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Posted: 8 years ago
Tough lessons

She worked most of the Wed morning, after her shower, wearing a lovely pink kurta and cream chudidar. Her hair braided sensibly
She sang a kriti lit the lamp wore the holy ash and turned up like the "Iyer girl next door"
 he did too she didnt see him until Noonish, she was way behind in work... she was focused and meticulous like she always was
She never let anything interfere with her work ethic, well nothing except Rakshasan ofcourse

She was on calls, IM and email all at the same time, while trying to fix a buggy solution the newly married dude had proposed for some Punjab tariffs
Mahavir brought her yummy croisandwich, with cheese roasted bell pepper and onions, some had avacado in it with the onions... she had three with mint chutney
Toasty, warm... with chai

She took her 4th and peeked into his room

He was not on a call, just reading a spiral bound file with screen shots of a SW tool?

He saw her and smiled

"Not on a call?" she reassured herself

He shook his head
HE NEVER SPOKE. PERIOD.
I mean when he could use his hands or face he didnt
"did u try this?" she asked hesitating

He pulled her in

Her heart skipped a beat at that open acceptance

He played with her choora not letting go of her wrist

"Did u eat this?" "THIS IS SO YUMMY" she smiled

"I had these with turkey" he admitted running his hands through his thick glossy curls

She looked at him enviously

I AM LOSING MY HAIR AFTER EVERY WASH, YOURS ONLY SEEMS TO GET THICKER
DABUR AMLA USE KARTE HO KYA?
YA PARACHUTE HAIR OIL

She bend down and inhaled

NEITHER

He dragged her down

"U have good hair" she declared
"Sorry?" he was confused

"Tumhare baal achhe hain" she mumbled, blushing self consciously at having to compliment him suddenly

He turned and looked at her deeply, taking  her left hand, since she had to eat her snack

And leaving it on his curls

"I know how it feels" she scoffed

"u do?" he whispered

He bend down and kissed "Lunch?"

"Umm"

FEAST ON ME?
I AM OK...
GO RIGHT AHEAD DUDE

UMM... APPA WILL MISS ME
BUT THATS OK

"Did u get some work done?"

"Is it ever done" she sighed and yawned

she ate quietly, hiccuping, he gave her his water, he drank 20 bottles a day or more?

He leaned and inhaled her vibhuti... felt it with his thumb..

"Ummm" she mumbled unsure what she shud say

"I am going to see the baby at 3 chalogey?

I am meeting someone in NOIDA at 4, maybe later?

HE PROBABLY WANTS TO AVOID APPA
AFTER BALDIE GOES TO MUNIRKA I BET HE WILL GO MORE
SHE SUDDENLY FELT BAD FOR APPA

"i dont think Appa will be home" she blurted

AYYYOOO
WONT YOU EVER... I MEAN EVERRR SHUT UP??
DO U HAVE TO SAY EVERY f**kING THING THAT CROSSES YOUR MIND?
I MEAN EVERY GODDAMN THING?

HE?
HE DOESNT TALK WHEN HE IS SUPPOSED TO
AND U NEVER SHUT UP

"I have a meeting" he bristled

"Hmmm" she leaned back, not believing him

"I hope to write to her tonight asking for time off..." she quickly changed the topic

He was not happy, typed a note furiously on his laptop

"Na varen" she said "I better go"

He quit typing... "I can get there by 6 if I am able to take DND" he offered

she nodded...

YA LIKE DND IS GOING TO BE EMPTY AT 6??
SO U LIE TOO, EXCEPT U DO IT IN YOUR WORDLESS RESERVED WAY
ATLEAST ONE THING IS CLEAR U DONT LIKE APPA
I DONT LIKE MANYA
THERE!!
WE ARE EVEN
PORUMA? (GOOD ENOUGH?)


"I better go" she smiled, picking up the half of her croissandwich... he held her wrist and ate off it...

"U already owe me something for putting the ring on you, now I have fed you" she mumbled

"We can add to it" he offered

"Epdi?" (How?) she asked startled

"U cud give me a shower, clothe me?" he offered

"Umm... ya... umm.. uh..." she felt soft creamy color rush all over her face

RIIGHT LIKE I AM GOING TO STAND THERE AND SCRUB YOUR BACK
OR FRONT
OR WAIST
OR LEGS
OR ARMS
OR THAT SMUG FACE
OR UMM... U KNOW THAT SEXY UMM
GET LOST


I WOULD... RAKSHASANEY... I SO WOULD
FOR FREE

"Tonight then?" he extracted a promise

"sure... and every night after? Why not" she smiled mockingly... at the lack of a better repartee
He caught her off guard like that frequently

"And if Akka asks me why I got a present?" she stopped at the door way and turned to look

He half smiled

RAKSHASANNN!!!
I NEED TO SHUT UP
WITH HIM SILENCE IS THE WINNER
LEARN FROM THE BEST II
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She went to D II, Akka shipped her off to Munirka to get Shravu's uniform for Thursday, he had karate, at school so that and other things
She made ground rice upma for thatha paati (akka's in laws) cleaned up their messy kitchen, and returned at 6 ish

Amma told her Ranjan had called she smiled, nodding.
Amma made chai and brought snacks for her

akka sat by her she held the baby, Akka spoke about her "aspirations" for having the ceremony at a nice place

Yet again...

II squirmed

she knew Bhavna's family was into the banquet hall business, Bhavna had quit over two months ago
But she pinged her on text

"Hey can u tell me if u guys have a banquet hall near Panchsheel?" she texted
Bhavna responded immediately

"HI! II" "Yes we do? "U DIDNT INVITE ME FOR THE BABY SHOWER?"

"Hold ur horses... I married 4 months ago, BABY SHOWER?" she texted

"Umm... ya OK" Bhavna sent a sheepish smile

""WHO are u texting Amma enquired

"Bhavna ma" she smiled

"why?"

"IRU MA" she was irritated

"Its available, and I need an invite whatever be the party" Bhavna texted after 7 ish minutes
"Itni jaldi?" Ii asked

"I just asked my Dad" Bhavna ROFLED

"Thanks" II smiled

"amma and Akka Bhavna's family has a hall in Panchsheel she said we can have it

Akka squealed

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
She went home after 8, she had texted Ranjan... he wasnt home yet

R&B and Bala drank beer in the balcony
"Nobody told me u are here" she looked at her husband, talking about Athim

"Taana tujhe de rahi hai mujhe?" Bala chuckled without looking back
R&B didnt respond, ofcourse it was for him

He bristled with possessiveness

"He texted me on his way from work" he explained to his nosy wife

"U never came to see the baby?" she whined
He walked towards her wrapped an arm around her waist... "I just got in"

"and didnt even check on me" she was unreasonably upset

He though, loved it

she changed into jeans and a tee

"HEY ATHIM" she came running

"Bhavna teriyum ille?" "On my team her family owns banquet halls" "I spoke to her and she said we could have the one in Panchsheel

And watched Bala's facial expression constrict...

"U never learn ur lesson do you?" R&B stared at his wife in shock...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Ayyo! II! You are trying to be nice to everyone but are always getting caught in the war of self-respect or doubt or ego or perceptions and what not. Paavam you are.

 
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Posted: 8 years ago
"U never learn ur lesson do you?" R&B stared at his wife in shock
So true.

But have seen people who are Giver in general never give up on Giving. Even if people take advantage or do not appreciate they can't change. 

On top of it II is innocent. Most of the time listens to her heart and acts impulsively. 

Difference between her and R&B is R&B is not impulsive in reacting when it comes to other people like Manny or Bala.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

"U never learn ur lesson do you?" R&B stared at his wife in shock

So true.

But have seen people who are Giver in general never give up on Giving. Even if people take advantage or do not appreciate they can't change. 

On top of it II is innocent. Most of the time listens to her heart and acts impulsively. 

Difference between her and R&B is R&B is not impulsive in reacting when it comes to other people like Manny or Bala.


Dont tell me she is innocent...

she hesitates 100 times to take money from her husband...

and expects bala to take money from sister in law ???
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Posted: 8 years ago
I feel II is restricting her  a LOT nowadays.. 😒 
She was much closer to him during her paris-venice tour.. (emotionally) 
She always gets stuck in her psychological tremor..

Dude is also observing each situation and her reactions like always...am not able to see whats going on his mind...dont know where am lacking behind in understanding

He pulled her in

Her heart skipped a beat at that open acceptance

this is so charming to read☺️

II and her self talks 👏
First she speaks a lot.. next she speaks a lot in her mind...😆 uber cute😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm a random follower of your work. You are writing amazing stuff. It is a brilliant piece. The way you reveal each character through their conversations, especially Ishita's conversations to herself. It's hilarious and fabulous. ITZ a treat to read this ff.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dont tell me she is innocent...

she hesitates 100 times to take money from her husband...

and expects bala to take money from sister in law ???


She is. Her innocence stops her from taking money. And as for giving Bala she is impulsive and compulsive giver. She knows maybe Bala wouldn't go in for grand celebration so she took it on herself to the extent she could. 
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG poor II
does something good and then boom
poor her
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am sorry you guys, staying away was a personal test of sorts for me.
Sometimes I feel I dont "belong" in this time. I was extremely agitated and frusutrated by what Salman Khan did, every time I opened this page I was reminded of how incredibly asnine his behavior has been

We as a family have spent all our lives doing the right thing, not cheating, not defrauding the government, not committing any crimes. And here he is... has done just about everything on the list... and continues to get away

It angers me... I am helpless... I want to change the world
I am unable to say "Chalta hai what the f-- do I care? I live over seas and  I am going to let India go to hell"

I am frustrated by the complete lack of maturity in many young people in towing his line... I worry for India... I worry for the country..

Bottomline... I cant do a thing

Giving myself a break from releasing my anger, will help me put things in perspective

Thank God I didnt live during the times Indian emporors were selling the country to Mughal invaders or the British. This is equally bad... but I am powerless. We are handing a greedy, selfish, thankless, narcissistic world to my kids and all other kids.

Jumping on the Kalam bandwagon to earn brownie points one day, and on another day glorifying a killer... I just dont belong in these times. I dont get it... its all so dishonest and insincere😭


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Posted: 8 years ago
Vuti
DAMN CUTE POETRY