A new Short SS "A Journey with love

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Posted: 2015-08-10T03:49:59Z

Another small SS from me... J  obviously on our beloved raya, kehthe haina its not about the destination its all about the journey...  ek aur bhi its not the journey nor destination its about seatmate ( who accompany), iss story naahi Balh ki koi particular scene ya episode extension nehi ...naa he koi new plot just imagine karo hamari raya ki marriage hogayi, they are blessed with a baby girl peehu, rishab ki shaadi fix hogayi hai, engagement ke liye kahin aur jaana tha.. Ghar ki sabhi log ek saath jaane ki plan ki... Chalo story pe chalthe

 

Ram slammed room door harshly moved out of the room in full anger, Priya hurriedly running behind ram

 

Priya : Mr. Kapoor... Mr. Kapoor pls meri baath suniye by then ram left Priya felt very bad , heard Peehu calling , Priya wiping her tears

 

Priya : haan princess mumma aarahi hai Priya attend peehu

 

Priya thinking : ab kya karu kaise manau Mr. Kapoor ko, Priya calling him on his mobile but he continuously cutting , Priya too stopped now, she closed her eyes biting her lower lip, a tear came across her eyes, : aise naraazgi bhi kis kaam ki yaar , Priya sat on her bed holding a beautiful saree , kk came to her

 

Kk: Priya beta kya hua ? Aise kyu baithe ho, Priya fakes a smile nodded head

 

Kk : jaldi karo sab intezaar karrahe hai , waise ram breakfast kyu nehi ki, (hearing this priya became sad)sab theek haina ?? Priya controlling her tears

 

Priya : haa maa sab theek hai...mein dekthi hu unhone kyu nehi ki breakfast??? Priya started thinking

Priya strolling here & there holding Saree actually thinking how to voow her dumbo husband : yaar kaise manau inhe abhi kuch nehi ki toh ek aur bahana milega unko mujhe taunt karne ke liye... Priya flapping her both pointer fingers : socho...socho... Suddenly something strucked her mind yells : idea... Wow Priya superb shabaash... Patting her shoulder she had a broad smile on her face just then someone knocked door

 

Priya : darwaaza khula hai... Door opened there he is ram gave a serious look

 

Priya gave her sweet smile ram didn't melt

 

Ram seriously : agar tumhara hogayi ho toh chalein sab wait karrahe hai, priya just nods her head, ram shut the door and left, priya smilingly

 

Priya : mujhe patha hai aapko kaise manaana hai... Everyone is waiting for priya,

 

Kk : ram bahuth derhorahi hai... jaake dekho kya hua... priya witnessing everything from window

 

Ram : maa ... aap ek baar call karke dekho... Kk calling on priya mobile, priya without wasting time lifts

(one side convo)

 

Priya : haan maa ... , maa wo kya haina jo saree mein pehne ke liye li thi na usmein chai girgayi ab mujhe ready hone mein late hogi, ek kaam karo maa aaplog nikal jao mein driver ko leke aajaungi... all kapoors left , except ram , priya grinning ear to ear

 

Priya : aapko mein acchese jaanthi hu mr.kapoor, mujhe akeli chodke aap nehi jaayenge...,

 

Ram again came to check priya, priya : darwaza khula hai...ram opened door and he just stood there looking at priya , miming wow beauuutiful, priya starts blushing , ram stepping towards priya without blinking , priya stood there looking in to his eyes... both are walking towards eachother , all of sudden ram stops his expression changed

 

Ram turns back : hogayi ya nehi??? Priya disappointedly

 

Priya : haan hogayi hai aap jaayiye mein aarahi hu... ram felt bad after hearing her upset tone

 

Ram sitting in car, talking himself : arey ram ye kya karrahe ho, bekaar he usko satharahe ho, bechari upset hogayi hai... waise bhi jo galthi kare unko punishment milna chahiye na , waise my wify worlds beautiful women ithni sexy lagrahi hai ki... Ahhh kya bathau agar hum dono ki jaghda nehi hothi na aaj usko chodthe nehi mein, wahan rishab ki engagement yahan meri aur priya ki... romanceee... Tabtak priya car thak pahunchgayi thi... she listened whatever ram talking, she is very happy knowing that ram just pretending , ram saw that priya image in mirror turned back in a jerk ... eye contact, ram again starts pretending anger

 

Ram : aise daanth dikhana bandh karo waise bhi late horahe hai hum... wahan sab intezaar karrahe hongey hamari..., priya silently came and sit on front seat , peehu already sleeping on back seat, ram starts car , ram face very dull as he didn't had breakfast, priya can sense this she took out a carry box, when she opened... Ram nose catches some aloo parantha smell,

 

Ram thinking himself : waahhh... priya ke haath ki  aloo parantha ... kya kismath hai yaar... pehle breakfast skip ki ... ab priya kithni acchi dikhrahi hai phirbhi mein usko kehnehi saktha naahi kuch... Ahhh... aaj mein khud apne paron mein khuladi maara... bekaar he uske saath jagdha ki... just then he sensed soft fingers touch near his lips... He looks priya holding a piece of parantha near his mouth he looks at her

 

Priya : mooh kholiye... Mujhe patha hai aap breakfast nehi ki... Ab khaalijiye ram tries so say something but priya stops him

 

Priya : ab bas kijiye mujhe patha hai aap mujhse naraaz nehi hai... so... please stop ... khalijiye abhi sirf sardard he shuru hua hai kuch der baad aapki halaath aur kharab hogi... pleaaaseee.. making a puppy face

 

Ram had parantha, he is enjoying every bit, priya continuously smiling looking at his face, she tore another piece  ram ready to have, priya still smiling, nodding her head like unbelievable,

 

Ram had that piece too asked her with his eyes like why u laughing

 

Priya : nothing... said smilingly

 

Ram : arey bolo na aise kyu hasrahi ho... u know nahow stubborn I am , abhi tum kahogi nehi na toh wahan function mein bhi mein tumhe thang karunga... sochlo

 

Priya : aap na ajeeb ho... matlab ki ithni bhook lagrahi hai phir bhi nehi khaaye breakfast , bacchon ki tarah behave karthe ho ... jaghda karne ke liye bhi ek proper reason ki jarurat nehi jab dekho shuru hojathe ho... ek dum golu ho she starts pulling his cheeks

 

Ram starts blushing : arey yaar dard horahi hai chodo na... priya left his cheeks

 

Ram : arey ye sab na tumhari wajahse.. priya gave a questioning look

 

Ram ; ab aise math dekho... Tum na meri adathe bigaad rahi ho... mujhe patha tha agar mein nehi kaaunga toh tumhe bina bole patha chaljayegi aur tum aise he mujhe pyar se apne haathon se khud khilaogi ( drags priya hand in which she holding a piece of aloo parantha, and had that lastly licks her each finger ) priya feeling very shy , backs off her hand from his grip, she turned her face other side blushingly

 

Ram loving her blushing cheeks : rahi baath meri jaghde kit oh... tumse jaghda karne ke liye mujhe reason ki jarurat nehi hai chahiye bhi nehi, mujhe accha lagtha hai tumse jaghda karna kyunki jaghde ke baad tum mujhe manaane ke liye ye jo kuch bhi karthe hona means mujhe seduce karne ke liye acchi acchi saree pehnna , mere liye acchese ready hothey... time spend karne ke liye bahane dundthe ho... I feel like super happy matlab shahenshah wali feeling aathi hai mujhe... I just love that feeling... ( ram still driving , priya still feeding him, last piece she held in her hands, hearing all these from ram ,priya forcefully kept that last piece in his mouth)

 

Ram : ouch... kya yaar

 

Priya : nehi toh kya mr.kapoor, very bad jaao mujhe nehi baath karni aapke saath... koi aise karthe kya biwi ke saath ,

priya turned her face aside, ram just smiling, he switches on FM , song playing its suits their situation

 

dekho rootha na karo, baat nazaron ki suno

 

( ram keeps his hand on priya hand, priya looks at him )

 

ham na bolenge kabhi, tum sataaya na karo

 

( priya rashly takes off ram hand from her hand)

 

dekho rootha na karo...

chehara to laal hua, kya kya haal hua is ada par teri, main to paagal hua tum bigadane jo lago, aur bhi hasin lago

 

( ram turning priya face holding her chin, winks at her)

 

ham na bolenge kabhi, tum sataaya na karo

 

( Priya takes off his hand from her chin.. again turns her head aside)

 

dekho rootha na karo...

 

( ram entwines his fingers with her, gave a peck)

 

jaan par meri bani, aapaki thaheri hansi haay, main jaan gai, pyaar ki fitnagari dil jalaane ke liye, thandi aahen na bharo

 

( priya releases her fingers from his grip blushingly but pretending anger)

 

dekho roothaa na karo, baat nazaron ki suno

 

( ram sent a sorry message along with a kiss smiley to her mobile, priya looks at him, ram pleading with his eyes)

 

ham na bolenge kabhi

 

( priya sent a tongue smiley to ram , giving a stern look towards him)\

 

teri khushabu ne mere, hosh bhi chheen liye hain khushi aaj hame, tere pahalu men gire dil ki dhadakan pe zara, phool sa haath rakho

 

( ram with his trade mark smile, smelling priya hair, kept his head on her shoulder, priya pushed him signaled to concentrate on driving, ram took priya hand and kept on his chest, )

 

ham na bolenge kabhi, tum sataaya na karo

 

( priya playfully hits on his chest)

 

dekho rootha na karo

 

( ram catches priya hand, gave a strong peck )

 

kya kahega ye sama, in raahon ka dhuaan laaj aae mujhe, mujh ko laae ho kahaan ham tumhe maan gae, tum bade vo ho hato

 

( priya anger now totally melt, she blushing, suddenly she checked whether peehu got up & signaled ram , held his hand tightly pulling his cheek)

 

dekho rootha na karo, baat nazaron ki suno

 

( ram took out a apple gave it to priya & winks )

 

ham na bolenge kabhi, tum sataaya na karo

 

( now priya entwined her fingers with him, gave a sweet peck)

 

dekho rootha na karo 

 

(Ram also gave a peck) song over... Both are looking at eachother, smiling on their stupidity of love

 

priya : btw thanks for apple

 

ram : I know yaar tum bhi nehi khaayi ho...

 

priya : accha chodo jo hogaya so hogaya... let me clear something ... aapko aisa kyu laga ki peehu aane se aapke liye meri pyar kam hua... peehu ke through aap aur pass hogaye ho... abhi wo choti hai she needs me more toh obviously mein jyada time uske saath rehthi hu it doesnt mean ki aapko avoid karrahi hu...

 

ram gave satisfying look : sorry yaar... ye sab nehi socha meine sorry, pulled her towards him, priya rested her head on his hand gave a peck

 

priya : aagey sochiye pls aapko manaane ke liye mujhe kya kya karna padtha hai aapko kya patha... meri accha khaasa saree ke upar chai giraani padi mujhe... one hour mirror ke saamne khade hona pada tayyar hone ke liye...

 

ram astounded : matlab wo chai... priya back to her seat held her both ears mimes sorry

 

ram laughing : unbelievable priya ... tum bhi na...

 

priya : toh kya karu mein aap jistarah door slam karke gaye am worried.. abhi ke abhi sab sort out karna chahthi thi , ram thought some mischievous thing he slow down the car speed

 

priya confusedly : mr.kapoor kya hua... car stop kyu karrahe ho???

 

Ram : abhi tak stop nehi ki meine... Agar abhi jo mujhe chahiye wo nehi mili na toh definetly stop hojayegi wo kya haina energy chahiye mujhe (indicating his cheek), priya blushingly bend down her head

 

Priye controlling her blush slapped on her hand : besharam hogaye ho aap. Abhi kuch nehi milega jo bhi chahiye baad mein milegi abhi on road hai hum waise bhi peehu hai hamare saath toh pls ye sab natak pack up karo pls jaldi venue reach hona chahiye

 

By then ram shifted first gear...: sochlo priya just 5 secs mein car stop karunga... peehu toh sorahi hai and yahan pe koi hai bhi nehi... pls ek energy

 

Priya knows how stubborn he : she asap gave a peck on his cheek, closed her face in her palms,

 

This ram energy concept continued, priya gave so many pecks

 

Ram enjoying this journey  ... ram driving car very slowly...

 

Priya fed up with his driving : mr.kapoor ye kya hai ithni slow kyu chalrahe ho car... hum pehle se late hai aap aur bhi late karrahe ho

 

Ram looks at her, priya got what he tring to say through his eyes,

 

Priya : mr. kapoor hadh hai yaar... ab bahuth hua pls baaki hum baadmein dekhlenge abhi wahan jaldi pahunchna hai humein pls

 

Ram : ok done ek last pls... priya gave up, she was near ram cheek ram mobile rings, priya startled her lips touched his chest (near shirt pocket) priya sits backs

 

Ram : uffo , picks the call

 

Ram : haan pass mein he hai hum pahunch jayenge, by then peehu also got up, ram gave a disappointed look priya laughing, priya took peehu in her lap, both ram & priya stealing glances

 

Finally they reached venue, priya busy with relatives, suddenly neha came to her

 

Neha : priya thoda touch up karo na especially lipstick wo toh pura he dull hogayi hai, priya hurriedly checks in mirror

 

Neha starts teasing : darling yahan kya dekhrahe ho wahan tumhare pathi ki shirt pe check  karo na wahan tumhe acchese patha chalegi , priya didnt understand what neha indicating

 

Priya irritatingly : kya pathi ke shirt ...? Kya bolrahe ho pagal hogayi ho kya

 

Neha : ahem... ahem ... darling pagal mein nehi tum dono pathi pathni puri tarah pagal hogaye ho ekdusre ki pyar mein...wo humein patha bhi hai.. proofs ki jarurath nehi... tabhi mein sochrahi thi hardly 30mins time lagtha hai kapoor mansion se yahan aaneke aaplog toh poora 1hr 15 mins li pahunchne ke liye...darling I know aap Sharma se kapoor bangayi ho but thoda toh Sharma karo yaar aise car mein neha making weird faces

 

Priya now totally irritated : oye seedhe seedhe bologi ya nehi... kya kehna chahthe ho???

 

Neha : waise kithni kisses diye ho...? Aur kithne mile hai tumhe...? Sirf kiss thak he hai ya kuch aur...?

 

Now priya got what neha trying to tell... she rushed from there ,she searching for ram.., atlast finally she reached him..., ram stood there with some business people, she noticed her lipstick marks on ram shirt

 

Priya : excuse me. All men leave , ram looks at her questioningly , priya drags him towards a room,

 

Ram starts teasing her : oye hoye priya... ithni miss karrahi thi kya mujhe, aise room mein leke aaye ho.. ram encircles her by her waist, priya takesoff his hands hurriedly goes to take her luggage bag, took out another shirt and ask him to wear

 

Ram : shirt??? kyu change karu??? Ye toh tumhari fav shirt haina toh change kyu karwa rahi ho???

 

Priya disappointedly : aapko na kuch bhi samjhana bahuth mushkill hai... she shows lipstick marks on his shirt

 

Ram bites his toungue : ok ok ill change, he changed

 

Priya: I just hope jyada log notice nehi ki ho??? Ek notice ki toh meri ye haal hai...

 

Ram : kisne dekha

 

Priya : aur kaun neha...usine bola mujhe , ram hugs her from back

 

Priya: ram leave kahin bhi shuru hojathe ho... chalo chalthe hai... ab iss baath ke liye bhi koi tease karna shuru karein... usse pehle hum yahan se jaayenge, ram nudging on her neck ram please

 

Ram unwillingly freed her from his grip, both went to open the door, when they opened everyone stood there giving a damn serious look they are looking like at any minute they will eat up ram and priya , ram & priya shocked, priya knows whats waiting for her next

 

Neha  starts : sab suno abhi mein neha nehi hu, mrs. Kapoor ki mr.kapoor Ahhh kya bathau agar hum dono ki jaghda nehi hothi na aaj usko chodthe nehi mein, wahan rishab ki engagement yahan meri aur priya ki... romanceee" ram & priya shocked looking at each other

 

Kk : abhi mein Krishna nehi mr.kapoor ki mrs.kapoor  " maa... wo kya haina jo saree mein pehne ke liye li thi na usmein chai girgayi ab mujhe ready hone mein late hogi, ek kaam karo maa aaplog nikal jao mein driver ko leke aajaungi..." Everyone staring them

 

Both ram & priya pakdegaye they know now they cant say anything just need to ready to face their teasings & taunts

 

Priya : ma...ma... wo... wo... kya... haina she scratching her temple, everyone burst into laughter

 

Both ram & priya too joined, KK comes to them , hold both ram & priya ears

 

KK : jhut bolna nehi aathi toh math bolo, chupana nehi aathe toh chupane ki koshish math karo... dono ke dono bekaar ho inn mamlon mein.both ram & priya wincing in pain

 

Ram : maa... pls chodo na bahuth dard horahi hai... sorry aagey aisa kuch nehi hoga... kk freed them

 

Finally rishabh aur soumya ki engagement finished in all good note everyone back to home

 

Its night priya made peehu sleep, she reached their bedroom, there ram busy with his files & laptop.. she didn't disturbed him she changed in to night wear, reached bed, she reading a book actually waiting for ram, but his work didn't completed she slept holding the book, at midnight ram work finished when he turned he saw a beautiful sight infront of his eyes, he went towards her, without disturbing took the book from his hands, her hairs falling on her cheeks, disturbing her sleep , she making weird faces, ram smiled tucked her hair back, covered her with duvet, he gave a peck on her forehead mimed I love u , while he turned to move priya held his hand, ram turned

Priya closing her eyes : I wanna sleep while hugging u, ram gave his trade mark smile, went other side of the bed hugged her tightly squeezing her by her waist, gave a peck on her neck lane, priya turned towards him and hugged him back tightly

 

Both are in their love  land

 

THE END

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Posted: 2015-08-10T04:59:12Z
Hey Smile
Superb write up ClapClap
 Golu ram getting angry coz he thinks priya is giving less time to himLOLLOL and priya's attempts to manofy him were lovely ...

What a innovative way to get energyWinkLOL...loved their car romance ... best part was all family members knew everything ROFL... 

Once again lovely SS ... do write more ...n plz send pm ...thank u Smile
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Posted: 2015-08-10T05:12:55Z
Wow
Beautiful os...
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Posted: 2015-08-10T05:16:53Z
superb song selection. i so love this song.
nice situation.
thanks for pm. do write more.
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Madhuri Dixit and Sakshi Tanwar....FOREVER FAVOURITES
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Posted: 2015-08-10T06:32:52Z
Superb n cute n romantic
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Posted: 2015-08-10T06:57:50Z
Beautifully shown the love between RaYa fayer marriage.
Ram ka angry hone ka drama karna and than Priya ko apne husband ko manofy karna and in than in engagement party including Neha all family tease them. I really loved it.
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Posted: 2015-08-10T07:45:20Z
Beautifully written...
Raya love is as always awesome..
Kk also join hands with Neha on teasing Raya..
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 2015-08-10T08:05:03Z
Awesome write up di
Thanks for pm
Do write more
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