OS: Ramji Chale kumbh

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Posted: 2015-09-21T04:19:49Z
Hey frnz...

Just came up with a story based on Kumbhmela ... Posting first part here hope you all enjoy

Last part by end of the day or max. By tomorrow

As usual joota an tomatoes allowed ... Your comments are valuable ...

Lucky

OS: Ramji Gaye Kumbh

@ green room ...
Ram holding Priya looks into her eyes and says ... I love you Priya ...
Priya: smiles bites her lips
Ram: are ... Ab kya Sharma Rahi ho Mrs. Kapoor ... Bol do naa ... Yaad hai kaise cheek Rahi thi Tum ... Uss din ... I love you Mr. Kapoor ... Ab itne pyaar se Bol raha hoon toh bolo naa ...
Priya: enjoying ram's excitement ... Kya? Kya Sunna chahte hai aap ?
Ram: are ... Woh 3 words ...

In the meanwhile daadi calls Priya

Priya: looks at room door which was open and says abhi aayi daadi ...

Ram: Ye Nahi Sunna tha Mujhe
Priya: smiles and says lekin Mujhe toh yahi kehna tha ... Smiles and leaves ram ...

@ daadi's room
Priya: daadi aapne bulaya?
Daadi: haa tujhse baat Karni thi ...
Priya: dekh puttar ... Ab Meri Umar ho gayi hai ... Pata Nahi agle kumbh tak main Rahungi Bhi yaa Nahi ...
Priya: emotional ... Daadi aap agle kya uske agle kumbh main Bhi rahengi ...

Daadi: uska Mujhe Pata Nahi lekin Mujhe is Baar tu Aur golu Nasik le challenge kumbh ke liye

Priya: daadi main as jaungi lekin Mr. Kapoor matlab aapke golu puttar ... ? Woh Nahi aayenge ... Aap jaanti hai naa unhe ...

Daadi: main jaanti hoon isiliye tujhe Bata Rahi hoon ... Tu bolegi toh zarooor manega woh

Priya: Nahi daadi woh toh Meri bilkul Nahi sunege

Daadi: ab you mujhse behes mat Kar ... Jaa Aur apne golu ko samjhaaa

Priya: ji daadi ...

@ green room

Ram is busy watching cricket ...
Priya enters room and sits on bed ... Ye daadi Bhi naa ... Unke golu puttar ko kumbh le Jane ke liye Bol rahe hai ... Assan hai kya ... Ye paani me Bhi germs dekhke Peete hai ... Recalls ... Moment in Australia ... When ram was walking on beach with his shoes on and his expression ... And closes her eyes with an expression oh my god ...

Ram checks out that Priya is back in their room and with a embarrassing expression
Ram: kya hua madam ... Aise mooh kyun bana Rahi hain?
Priya: woh ... Toh bas ... In a sad tone
Ram: kyaa hua Priya ? Kyun bulaya tha daadi ne
Priya: recollects daadi's words and again closes her eyes
Ram: kya hua And goes near her ... Holds her hand in his ... And asks kya hua?
Priya: woh daadi chahti hai ke main unki      Ye icha puri Karun .. Pata Nahi agle Baar woh rahengi Bhi yaa Nahi

Ram: what? Daadi ab Ye daadi ko kya ho Gaya ? Ab kya manga hai unhone?

Priya: Aisi chez Jo main akele Nahi de sakti... Aapke Bina... And closes her eyes ... Ab kaise batau

Ram : woh Aisi kya cheez hai Jo hum dono ke bagair Nahi de sakti Priya ... And says oh toh woh baat hai ...
Are haa bolo naa phir ... Ab daadi ki icha hai toh puri Karni padegi...

Priya: stunned kya?
Ram: haan ab Umar Bhi ho gayi hai unki ... Toh obvious hai itna toh Zaroor chahti hongi ... Aur him dono ghar ke bade hai ... Hum unki icha puri Nahi karenge toh Kaun karega ...
Priya: haa www Mr. Kapoor aap maan Gaye ... Vow Bhi mere Bina bataye ...
Ram: ab daadi ne kaha hai toh ... Karna toh padega naa ...
Priya: confused .. Haa toh thik hai phir ... Main daadi ko batati hoon ke aap maan Gaye ... Kumbh Jane ke liye
Ram: excited yes Jao Aur Bata do ... Ke main ready hoon ... Kumbh Jane ke liye

Ram : kumbh ab Ye kya hai? Main kyun jaunga

Priya: daadi ki icha puri Karne ke liye Aur kyun!

Ram: are lekin Tum toh USs baare me soch Rahi thi naa ... I mean hamare bacchehe. Ke baare me ...

Priya: bacha .. Aur Hamara ... Mr. Kapoor abhiii Aapko naa Bas Ek cheez dikhayi aur sunai Padti hai ... C'mon Mr. Kapoor ...
Ram: are toh Hume planning Karni chahiye naa... I mean I am 40 n u r 33 ... Abhi Ek saal me bacha aayega Aur uski hogi tab main 60 ka rahunga naa ... Aur der ho gayi toh main Shayad chal Bhi

Priya: enough Mr. Kapoor ... Aap toh Abhi Bhi bache ke track pe hai .. Main kumbh ke baare me Bol Rahi hoon ... Daadi keg Rahi thi ke agle kumbh tak woh Rahe naa rahe ... Isiliye woh chahti hai ke hum dono unhe Leke Jaaye ... Nasik kumbh ke liye

Ram: paagal ho kya? Kumbh Aur main
Priya: ab Ye main Nahi Aapki daadi kWh Rahi hai Mr. Kapoor

Ram: Nahi bilkul Nahi .. Waha Kitni log hote hai ... Stampede Hota hai ... No ... Main Nahi aanewala

Priya: acha pichle hafte toh Badi Badi baate Kar rahe the aap ... Main tumhare liye kitna Badal Gaya hoon Priya Sadak ka nimbu paani Peeta hoon tumhare liye Priya .. Ab kaha Gaya pyar?

Ram: are us din ki Baar Aur thi ... Priya ...

Priya: acha Aur aaj kya ... Aap mujhse pyar Nahi karte yaa phir 1 hafte me man Bhargaya mujhse

Ram: are Tum Ye Baat kahan se kaha le jaa Rahi ho... Abhi kaise Mann bharega mera ... Abhi toh hamare beech sab shuru hua hai

Priya: acha matlab Abhi Nahi bhara lekin Kal bharjayegaa

Ram: are Priya Ye Tum kya ... Bol Rahi ho ... Ab kaise prove karu ke I really love you yaar ...

Priya: prove karna hai toh chahiye kumbh

Ram: ye Ye galat hai Tum jaanti ho Mujhe ... Main Nahi adjust Kar sakta Priya ... You know me

Priya: Priya goes near him ... Puts her hand on his heart and says jis the ram Kapoor ko main jaanti thi ... Woh ab mere saamne Nahi khada hai ... Mere saamne Abhi Jo hai woh mere ram hai .. Jinhe Priya se pyaar hai ... Jo mere liye Sadak ka nimbu paani Peete hai ... Sabji mandi aate hai ...

Ram: Priya lekin...
Priya : shhh... Puts her finger on his lips and says ... Aap mujhse pyar karte hai naa rAm ... Toh please chaliye ... Aggar Kal daadi Nahi gayi Aur Umar ke chalte woh agle Baar ...

Ram: puts his finger on her lips and says shhh... Bas aage kuch mat bolo ... Bas packing Karo hum challenge daadi ko Lekar...

Priya: Sach?

Ram: much
Priya that's why I love you Mr. Kapoor
Ram: kya kaha tumne?
Priya: Mr. Kapoor
Ram: uske pehle...
Priya: That's why
Ram: dono ke beech me
Priya: aap kya pehle baad me beechme Bol rahe hai ...
Ram: ab Bolti ho ke Nahi ... Varna main jaa raha hoon ...
Priya: kaha? Kumbh? Abhi se?
Ram: Priya ki bachi Abhi Nahi chodunga tumhe ...
Priya: smiles and says ... Paagal main Nahi aap ho Gaye hai ... Pehle baad me beechme ... Jaata hoon Aur chodunga Nahi ... Kya Mr. Kapoor

Ram: ab Bas main jaa raha hoon and is about to leave room when Priya says

Ram ...
Ram turns to see her
Priya: Jaate Jaate sun lijiye na ... Yaad hai us din main chilla chilla ke kya Leh Rahi thi ...
Ram smiles and says haan ... Ek Baar Aur bolo naa
Priya: moves towards ram ... Turns him inside and says I ...
Ram : I
Priya ...I hate you .. And runs and says daadi ko Khush khabar deke aati hoon ... Ke Unke golu maan Gaye

Ram smiles and says ... Khud sir Firi hai ab Mujhe Bhi apne jaise Bana Rahi hai ...
Uff I love her ... Says to himself Ramji chaliye kumbh ab...

Last part to be continued ...

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Posted: 2015-09-21T04:35:03Z
Lovely update...
Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 2015-09-21T04:50:15Z
wowww.. very very cute n sweet update. loved it.

pl continue jaldi. if possible pl pm me.
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Posted: 2015-09-21T06:16:56Z
Very cute bantering between RaYa
Ram was thinking about their kid but Priya was telling about going to kumbh with Dadi. 
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Posted: 2015-09-21T07:45:44Z
Superb update...
Raya k convo was super
Ram ko abhi bacha chayiye..LOL
Per priya man nhi rhi..n ramji ko kumbh le jari h
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Posted: 2015-09-21T08:59:02Z
Superb update
Continue soon
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Posted: 2015-09-21T10:18:51Z
so cute ..and great going buddy .. 
 eagerly waiting for the next 

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Posted: 2015-09-21T11:05:51Z
wow. ...
lovely part and very cute conversion...
contd soon..
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