Originally posted by Nisha0604
At the risk of making it appear like I write my own chapters AND reviews, here is Errant Nomad's review of Chapter "Wrapped up Truths", as she hit her post limit for the day gushing over Kanwaljeet :)
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Beautiful!!
Reconciliation after the discord felt natural. Most people would agree that "you're never fighting for the reason you think"
Only in reconcilation, we look beneath the crux of the argument, communicate better, take responsibility, be more humble, let go of our ego of wanting to be right, learn a little bit more about your spouse or partner, their concerns/ desires,appreciate your spouse, care more,and sort of in a way set boundaries too with remorse . It's a better ground to be in.
This chapter had it all. Awesome. This is what came to my mind as I read this chapter.
Hope I have done enough justice to my random thoughts.
Ps I want 14 idlies/ sambar of Saravanan bhavan too.
Bang on review of a beautiful update
Nothing more to add.
On the other hand I did not find anything wrong about Bourbon update. As I remember, II half the time says no to him when they make out. She married him not completely knowing his feelings for her. Till now Raman took care of her very well. He is quite aware of her feelings and put up with her mood swings. He is the one who held back when II wanted to go all the way before marriage. Besides II is not the kind of woman who takes crap from anybody. We all know she revels in pushing him over the edge with her constant insecurities. Cut them some slack please. They are newly married couple who are strongly attracted to each other . Things can get aggressive. They are two strong , intelligent individuals. We do not want them to be regular lovey dovey, mushy couple.
Nisha, I read a comment saying you will try to be Ektha from now on. Please do not change the essence of these characters, if that is what you are referring to. Hope you do not change the tone of your story based on these comments.
