ASYA FF: Prem Kahani Hai Mushkil (Updated Ch. 130 Page 90 Oct. 11) - Page 62

Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by kaju27


what can I say ...loved it...
zoya's misery...zaid missing his abbu...was perfectly written...
then asad's interaction with kids and playing. cricket was adorable...
in this update I truly understood how najma must have felt away from Omar...
but you ended it really well...asad came that was surprising...
zoya ran away thinking she was hallucinating again..
I loved zaid's reaction after seeing his abbu...



Aww thanks kaju27! I'm so happy that everyone is loving Zaid and his antics. And yes, I can imagine him missing his Abbu and Zoya feeling terrible about it. 
I had always imagined Zoya playing cricket with street kids in India. This update became the perfect spot to showcase my hopes and dreams for her. Besides, my husband started playing cricket again more recently so I had fresh research!
Can you just imagine Zaid rubbing his eyes and then lunging at his daddy? I can visualize it perfectly!
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by suni_104


Superb update
I love zaid so much
He cried missing asad
Zoya fully suprised to asad
Continue soon




Thanks so much suni_104! 
Yay, Zaid is a hit - I love my readers telling me that because he's my creation. 
I wanted Asad to surprise Zoya - that's how I had imagined this scene from the beginning. 
Glad it worked.
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by A.Kh_20


change the heading girl!!




It's complicated. 😕
Posted: 7 years ago
Finally u updated
This was so awesome
I loved it
Zaid is such an adorable kid
And he has the best parents
Loved reading it
Next one sooner pls
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Klondy






It's complicated. 😕
no its not just go to first page of this ff and edit the first post of urs on the page there you'll get the heading stuff and on whichever page u update just write it.😆😆 
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by muskaan17rocks


This was fabulous
Loved reading it and was a roller coaster of emotions
Really could feel the longing if asya for each other in the messages they send to each other or rumi
Zaid scene where he was missing his father was really very heart touching and the letter was beautifully written
Clearly describing asad's love for zaid and how well he is aware of what zoya would be doing while reading it
The celebration and then asad's return bought a big smile on my face knowing that finally they are back together and the family is complete again
And the conclusion part was definitely the main highlight of the full chapter
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 
Thanks for the pm😊


Thanks so much muskaan17rocks! 

I loved writing the letter - I think that's exactly how Asad would write to Zaid. 
For a fraction of a second it reminded me of Nehru writing to Indira Gandhi from jail when she was a young girl. It became a way to inform and educate her about the world. 
I think I'll have Asad write more to Zaid even though now he's untied with his family.
I'm glad the everyone liked Asad's surprise. 
It's turned out how I had imagined it ever since their separation.
I'm working on the update - let's see what happens. 


Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by Chillichick


Yay! 
Heer no more sad! :P


Thanks Chillichick for all 3 comments!
Yay, glad you picked up on the title. 
I'd been planning to use this song forever. 
And the echo of the word 'heer' in the song Asad and Ayaan danced to was just a happy coincidence.
So happy you liked it. 
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by -RM-


Yeyeye! He came finally! Was waiting for it :D



Thanks -RM-! Yes, he did! 
 Of course he would. 
 Was there ever any doubt?
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by jas91


Awesome blossom updt J 👏 👏
I just loved loved loved it ❤️ 😛
When I was reading my reactions were this

& I got this hint ki Asad pakka end main surprise visit dega cuz both were miserable but more than them Zaid ke tears tugged me 😛 awe poor kid it was such a realistic & heart-warming touch cuz I saw this wid a kid 😆
& d way all calmed Zaidu at SOL 😆 Zindagi ki reet cracked me cuz I didn't get 1st but when I read in nxt line than got that it was Asad patent song in Zaid's version 🤣
btw start was lovely Awe Parsad is such a humble employe any1 can get, he surely deserve a rise in salary 😆 considering how many times he helped Asad (I remember a tie borrowing scene) 😆 😆
Asad playing cricket & Zoya's part gosh that was so Zoya like 😆 just like Asad I too want him 2 teach Ziad 😆 but just baby Zaid ko... must have got what I mean 😆
& than Zoya's yearning which was increasing day by day... poor lovers were counting days 2 come back & than came hallucination 😛 btw J was Asad really there in Central park that day cuz I feel like 😉
& than came blockbuster in d end Asad & Ayaan entry & must say what an entry 🥳

Zoya's reactions were so funny bhagi kyun? 😆 I think she wanted 2 hug him in private 😆 & than Zaid crying in his Abbu's arms awe so touchy
Overall I thoroughly enjoyed it J
great job 👏 👏
& 4 d awesome part J




Oh my goodness, thank you Jas91 for the juiciest and sweetest comment!
Totally MA as Zoya would say.
I'm loving writing through Zaid's point of view. He thinks he knows everything but when he speaks I hope it comes across as the cutest gibberish. 
Haha, Prasad ka tie borrowing scene! Another MA.
No, Asad wasn't there in Central Park. Zoya's obviously seeing things. 
Shukriya! Shukriya! 
I'm working on next update - don't have much as yet. Let's hope I can do justice to Asad being in NYC. 
Thanks again for such cute memes in your comments. Adorbs.



Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by alia383


Hey klondy we'll allways b grateful to u 4 this amazing ff. I never found another AsYa story this amzing.
It is exploding with every emotion like sadness,anger,forgiveness,fun n alot of love n romance. I love the way how u describe things so vividly. I'm become a fan of ur writings.
I know I hardly comment but olways b waiting for ur pms eagerly not only this but also "PHONE RAGE" n "AFTER DIL BHANG N MORE".
Thanku sooo much for this wonderful part of the wonderful ff.

I don't have those words which can b describe how much I love this ff n how much good this ff is.

Thanku sooo muchhh 4 pms.tc [B][/B][COLOR=brown][/COLOR]



Hey alia383, so nice to see you here. 
Thanks for your comment and saying such wonderful and kind things! 
I can never hear this enough. You made my day.
I still have to return to the SS: Phone Rage. But somehow I got caught up here.
If I get stuck here I'll definitely use the SS to get unstuck.
Thanks again for taking the time to comment!


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