New SS Love & Destiny part6 6/9/2015 page 12 - Page 2

Posted: 8 years ago
Priya is sitting alone in her room of her bungalow located in Sydney. Thinking about her past life!!

Priya's POV

Aaj mujhe uss ghar ko chode pura 6 months ho gaya par phir bhi kyu main iss sachyai ko accept nahi kar pa rahi hun... Why ?? why priya?? why can't u forget all things!!!. Par kyase!! woh paal, woh yaaden., uska gussa ... Naffrat!!!
Uff!!!
Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki woh jo kuch bi huwa woh kyu huwa...
Yehsa lagta hai ki yeh sab ek boora sapna hai aur abhi koi mujhe iss boore sapne se jagadega!! par nahi yeh toh meri zindagi ka karwa sach hai!!!



In another part of world... In India... Ram is at a party !! the party was given to celebrate his success. He recently got "Businessman of the Year Award".
All were there for Ram his family, friends...all... But he... He was alone in crowed !!!
Sitting alone in bar having a glass of wine he was thinking!!!


Ram's POV

Yeh kya hogaya hai tujhe ram kyu yeh saa behave kar raha hai ... 6 months pehele jo kuch bhi huwa... Mujhe toh kush hona chaheye lekin mujhe itna incomplete kyu feel horaha hai!!
Mai yehi toh chahata tha!!! but mujhe yehsa kyu lagta hai ki 6 months pahele jo huwa woh galat tha!! main us se bhool kyu nahi pa raha... Mera paas aaj sab kuch hai ... Joh main chahata tha ...name, fame, esha...sab !! lekin phir kuch audhura hai ...
Jab bhi aakhen band karta hu srif us ka chehera (face) nazar aata hai!! uska chehera.. Uski hasi(Smile) uska adda...uska pyaar... !!!! PYAAR?????...
Kahi main us se pyaar toh nahi...
Ram closes his eyes in frustration but priya's smiling face comes in front of him...which brings smile in ram's face too!!'

Plzz share your comments and likes!!!
And please let me know I should continue or not !!
This is my first try plzz excuses my errors!!!😉Edited by Cute_Saakshii12 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Ofcourse yaar..!!! 
u should deffo continue..!!
its really very interesting start..!!👏
ohh raya dhoor hogayee... bcoz of esha...😡
but both r in love with each other. it seems..😉
hope they clear their MU soon..😛
continue soon..
thanks for pm..😊
Edited by jodude - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
very interesting
pls continue soon
Posted: 8 years ago
Plzzz continue...sooo interesting...screen pe Raya nehin to story hi sahi
Posted: 8 years ago
wonderful start. pl continue.
and ha one reuest. pl be regular in ur updates. jyada intejaar mat karvana hume.
do continue.
Posted: 8 years ago
Pls continue soon n nice start
Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks guys for the lovely comments!!
Will try to give the updates soon!!
Posted: 8 years ago
Hey friends!!
There the 2nd part of this SS. This part is short !!
I actually was planning to post it in first part but I forgot!!
Plz forgive me guys !!!
I'm posting this shot part because I will start the flash back track from the 3rd part!!!
There it goes!!


Same night
Ram was in his room standing near the window.. Thinking about past days!!
His chain of thoughts were broken when someone hugged him from back!!l

Lady: Baby kya soch rahe ho?? Coming infront of him... U look soo tensed and tired... Baby let me help... She start to remove his tie!!
Ram: Esha please stop it!!! maine kitni bar kaha hai mere room mai yehse mat aaya karo!!
Esha: what!!! ram kyu ita gussa kar rahe ho!! Humari kuch dino main shaddi hone wali hai aur...
Ram: frustrated!! toh kya shaddi hone wali hai hui toh nahi na!!!
Esha: Ram ho kya gaya hai tume why are u behaving like this!! Jab se priya yeha se gaye hai hum odd behave karne lage hoo!!
Listening Priya's name ram gets furious !!
Ram: Esha !!! stop it!!!
Priya ka naam kyu beech main la rahe hoo!!
She has nothing to do with this!!
Esha: Why not!! she is the one who had came between us !! Uske waje se ur a changed man... U are not same !!!
I just hate that priya!! that bit*h!!
(ram esha ko thapar marne k leye haat utha ta hai but stops!!)
Esha: Ram aaj tum ne us priya k liya mujpe hhaat uthaya!!!
(Esha starts to cry and leaves the room!!)

Ram thinks- yeh kya kiya maine !!!!
Esha pe haat uthaya maine woh bhi priya k liya jab ki woh ... Woh toh mere life main koi importance hi nahi rakhti!!!
He gets very angry and goes to washroom change in his night dress and sleeps!!


On the other hand, priya was also constantly thinking of ram...
Priya please bhool ja ram ko woh tera nahi ho sakta woh toh tujse pyaar bhi nahi karta woh toh sirf nafrat karta hai tumse!! woh agar kisise pyaar karta hai toh sirf esha!!! tu nahi!!! Tera hona na hona koi matlab nahi rakta us ke life mai!! Tere pyaar ki use koi kadar nahi hai!! Plz Priya don't do this to your self!!! Tu kyu apne aap ko tak lef de rahi hai!! Try to move on Priya !! Ram bhi toh apni life mai aage bar chuka hai!! (suppressing her all the feelings priya adjusted her bed to sleep! But she very well knew her nights are gona be sleepless !!!)
Posted: 8 years ago
very gud update. pl maintain this flow and regularity in ur updates.
nice one.

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