Posted: 8 years ago
He more experienced in the pain of loss
His reading of her silence, witness to her tears and smiles
His consort's condition he is perceptive of
Swings into action as protector par excellence
To usher new perspectives and distract her aching heart he hastens
The malli reminding him of the bridal bed he brought her too
They remain enticed and enthralled as ever he of her and she of him.


Awesome lines 👏
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by NSB7


Nisha the question is...!
Did the patient die because of a failed surgery 
Or
Out if surprise that the great Aishwarya rai bacchan did his surgery 
Or 
Out of shock that the actress can actually perform a surgery??

In either case condolences to the person 

Sorry for making fun out of somebody's ailment 

I understood it as surgery was performed on her as a result you see a sudden transformation and change of thinking😉
Edited by moonwearer - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by swathi1990



something is wrong...she thought of medicine initially but never completed or anything

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aishwarya_Rai_Bachchan


FYI

I was being sarcastic Swathi
Like she won the beauty pageant to fly the Air Ambulance in East Angola😡 (Like Prince William)  or work for Doctors without Borders
Ofcourse she won it to so she can "Sell herself". Media will gobble up any shit that comes out her mouth now.

Posted: 8 years ago
Stage & Strike

She scrambled Wed morning, trying to get to work at 8, he lounged on the couch with the "bad coffee" he said she made
"Oh! Whatever!" go get your own" she ordered

There was Starbucks like coffee shop not too far from the hotel, Punjabis loves their chai they didnt care for coffee

He had calls all morning he said

"I only need Citrix or Skype" he told her as he watched her braid her hair frantically
She forgot to stick the remaining two meter length of jasmine in the frig. It sat on the bath counter,
still fresh, she tried to pack it away hoping she can wear tonight

He enjoyed her panic, watching her wear and tear a pair of pantyhose

"I can put it on for u if u like" he smiled

"Thanks vendavey vendaam da" she slapped both hands together in prayer (NOOO)

She dumped her purse on the messy bed, trying to find her keys again
 His eyes fell out when he saw the amount of things she had in there,
from feminine hygiene products to, lipsticks to moisturizers to gum to receipts to credit cards to safety pins to bindis to make up to STUFF
She quickly spread it all, looking for the key card

She carried her D II Godrej key around, he saw it hung on the door when he went to propose

"Onnoda key ta da" she whispered (where is ur key?)

He sat on the bed

"No... no opinions, I am going to kill u if u say a word" she warned

She quickly shoved everything back

He noticed she had no cash in her wallet she self consciously stuffed it into a zippered back pouch

"Lets go eat?" she asked

He nodded... she gathered a bunch of things from the bed, and wondered what to do, she shoved it in the drawer

"Onnoda key kudu da" she begged (give me ur key)

"U can get one from the lobby" he suggested

"ITS NOT FREE, Only TWO are free, third onwards its Rs.100 a piece" she complained

And then quietned... "umm.. OK"He walked over to the chest of drawer in the bedroom, under the wall that
held the TV and handed her the card key

"Lets go eat" she muttered grabbing
"stay here, dont go anywhere, u dont have a key I dont want u to get lost  and not know ur way back" she whispered standing close to him, like he was Shravu

"Good grief" he moaned at that cute sermon

Gathering her

"Kulikaade, shave pannikade, but u constantly want to make out" she scolded, letting him make out

(Dont shower, dont shave)

His lips grazed her collar bone and crept down, sliding over a mound, encased in pale orange lace...
exquisitely pretty, "just like her" he thought

The outline of the dark tip visible through the sheer lace

She let him undo buttons and kiss her

"Call me if u cant find ur way back" she ordered, like she was the parent...

He nodded, she let him cup her curve, quivering and buckling

It was easy to "dominate" her, he reveled in his power

He smelled like... HIM... Malcha Marg like, firm, warm... hairy

"U shud actually drive me to work or take me in your motorcycle, the girls at work get rides", she hugged him

Sighing she peeled herself off, they went down to eat, the breakfast was fantastic, just like any 5 star, an array of food

He read the paper as she quickly checked her email

Bally had responded

"Disappointed Iyer" he had said thats in on his email

"Kyon?" she asked

He responded back  "Vandita was not happy, I am baffled" (why you would ditch Akka on such a momentous occasion)

"aapke paas aaj kal time nahi hai, warna Daily Perk ke trip mein batati" she wrote

"Potshot?" he asked

"YES... a big one" she said


SO HE WENT?
EVEN BALLY WENT
AND SHE DIDNT?
HMMM...

"Do u need a ride?" he asked

"Nope... I have my very own shiny new car" she smiled

He chuckled derisively, like THATS a problem for Ranjan

"The new cars are fabulous" she informed him

He nodded

"will u come down and get something to eat?" she asked

He smiled

"I shudnt worry? Its none of my biz?" she asked stiffening

"U shud and it is" he agreed

"dont go off to sleep or something without lunch"

"Some one I know does that well" he mocked

"RAKSHASAN!!" she cursed a mouthful

He watched her leave, taking off for a walk sticking his ear phones in his ear
She leaned on the seat and watched him for as long as she could

She didnt know when he wanted to return to Paris
She had a confidante in Akka, she could tell her everything now she doubted Akka would give her a listen
WHAT MESS DI
I DIDNT DO ANYTHING SHE BRISTLED

EXACTLY !!! U DIDNT DO A THING
ATLEAST GET OUT OF DEPLOYMENT
U CANT DO THIS FOR THE NEXT YEAR OR TWO
WHEN THE NOVELTY OF A "NEW MARRIAGE" WEARS OFF HES PROBABLY NOT GOING TO MAKE MONTHLY TRIPS FROM PARIS
EVEN IF I QUIT THE DEPLOYMENT TEAM I CANT QUIT THE JOB RIGHT?
UGHHH... YA... U ARE RIGHT
U ARE ALWAYS IN A FINANCIAL SOUP
ITS BOILING COVERED WITH A PRIDE LID
HE WOULD PROBABLY WANT U TO MOVE TO PARIS
ONE OF YOU HASSS TO, YOU CANNOT "STAGE" THIS MARRIAGE DRAMA FOR THE NEXT 10 YEARS OR 20
YOU DO KNOW THAT DONT YOU? II?
HMPHHH!!!
HOW ABOUT HE LIVE IN DELHI?
HE TRIED THAT ALREADY, HE "LOVED" IT SO MUCH HE SOLD HIS SHARES AND TOOK OFF
DO U HAVE AMNESIA OR SOMETHING II???
UMM... NO... NO... THATS HARSH

WELL... AVAN IPPO DAAN POYIRKAN PARIS
AVANA POI RETURN TO DELHI SONNA AVAN VARUVANA?
(HE JUST WENT TO PARIS HOW WILL HE COME BACK?)

By Noonish, there was a flurry of activity amongst the white collar workers at the workshop section

They spoke in rapid fire Punjabi
Groups of uniformed blue collar repairmen stood by vehicle bays and chatted

she wondered what was going on

Bally was so disconnected from it all he didnt even know she was in Amritsar
Ritu wudnt know the daily events at Excelsior
WHO SHUD I ASK

HMMM...

MRS SAGARRR!!
She pinged her on IM

"Hi! Aap kaisi hain?" she asked

"the baby is so cute II" she informed

SO U COULD GO?" she smiled

"I was able to, yes" she wrote with a smile

"thanks, thats very sweet of u"

"I think u were supposed to be there as well" Mrs Sagar gently mocked her
"thanks" II sent a tongue in cheek
"How is Dad?" she asked

"Good... good.. tense but good"

"Sab theek?"

"As of now..." Mrs Sagar said

"Is he sick?" II panicked

"Oh no!!... the Gurgaon workshop union went on a strike at Noon" Mrs Sagar wrote

AYYYO!!!!!!!


Posted: 8 years ago
How is Dad?" she asked

"Good... good.. tense but good"

"Sab theek?"

"As of now..." Mrs Sagar said

"Is he sick?" II panicked

"Oh no!!... the Gurgaon workshop union went on a strike at Noon" Mrs Sagar wrote

AYYYO!!!!!!!


Ranjan 😭
Posted: 8 years ago
PUTTI, SRIVIDYA
I'm all good.. No flood situation near by.. Thank You for asking..
Posted: 8 years ago
Everything about these two just keep getting more real..
II is correct in wondering as to how long this 'new marriage' haze will remain.. At least its not practical for either of them to make monthly trips over the years... Living apart for years?? Ayyo!! there has to be a compromise somewhere, but by whom?

He has such 'power' over her..☺️
Nothing new about it.. He's begun to revel in it more now. Rakshashan!

Her parent like concern😳
She frustrates him and makes him long for her at the same time..

About Akka- I doubt there can be any lasting rift between the sisters. They are too close for that.

Strike?? Sounds interesting.. Will either of the protagonists have an important role to play here?? Come to Ranjan's aid in some way?? Waiting...



Posted: 8 years ago
Dristi, hope all is well and everyone you know is safe
Posted: 8 years ago
netwrok issues!!
phone doesnt work anymore i suppose

wrote a review and IF ate it up

its like waking up after an amazing dream for II
U KNOW IN THE MORNINGS WHEN U ARE HALF AWAKE
u can hear the sounds of reality around and all that but dont want to break the dream
u force yourself to go back and try continuing the dream in your head...!1

thats how it is for II in context to DUDE
returning to paris is an inevitable issue they have to deal with...just that she is avoiding the thought like we closer our years to wake up calls by mum
and trying to hold on 👏
Posted: 8 years ago
Will Dude goes back to Delhi now?

From yesterday night my right eye is flickering...So all is not well with Ranjan 😭

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