ASYA FF: Prem Kahani Hai Mushkil (Updated Ch. 130 Page 90 Oct. 11) - Page 70

Posted: 7 years ago
loved the update...
i love zaid's monologues the most...
how will asad react if zaid really will start playing that game..
club part was good...
Posted: 7 years ago
amazing update... 
loved it...
continue soon...
thanks for pm...
Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
I'm so sorry for late Comment,My health is little bit Bad,Please forgive me.😭
It was Awesome Part.😊
ASYA(KABHI) Part was so Nice.😊
Amy Part was so Interesting.😊
The Whole Conversation were so Nice.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
                                                                                             PriyaSweety-Anu
Posted: 7 years ago
Full family had great club adventure
Helped girl
Lovely update
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by mummyoftwo


Finally i got My fix of ur story!
Loved the update. The rape-drug scene was amazingly well written.
I love this mellow and indulging asad. He has relaxed and learned so much since his time with zoya. It's difficult not to fall in love with him.
Loved the good-cop, bad-cop talk. I can really imagine the scene in front of me when they're having their talk with a teenage zaid.
And zaid is the cutest baby ever. I hope he soon gets siblings or cousins to share all his experience with :-).

I'm truly very addicted to ur FF. I just started to read it from the beginning as I was waiting for ur update. I have never read the beginning of the story, except for the first time. It left a very bitter and dark feeling in me the first time around. But now I know all the wonderful time that will be waiting for them.
Thank u for a wonderful update and FF. Excited to know how their return to India will b like





Thank you so much for your love and support! I love to read your comments - it makes my day. I had been saving the nightclub date-rape scene ever since I read about the real case in the news.

Aww, I'm sorry for the darkness of the earlier chapters but I hope that I've been able to make up for it in spades! 
 
Thanks mummyoftwo!
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by MysticRiver


good update..



Thanks MysticRiver!
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by -Fleurdelice-


I really can't thank you enough for suggesting me this story Klondy, it has been such a beautiful read and love the way u present it easy to imagine loving it :-) nly thing I wish is we get more regular update and intense romance :$
coming to the update I love how Asad is still trying to mend himself and trying to be a 21 century's jahapana!




Thanks Fleurdelice! So happy to see your comment. 
Oh man I wish I could do updates more regularly. It's hard - on the one hand I want it to be long update (I end up writing about 20 pages, single-spaced) and on the other I want the update to be a little polished. So the the time it takes between drafting and revising can be fairly long. ðŸ˜•

Oooh intense romance - I love to do that! 
Ahhh, Asad. I'm glad how he and Zoya are totally on the same wavelength now. 
Love them so much. Cant get enough of them.
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by kaju27


loved the update...
i love zaid's monologues the most...
how will asad react if zaid really will start playing that game..
club part was good...



Thanks, kaju27! 
 Aww I love that you love Zaid's monologues.
Asad didn't have a heart attack in the club but he just may have one when Zaid decides to be better than his Chachu at the peeing game!
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Annie15


amazing update... 
loved it...
continue soon...
thanks for pm...




Thanks so much Annie15!
Appreciate it.
Let's see what the next update brings - no idea right now!
Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
This was so powerful
Zoya and asad were smart enough to deal with this situation
It could have had taken an ugly twist but they dealt with it cunningly
Zaid is a cutie pie
Excited for the next update
Update soon

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