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OMG JOOO...U wrote an OS...that too romantic one...ithu si thi aur itni badi hogayi ki kissie wissie ke baarein mein likha...haan romance halka phulka tha but acha tha...Lol just kidding gal...U did a fab job...all claps to u gal...
Opening itself was dhamaka...beauty in red..breath takingly hot haan...and her muttering lol I can so imagine her..
Oh so this story is after RaYaPee meet...gud..aisa hota toh kitna acha hota...phew...khair...
Ram was punishing her..hmm can understand his pain and he gv her silent treatment for a month and Priya ko woh bhi acha nahi tha..after all 5years they lived alag...hmmm...anyways Ram is correct here.(my feeling)
But after a long silent killing of a month finally Ram came ahead to bridge the gap and heal the pain...
And it was too good he took the initiative and defo it surprised the beauty...And what resulted is a cool breeze of love..
Good work Jo..very good...this is ur first one I read and more are waiting n will read...
I loved the punishment and reward..it was fantastic thought...😉
PS: Happy Anniversary to us 🤣🤣 Donon bhi CMs...jodi badi acchi hai..😆
Jo am sorry for reading so late...but I know you didnt mind as u r sweet n frank not some too sweet type...he he..
Jo give a statement that its ur own..otherwise copy kia sochenge...waise sochne se kya hota hai... tum toh kabhi copy karke nahi likha hoga..I know your sincere effort towards writing..So keep it up and do write in future too..
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