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RAYA OS : HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI PART 3 PAGe 5 updated 8th June

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RAYA OS : HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI PART 1



Ram nahi Aaya...

Kyu...Kyu nahi aaya main Tumne Muhse Jhut Bola Bolo...

Bolo Plz Bolo Priya Hold Rajat's Collar  Kaha Hai Ram...


Priya turn towards Neha and says Neha Why r u silent God Dammit Neha Plz tell me Ram Kaha hai...

Wo...wo Wo Neha stammers

Priya take off Of Mala From her Neck and throw on floor and Turns towards rajat Point Finger on his chest...Let me clear You Rajat Ye shadi Tabhi maanungi Jab Ram Meri aankho ke saamne Jinda Hounga Jab tak Main khud use chu Naa lo tab tak main Tum pe vishwas Nahi Karungi...

Rajat hold her finger and try to kiss Priya take back her finger He comes near her and Said : biwi Itna gusaa mat Karo Maine Jab Tumse Kaha tha Ki Ram Ko Jinda Dekhna Chahti ho...



Flashback :

Rajat : Hello Priya rajat Bol raha hu...

Priya : How dare You call Me Gunde Kahi ke And she about to hang

Rajat : Ram ko jinda Dekhna ho to Call mat rakhna...

Priya stammers Mat Matlab Kya hai Tumhara Jinda???

Rajat : Priya...Priya My darling Priya Kitni Baar Tumse Kaha tha Ki Ram Aur Priya kabhi ek dusre Ke liye Bane hi nahi hai Tumhare Naam Ke Saath Sirf Rajat Ka Naam Accha lagta hai...

Priya : Rajat Ab tumhe Jab Pata hi hai Ki Main Sirf Sirf Ram se Pyar karti hoon To Tumne Soch kaise Liya ki main Tumhare jaise Gunde Se Pyar karungi Or Haa Ram Ko kabhi Kuch ho hi nahi Sakta...

Rajat : ohh Really Khair Tumne Mujhe Gunda Bol hi Diyya Hai To bata du Ki Ram Ki Car me Maine Ek Bomb laga diya Hai bacha sakti ho Bacha lo Bomb 2 baje Ka Plot hai Tumhare Pass 20 Min hai Jaao Aage Ki baat Baad Main Karenge Or Yaad rakhna Agar Ram to Bacha Lo naa Use Ye Mat pata lagne dena Tunhe Bomb Ka kaise Pata laga Warna Agli baar hahahahah Laughs

Priya hang up Phone and calls Ram but he ddnt pick call so she takes her Car keys Drived Her car in full Speed In ram's Home Direction



Here Ram In His House With Vikram

Ram : Aaj Main priya ko Propose karne Wala hu Vik I m so excited

Vikram : Haa Ram Main Bhi

Ram : Abe Saale Tu excited Kyu hai...

Vikram : tere Liye Bey...Aakhir Tu aaj Itne Saalo Ki Dosti ko Ek Naam dene Jaa raha hai...

Ram : Chal Chal ke dekh lete Hai Sab Perfect hai Naa...

Ram and Come To parking Area...Its 1.58 pm in watch...

Priya just enter in Parking area She come out of the Car and run towards The Car...

Ram To Vikram : ye priya Ese kyu bhaagte Aaa rahi hai yaha...

Ram Stood there Priya held his hand and Told vikram To run with them...

Both Ask  Why Priya shout Just do what i said...Its 1.59pm in watch...

Priya Ram and Vikram running out of parking Area Of Ram's House..And Then

2.0pm



BANG...Bomb Blast

all banned down to ground Blast was On opposite Side of Ram's house In open ground

Three Of them Getup from ground...

Ram looks here and there Same as vikram Both of them confused Why  priya was running and take them here and Now this blast Its was A small blast in open ground No one hurt But was that both looks at Priya and Ram says How the hell You were Doing...

Priya lost in rajat's Last word Ram ko Blast Ke Baare me Kuch Mat Batana the words roaming in her head...

Priya Kuch bolo Kya hua tha  Tum Kyu ese...

Wo wo wo i heard in NewsChannel Is Area Me Bomb Plotted hai...

What And Tumhe Kuch ho Jaata to One Min Tum Mujhse Kuch chupa Rahi ho...Ram said

Nahi To Priya replied...

Vikram : ram chal ke dekhte hai waha Jaha Blast hua...

Ram : haa chal both about to move...

Priya held ram's hand No ram Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya let police complete their works...

Ram looks at Vikram and both said Yes u r right...Lets go inside...

Ahh Ram i have to go kuch kaam hai...

vikram looks at ram and goes inside...

Ram Come near Priya : Ok Chalo tumhe Ghar chod deta hu...

Priya just step back and said : main car laayi hoon...And She open Door and About to close

but Ram held door Slowly push himself with door and rest her both hands on Car's windows...

Ok Ma'am vaise bhi Night me mil rahe hai Be ready on time Byee said these he kisses on her cheeks...Priya close her eyes...When she opens her eyes Ram's figure disappeared...

Priya Starts engine turns her car and slowly Car start kissing on the Roads of Mumbai...

She start thinking About how Ram Vikram Neha met in collage And ram and she becomes best friend...and rajat who always a Gunda of clg misbehave with her  many times  ram and rajat had big fight in collage But She ddnt except that Rajat Kuch is tarah se Badla lega...

Just then her Phone buzz Its Rajat Name Falshing on screen...

Priya attend the call and Said I ll kill you rajat What the hell main sochti thi tum ek gunde ho par tum to terrorist ho...

Rajat : Priya Darling Apne Hone wale Husband se ese baat karte hai kya...

Priya : Just shtup

Rajat : You Just shutup and listen me carefully...Aaj Ram tumhe Propose Karne wala hai hotel Lotus town main

Priya : tumhe Ye sab kaise pata

Rajat : Jyada excited hone ki jarurat nahi hai Bus tum ram ko mana Kar dogi or use ek card Dogi Jo Tumhe Ghar pahuchte se hi Mil jaaega...

Priya : kaun Sa Card...???

Rajat : hamari Shadi kaa...

Priya stops the car : what main esa kabhi nahi karungi I love him so much Main use haa bolungi Aur Hum shadi bhi karenge rajat tumhari dhamkiyo se Main darne wali nahi hoon...

Rajat : Accha Tum ese nahi maanogi...Abhi to ram ke ghar ke opposite Bomb plot kiya tha Kaho to ram ke ghar me Kar du... Uske baad To ram ke died body se Shadi Kar lena phir he said in loud voice Priya Shivers tears started flowing from her eyes...

 while crying Rajat Tum Kya chahte ho Mujhse...Main Kuch bhi karungi par please ram ko kuch Mat karna...

Rajat : ahhh thats My girl...Ab suno wo card leke jaana or ram se Kahna Ki Main Tumse nahi rajat Se pyar Karti hoon ye hamari shadi ka Card hai Kal aana Jarur...Aur hamesh hamesha ke liye hamari Nazro se dur ho Jaana...Bus Itna Kar do Main tumahre ram ko Chood dunga

Priya (sobbing ) : Thee ...theek hai par tum Promise Karo ram ko kuch nahi karoge...

Rajat : promise Biwi and he laugh...

She reach her home when she come out Neha standing on Door with A card in ahnd...Neha Runs to priya and Hug her tight Both Cry while hugging Each other...

Priya while sobbing Tell Neha all the things...

Neha : jab maine ye Card dekha naa tabhi smaza gayi kuch gadbad hai Hum police me report Karte hai chal...

Priya : wo ram ko maar dega...

Neha : To tu Kya apne aap ko us Janwar ke hawale Kar degi priya are you mad...

Priya : to main kya karu Soch Agar aaj Vo Bomb Agar ram ki car me blast hota to...

Neha hugs Her tight : Priya mujhe Vikram ne bataya ram tumhe aaj Propose Karne wala hai...

Priya : i know...

Neha : Too tune Final kar liya hai...

Priya : haa aur tujhe meri kasam kisi ko kuch bataya...

Neha : Uncle Aunty ko kya bolegi...

Priya : Pata nahi...Ab Mujhe Ready hona hai

Neha : Ready kaha ke liye...

Priya : You forget 1st date or say  Hamari adhuri Date.



PRIYA DRESSES UP IN RED EVENING GOWN AND RAM DRESSES UP RED TUX...

RAM SEND CAR FOR PRIYA

PRIYA recah the destination Lotus town fully hired by ram to make this date memorial

When Priya enter in the restaurant  She was stunned with the view She ddnt except ram ll do all this things but for her all this waste...

She walks towards the table where ram waiting for her...ram looks at her and he come lil forward escort priya upto the table but when he about to pull chair Priya said : ram iski koi Jarurat Nahi hai...

Are khade rahkar dinner karna hai kya ram crack a Pj

Priya smiles...and Said ram i have something For You...

ram : i too have Par pahle baitho to

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PART 2

PART 3
Edited by aman.anjaan - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved the story.
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kya yaar aman...pehle ki part me raya ko juda kar diya. this is not done. yaha b rajat..grrr..
jaldi se raya ko milvao.
aapki baaki stories b update karo.plz
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lovely part and thanks for the pm
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nice start...
but No RaYa :(
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different concept...
raya pehle part mai hi seperate hogaye..
bcoz of rajat ðŸ˜¡ itna cruel hai rajat...
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update...
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So emotional...
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When that Jerk Rajat will stop interferring and will leave Raya to live in peace but because of him Ram Priya are separated to not to unite. Do continue soon and thank u for the pm
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Fantastic OS!!
Plz continue soon!!
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