your GF.
Vik- ek huged toh de.
Nuts give him huged- ab baataye GF kaha par hai.
Vik signal towards neha- neha she is.
Nuts go to her- hi, i am nuts ram's sister n vikram is my brother.
Neha- hi.
Ram to shruti- priya kaha par hai.
Shruti- pata nahi.
Ram- ok me dekhta hu, guys yahi raho me abhi aaya.
Ram go to search priya, 1st he go library, then go background n saw priya is seating on bench with tears. Ram saw and go there.
Ram tapped on her shoulder, priya saw ram and she getup from bench and give him tight SLAP.
Ram rubbing his cheek- OOOUUUCCHH! priya i am rockstar don't.
Priya listen and gave him 2nd tight SLAP on other cheek, ram rubbing his other cheek.
Ram- arrye maar kiu rahi ho sidha bolo na kya baat hai.
Priya wiped her tears- kya bolu haa, kya sunna chahte ho, pichle 6months mujhe pyar ki nazaro se dekh rahe the, khud ko change kiya mere liye kiu, tum mujhse pyar karne lage the and i am stared fallen for you, aur tum kisi aur ko huged kar rahe ho wo bhi pure clg k samne and held his coller n she stared crying. Ram listen that she fallen for him. He huged her.
Priya realised that ram huged her. She pushed him.
Ram- arrye abhi bol rahi thi pyar karne lagi ho, push kiu kiya.
Priya- you go from here, jaao aapne GF ke paas.
Ram- kon meri GF.
Priya- wo jise tum tight huged kar rahe the.
Ram- wo... Wo meri GF nahi hai.
Priya- phir kon hai.
Ram- she is my little sister, my choti.
Priya bit her tongued and closed her one eye, turned herself- i am sorry.
Ram- what! Maine sunna nahi.
Priya's back to ram- i am sorry.
Ram go towards her and kissed her cheek- but i love you.
Priya turned herself- i am sorry, for slap you.
Ram- mujhe sorry nahi sunna hai, mujhe wo baat Sunni hai Jo tumne thodi Der pehle boli.
Priya- mujhe baat hi nahi karni hai tumse and she go from there, ram hold her wrist and pulled her.
Ram- i am to much stubborn.
Priya- mai bhi kuch cum nahi hun.
Ram- i love you.
Priya looked at his eyes.
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Priya looked at his eyes- i love you too and she kiss him on his lip, some time later they both brocked the kiss.
Ram- ummm accha laga strawberry flavour.
Priya- shut up and priya's phn ring. She pick up the call.
Priya on phn- haan jaan, na baba, (pause) iss Sunday lekar aati hun, (pause) he is here with me, (pause) haan bola, (pause) haan bye love you.
Ram looked at her in confused.
Priya- jaan ka call tha.
Ram- who?
Priya- khush my nephew, he is 5 years old, he is my jaan.
Ram laughed on his own thought.
Priya looked him confused- kya hua, why r u laughing madly.
Ram control his laugh- ye mujhe pata hota k tumhara jaan wo nephew hai to Maine exam k pehle wala Jo Sunday tha, tum mere ghar aayi thi mujhe kuch topic clarify karne the, tab mai tumhe proposed karta itna intzaar thodi na karna padhta.
Priya- puch nahi sakte the ek baar.
Ram- aaj puchne wala tha to wo rajat tumhe rose de raha tha wo dekha.
Priya- ram pagal ho, wo mujhe sorry bolne aaya tha uss din k liye.
Ram- sorry, waise accha hua, intzaar ka phal mitha hota hai aur wo strawberry wala.
All came there search priya and ram.
Nuts saw them and called- bhai.
Ram n priya looked there.
Neha- oh my god, oh my god, its incredible.
Vik- yaar its incredible.
Shruti- kab hua ye.
Ram with big smile and gave priya side huged- thodi Der pehle hi hua.
Nuts came near ram n asked- apke cheek par mark kaise.
Ram touch his cheek- wo priya ka pyar hai.
Nuts- hi priya bhabhi, thanks for coming in bhai's life.
Priya give her side huged.
Neha in fighting mood- ab mujhe bhi tujh se baat nahi karni hai.
Priya- a neha tune mujhe nahi baataya Maine bhi nahi baataya ab 50-50 ho gaya.
Neha- ab baat karegi na mujhse.
Priya- haan n smile.
Ram- so chalo ghumne chalte hai.
Vik- ek minute tum dono jaao hum chaaro yaha par enjoy karte hai.
Ram- are you sure!
Shruti- ofcourse we are, bye love birds.
All four go from there.
Ram- so kaha par chale.
Priya- yahi par baithkar baatein karte hai.
Ram- ok as u wish.


The End.
Love RaYa.
Arpi.
Thankyou For Reading.

Edited by Arpipatil - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb os.
Keep writing more... Edited by Sakshiashu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

great write up Arpita ...
... superb one ...👏👏👏

keep writing more ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Kya unique love story thi rock star ki and collage gal ki
Very nice change has came in RaYa life with love both has fallen in love.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb beautiful story..
Raya ki college wali love toh hit hogayi..
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Posted: 8 years ago
very nice os...
keep writing !