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SS 54 Mother & Mothering - Page 86

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Posted: 8 years ago
What's up Sush..
How are you n Studies?

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Posted: 8 years ago
Full circle


"Hi!" "Heya.. um" II blabbered

She without looking down at herself tried to recall what she was wearing

A striped pink hammies and a skinny orange tee

PHEW!!!
One of her newer night clothes

The lil bulge more prominent under the tee
Manya's eyes were stuck right there

II self consciously pulled the tee down, accentuating the bulge


She was flushed red all over, Manya wore expensive designer clothing and boots, it was cold in Paris
The building was heated nevertheless

she carried a LV tote... ofcourse

"Please come in" II said politely

Setting her mug on a runner table on the side

The kitchen? was the kitchen clean?

Were the beds made?
The living room was a mess

RAKSHASANEY!!!
IF U KNEW SHE WAS COMING WHY DIDNT TELL ME?
AYYO!!!
UMMM.. WHY IS SHE HERE?
WAS SHE SUPPOSED TO VISIT?
I SHOULD JUST GO BACK EARLY TO DELHI
MAYBE THEY HAD PLANS? BRO AND SIS?


"U are standing by the door" Manya reminded II as II stood frozen holding a mostly closed entrance

II stumbled back

"I am so sorry" she mumbled

Manya walked up and hugged, like high society

I DONT HUG AMMA OR AKKA EVERY TIME
I DONT GET THE HUGGING
I DONT HUG SAM MANY TIMES
I DONT KNOW IF I SHOULD HUG THE PERSON WHO I KNOW THE LEAST
UMM... OK FINE
I WILL JUST DO IT

"Good to see u" "I couldnt believe if I was Malcha Marg or 8th Arron" Manya giggled affectedly

"I am sorry" II mumbled

I DIDNT KNOW U WERE COMING?
WHAT SHUD I SAY?
SHIT
SHIT
SHIT
UMM...

"I... umm.. I was in the living room" II explained

TELL HER HOW U GOT TO THE LIVING ROOM DI
SHE PROBABLY "KNOWS" U WERE IN THE LIVING ROOM MORON!!

"they are inside" II mumbled

"they matlab?" Manya asked really curious

Walking in scanning the cluttered living room,

"dad and ur brother" II explained

"DAD IS HERE?" Manya was stunned

II nodded

Leaning on the runner table, nauseous and woozy

R&B walked out stuffing a ear plug in his left ear, the living room led to the bedroom, the bedroom to the
narrow corridor with the office on one side and the kitchen at the end of it

Smiling gloriously upon seeing his sister walk across the bedroom all of a sudden

"DIMPAL" she squealed

Ranjan walked up the corridor furiously and was overjoyed to see his wayward daughter

"Wah ji wah, tu kadon aayi?" he asked eagerly
The three hugged each other

"I thought I would surprise him, but I guess u guys already did" manya was a lil miffed at Ranjan for stealing her thunder

"I thought  u were on ur off the grid vacation" R&B said

"Well I returned last night and got on a plane" she said smugly

He chuckled

"Pehle bhai ne  kitta seega 5 saal ab behen di baari haigi" he said aloud, unhappy at his daughter turning into a vagabond

II walked stealthily to the bedroom, R&B smiled at her...  "Did u know she was coming?" II smiled leaning on the door jamb

R&B shook his head

"I dont tell anybody" Manya turned towards her,  "Ur husband did that to me a million times" she said smugly as if sharing a state secret

II nodded...

"Isne odar jaana hai uski couch-ich so kar do din mein nikal jaana hai" Ranjan explained bluntly what a unsettled life his son had until recently

"But finding him on the couch was too funny" Manya disagreed with her Dad

"Can I make tea for u?" Ii asked politely

"I am his guest he needs to make me espresso" Manya poked R&B

"I just shut it off after my 4th cup" he said carelessly

"well u darn well replug it and make me some espresso dude" Manya winked crushing him

"I was going to make breakfast" II began

Manya stopped smiled and turned... "eggs too?" she asked stunned

II nodded shyly

"Iyer ladki ka kya kar diya dimpal" she mocked her brother

Ranjan sighed loudly  "Good godd beta u came"

"More importantly WHY ARE YOU HERE? Dont u have a company to run?" Manya asked

"I couldnt send her by herself" Ranjan pointed to II

Manya's eyes went to II 's nubile bulge again

"He was JUST home" she let her envy sneak in (Why did u have to fly in to see him so soon after?)

Envy at II and R&B wanting to be together so soon after separating

II blushed and tucked a imaginary lock, nervous like she was summoned at the principal's
office for sneaking home early so she can go watch a SRK movie


I WOULDNT CARE
IF UR BROTHER WASNT SUCH A RAKSHASAN
BLAME HIM I SAY
ITS ALL HIS FAULT
I CANT THINK STRAIGHT ANYMORE

"Arey us se nahi milegi to kis se milegi?" Ranjan smiled

"Haan yeh baat bhi hai" Manya ack flippantly

Ranjan sat on the bed and looked for his ipad...

"U TOOK THE BED?" Manya accused Ranjan

Ranjan nodded

"Maine to mana kitta si" he said sheepishly. "Gudiya tey ekdum ladaki haigi" Ranjan smiled, tilting his head towards II

Manya tried her best to be amused... the "gudiya" rankled though

"Where are u guys?" Manya asked R&B

"The office" he said

"U can have my couch" R&B said

"Full circle" Manya grit her teeth playfully.. winked at a nervous II
 walking towards the walk in closet knowingly

This was actually the first time Manya was getting the couch, she would usually kick R&B out of his bed and claim the bed, in the couple times she had visited
he would take a sleeping bag and sleep on his living room rug, he didnt usually sleep in his office... he wasnt going to use the sleeping bag now

He wanted his wife by him...


Edited by Nisha0604 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: putti77

Haddis

Dude will be thinking Ranjan n Manny are Haddis between him n II
Manny will be thinking II is haddi between her n brother
II will be thinking she is haddi between bro n sister

Ranjan will be thinking I am not getting any haddis to eat
😆 😆


Since its visit Rb week, M will come knocking on the door and think they are all haddis between dude and her. 
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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: taramira



Since its visit Rb week, M will come knocking on the door and think they are all haddis between dude and her.



Which M 😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ammo

The first ice breaker went well...
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Posted: 8 years ago
I was stuck at the last line for long reading rereading n rerereading n then some more re-re-re-reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: putti77

What's up Sush..
How are you n Studies?

i am awesome putti!
studies r going good... just too hectic thats all!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ab sab khush?

Sleeping arrangements mistery solved 😃
But one need cotton for ears and one need plaster for mouth...
Ab aayega maza...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Full Circle... Awesome ...
Dude delighted to see his sis... Offered his couch 😛 and Ranjanji jubiliant.
Sam will evaporate for sure.
II so typically nervous around Manny and Manny so territorial...
Lovely shades of human character.

BTW Nisha, I was curious , in how many minutes u slammed this update.
So went bk and checked in about 40 mins in total from keying and posting.
It just flows isn't it as you sit to key...
👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Kjolovesbabies

I was stuck at the last line for long reading rereading n rerereading n then some more re-re-re-reading


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