OS- The Silent Love Last part page 16 - Page 14

Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by BALHLOVER



mere ek ff hai ..
jo pending hai..
and 2 os bhi..aur kya likhu


are di... toh pehle aap use complete Karo jo pending hai.

baad me aur b likh sakate ho na RaYa k upar.
plz ...we all miss n love raya,/ RaShi
Posted: 8 years ago
Read 3 parts in one go IT'S SO... BEAUTIFUL STORY .This is so perfect and beautiful ending Fantastic work as always I love this story so much you are great writer I love your writing and thanks for pm do write more and sorry for late reply
Posted: 8 years ago
Ego clashes MUs   accha hai they understood it. Aur in doino ko saath me laane k liye Jr kapoor ko aana pada 😉 😆
Well story ended on a good note, Priya realized her mistake, ram's family is happy, raya can be happy if they are together 😛
Sabse mast cheez rajjo n juhi hubby n wife 😆 😆 😆



Thx for all PMS.
Keep writing
Posted: 7 years ago


Part 3
awesome too good doc is so concerned for new born & Priya but why & how he know her do well...? who is the elderly lady? & most important who is doc?... ufff so many questions still the answers only be in next update so moving in it without wasting time as story is getting more interesting with ea h & every update...

Posted: 7 years ago


Part 4
omg so all my thoughts were correct Ram was the only doc who operated Priya too good awesome I m in just love with this story so in past Ram actually develop feelings for her too good awesome just loved the way it is... hmm but what goes this much wrong Priya didn't wanted to see Ram's face is everything all right hope for it now moving for next to read...

Posted: 7 years ago


Part 4
omg so all my thoughts were correct Ram was the only doc who operated Priya too good awesome I m in just love with this story so in past Ram actually develop feelings for her too good awesome just loved the way it is... hmm but what goes this much wrong Priya didn't wanted to see Ram's face is everything all right hope for it now moving for next to read... hope for the best for RaYa...

Posted: 7 years ago


Part 5
omg what an awesome update all abt Past so cute so RaYa's family made them marry as thier wish too good so Priya can concive but in risk of her life ohh good so sad hope everything goes well now I can understand what will be the reason of thier disputes well but loved this naughty teasing update a lot too cute while reading I so enjoyed it a lot...

Posted: 7 years ago


Part 6
OMG what a story... what a concept to good awesome. ... I just so so loved it in all way so Juhi was the reason for RaYa getting separated but really she didn't knew her husband full name & why Ram was need to kept her latter with him... Priya had did what any other woman had done on her place so as Ram... but all is well when end is well RaYa meet again with clearing all the misunderstanding it's best thing awesome I just so love such kind of story with all eliminate awesome do write more will be waiting for it. ...

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