OS: Second chance

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Posted: 2015-09-15T14:34:53Z

OS: Second chance,,,

Thak thuk thaak...

There is a constant hammering on the new construction site in front of KM...

With buzzing noise of traffic...

Priya is sitting in balcony resting her head on rocking chairs headrest... with her diary in her hand... and tears roll down from her eyes ...

She wipes her tears... and opens her diary... and starts writing...

Aaj hamari shaadi ko 7 saal ho gaye hai... socha tha.. aaj ram aayenge... lekin nahi... aaj bhi nahi aaye...

Aaya toh sirf unka call... aur who bhi sirf wish karne ke liye... happy anniversary...

Pehla anniversary manane ke liye...hum saath nahi the.. dusra main Australia me thi... aur is saal... sath hokar bhi dur hai... aur duri ki wajah... business...

Pichle ek mahine se... naa... mujhe mile hai naa thik se baat ki hai... socha atleast aaj ke din saath honge lekin nahi...

Aaj bhi.. wahi.. akele manao anniversary...

Draws a cake and writes happy anniversary ram-priya in diary.. and keeps a rose in it...

Closes her diary and rests her head... with tears still flowing... on her red warm cheeks..

When pihu enters...

Pihu: mama... papa aaj bhi nahi aayenge kya?

Priya wipes her tears and says.. beta papa ka phone aaya tha... who parso aayenge...

Pihu; lekin mama... anniversary aaj hai naa.. toh cake... kharab ho jaayega...

Priya: pihu beta hum parso ek aur cake laayenge.. aur aaj waala hum cut karke kha lenge...

Pihu: unable to understand the sadness of priya says yippee... hum cake cut karenge aaj... I love you mumma...

Priya gets up keeps her diary in cupboard... and says chalo priya.. apne anniversary ka cake kaatne ...

After 2 days...

Priya puts blanket on pihu and increases AC temperature... ye baap beti dono ko kamra thanda chahiye... and combs her hair.. standing in front of mirror... when ram enters room with his heavy suitcase..

Priya turns and says aagaye aap...

Ram; haan.. is baar meeting thodi zyada chali...

Priya: chalo acha hai.. is baar kitne crore ki deal final hui ram?

Ram: 200 crores...

Priya: oh... bas... 200 crore?

Ram; priya.. ye toh yearly profit hoga.. & its huge... mind you...

Priya smiles and says... yearly profit ka toh pata nahi.. but your loss is irreparable ram...

Ram: matlab?

Priya: smiles and says.. jaane dijiye... aap nahi samjhenge... waise aapne khana kha liya hoga naa...

Ram: haa.. who flight me.. kha liya tha... aur tumne?

Priya; nahi.. nahi khaya  tha... lekin.. ab bhuk nahi hai... aur haan... agar thoda waqt mile toh pihu se baat kar lijiyega... use aapki bahut yaad aa rahi thi...

Ram: haa.. ok.. main change karke aata hoon...

Priya upset.. ek baar courtesy ke liye kaha hota ram.. khana khaane ke liye... gets into bed and sleeps...

Ram changes and comes out and sees priya and pihu both have fallen asleep...

He picks up his phone turns it off and goes to sleep...

Next day.. ram is awake early... goes to study and starts working...

Priya enters study: Ram main aaj... maa ke paas jaa rahi hoon...

Ram; acha ok... kab tak aaogi?

Priya; pata nahi...

Ram: turns and asks pata nahi matlab?

Priya: matlab pata nahi...

Ram: arre aise kyun baat kar rahi ho priya...?

Priya: nahi... toh.. main hamesha aise hi bolti hoon... bas aap ka sunneka tarika badall gaya hai...

Ram: irritated... ok.. maa ke paas jana hai toh jao... aur pihu? Use bhi saath le jaarahi ho kya?

Priya: nahi.. who yahi rahegi aapke saath...

Ram: ok... nahi lekin.. agar use saath le jaati toh... uska bhi mann laga rehta...

Priya: nahi mr. kapoor... aaj use lejaane ka mann nahi kar raha hai...

Ram; priy you alright? Aaj ajeeb se baate kar rahi ho...

Priya; haa shayad ram.. but mujhe aaj aage ka safar akele karna hai...

Ram; ok.. bye... mujhe abhi ek urgent call hai.. US se...

Priya: smiles with teary eye.. kaash bye toh thik se bola hota ram.. aapne.. and says...good bye ram...

Ram: good bye priya...

Priya; ramu kaka... ramu kaka... gaadi ki chaabi dijiye... jaldi...

Ramu kaka: ye lijiye madam...

Priya: ye.. toh ram ke gaadi ki chaabi hai.. mujhe meri gaadi... matlab meri shaadi ke pehle ki gaadi ki chaabi dijiye... jaldi...

Priya starts the car... and plays song...

Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi
Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin, zindagi, to nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi
Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi

Kaash aisa ho tere qadmo se, chun ke manzil chale aur kahi door kahi
Tum gar saath ho, manzilo ki kami to nahi
Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi

Jee mein aata hai, tere daaman mein, sar jhuka ke ham rote rahe, rote rahe
Teri bhi aankho mein, aansuo ki nami to nahi

Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi,
shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi
Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin, zindagi, to nahi,
zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi

Tum jo keh do to aaj ki raat, chaand doobega nahi, raat ko rok lo
Raat ki baat hai, aur zindagi baaki to nahi

Tere bina zindagi se koyi, shikwa, to nahi,
shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi, shikwa nahi
Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin, zindagi, to nahi,
zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi, zindagi nahi

Priya tries to control her tears... but listening to this she literally vents out her emotions... and closes her eyes... for a second... and opens her eyes.. and screams... Raaam

Ram switches off his phone and starts his call...

Its 1 pm.. Ram comes out of study and finds pihu... playing with her doll.. when ram enters.. oye mera rockstar.. kya raha hai..

Pihu: kuch nahi papa... mujhe naa mumma ki bohot yaad aarahi hai...

Ram: beta mumma ko naa apne mumma ki bahot yaad aarahi thi.. isliye woh naani se milne gayi hai...

Pihu: toh papa aapko hamari yaad nahi aarahi thi?

Ram kyun?

Pihu: toh aap itne dino ke baad aaye,... aur aapne humse baat bhi nahi ki... mumma bahot royi parso.. pata hai.. unhone cake bhi nahi khaya...

Ram realizes his mistake and says.. koi baat nahi bacha... Hum abhi mumma ke paas jaate hai.. cake leke ok...?

Pihu; ok papa... chalo...

Ram and Pihu on the way to Sharma house...

Pihu; papa... mumma ko naa... aaj.. hum surprise denge.. maine naa.. unke liye ye miss you ka card banaya hai...

Ram: arre waah rockstar... papa ke liye card nahi banaya kya?

Pihu: nahi papa... aap ke liye mujhe roz ek card banana padega.. na phir... is liye no card for you...

Ram: achaa... mmma ek din kya gayi.. mumma ke liye card.. aur mere liye lkuch bhi nahi?

@ Sharma house:

ShiprA: pihu.. my doll come here... and hugs her.. and kisses her...

Pihu: oh naaani... don't kiss me... mujhe sirf mumma kiss karsakti hai...

Shipra: ok my doll.. sorry...

Pihu: mumma kidhar hai.. naani..?

Shipra: mumma.. tumhare saath hogi naa pihu..

Ram... matlab...who yaha nahi aayi?

Sudhir: nahi ram... Kyun who aane waali thi kya?

Ram: haan who.. subah 10 baje nikali hai ghar se.. ye kehke ki...who yaha aayegi...

Sudhir: toh shaayad... aur kahi gayi hogi...

Ram: ek minute main use call karta hoon...

Message.. aap jis vyakti se call karna chahte hai uska phone abhi coverage kshetra ke baahar hai...

Ram: not reachable hai papa...

Sudhir: are on the way hogi.. waise bhi koi mil gaya hoga use...

All have lunch together and pihu goes to sleep..

Its 5 pm...

Ram gets a call from office...

Ram; papa .. mujhe office jaana hai.. its urgent... pihu ko aap apne paas rakhenge.. please...?

Sudhir: haan beta...

At 8pm...

Ram: ok gys aage ka discussion hum kal karenge...

Ram: chalo... bahut der ho gayi hai... pihu aur priya ko pick up karke ghar jaata hoon.. ab... waise bhi priya ke liye cake liya hai... meri hi galti hai... kal raat ko usse baat karni chahiye thi.. lekin.. mai itna thak gaya tha.. no issues... abhi baat karta hoon usse... and calls her...

Message.. aap jis vyakti se call karna chahte hai uska phone abhi coverage kshetra ke baahar hai... abhi bhi not reachable... kaha gayo ye priya... shayad.. maa ke saath baat karne me zyada busy hogi...

@ Sharma house...

Ram: hi.. pihu chalo.. mumma ko bhi bulao ab ghar jaana hai...

Pihu: papa mumma nahi aayi hai abhi tak...

Ram: nahi aayi..?

Sudhir: haa beta hume laga tum dono saath honge.. dono ka phone not reachable aaraha tha toh...

Ram: oh.. god.. its more than 12 hours,...

He calls KM and then neha's place... all have same answer.. priya yaha nahi hai...

Ram : papa... main khud jaake dekhta hoon...

All are searching for Priya... nobody knows where she is...

Neha: ram.. tum dono ka jhagda hua tha kya?

Ram: nahi neha.. woh jhagda hone ka koi chance hi nahi hai... main toh yaha pichle ek mahine se tha hi nahi...

Neha phir.. kaha hai priya...

Ram tensed.. goes to police station...

Inspector; Mr. kapoor... abhi priya madam ko laapata hue... 24 hrs bi hue nahi hai...

Ram: I give adman to it... please inspector.. just find her...

Inspector: can you tell us.. mam was wearing which color dress or saree...

Ram: tries to think... and says.. I don't know... I did not see her today...

Inspector: can you give us her photo latest one...

Ram: picks up an album and gives her picture to inspector

Inspector: we will do the needful Mr. kapoor...

Ram enters his room.. and finds the room... so lifeless.. pihu at Nanu's place.. and no priya... he enters.. and finds Priya's ear rings on dressing table..

Flashback..

Ram: priya ye lo tumhare liye gift..

Priya: vow... gift aur mere liye...

Ram: haa.. gift toh hai tumhare liye... lekin... ek sharat hai...

Priya: all shart manjoor.. now let me open the gift... and finds jhumke...

Priya; vow.. wonderful... I loved it ram..

Ram; haa lekin.. sharat toh tumne suna hi nahi...!!!

Priya: kya sharat hai ram?

Ram: sharat ye hai ke.. jab jab... ye jhumke tumhare gaalon ko touch karenge .. tab tab main bhi tumhare gaalon ko kiss karunga...

Priya: phir toh main isse kabhi nahi pehnungi...

Ram: naa... this is not fair.. priya

Priya: everything is fair mr. Kapoor...

Present time...

Ram picks up.. jhumke.. with tears in his eyes... recollecting morning incident... and priya's weird behavior... and sits in balcony...

Ram looks at the sky... and says.. yaha bhi kale baadal... kya karu.. kaha dhundu priya tumhe... kaha... when his thought is broken by alarm..

Ram.. alarm who bhi iss waqt.. abhi toh 12 baje hai.. and opens drawer and switches off alarm.. and finds priya's diary...

Ram picks it up... and starts reading...

He abruptly opens the diary and reads..

12th December...

 Aaj main bahut khush hoon.. aaj 6 saal baad.. main ram se mili hoon... aur who bhi... kaha... ussi shaadi ke hall me jaha mera aur ram ka shaadi hua tha...

Aur milaya kisne pihu ne...

Ram ko... yun behosh hote dekh.. meri toh jaan hi nikalgayi...

Kitna ajeeb hai naa... do.. pyar karne waalon ko...unki pyar ki nishani mila deti hai... pihu... my doll.. I love you...

 

17th march,...

Aaj... naa... ram bahut handsome lag rahe the... aur honge kyun nahi... dulha jo bane the.. dusri baar...

Socha nahi tha.. ke unhi se dusri baar shaadi hogi meri... he he ...

Waise... I hope ke... is baar... westend ke hotel me.. woh... towel... swans... ke saath rose petals nahi daalenge.. neha aur vikram... nahi.. toh.. ram ke kaan khichne padenge phirse... hehe

 

14th August

Aaj... ram phirse ghar nahi aaye... reason.. meeting... ab jalan hoti hai... meri sautan se.. roz roz meeting.. aur raat ko study me... uski tayari...

20th September

Pihu so gayi hai.. aur ram.. as usual business tour pe... shaayad 1 mahine se zyada ho gaya hai.. mujhe aur ram ko.. ek saath waqt bitaaye hue...

Lekin... ab kya kare.. sautan.. se kaise chutkara paau...

 

9th October...

Aaj hamari shaadi ko 7 saal ho gaye hai... socha tha.. aaj ram aayenge... lekin nahi... aaj bhi nahi aaye...

Aaya toh sirf unka call... aur who bhi sirf wish karne ke liye... happy anniversary...

Pehla anniversary manane ke liye...hum saath nahi the.. dusra main Australia me thi... aur is saal... sath hokar bhi dur hai... aur duri ki wajah... business...

Pichle ek mahine se... naa... mujhe mile hai naa thik se baat ki hai... socha atleast aaj ke din saath honge lekin nahi...

Aaj bhi.. wahi.. akele manao anniversary...

sees a cake and happy anniversary ram-priya in diary.. and finds a rose in it

and says.. sorry priya... I am really sorry... main galat hoonpriya.. kaam me itna busy ho gaya ke tumhare akele pan ko kabhi samajh hi nahi paya... I am really sorry priya...

Its 9 am...

Ram is tensed... walking in KM.. inspector.. koi khabar...?

Inspector: we are trying Mr. kapoor...

Ram: main main.. jaata hoon... main khud dhundta hoon priya ko...

Ram driving his car...

Hey bhagwaan.. please please mujhe meri priya se milwa do.. I promise main usko kabhi akela nahi chodunga... I promise... please give me a second chance please...

when song plays in background...

Shaam Sawere teri yaadein aati hain

Aake dil ko mere yu tadpati hain

O Sanam Mohabbat ki kasam,

 

Milke bichad na to dastoor ho gaya

Yadoon mein teri majboor hogaya

O Sanam teri yadoon ki kasam

 

Samjhe zamaana ke dil he khilona

Jaana hai ab kya hai dil ka lagana

Nazroon se ab na humko girana

Mar bhi gaye toh bhul na jaana.

 

Ankhon mein bassee ho

Par door ho kaheen

Dil ke kareeb ho

Yeh mujhko hai yakeen

O Sanam tere pyar ki kasam.

 

Pyaar ke safar mein

aadhi dhoop chaav hai,

manzil na jane meri kis gaon hain,

O sanam chale jane ki kasam.

 

When ram's phone rings...

Inspector: Mr. kapoor.. please do come to police station.. we have some information about your wife...

Ram: main abhi aata hoon... Ram stops his car...and runs towards police station... and is about to enter.. when he turns back... and tears run though his cheek... he collapses on the police station door... he brings his legs close to his chest... and continues to look without blinking his eyes...

Inspector and Vikram comes running towards ram...

Vikram: Ram... ram... kya hua ram...?

Ram:  points his finger to the vehicle...

Vikram...  in a shock.. leaves ram's hands and goes back.. when he finds the police station door supporting his back...

Inspector: kya hua mr. Kapoor..

Ram: who... who.. priya...

Inspector: kaha hai Mrs. Kapoor...?

Ram: ye priya ki... gaadi...  inspector.. ye priya ki gaadi hai.. where did you find it...?

Inspector: ye.. ye.. toh sea link ke paas kal accident hua.. toh.. samundar se nikaali hai...

Ram: accident... samundar..

Flashback...

Priya; ram chaliye naa beach pe... samundar se itna kyun darte hai aap...?

Ram; kyunki mujhe tairna nahi aata priya...

Priya: bas itni si baat.. tairna toh mujhe bhi nahi aata.. lekin.. is wajah se kya aap beach pe nahi aayenge? C'mmon Ram.. main jaa rahi hoon.. aap aayenge.. ya nahi...?

Ram: priya mat jao.. tumhe tumhe tairna bhi nahi aata...

Inspector: control mr. kapoor...

Ram: Inspector.. meri priya .. priya ko tairna nahi aata.. do something... its more than 24  hours.. now.. where is she...

Inspector: Sawant... check ar.. body milali ka mhanun?

Ram: hey.. inspector... body??? Body... kisko bola? Who meri priya hai.. aur zinda hai who...

Vikram: coming to his senses.. ram.. ram control kar... sorry inspector

Ram: crying.. vik vikram... dekh naa.. ye bol raha hai.. ke... priya ki body mili ya nahi... galti meri hai.. maine usse business ke liye ignore  karta naa who mujhse naaraz hoti...

He hugs vikram and cries...

Sawant; sir...

Inspector: kaay zhala.. sawant.. nods his head in yes...

Ram: seeing sawant... says.. kya kaha tumne...? Tumhare kehne ka kya matlab hai?

Inspector: pl. Mr. kapoor control yourself.. hum  chalke.. laash ko dekh lete hai please...

Ram: nahi.. who priya nahi ho sakti... vikram.. vikram call priya... abhi call kar usse.. usse kaho.. ke uska ram usse maafi maang raha hai.. please jaldi aajao...

@ city hospital...

@ morgue room...

Vikram: ram... chal..

Ram: arre... main kyun aao... ye meri priya nahi hai...

Vikram: ram.. haan main jaanta hoon ye ye priya nahi hai... lekin.. apne dil ke tasali ke liye dekhna padega na ram...

Ram: main main.. nahii dekhunga... nahi...

Inspector: Mr. Shergil.. please aap ek baar...

Vikram: main..

Inspector: please...

Vikram.. enters.. room... and ram.. hides his face in wall...

Vikram takes off the bedsheet... and walks behind...

Ram: kya hua vikram.. tu kuch bol kyun nahi raha...?

Vikram: shows his finger towards the body... who...

Ram: who kya...? And holds vikram tightly...

When tear rolls down vikram's face...

Ram loosens his grip on vikram's hand.. and turns towards body... and sees... the face...

He stands there dumstruck... and recollects... the last conversation with priya...

yearly profit ka toh pata nahi.. but your loss is irreparable ram... and recollects... good bye...

Ram : priya... ye kaunsa tarika hua yaar... loss samjhane ka... No.. you cant you cant leave me like this... holds priya's dead body,... and says.. get up priya... get up... for godsake.. tum tum mujhe... aise chodke.. nahi jaa sakti priya... Tum mujhpe gussa karo.. chilao... lekin.. aisi sazmat do.. priya... Please... please for god sake... pihu.. pihu ko kya jawab dunga main priya... kal tum kuch pal uske saath nahi thi toh.. usne tumhare liye miss you card banaya...

I cant live without you priya.. please... comeback..

And screams... priya...

@ km... Ram cries.. on the bed.. holds priya's dairy in his hand... puts it close to his chest.. and kisses the half dried rose and drifts off to sleep...

Next day morning...

Ram.. ram.. utho ram...please for god sake uth jao...

Ram wakes up... and finds priya.. in front of him..

Priya; good morning ram...

Ram: gets up in shock.. tumm tum.. yaha...

Priya: arre aise kyun chila rahe ho... pehle toh... priya priya chilakar meri jaan nikaldi.. pichle 15 min.. se aapko jaga rahi hoon...

Ram: nahi.. ye sach nahi ho sakta.. tum tum toh mar gayi thi naa...

Priya: ram.. main zinda hoon.. ok.. chuke dekhiye mujhe...

Ram: nahi main nahi..

When pihu gets up.. mumma papa aap itne zor se kyun chila rahe ho...

Ram: pihu... tumhe mumma dikh rahi hai?

Pihu; haa papa...

Ram: priya.. kyat um sach me zinda ho?

Priya: ram...please... touch me... feel me...

Ram raises his hand and touchea...s her... and feels her.. and then hugs her.. oh priya.. I am so sorry... I promise you kea age se. main kabhi bhi.. tumhe aise... akela nahi chodunga

Priya: ram... lekin ye toh batayiye.. ke hua kya?

Ram: bura sapna hai priya.. bas mujhe yunhi rehne do.. tumhare paas.. and hugs her...

And background music plays...

Tere bina jiya jaye na ,  Tere bina jiya jaye na

 Bin tere, tere bin sajna sans me sans aaye na... Tere bina jiya jaye na -

Priya" by the way.. happy anniversary ram.. aaj hamari shaadi ki 7th anniversary hai... and we will be celebrating it together for the first time...

Ram: and we will always celebrate it together henceforth... happy anniversary... and says thank you god for this second chance...

Pihu: mumma - papa.. ab please so jao naa.. kitna... chit chat kar rahe ho.. aap log...

Background music...plays bade ache lagte hai...


Lucky

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Posted: 2015-09-15T22:14:51Z
It's happen all time in family
But Ram was lucky to get second chance and it was only a dream now he will not apart from his love his wife Priya and daughter Pihu.
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Posted: 2015-09-15T23:24:27Z
Interesting os tha ek time ke liye i was shocked ki priya is no more but thanks for making it a dream sequence n plss keeo writing
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Posted: 2015-09-16T00:25:20Z
yaar. sach me tumne Dara hi diya. Priya mar gayi ye padh k maeri bhi jaan nikal gayi thi.

but thank God aisa nahi hua.

nice os. pl write more.
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Posted: 2015-09-16T02:54:41Z
what a writing yarrr,aapne to mujhe rula diya,,,I can't believe that ki priya margayi,thanks for making that dream,,,,
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Posted: 2015-09-16T10:41:15Z
Awesome OS...
Terrific nightmare..
Please do write more...TongueTongue
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Posted: 2015-09-16T15:07:52Z
wow such an emotions filled story. Love it 
please do write more stories. 
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Posted: 2015-09-19T01:11:44Z
Beautiful & Emotional Update...
superb...Star
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