Bade Acche Laggte Hai

Priya's poem for Ram

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Friends,
I am back... I know I know i was supposed to update my FF/SS... but that will take time, so... here is somethng for all of u... my first cut at writing somethng like this... 

do hit the 'like' or comment or do both😉

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Dear Ram,

I know you were expecting me here instead of this paper, but u know me - inspite of being a lecturer - appke samne jaisa mujhe shabdh (words) hi nahi milte... isliye appne dil ki baat aur appni feelings is letter ke jariye aap tak paucha rehi hu... 

chaha tha humne jindagi se...

miley koi aisa jisse hum keh sake aapna...

 

ek arsa ho gaya..

kii humne jindagi se kuch aur maanga...

 

apni har dua...

mai hai bus usko chaha...

 

phir ek waqt aaya...

jab iss aas ka daman haath se chutne laga...

 

laga kii yeh to hai ek sapna...

jiska pura hona, khud ek sapna sa lagne laga...

 

tab jindagi ne milaya...

uss se jo mere khawabo se tha bilkul juda...

 

tab bhi humne...

haskar jindagi ke iss fasele ko apnaya...

 

socha shayaad yehi tha...

meri aas ka sira jo chhutne laga tha...

 

par iss soch ne bhi saath na diya...

tab yeh maan hi liya kii jindagi hai bewaafa...   

 

phir bhi humne...

isse samjhote ka naam dekar aapnaya...

 

najaane is jindagi se

kitne baar hum hue rusava...

 

har pal... isse bewaffa hi jaana

par kaun jaane kii samay mai kya hai chhupa...


lekin aaj hai jaana... jisse humne bewafai samaja...

usi mai tha jindagi ka sabse bada tohfa...


I love you Mr. Kapoor (my fav name for you dear hubby)

Forever Yours,

Priya




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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

beautiful poem .



Glad you liked it dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Awww cute poem


Hey Drishti,

thanks for commenting dear... phew I ws nervous after posting this poem...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great to see you back with awesome RaYa love story through the emotion of Priya feelings in the form of beautiful letter for Ram.