Originally posted by Nisha0604
THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!
There is a proverb in Tamil which goes "Bayandavanukku irundadellam pei" "For one who is terrified even darkness/night is a ghost"
This morning I was so terrified... I thought I should quit writing intimate scenes and go back to being Doordarshan of the 1970s you know, what if he is on top and pushes hard and I am accused of rape? What if she doesnt moan does that mean rape? what if he hurriedly reaches for her clothing and it rips and I am accused of writing rape. Should the act always be initiated by her and every action be performed by her just so its not rape? He should never make the first move or it will be rape. He should never make a move when she is asleep coz it could be rape
I am not a gender relations Ph D or a Lawyer or a cop or a politician
want to be NEITHER, I was never raped and never advocated it... I started suspecting myself
It was bizarre for a few hours actually...
To be frank Nisha, I did suspect you changed the update because of these comments. Though the next chapter was beautiful by itself it definitely lacked the II, R&B touch.
I did not want to mention it before to avoid confusion here. I could imagine how freaked out you must be by that comment. And I knew you were going to change the tone of the story.
Kudos to you for coming up with such beautiful alternate chapter in such short time. Testimony to your immense talent.
It was going beautifully till then. He was pissed at her
irresponsibility and ignoring her royally, she tried to pacify him and
when he did not relent ,told him she wanted to go home, that did not do
the trick and she cried herself to sleep . Next day she checks the
indent on the pillow to make sure he slept beside her ( aww cute) but
still went on to rile him up with the ticket and boom that does it and
she got the reaction from him
. I did not find anything amiss here. They were true to their characters.
Like it was mentioned before, your story appeals to all senses. Please do not change it.
Now that you mentioned you wrote different update , I would like to see if you are ok with it.
Or you can blend it in the coming updates.
I loved II and Ranjan's convo. She such a sweetheart. She is going to spread her warmth in that cold Malcha Marg home of Bhallas.
Edited by DesiUs_fan - 7 years ago