ArShi FF: Sex between Hearts #12 - Thread 13 Link added on Page 145 - Page 84

Finally got time to write the comment. So So So sorry for my late comment Deepthi. What a wonderful update Deepthi. You created a virtual roller coaster of emotional ride with your words. Your vision of for the story and about the characters is simply brilliant. From the beginning phrase to the end where she knocks his doors took me through many emotional rides.

He left her... left her obeying her request but smoothly declining what she offered. Because he knew that just being as friends is not possible now. All the equations between them changed.. She is still in the naivete that they can pursue their friendship no matter what happened between them since few days. Because.. he became her strength.. her weakness.. her support. He became the most important part of her life. All that she couldn't understand is she too have some feelings for him but they are just buried under her ghosts of past and the freckles of the social norms and she was struggling between her dependency over him and her emotional battle. She still thinks she is the reason for what direction he wants to take their relation. She thinks that she just wanted to end their relation in the destination called friendship.. but the fact that he imagined their destination as an emotionally committed relation for eternity is pushing her in jeopardy. All that she wants is..his friendly hand and caring touch. she is not ready for another relation ... she is not even thinking that she will ever be ready then how can she promise her life to him. ... How does anything matter now... He just left.. left her again only for her... what is this man. What kind of material he was made with. Could she just allow him to leave her... the only thread left for the survival of her heart. You wrote Khushi's emotional battle excellently Deepthi. You are amazing.

I felt sorry for Lavanya seeing her guilt to not able to do anything to save her bestie from the arrows of the insensitive people around. And she might have thinking that, allowing him to come to the party made everything worse in her bestie's life. She tried her best.. she tried to stop them.. but she doesn't know that the society around has the bigger and louder mouth. To make it shut.. someone more strong with right attitude is required. It's not her fault. Lavvu come here dear give me hug.. you will feel better. You wrote the struggle of a friend who witnessed the emotional breakdown of her bestie amazingly Deepthi.. You are Excellent.

What can I say about Arnav. This man who is a package of every woman's dreams... Now got rejected by his woman .. the only woman whom he fell in love with. She said he is unfit for her. Is there a word called unfit in his dictionary.. he didn't know it until he heard it from her mouth. How could he be unfit.. Arnav Singh Raizada ... how could he be unfit to anyone. But that's what she said. Unfit. And it charred his heart brutally. He built many imaginary castles around his feelings for her. He imagined their forever beautifully... He never thought that path to their togetherness will be very easy.. but he didn't think it will this rugged either. He thought she just needs time to bring back herself together before committing to him... But he never thought, she will blindly reject him saying he will be just friend for him forever. He doesn't want it... Hell he doesn't want them to be just friends. He wants her... the right on her heart.. for ever. How does it matter anymore.. she just rejected him.. He just left without looking back after a departing hug unable to handle the broken pieces of his heart. They are choking him ... he wants to be alone surrounded with her memories which will always sooth his heart rather than her which will always slice his heart at that moment. He tried to find solace around the fragrance she left in his room .. he tried to calm himself with the touch of the metal which used to be very close to her. How well you compare the metal with the metallic society. You know when a lone tear dropped from Arnav's eyes.. my eyes are just pouring with amounts of tears. You just churned the emotions in my heart with your words. You are simply marvelously amazing.

Wow today I saw the new side of Garima.. I simply loved the way how you compared the meaning of a man she knows in all her life with the power house called Arnav Singh Raizada. It's really excellent Deepthi. How will you get it .. I never understand.. really you are a powerhouse of words dammit.

Now what can I tell about Sashi.. frankly speaking.. I had a little respect on him until now for what he is doing for his girls although he has limitations as a middle class father. He was just behaving like a middle class father until now. Because it's not his fault .. society will make them like that. Mostly the people who lives to keep up to the reputation they will lead a very conservative life..and a father of two daughters who are still at home .. one unmarried. and one divorced.. he will be protective and at the same time worried ..totally understandable.. But what he spoke to Khushi today.. it's ... it's ... I don't know what to say frankly. I totally lost the respect on him. Stupid people who doesn't know about her talking insensitively is one thing.. a father talking the same things to his daughter without asking any explanations.. without having any benifit of doubt... thinking filthy about his own daughter.. it is just like insulting himself. It's like saying all those words to himself. How could he say such things and throw so many misconceptions on his own daughter and how could .. how dare he talk about it about Arnav. And how could he say that his daughter is infertile and he is taking advantage of her. Chi... I totally understand the emotional breakdown of Khushi... at that point. All that she needs is support and trust from her family. but in return what is she receiving... I am proud of this strong Khushi I really loved her. When she said.. i would rather be a maid in his house than being sashi's daughter... I just clapped. When there is no value trust for her there is no point of still thinking about them. But still I had a hope that Sashi will realize his mistake of not trusting his daughter. The man took place of him for his daughter and tried to bring her together after the breakdown. Why he is not seeing that. Deepthi.. really no words for me to say how well you wrote this part.. It's just beyond words. Please can I hug you.

And Payal... I thought she didn't understand her sister when she gave that look while leaving her with Arnav. But the reason she gave.. it's totally understandable. While no man is willing to take her hand.. seeing how much a man cares about her sister made her feel jealous of her sister. I couldn't stop pitying Payal. Or may be I should not feel pity.. I should feel proud that she told that she felt jealous. Really Deepthi... you wrote it very realistic.

Seeing Arnav in vulnerable state.. I cannot take it dammitt.. please make him normal again Deepthi. His trembling fingers are making my heart shiver.. His teary eyes are making my eyes wet. His vulnerable emotions are making me to take a drastic step and bring Khushi to him and lock them up in a room so that they can talk for hours days and years how to handle their relation. But they still be together right if I do not open those doors. I know.. I am thinking very weird.. what to do.. Dr. Rji and Khushi will make me crazy one day. YOu wrote his inner turmoil brilliantly Deepthi

Khushi Is right at his doorstep.. but he is not here.. You know he sensed something terrible happened... Something is wrong with her.. he sensed it and he is coming home only to see her... right at his doorstep.. OMG..OMG.. when you will update... Next Friday.. I am doomed.

Forget about all the synonyms to praise you.. It's beyond all those words. YOu know Deepthi.. you are so lucky that you are living so far away from me.. If I were so close to you.. I would have crushed you with my hugs each time you I read your amazing writing. 🤗