Symphony 28 - Page 90

Originally posted by: NSB7

Vibhu yess yess
full soni kudi's me and putti have become
im glad u liked my try at writing

putti thanks again

Oh putti ko bhi congoo hai jiii...

Double celebration...

i also write sometimes.. but except 2-3 i dont let anyone read.. but if i have something good for SoSy level in future i'll also post.

Hy jyothi

Vibhu plz write
meiney bhi kutch khaas likha nahi khabi...this ia first try at kavita sort of stuff
tu bhi likh
whenever u feel like

Nouf stalking kya??
Kaha chaley gaye??

Originally posted by: NSB7

Vibhu plz write
meiney bhi kutch khaas likha nahi khabi...this ia first try at kavita sort of stuff
tu bhi likh
whenever u feel like

yaa it depends on mood..am writing from school days.. first on topics related on surroundings and now emotions..

am posting in next post something.. okk 😆 full josh me aa gyi mai

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

Hey guys

Good evening Jyothi. Still waiting for Shilpa, Ashu, Dristi, Bro and Shilpa all the east people.
I think Noufi is already in.

Originally posted by: SparkleV

Oh putti ko bhi congoo hai jiii...

Double celebration...

i also write sometimes.. but except 2-3 i dont let anyone read.. but if i have something good for SoSy level in future i'll also post.

Hy jyothi

Please write Vibhu.

One fine day..i'll cross that bridge
and no one would halt me
to move like breeze

There is a town..
ahead of that (bridge) hurdle
where life would be blissful
no pain and struggle

A river is glowing
at that place
with shiny particles of love
and no trace of hate

There is a palace too
celebrating their annual carnival
where each choose their mate,
no need of approval

A lamp wall is there
duets lights them with fire,
hook it up on nails
a sight to admire

When one fine day
i'll visit over there,
would gather each moment
and will return in despair,
that the dream will end
am about to awake
to the land
where love is at stake!

(there can be grammatical errors...)

Hello everyone wats the discussion going on wat special for the weekend 

Originally posted by: SparkleV

One fine day..i'll cross that bridge
and no one would halt me
to move like breeze

There is a town..
ahead of that (bridge) hurdle
where life would be blissful
no pain and struggle

A river is glowing
at that place
with shiny particles of love
and no trace of hate

There is a palace too
celebrating their annual carnival
where each choose their mate,
no need of approval

A lamp wall is there
duets lights them with fire,
hook it up on nails
a sight to admire

When one fine day
i'll visit over there,
would gather each moment
and will return in despair,
that the dream will end
am about to awake
to the land
where love is at stake!

(there can be grammatical errors...)

So are we heading to see a separation here...I feel so bad for them!!!