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A SS (Simple story ) On Raya Shaadi..Honeymoon.. aur love

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Another small SS on Raya from my side... Seedha story pe chalthe hai

In this story ram and priya went to attend some family relatives wedding... as we know our mr.kapoor very possessive abt his mrs.kapoor he don't wanna leave her for a sec too then how can he leave her with relatives but priya too helpless she busy with shaadi preparations it's a close relative marriage so priya also took part in shaadi preparations.. so shaadi destination wedding hai toh obviously rooms booked in some hotel for everyone but coz of room shortages they requested to share room in between relatives.. when ram reached hotel he get to know that and ram kapoor never share... ek cupboard ki shelf thak share nehi ki biwi se toh room kaise share karengey ... and most important unko priya ke bina soneke aadath nehi hai ...

Some guy came to ram : Paaji bura math maano bas aajke liye adjust karo subah rooms available hongey .. ram giving fake smile

Ram : haaan... haan koi baath nehi mein kuch sochunga... I need to make a urgent call... Saying this he moved out from hotel... when he reached out of hotel giving instructions to someone... all kapoors reached there from venue

Ram cursing... scratching his temples: arey yaar sablog ithni jaldi kaise aagaye... Ab kya karu... Kya karu... (flapping his palms with eachother)...

Rishabh, soumya, Natasha , karthik and all bhujurgs of kapoors & sharmas looking at him

Daadi : oye ram... tu yahan kya karraha hai... andar chalo thoda aaram karo... shaadi subah hai..

Ram nagging... ji... daadi...

KK : kya hua ram... koi problem hai kya nehi maa... Kuch nehi... wo... kya...haina... darsall.. ram dragging each and every word then daadi irritatedly

Daadi : Oye khothey da puttar seedha seedha bol kya baath hai ye kya wo... darsall laga rakha hai...

Ram frightened.. closed his eyes.. kk comes to him, Placing her palm on his shoulder

KK : Kya hua beta...?

Ram : maa kuch nehi aap sab yahan adjust karsakthe ho ya mein koi aur hotel book karu??? Yahan rooms kam hai we need to share rooms with other relatives ???

KK calmly : its ok beta hum adjust karlenge koi aur hotel book karenge toh unko bura lagegi na

Ram : ok maa aapki marzi but mein priya aur peehu ko leke dusre hotel mein jaaraha hu... book ki hai meine room already ...saying this he bent his head down...

Shipra ji (asusual thodisi loud character haina ) : Kyu beta... priya aur peehu bhi adjust karenge aap chintha na karo... wo hamare saath he rahenge na

Ram murmuring : aapko kya mummy ji kehdethe ho peehu tak theek hai mein kya karu ... mera kya...

Rishabh , soumya, Natasha, karthik.. looks at each other and smiles feel like something fishy, steps closer towards ram

Rishabh whispers : nuts hum yahan shaadi attend karne aaye hai... lekin kuch log inki shaadi mein suhaag raath manane aaye hai..

Nuts : haan rishabh lagtha hai ye shaadi ki destination nehi kisika honeymoon destination hai... winks to karthik,

Four of them laughs hifi eachother,,, ram fists in anger.. glares at them angrily

By then priya also reached hotel talking, laughing with someone... ram looks at her

Ram himself : yahan meri band bhajrahi hai madam majak masti mood me hai... priya looks at them confusedly

Priya : kya hua sab bahar kyu khade ho kithni thand hai peehu ki tabiyath kharab hojayegi..

Relative aunty (with whom few mins before priya accompanied) : haan chalo chalo... priya tum peehu ko leke mere saath aao .. waise bhi aajraath ke liye sabko rooms share karna padega toh tum mere saath aao.. priya gave a shocking look.. next sec looks at ram helplessly..

Here these four brats (rishabh, soumya, karthik , Natasha) starts giggling looking at helpless ram and priya

Ram glares at them angrily, unwillingly priya starts to move but ram hold her hand

Ram : aunty ji aap takleef math uttayiga mein hum theeno ke liye dusra arrangement ki meine toh aap chintha na kariyega... aunty gave a shocking look.. priya feeling very embarrassed.. she bent her head down .. aunty left from there... here kapoors and sharmas giving a aww look at ram behavior...

Ram shouts : Kya...? Sab aise kyu dekhrahe ho... aapko nehi aana haina toh math aao... mein peehu ko...yahan sabke saath nehi  raksaktha... wo abhi choti hai infections hosakthe hai... isliye mein humare liye alag room book ki...

Everyone giving calm look at ram... these four brats burst in to laughter...

Daadi: Kisi ne kuch poocha hai kya tumhe??? Ab jaao kaafi derhogayi hai aur sunn subah time pe pahunjao sab dermath karo yaad rakho shaadi mein aaye hai hum...

Ram nodding his head : Ji daadi... pahunjaayenge time pe... everyone starts to leave.. again ram stops

Ram : karthik, choti, rishabh, soumya... aap log bhi hamare saath aajao ... aapke liye bhi suites book ki meine

Soumya : Bappa... nehi hum yehi rahenge... aap log jaao we manage... rishabh, Natasha, karthik smiles assuring its ok

Ram : ok then meine choice di aaplog nehi use ki... baadmein complain math karo...

Natasha glares at ram , priya gives a slap on ram shoulder

Ram : ouch... priya gives sherni look

Priya : Natasha mummy papa ka khyal rakhna.. soumya daadi aur maa ko waqt pe dawayi dedo mein jaana nehi chahthi hu... lekin mein kuch nehi karsakthi ... made a puppy face

Ram got tensed dragged her towards car, priya looking at him shockingly

Ram : ok guys bye bye kaafi raath hogayi hai u ppl, go and take rest humein bhi chalna chahiye... literally he pushed priya in to front seat .. peehu already sleeping in car...

Priya shocked he didn't gave chance to say good night to them

Ram started the car in few mins they reached hotel its just few yards away from kapoors and Sharmas staying hotel.. as ram want to be available if any thing emergency ...

Ram collected room keys... three of them reached their room.. priya didn't uttered a single word all through the way.. at roomalso she didn't said anything to ram.. ram felt strange, ram and priya sleeping in either side of the bed in middle peehu sleeping... , slowly ram placed his hand on priya elbow (she sleeping showing her back to ram ).. priya jerks his hand.. ram understood something happened madam upset on him...ram got up from his bed went near priya kneeled down... with all his love he placed his palm on her face... priya anger melted she nudged her face in to his palm.. a smile crept on ram lips  he slowly made some place beside priya... priya blushingly moved so that ram can sleep comfortably... ram hugged her.. priya resting her head on his broad chest

Ram ruffling her hair : toh gussa khatam ????

Priya : hmm

Ram : waise gussa kyu thi???

Priya lifts her head looks in his face: aapko nehi patha??? Ram pouts his lips

Priya wake up and sits back leaning back on head rest .. side hugging ram.. ram encircles his one hand over priya shoulder.. priya entwines her hand with his

priya : gussa nehi toh aur kya mr.kapoor.. ye sab mujhe accha nehi lagrahi hai??? Pouted

ram snuggling his head on her neck lane: kya accha nehi lagrahi hai.. priya controlling herself slaps on his hand which entwined...  ram takes back

priya : ye sab .. jo aapne ki na... wo... ye kya hai... humein wahan sabke saath rehna chahiye aise dusre hotel mein nehi... sab kya sochthey hongey.. again ram starts snuggling on her neck lane.. again priya slaps again ram backs off

ram taking her in to his hug : arey sabke saath rehsakthey they agar sabko alag alag rooms diye hotoh lekin wahan share karna hai ... mujhse nehi hoga... unko jo sochna hai sochne do mujhe koi farak nehi padega ... tum nehi hogi toh mujhe neendh nehi aayegi ... mujhe sirf ithna patha hai.. saying this kissed on her fore head

both are playing with eachother fingers by entwining hands

priya :aapko kya kehna aasaan hai kal meri kya halath hogi socha aapne... sab milke meri ithni keenchayi karenge ki andaaza bhi hai aapko...? Ram smiles and gave a peck on her hand . priya too smiles

priya : ye sab toh theek hai.. hotel se mujhe keech ke kyu laaye ho????  Wo bhi karthik Natasha, rishabh soumya sabke saamne se...?

ram : wo isliye kyuki agar 2 min aur wahan rukthi toh tum meri poori plan ki band baajathi isliye...

Priya : haawww... slightly slaps on his chest...

Ram playfully : ouch... and smile... priya hugs him tightly...

Priya : ab jaake sojayiye.. subah shaadi haina time pe pahunchna bhi hai... priya gets up and tries to tie her hair with a band... ram stops her... priya questions him through eyes

Ram : khule he rehne do u look beautiful in loose hair.. saying this he lies down on her lap.. priya feeling shy still controlling herself... tries to wake up him holding his shoulders.. but she couldn't

Ram : aise he sone do na plsss

Priya : ye kya karrahe ho...she turns her head looking for peehu... peehu uttjaye... She stops and worried

Priya : peehu kahan gayi... Aap mujhse kahan kyu nehi peehu nehi hai hamare saath she starts panicking

Ram shooks her holding her shoulder: bas karo .. peehu yahi hai .. wo aaram se sorahi hai...aao mere saath ( he took her towards a door which attached to their room... it's a small room ).. when priya sees peehu sleeping peacefully she felt relieved runs to peehu and gave a peck on her forehead.. ram to follows her.. about onehour they sat there like that.. ram took baby steps towards priya

Ram whispered : peehu ko sulane ki jarurat nehi hai wo abhi sogayi hai... ab peehu ke papa ka bhi thoda socho winking at her .. priya looks at him... she knows that she cant win over him... silently shows her hand to doorway saying u go ill come... ram leaves from there

Priya smiling herself... carefully kept her on bed... kept pillows either side of bed and went from there

In room ram waiting for priya.. he closed his eyes leaning on head rest folding his hands to his chest... covered himself with duvet ...priya came to him... slipped beside him... she kept her head on his chest... Ram removes his hands from chest and hugs her... and took her more closely...

Ram while closing his eyes : u look very beautiful while blushing... mann kartha hai ki tumhe khaa jaau.. tumhare ye baal...( ruffling her hair) mujhe pagal kardethe yaar... aise khule rakhogi na I just love it... jistarah tum meri hare k choti badi khushi ka khyal rakthi ho na I love u loads... priya silently blushing

Ram shooks her : priya... priya...

Priya : hmm

Ram : sogayi ho kya ???

Priya : nehi toh??? Meri dil ki dhadkan sunrahi hu... Saying this she smiles

Ram : tumhari dil ki dhadkan tum khud sunrahi ho??? Kaise

Priya gets up and face him by keeping her elbow on his chest...resting her head on her palm: she keeps her another palm on his chest... ye yahan jo lub dub bajrahi haina wo meri he dhadkane hai... wahan pe mein he hu na ??? ram nods his head saying yes... priya continous: toh hogayi na meri dhadkane again she slips beside him... hugging him..

Ram gets a wicked idea actually romance shuru karne haina... All of sudden he comes over priya .. priya shocked

Priya : ye kya ... kya... kya karrahe ho????

Ram keeps his finger on her lips : shhh... tum tumhari dadkhane suni haina ab mujhe meri dadhkane sunna hai...? May I ??

Priya feeling very shy : she opened her arms .. ram went to hear his heartbeats .. another beautiful night in raya married life.. both slept on each other arms

At wee hours ... priya sleep disturbed by phone call.. ram phone ringing continuously and caller id showing rishabh name.. she became panick... hurriedly she accepted the call

Priya : haan rishabh bolo tumhara bhai sorahe hai... bolo koi emergency hai kya??? Sab theek haina???

Other side someone singing a song in female voice:

Baho Me Chale Aao
Baho Me Chale Aao
Ho Hamse Sanam Kya Parda
Oh Hamse Sanam Kya Parda
Yeh Aaj Kaa Nahee Milan
Yeh Sang Hai Umar Bhar Kaa
Baho Me Chale Aao
Ho Hamse Sanam Kya Parda
Oh Hamse Sanam Kya Parda

Humn.. Humn..

Priya gets irritated : kaun hai ... ye kya majak hai aadhi raath mein... soumya... Priya didn't get any response... Natasha... again priya didn't get response... kaun ho tum ithni raath ko ye kya majak karrahi ho meri devar ka phone tumhe kahan se mila... kaun ho tum...

In all these she didn't remember how she and ram slept : only a duvet covering them...

Other side : oye hello pehle time check karo ye koi aadhi raath nehi hai ( priya turns to check clock)... dusri baath ... maana ki phone pe baath karrahi ho still aise halaath mein phone koi pick karthe hai kya very bad priya... tumhe  chodo wo fatty ko bhi akal nehi hai kya????

Priya : neha... Tum... aur tum ye kya bolrahi ho???

Neha : thank god finally tumhe yaad aagayi aapko?? Aur kya bolrahi hu matlab kya... ye jo jis halath mein tum phone pick ki ... uski baath karrahi hu... (all four brats and vikram also present there... neha winks at them)

Priya hurriedly looks at her stage and remember last night she is blushing looking at ram peaceful smiling face... she forgot abt the world and most imp neha phone call... still she holding phone in her hand... priya bends towards ram gave a peck on his forehead... kiss voice neha heard

Neha : Priyaaa...

Priya back from her love land looks at her hand and realizes what she did ... she slapped her forehead... she knows whats waiting for her in next moment...now she cant handle neha so she decided to cut the convo : hellooo... helooo... neha... nehaa.. awaaz nehi aarahi hai .. ajeeb ajeeb awaaze aarahi hai... by priya yelling  ram woke up from sleep...

Ram in sleep : priya aao na sojao yaar... iss waqt kiske saath baath karrahi ho jo bhi hai subah call karne ko kaho ...tum aao na yaar ... literally he pulls her towards him... priya safely lands on his broad chest

Still priya didn't cut the call... neha can hear their convo

Priya : mr.kapoor pls

Neha shouts loudly : Priyaaa.. rehne do... bas ithna khyal rakho ki 2 ghante mein tumhe yahan hona hai... dulhan ki bhabhi ke tabiyath kharab hogayi hai achanak so pls agar aapki pathi ki seva khatam hojaye toh pls dulhan ki bhabhi honeka farz nibhao... koi rasam hai jo bhabhi ki karni hothi hai toh pls  aasha karthi hu ki tum time pe pahunjaogi... And I think abhi awaaz theek se sunayi derahi hai tumhe... laughs and cuts the call... four brats and neha & vikram burst in to laughter hifi with each other

Here ram woke up with jerk after hearing neha voice

Ram nudging his eyes : ye neha ithni raath ko kyu  call ki yaar. Wo kya bolrahi thi...Aur tum aise kyu react karrahi thi .. by that time priya went restroom... she has to reach there with in 2 hours

After a while she back from washroom with wet hairs... water droplets clinging on her hair like they don't want to leave those silky smooth hair... ram still sleeping holding duvet tightly towards his chest and a cute smile on his face... he sensed her presence turned to face her... opened his arms inviting her... priya looks at him gives a unbelievable look and turns avoiding him... but ram cant hold himself back so he tries to get up priya observing him through mirror when he tries to getup she shouts loudly

Priya : Rammm... and closes her eyes tightly

Ram to realized his state bits his tongue : sorry sorry priya .. aankhen kholo...

Priya feeling very embarrassed : aap jaake freshup hojayiye mein peehu ko dekhthi hu... she runs from there

Ram smiles at her behavior , sits there holding duvet tightly and collecting his things thinks: ye kya priya ithni saal hogayi hai hamari shaadi hoke , ek bacchi bhi hai hamari still u blush like newly wedded bride..

He came back asusual ram kapoor looking dashingly in sherwani... priya back with peehu .. they are ready ... priya in milkwhite saree with heavy border ... Peehu matching with her mother she too wore a kids saree... ram looking at them without blinking

Priya questions him through eyes... he just nods his head saying nothing, three of them headed towards marriage venue... with in a mins they reached... priya hurriedly went to check daadi , KK and others

Neha, soumya, Natasha looking at priya with wide opened mouth...

Priya : ye kya yaar aaplog abhi tak tayyar nehi ho??? Derhorahi hai yaad haina humein shaadi pe jaana hai

Neha soumya Natasha giving weird looks towards eachother hearing priya comments

Priya : aao soumya mein help kardethi hu tumhe...

Neha plating saree pleats to Natasha holding a pin in between her teeth : Natasha hum jaldi kaise ready hosakthe yaar hum thodi na raath bhar jaagne ki planning... Humein thodi na koi phone karke gaana sunake uttadi... hum thodi na birthsuit pe... before neha completes the sentence priya rushed towards her and kept her palm on neha mouth...

Every one shocked the way she reacted... priya bend her head down she cant meet her eyes with them she feeling very embarrassed

Priya : soumya tumhara hogayi hai... ab chalein ... ya phir mein akeli jaau...  neha & Natasha, soumya are clueless with priya behavior they are thinking they did too much

Neha tries to speak : priya... but priya left from there

Neha : ye isko kya hogayi yaar... aise kyu react karrahi hai

Natasha : sayad bhabhi hurt ... jyada ki kya humne

Soumya : ab johogaya sohogaya aaplog jaldi karo...

Priya hearing their convo standing at the door side... her lips curved in to big grin.. she taps her own shoulder in praise

After a while neha Natasha soumya came towards priya.. priya enjoying their pale depressed look on their faces

Neha ; dekho priya... meine majak ki yaar... tum ithni serious hojaogi mujhe nehi patha ... pls maanjao yaar agar fatty ko patha chalegi na mujhe dauda dauda ke maarega ...neha folded her hands infront priya like pleading... priya cant control now she burst in to laughter

Priya holding Natasha and soumya ears: bolo ab maja aaya haina tum sabko ??? winks at neha

Natasha & soumya : sorry sorry bhabhi pls dard horahi hai chodo na.. she leaves them

Moves towards neha...  neha stops priya

Neha : tum meri kaan nehi pakadsakthi ho... covering her ear

Priya : yeah mein tumhari kaan nehi pakadsakthi par mein tumhe torture karsakthi hu she starts tingling her... neha trying to escape but no use

After their punishment session they reached to marriage venue ... ek ek karke sabhi functions hogaye ab bas varmala aur shaadi baaki hai...

During varmaala : dulha dulhan ready exchange varmaala ... priya stood there with relatives... ram continuously glaring at her actually he wants to say something to her but she didn't even looking at him busy with aunties and ladies... atlast ram messaged on her mobile...

Natasha : bhabhi aapki mobile pe koi message aayi hai ... she took and screen flashing ram number she looks at him

Ram indicates through eyes to check the message

Priya reading the messages she blushing to the core reading the message

Priya excuses herself : maa... mein abhi aathi hu while she moving from there looks at neha soumya Natasha

Neha : jaao jaao... jaldi aajao shaadi complete honese pehle... winks priya slightly slaps on her shoulder

Ram waiting for her at first floor of the wedding hall: priya reached

Priya : ye kya mr.kapoor ... aap mujhe marwaoge kya... aapko patha nehi subah se meri kya haal horahi hai wo neha ek bhi mauka nehi chodrahi hai mujhe chidane ka upar se aapki harkathe kya kaam hai abhi neeche varmaala horahi hai chalo chalthe hai jo bhi baathein karni hai baadmein ki jiye ga, she held his hand to move... but ram holds back her hand priya turns towards him

Priya : kya mr.kapoor... kithne ziddi ho aap?? Ram very calmly took out a box from his pocket he opens it , it has two neck chains one is having P letter dollar... Another one R letter dollar

Priya confused ... in mandap pandit ji starts chanting matras for varmaala and asks to exchange garlands bride and groom... here ram gives one chain to priya and another one he already held in hand

At mandap pandit ji : pehle vadhu var ko maala pehna aayegi uske baad var vadhu ko maala pehna aayega

Priya overwhelmed with ram love... she stood there like statue , ram waves his hand infront of her she comes back from trance

Ram : suna nehi pandit ji ne kya kahan jaldi pehnao... priya smiles already she is in tears... priya ram ko chain pehnayi and ram viceversa...

Priya hugs him tightly... Nudging her head on his broad chest ... ram felt wetness on his shirt with priya tears... ram understood whats going on in priya through they stood there like for a while

Ram taking out from hug, wiping her tears : chalein... shaadi shuru hojayegi ek aur mauka milegi sabko tumhe chidane ka .. priya smiles both went down

Dulha dulhan went to dress change for pheras... relatives and guests sat there enjoying with each other

Priya sat there chatting with ladies and elders ... suddenly peehu came there running towards priya holding a packet

Peehu : mumma ye papa ne aapko dene ko kahan... she rushed from there to play with other kids

Priya confused just then message beep sound.. she can assume who sent message..

She opened the text...and surprised... she excuse herself from ladies went to a corner and she opened the packet .. there it's a beautiful saree... another message beep sound

She read ... she speechless no bounds for her happiness... no bounds for ram love...

She went near ram... ram sat there with neha vikram, soumya rishabh, Natasha and karthik they all are laughing and chatting .. priya foots pace slowed down looking at all of them

Everyone looks at her.. she fakes a smile...

Neha : aao priya aao baitho hamare saath ab jaake time mili madam ko hamare liye

Priya just smiles she sat there without talking anything again message from ram.. she looks at him again shifts towards neha convo.. again ram messaged her

Neha gets irritated : arey yaar kaun hai duffer ithni messages bhejrahe hai tumhe fatty toh yehi hai...?

Priya seriously : oye chupkar aise nehi kehthe... turns towards ram... mr.kapoor mujhe hotel lejasakthe ho thodi dermein wapas aajayengey...please

Those four brats & neha vikram felt strange

Rishabh : bhabhi thodider mein phere shuru hojayegi better uske baad jaayiye

Ram interrupts : rehne do rishabh shayad urgent hogi phere hone se pehle aajayenge chalo priya

Both ram and priya starts to leave

Vikram neha starts singing :

ham donon do premii duniyaa chhod chale 

jiivan kii ham saarii rasmein tod chale ... rishabh and remaining gang giving beats

ram and priya turns towards them... they continued teasing them ... ram took something in hand and throwed to vikram

neha : priya ji thoda jaldi aajayega nehi toh phirse phone call aajayegi...

both ram and priya reached hotel room

priya : mr.kapoor ab saree ki kya jarurat thi ... and abhi ye sab kya plan karrahe ho aap

ram taking her in to his lap... encircling his hands on her waist with her hands

ram : darling dobara shaadi sabse chupke but saari rasmon riwaazon ke saath

priya : hahahaha... very funny...ab ithni saalon baad phirse shaadi kyu karni hai aapko

ram : buddhu (keeping his chin on her shoulder) isliye kyunki agar ek baar shaadi karne se 7 janam ka bandhan hojaye toh... dobara shaadi matlab aur 7 janam ke saathi hojayenga na hum

priya teasingly : harjanam mein ek he pathi... kya kismat hai priya teri ... ram gets angry and bites on her shoulder

priya : ouch... Mr.kapoor ye kya karrahe ho...ram again tries to bite her she stops him turns towards him

priya : aap bhi jaake change kijiye mein bhi jaarahi hu humein waqt rehthe wahan pahunchna hoga... ram nods his head

after a while priya came back from washroom but she struggling to pin saree pallu... when she back from washroom she shocked looking at ram... he stood there bare chest only wearing dhoti...

priya laughs at him (trying to pin saree pallu ): waise mr.kapoor aapke sherwani kaafi transparent hai sab dikhrahe hai... winks at him

ram : accha... ithna pasand aayi kya tumhe???

Priya : haan bahuth pasand aayi hai

Ram : no issues darling tumhari saree bhi transparent hosakthi hai... Mein karu wo

Priya turns towards him in a jerk : nooo...nooo need mein majak karrahi thi... ram smirks

Priya : aap aise kyu khade ho

Ram : wo meri sherwani ki button bandh nehi horahi hai... need help

Priya : wah mr. kapoor meri saree ki pallu pin nehi horahi hai, aapki sherwani ki button bandh nehi horahi hai ab kya karein kisiko help ke liye bula bhi nehi sakthe kisiko patha chalein na toh humari khair nehi ... life time teasing karengey sab milke

Ram : haan yaar... mere pass ek idea hai...

Priya knows him well... he is upto something still she wanna listen : kya...?

Ram : tum meri help karo mein tumhari help karunga... Is it ok ?

Priya : hahaha very funny??? No need mein meri help khud karungi... aapki help bhi karungi.. I don't trust u in this matter

Ram : arey promise mein kuch nehi karunga mujhe shaadi karni hai yaar mein thodi na late karunga

Priya think for some time : hmmm... ok then, priya handovers pin to ram , ram took that tried to pin

Ram finally finished when he starts to turn he notices his bite marks (few mins back he bit her)... he slowly caressing there with his fingers.. priya felt soothing and love inhis touch... she didn't said no... slowly he placed his lips on those marks saying sorry .. priya closed her eyes accepting his sorry

Priya : mr.kapoor... sherwani...

Ram moves back and gets sherwani ... with priya help he is also ready both reached marriage venue on time

These brats group felt super happy looking at these love birds both are walking just like a king and queen just then peehu runs towards them ram lifts her in his lap... a complete family with a cute lil princess

Raya reached there, neha hugged both raya

Neha : am very happy for u both... raya looking at each other both rubbing their palm on neha back

Everyone buisy in shaadi here some how raya also managed to skip from there and they succesfully completed their marriage

Both hug each other... they went to give their wishes to newly wedded couple

At that moment in a large led marriage pics are displaying suddenly raya chains exchange and shaadi pics also displaying all of sudden everyone clapping

Ram shocked he thinking who did this and how he didn't said to any one not even vikram then how???

Right then priya taps on his shoulder

Ram tries to explain but priya stops

Priya : no need to explain kyunki ye sab meine he ki... sorry holding her ears

Ram looking at her unbelievable : yaar kithni natak karthe ho ??? mere saamne neha tease karegi mujhe aap kya kya karrahe ho aur mere peet peeche tumhi uske saath sab milke planning karrahi ho

Priya pulling his cheeks : abhibhi mujhe wahi dar hai still mein ye sab yaadein mein capture karna chahthi hu... I wanna relive every moment of this day all through my life ... ram hugs her tightly

These brats along with kapoors and sharmas elders came there.. they are very happy seeing their children happy with each other

Neha Natasha soumya steps towards them and stands on back of priya,,,, vikram karthik rishabh. On ram keeping their elbows on their back

Neha : kehthe hai yahan pe log sirf shaadi karthe hai par yahan pe toh suhaag raath mana rahe hai log

Both raya back from their dream land they are embarrassed..

KK : ab shaadi karli bina invitation ki... kamsekam aashirwaad toh lo both raya took blessings from daadi kk sudhir shipra ji

All started their journey back to home... ram and priya enjoying both are very happy... ram driving the car another hand entwined with priya... giving sweet pecks in between... in middle of their journey raya getting so many pic messages...neha sending to priya vikram sending to ram

Ram halted the car at side::: both started checking the pics and there are shocked embarrassed,, feeling very shy... literally ram wants to kill vikram ...

Priya : mr.kapoor ye hamari selfies inke pass kaise ???? wo bhi hamari wo wali pics bhi abtoh mein gayi... she covered her face in palms feeling very embarrassed

Neha and vikram car too halted near their car... ram like angry young man out from car...

Neha  starts singing : baahon mein chale aao... ram and priya know they are badly caught in their hands they remained silent

Neha steps towards priya : waise darling kya selfies hai yaar... Thanks for sharing these pics with me

Priya shocked : ram too

Priya :mein mein... kab ... kaise???

Neha : tum khud kyu share karogi darling yaad haina tumhe mujhe kahan shaadi ki pics click karne ko tabhi mein ye sab pics apne phone pe share ki

Priya hide her face in palms

Neha soumya, Natasha : arey yaar ismein sharmaane ki kya baath hai yaar... actually we are very happy ye sochke hamare dosth ithni bhi buddhu nehi hai romance ke maamle mein humse bahuth aagey hai... kisi aur ki shaadi mein khudki honeymoon planning

Vikram punches on ram hand : ram scratching his temple

Vikram rishabh, karthik hugs ram... here neha soumya Natasha hugs priya

Raya looking at each other ... everyone reached their respective homes

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Posted: 8 years ago
Very beautiful story...
Loved it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very cute and sweet OS...
Raya second marriage and honeymoon.. Family teasing.. Everything beautifully written...
Please do write more๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago

beautiful.teasing part is superb.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb
Nicely written
Loved raya scenes...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb OS
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Posted: 8 years ago
ooo la la la...
mast..superb. how cute RaYa scenes.
loved each n every scene.
tooo guuud.
mujhe pm kyu nahi kiya.
keep writing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful SS
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful and sweet SS...
Raya's honeymoon n  their 2nd marriage.. Family teasing..
nehvik teasing part Everything beautiful...
Please do write more๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago
A beautiful story of RaYa
Their journey after marriage their romance and non stop teasing of friend bought them together in pure relationship where they married again.