Originally posted by muskaan17rocks
This was fabulous
Loved reading it and was a roller coaster of emotions
Really could feel the longing if asya for each other in the messages they send to each other or rumi
Zaid scene where he was missing his father was really very heart touching and the letter was beautifully written
Clearly describing asad's love for zaid and how well he is aware of what zoya would be doing while reading it
The celebration and then asad's return bought a big smile on my face knowing that finally they are back together and the family is complete again
And the conclusion part was definitely the main highlight of the full chapter
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pm😊
Thanks so much muskaan17rocks!
I loved writing the letter - I think that's exactly how Asad would write to Zaid.
For a fraction of a second it reminded me of Nehru writing to Indira Gandhi from jail when she was a young girl. It became a way to inform and educate her about the world.
I think I'll have Asad write more to Zaid even though now he's untied with his family.
I'm glad the everyone liked Asad's surprise.
It's turned out how I had imagined it ever since their separation.
I'm working on the update - let's see what happens.